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Welcome to the Magnificent Bastard (MB) cleanup thread! This thread is where we clean up or cut already-existing entries.

If you're looking to add new entries, please see the approval thread.

IMPORTANT: Before you begin any discussions on this thread, please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List

Here, you'll find explanations of the criteria for the trope as well as our rules/procedures for approving and cutting candidates.

What goes through this thread?

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  • Cut requests. If you believe a MB has been approved and they do not count, this thread is where you propose their removal. To know how to go about this, please see the FAQ folder on the Administrivia page, where the process is explained in detail.
  • If we ever need to consider cutting multiple examples without individually reviewing them (e.g. if we discover widespread plagiarism with a particular troper's MBs), the initial discussion will be on this thread and we'll then escalate to the mod team (as described here) to get a formal consensus if we decide to recommend a mass cut.
  • If an entry was put on the wrong subpage/YMMV page, you may propose where they should be moved to.
  • Full rewrites of existing entries, including expansions, trims, and ground-up rewrites. If your rewrite is approved by the thread, feel free to add it to the drafts page so that other users can check grammar and the like before it is included with the rest of the weekly swaps.
  • If an entry on a work's YMMV page doesn't match the entry on the media subpage, you can bring it here to discuss which entry works better.

What does not go through this thread?

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  • New candidate proposals - as stated before, those are done on this thread.
  • Unapproved wicks - if a Troper encounters either of these kinds of wicks, they can be cut with no approval.
    • Any MB link on a non-YMMV page - as a YMMV trope, it should not be linked on those pages regardless of any cleanup effort. The only exception is if the wick is being used within the definition of another trope.
    • If an MB link on a YMMV page refers to an unapproved character. If it refers to an approved character on any such page, the wick can stay. On the other hand, if the unapproved character being linked to sounds like they might have promise (and you don't feel like checking it out for yourself), feel free to mention it on the approval thread - someone may already know why they don't count, or it could invite a brand new discussion!
  • Proposals for images, quotes, and videos of already-approved MBs - quotes and images are proposed on the approval thread, while videos can be uploaded normally as they are screened for approval by the moderation.
  • Crosswicking examples to YMMV pages - if an example has already been approved and added to the main page, you do not require any special permission to add the example to a work's YMMV page (assuming the work has a page already). If a YMMV page doesn't exist yet, then you can make it yourself, but either way, feel free to just add the example without asking.
  • Small changes to existing entries - these can simply be done on a Troper's own prerogative with no approval.
    • Spelling and grammar fixes.
    • Pothole changes.
    • Minor rewordings.
    • Spoiler tags.

While these changes do not require any kind of approval, it is requested that should you make any of these changes, you do one of the following:

  1. Make the same changes on the relevant Sandbox page, then add the Sandbox to the list at the bottom of the drafts page. This will add the Sandbox to the weekly swaps and ensure that the edits end up on the relevant locked page. If the Sandbox is already listed, then once you make the edits, your job is already done!
  2. If you don't know how the Sandboxes work or simply don't have the time to find it, then you can simply post on the thread about the changes you made. Someone else can then make the edit on the relevant Sandbox and add it to the weekly swaps.
  3. Alternatively, you can simply request that the change be made directly to the locked page on the Locked Pages thread. Members of this thread keep track of that one, so we will ensure that the changes are made in the Sandbox so that it doesn't get deleted during the next swap.

Again, these changes don't require any approval, but we prefer to keep the entries on the YMMV pages and the locked pages the same in order to avoid any miscommunication or errors between entries, so if you do make the change, we would greatly appreciate it if you could ensure the change is made on the locked page as well.

As a final note, we do not care what other sites have to say regarding whether or not a character counts. We have our own criteria and they have theirs for their MB equivalents; while they are similar, they are not exactly the same and should not be treated as such. Another site removing a character from their equivalent should not be a reason why a cut is proposed here, and if this is the case, it will likely lead to mod intervention.

Other than this, once again, welcome to the cleanup thread, and we look forward to your contributions!


Edited by Mrph1 on Jan 14th 2024 at 11:36:43 AM

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#2676: Dec 16th 2023 at 2:44:50 AM

Speaking of cuts... I've got my own unfortunate one to suggest since the guy is a great villain. Dalek Sec.

