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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#26101: Sep 17th 2023 at 4:28:30 PM

[tup] Joll and Mandel

"No running in the halls!"
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#26102: Sep 17th 2023 at 4:35:25 PM

Yes there. Great finds yourself sir!

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#26103: Sep 17th 2023 at 4:59:44 PM

[tup]joll and Mandell

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
VeryVileVillian (Apprentice)
#26105: Sep 17th 2023 at 5:10:06 PM

Yes to Waiting For The Barbarians duo

MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#26106: Sep 17th 2023 at 5:40:58 PM

[tup] to Colonel Joll and Officer Mandel.

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from The Daily Bugle (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#26107: Sep 17th 2023 at 6:00:28 PM

Yes to Joll and Mandel. Belated Shana tova, everyone (or at least those like me who celebrate it)

Your friendly neighbourhood Spider-Man.
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#26108: Sep 17th 2023 at 6:43:49 PM

@ACW: Depp has at least two others, one from The Astronaut's Wife and another from The Imaginarium of Doctor Parnassus; Pattinson I believe is his first.

Edited by Ravok on Sep 17th 2023 at 6:44:29 AM

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
Bullman "The Juice is Loose." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#26110: Sep 17th 2023 at 7:31:01 PM

[tup] Joll and Mandel.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
NTG Since: Aug, 2014
#26111: Sep 17th 2023 at 11:32:39 PM

[tup] for Dudley. Since Dr. Frankstein and his crimes are only mentioned, I don't think we an compare him to Dudley who is on-screen and kills people on-screen.

[tup] for Joll and Mandel

TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#26112: Sep 18th 2023 at 12:09:05 AM

[tup] for Dudley and the Depp/Pattinson duo.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
TotemGenitor Bye Since: Apr, 2021 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Bye
#26113: Sep 18th 2023 at 7:55:08 AM

[tup] Malone and Smitty, Parallel, Lionel, Chord, Dudley, Joll, Mandel

[tdown] Alice

BTW, since I'm quitting the site (at least for now), I'm dropping my reservation for Kengan Ashura. I don't think anyone gonna pick it up, but it would have felt wrong to not drop it, so...

Goodbye, it was fun, even though I wasn't the most active guy here

NTG Since: Aug, 2014
#26114: Sep 18th 2023 at 8:18:03 AM

Goodbye TotemGenitor.

You really start to notice how many people have left because the number of EPs has really decreased over the last couple of days.

Mr-ex777 Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#26115: Sep 18th 2023 at 8:26:02 AM

[up] How many people do we even have left now? This sounds like a mass exodus tbh.

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#26116: Sep 18th 2023 at 8:43:15 AM

I haven’t had the time to got through everything that’s happened too thoroughly, but going off this page alone we have at least 15 people still active. That’s more than enough, we’ll be fine.

To all those who’ve left: Goodbye and best wishes for whatever you plan on doing next. It’s been a pleasure working with you all, and on the admittedly low chance things change for the better, I hope to see you again.

Yes to Dudley, Joll, and Mandel.

rosewood47 from A Padded Cell Since: Apr, 2016 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
#26117: Sep 18th 2023 at 8:47:47 AM

What's been going on with people leaving, anyway? Read something about a protest re: administration changes or something, what's the deal there?

Here's the Beast's writeup. It's technically a couple hours early, but I'm going to be busy most of today and won't be able to get it out if I don't do it now. He was a unanimous "yes," though, so I don't think that much would change in those couple hours anyway.

  • Over the Garden Wall Beast origin story by zeldacw: The Beast is imagined here as a devious trickster of human origin. As a child with a love for playing practical jokes on people, he soon grows bored of the same harmless pranks, and begins intentionally leading lost travelers astray for his amusement, all of whom end up getting killed in the treacherous woods. By the time he reaches adulthood, his trickery has led countless people to their deaths, children included. Asked for guidance through the woods by a woman riding a deer, the man decides that he wants the deer's magnificent antlers for himself. After his usual trick causes the woman and deer to become separated, he beheads the animal and goes home with the intention of leaving the woman to die in the woods. The woman reveals herself to be a fairy who was testing the man. For failing the test, he is punished by being turned into a horrifying beast and his soul is transferred to a lantern. Though the lantern is only meant to last for a short time, the Beast uses his cunning to prolong his life indefinitely by tricking others into keeping the light burning.

Mr-ex777 Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#26118: Sep 18th 2023 at 8:47:56 AM

[up]x2 But if Scraggle and Lighty left the thread will be essentially dead and/or rendered gutted, no? Especially most of the guys posting EPs are likely gone and won't come back.

[up] Close

Edited by Mr-ex777 on Sep 18th 2023 at 11:52:46 PM

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#26119: Sep 18th 2023 at 8:55:03 AM

Not really the place to discuss this.

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#26120: Sep 18th 2023 at 8:55:32 AM

…Well gee, screw the rest of us and the two proposals literally on the last page then, I guess.

Also, I’m pretty sure Lighty’s still here, unless I missed something.

DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from The Daily Bugle (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#26122: Sep 18th 2023 at 9:00:59 AM

Anyone familiar with Mutant X? Scraggle left before he could finish his writeup.

[down][down] AFAIK, Ravok hasn't left the site yet.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Sep 18th 2023 at 12:38:32 PM

Your friendly neighbourhood Spider-Man.
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#26123: Sep 18th 2023 at 9:02:00 AM

Anyway, here is my early writeup as well.

  • The New Adventures of Speed Racer: Caligula P. Barnum is the richest man in and de facto ruler of the world in the late 21st century. He rules over the only remaining city on Earth after a poison apocalypse with an iron fist, exploiting its people for profit and exiling anybody who disagrees with him into the toxic wastes. Barnum then uses people exiled into the toxic wastes who are turned into monstrous mutants, assuming they survive, as a slave labor in his Empire or participants in deadly the battle races for the amusement of the non-mutated population. After popularity of battle races decreases, Barnum uses a time machine to kidnap Speed Racer and force him to compete. Paranoid that Speed and his friend will try to stop the creation of mutants, Barnum sends his minion Des to assist the creator of the mutagens, Largo Sludge, in his work. He ultimately sends his mutants to eliminate Speed and Racer X, having them attack Fontana Centre city and kidnap Speed’s friends and family to become slaves, while supplying Largo with a new factory for his mutagens, which Barnum rigs to explode in order to create toxic wastes.

Goodbye and best wishes Totem.

Edited by EmperorGeode on Sep 18th 2023 at 9:03:10 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#26124: Sep 18th 2023 at 9:30:06 AM

[up][up]I don't know if Ravok left, but I know he was gonna do some Mutant X ones.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform

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