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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#35301: Jan 20th 2024 at 10:00:11 AM

The proposer usually does the write up, unless they're doing a collab and the other does it

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#35302: Jan 20th 2024 at 10:42:50 AM

Also, please post the writeup here AND in the Drafts page (in my signature).

EDIT: Pending:

Edited by ACW on Jan 20th 2024 at 3:27:45 PM

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#35303: Jan 20th 2024 at 1:36:06 PM

Time for some Bollywood fun.

What's the work?

Baahubali: The Beginning is the start of an epic which has since spawned a franchise. The plot involves treachery and murder within the royal family of Mahishmati starting with the rivalry between adoptive siblings Amarendra Baahubali and Bhalladeva. While Bhalladeva is an absolute delight of a villain with a massive book of crimes, he seems to love his son and while his own father, Bijjaladeva is nasty too, he's in the prequel material I'm not familiar with. The first movie's flashback sequence however, gives us a potential.

Who is Inkoshi? What has he done?

The biggest war chief of the raiding Kaalakeya tribes, he's infamous for conducting wholesale eradication: killing all the men and raping all the women of the lands he takes. Making a deal with a traitor afraid of the Kaalakeya, the brother princes catch the traitor and learn of Inkoshi's intent to invade. When he meets with acting ruler Queen Mother Sivagami Devi, he laughs at the contest her sons have to kill him and promises to murder them both before raping her to have an "heir" of his own.

Scoffing as Sivagami demands he be brought to her to be tortured to death for his insults, many of Inkoshi's men fall to the bravery and tricks of the princes but eventually his forces begin to overwhelm the defenders. As men begin to fall, the defending soldiers lament the horrors that are about to befall their home until a Rousing Speech by Baahubali turns the tides and a counterattack is launched on Inkoshi's camp. To stop Baahubali and Bhalladeva from reaching him, he reveals he's taken Mahishmati citizens, including children, hostage as he's charged upon. While Baahubali uses quick thinking to save his people, the hostages in front of Bhalladeva's chariot aren't so lucky, as he heartlessly just cuts through them.

The brutal chief winds up fighting Baahubali who disarms and prepares to bring Inkoshi to Sivagami but the glory loving Bhalladeva murders their captive.

Heinousness?

We technically don't see him pulling his Rape, Pillage, and Burn shtick on any civilization but there's enough emphasis on his intent with Mahishmati as he boasts of taking Sivagami for himself and the sequence of the defending soldiers fearing what's to come for their people makes the threat crystal clear. It's a huge city and the army alone numbers 25,000, so we're looking at a massive intended bodycount.

Mitigating factors?

None at all, cackling, cruel warlord.

Verdict?

Keeper.

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#35304: Jan 20th 2024 at 1:37:48 PM

[tup] Inkoshi

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#35308: Jan 20th 2024 at 1:50:31 PM

Eh, yeah, sure, seems like there's probably enough.

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#35310: Jan 20th 2024 at 2:47:49 PM

Yes to Inkoshi

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#35312: Jan 20th 2024 at 3:19:46 PM

Got a first from this franchise for me:

What's the work?

Mass Effect is one of the most popular video game series of all time, a sci-fi story where humanity has reached the stars and made contact with all manner of alien races via the hyperspeed "mass effect relays". Today I'm talking the comics, specifically Invasion, in which side character Aria T'Loak must protect her home base the Omega Station from the human military unit Cerberus. The Big Bad is General Oleg Petrovsky from the third game who is genuinely Affably Evil and a WIE, but his right-hand man...

Who is Ashe? What has he done?

  • Colonel Raymond Ashe is a Cerberus military officer who serves as a personal agent of the Illusive Man, and though he is Petrovsky's subordinate, he has his own agenda.
  • When Petrovsky is dispatched to handle a Reaper Adjutant outbreak on the Omega station, Ashe is sent with him ostensibly to help, but is actually operating on the Illusive Man's orders to take over Omega in Cerberus's name. A gleeful xenophobe, Ashe infiltrates Omega and personally murders multiple aliens, leading his men in slaughtering entire groups of defenseless aliens so as to take over the station from Aria.
  • When his actions result in civil wars amidst Omega's various factions, Ashe just opens fire on everyone in the middle of a firefight, trying to kill and terrorize his way into cowing the populace. He regularly throws away the lives of his own men by sending them into booby traps, then insulting them for dying, and tries to utterly wipe out all of Aria's loyalists and allies to leave Omega defenseless to Cerberus's invasion.
  • As Aria consistently avoids Cerberus and leads rebellions against Ashe's forces, Ashe once again goes behind Petrovsky's back and unleashes a highly-infectious Reaper Adjutant onto Omega to slaughter everything in its way, including Aria—when a horrified Petrovsky points out that the uncontrollable Adjutant will run rampant to contaminate and endanger the millions of people on Omega and their own Cerberus troops, Ashe just snarks "Acceptable losses." and tries to murder Petrovsky for his "weakness" and take over his command.
  • Luckily Aria and her gang fight back the Adjutant and Cerberus. Ashe winds up infected by said Adjutant, at which point Petrovsky kills him to eliminate the spreading infection.

Mitigating features?

None, he's a vile racist and sadist who enjoys exterminating "alien filth" and does not value any chain of command.

Heinousness?

For a random Colonel in Cerberus, yeah, Ashe is bad enough. He's directly, routinely contrasted to the more powerful, recurring villain Petrovsky who is noble, pragmatic and prefers lack of bloodshed—Ashe meanwhile executes defenseless aliens, sacrifices his own troops, and ultimately tries to kickstart an Adjutant outbreak on Omega just to eliminate Aria and her allies, uncaring that millions will be caught in the crossfire.

Final Verdict?

Yep!

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#35313: Jan 20th 2024 at 3:22:12 PM

[tup] Ashe, did not expect any more Mass Effect keepers

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#35314: Jan 20th 2024 at 3:22:16 PM

[tup] Inkoshi and Ashe

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#35316: Jan 20th 2024 at 3:47:29 PM

Sure to Ashe.

Illusive Man a possible keeper?

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Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#35317: Jan 20th 2024 at 3:48:46 PM

Not a chance in hell, he's a genuine Affably Evil Well-Intentioned Extremist, and he either dies killing himself to fight off indoctrination like Saren or dies mourning for Earth, as well as other redeeming qualities

Edited by Agentofchaos on Jan 20th 2024 at 6:50:25 AM

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#35318: Jan 20th 2024 at 4:03:26 PM

Yeah, Kai Leng is specifically portrayed as a More Despicable Minion compared to the Illusive Man.

[tup] Raymond Ashe, Petrovsky’s own MDM.

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#35320: Jan 20th 2024 at 4:27:23 PM

As an eager Mass Effect fan, I say [tup] for the Colonel.

Including the five from the games and that one guy from the Ascension book, this will give seven top fiends for the franchise as a whole.

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