He gets outplayed by Caan and the other 2 skaro guys (Caan being an MB himself and ending on a defiant note against Davros of all people makes still makes him an easy keep.) If Sec did some backup plan that was revealed post mortem then I'd be alright but the human dalek concept was flawed from the very beginning due to the human nature of things. Sec's last moments are him chained up like an animal by one of the two where he leaps in front of one of the shots. It's a sad end for the guy but it's also not the most dignified. If Sec had returned with another scheme or whatnot then I'd be a bit more forgiving but as soon as Caan and the other 2 turn on him, he literally does nothing apart from taking the shot while Caan gets further with the scheme (before he terminated the human daleks in the end)

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Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#2677: Dec 16th 2023 at 2:56:13 AM

[up]I think that was brought up when he was proposed. I’m a bit forgiving over him being chained up because it was him going out in a noble Heroic Sacrifice to save the Doctor. This act would earn the Doctor's full respect where he honored Sec. Plus he warned his own Daleks that their path was headed towards death and defeat, where he was ultimately proven correct, which is a point in his favor.

If his being outsmarted occurred entirely while he was still a villain, I’d vouch for the cut. But in this case it was post-Heel–Face Turn where he prioritized doing the right thing over his own personal safety.

That’s just how I personally feel. I won’t fight for him to stay up if the consensus is against me.

Edited by Snowy66 on Dec 16th 2023 at 6:50:51 AM

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#2678: Dec 16th 2023 at 6:06:41 AM

Found these in YMMV.The Life And Suffering Of Sir Brante:

  • Magnificent Bastard:
    • Sir Brante can be played as one, using multiple parties for his own ends and always making the best out of any situation.
    • Felipe El Ferro can become this in his winning scenario. Not only does he concoct an elaborate and risky scheme that saves the whole realm from a devastating civil war, he also acts with determination and valor, never losing his cool even in the face of direst dangers. He can also prove to be very charismatic, securing Sir Brante's loyalty with nothing but his eloquence and sincerity. In the end he fully proves his Chessmaster capabilities and wins the main conflict of the game without fighting a single battle himself.

So uh...did these ever get talked about? Cause it seems like "can become this" was written under the assumption that this trope can get Played With.

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jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#2679: Dec 16th 2023 at 6:12:26 AM

Troper who added them has never once posted on the thread, and I found nothing with searching. I've removed them.

Keep Dalek Sec.

Edited by jjjj2 on Dec 16th 2023 at 9:13:52 AM

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MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#2680: Dec 16th 2023 at 10:22:16 AM

I'm personally inclined to go for a cut for Dalek Sec. I understand and agree with Snowy's arguments, and he was right in his final pleas that the way would only lead to disaster for them which they refused to listen to.

But for me its the simple fact that the guy was honestly completely blindsided when the other Daleks turned on him. He was honestly convinced they would continue obeying him when he was endorsing undoing everything that made them Daleks, despite knowing that Daleks were literally programmed from existence into seeing all other forms of life as inferior.

For me that's just to big an oversight. There is prioritising the right thing over personal safety, and there is being played for a sap by your own former minions. Heck if it wasn't for the Doctor flipping the board, his plan would have failed miserably and there was nothing he could do about it.

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#2681: Dec 16th 2023 at 10:57:31 AM

Contesting Eggman's Lost World entry on MagnificentBastard.Sonic The Hedgehog. Unlike his Adventure and Forces incarnations, there's two things holding Eggman back from being an MB for me in Lost World. While his actual plan is genius, a.) he acts rather petty throughout the game, such as him arguing with Tails over having to shut down the Extractor and vowing To the Pain on the Deadly Six, and b.) he suffers a Humiliation Conga of undignified slapstick during the ending, with Sonic making him comically fall by snatching his jetpack's exhaust hose and comedically losing half of his mustache and ranting about it.

Orcus on His Throne will always be my pet peeve.
jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#2682: Dec 16th 2023 at 1:02:57 PM

One moment of slapstick is not enough to disqualify a candidate, and those petty moments seem more mild if he's arguing with his Tails who happens to be his ally at the time and the latter just seems like a boast towards the main villains.

Keep that Eggman.

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#2683: Dec 16th 2023 at 1:26:58 PM

I'm going to need a lot more depth to those problems before I agree with a cut on their basis.

Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#2684: Dec 16th 2023 at 2:51:02 PM

@MGD 107, very fair assessment. So I'll raise a few more points.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm pretty sure Daleks are compelled to obey the chain of command of Dalek superiors. Sec actually exploited this by ordering them not to kill the Doctor, leading to the famous "I. Obey." Caan had to pull an outright Loop Hole Abuse on Sec not being a Dalek anymore in order to convince the others to rebel, which is why Sec didn't anticipate it.

Even before the experiment, Sec always questioned the Dalek ideology of purity and supremacy, having asked why other races like humans were more successful at surviving, and their purity had brought about their race's downfall. At this point none of the Daleks questioned him over this.

There's also the fact that self-sacrifice was an ongoing theme for Sec, with him volunteering himself for the hybridisation experiment for the good of the Dalek race. This would continue on once he gained human emotions where he genuinely believed that giving emotions to the Daleks would be beneficial (also proven correct when Caan himself became a Mad Prophet).

Oh and the final thing that sells it for me. While it's true the Daleks turned on him, the tradeoff was that Sec used his charisma to sway the Doctor (the no. 1 Dalek hater in the universe) over to his side to help with the experiment, something no other Dalek had done before.

That's my two cents

Edited by Snowy66 on Dec 16th 2023 at 2:51:42 AM

xie323 Since: Jul, 2009
#2685: Dec 18th 2023 at 5:18:46 PM

Request a cut from Fan Works under the MB tree for Kaiserreich: Legacy of the Weltkrieg. I did raise this issue a long time ago but it was ignored by everyone.

  • Emperor Pedro III is the emperor of Brazil, ascending to power after the way was cleared for his ascent to the throne by the Brazilian Integralists. Upon taking power he launches a massive purge of the Syndicalists and establishes the paramilitary Imperial Green Guards to suppress the far left and enforce religious fundamentalism, while indoctrinating the population through the distribution of Integralist propaganda and the creation of youth movements to indoctrinate the youth. Despite these measures however, Pedro III stands out as one of the more benevolent National Populist dictators in the setting, using his powers to weaken the powers of local governors and oligarchs in order to give the population as much individual rights and freedoms as possible; ruling through charisma and . Emperor Pedro is also noteworthy for his anti-racist policies, as he institutes laws protecting indigenous tribes and Afro-Brazilians from racial discrimination within Brazil in order to create a new cosmopolitian culture blending both Portuguese and Afro-Brazilian traditions.

While this wasn't the case when I effortposted him, and thus I cannot really be held accountable for overlooking this, later patches added an event where Pedro III can essentially greenlight his far-right prime minister and his cronies to carry hate crimes against Jews, or replace him with a more moderate prime minister that won't engage in antisemitic behavior. While this is up to the player to decide to what extent do they allow the Prime Minister to get away with this and it dosen't end in say death camps being erected all over Brazil, the fact that the character can be roleplayed as an antisemite leaves a very bitter taste in my mouth, especially with the current geopolitical climate(I am aware that antisemitism within the geopolitical context I am alluding to is a very complex and controversial discussion as to what extent is antisemitism weaponized for certain goals I will not describe due to ROCEJ, but that's here nor there and in general this entry leaves a very bad taste).

Edited by xie323 on Dec 18th 2023 at 5:23:20 AM

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#2687: Dec 18th 2023 at 11:59:31 PM

Sure to cutting that guy.

@Snowy Firstly, I appreciate the well thought arguments about Sec. To address your points.

"but I'm pretty sure Daleks are compelled to obey the chain of command of Dalek superiors. Sec actually exploited this by ordering them not to kill the Doctor, leading to the famous "I. Obey." Caan had to pull an outright Loop Hole Abuse on Sec not being a Dalek anymore in order to convince the others to rebel, which is why Sec didn't anticipate it."

Wouldn't that lean more in Caan's favour though? He's loop holing a problem that he's conditioned to?

"Even before the experiment, Sec always questioned the Dalek ideology of purity and supremacy, having asked why other races like humans were more successful at surviving, and their purity had brought about their race's downfall. At this point none of the Daleks questioned him over this."

They were on board if my memory serves me so that's true but they were intending on using the human daleks for conquering? The plan only changed when Sec merges with Dioagoras and intends on having the human daleks move to another planet to thrive. Caan and the other 2 still manage to get the hybrids under their control and to use them for battle (until Caan kills them all)

There's also the fact that self-sacrifice was an ongoing theme for Sec, with him volunteering himself for the hybridisation experiment for the good of the Dalek race. This would continue on once he gained human emotions where he genuinely believed that giving emotions to the Daleks would be beneficial (also proven correct when Caan himself became a Mad Prophet).

Caan didn't lose the ideology out of his own whims though. Wasn't it him being sent through into the time war itself that broke his mind and made him realise the Daleks and Davros were monsters?

My final statement on the matter, Sec has all the hallmarks for an MB but Caan in the end: Usurps him by loophole abusing his own programmed condition of command, has Sec chained like an animal by the other 2, kills all the human Daleks rendering the scheme for naught, pulls one of the biggest Manipulative Bastard instances in the entire show by fooling a reforged Dalek empire and Davros (who has the ingenuity as the Doctor.)

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#2688: Dec 19th 2023 at 7:28:38 AM

I suppose Pedro is a cut.

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#2690: Dec 20th 2023 at 5:35:05 PM

Cut Pedro, and this is the problem with Player Characters counting.

[down] I know it’s not an instant disqualification but it’s hard to do (like you can easily screw up really bad or do something really awful). Just like being a CM isn’t an instant disqualification but it is hard for them to count.

Edited by LarryT on Dec 21st 2023 at 3:09:59 AM

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#2691: Dec 20th 2023 at 9:29:17 PM

[up]To be fair we have some examples of characters who have A Day in the Limelight or are playable for a short time, most notably Edelgard from Three Houses who IS playable in two routes. Being playable isn't an automatic disqualifier. Cut Pedro if it wasn't clear.

Edited by Klavice on Dec 21st 2023 at 9:05:49 AM

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#2692: Dec 20th 2023 at 11:19:55 PM

Cut Pedro, and while Sec is a great character, I'm sadly going to have to say cut him too. I just can't ignore that he put way too much stock in the Dalek chain of command keeping his subordinates loyal when he was trying to change Dalek nature, and the fact that his legacy was ultimately undone by a fail-safe he could have removed but didn't.

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#2693: Dec 21st 2023 at 6:34:46 AM

From what I'm hearing it does sound like Sec winds up playing well but comes in second to another MB and barring extreme circumstances and at the end of the day, this trope does entail being at least tied for smartest.

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#2694: Dec 21st 2023 at 8:28:47 AM

While I'll let people gather their thoughts of Sec. My additions for Soundwaves entry weren't added to the main Transformers page even though it's been removed from the drafts?

Edited by WetFlannels on Dec 21st 2023 at 4:29:04 PM

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#2696: Dec 21st 2023 at 2:34:41 PM

Ah, you know what. I concede on Sec, he was always a close call but looks like now he's shifted to being a near-miss.

The points are correct that when it comes to duking it out with another MB like Caan, both sides need to each have some victories, whereas Caan was a firm victor without any defeats.

Sure to removing Sec.

Edited by Snowy66 on Dec 21st 2023 at 2:34:58 AM

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#2697: Dec 21st 2023 at 2:36:28 PM

Cut Pedro and I guess Sec

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#2700: Dec 21st 2023 at 9:44:05 PM

Cut Sec.

Minor rewrite for Lash from AOS; added an extra bit of cleverness and chopped the superfluous/technically incorrect end bit (he's already carried Daisy to safety when he's killed). Trimmed a few other awkward parts while I was at it.

  • Original: Andrew Garner is a psychologist and an Inhuman researcher who becomes an Inhuman himself. Developing an urge to transform into the monstrous Lash and kill other Inhumans, he keeps up appearances with his colleagues at S.H.I.E.L.D. and evades detection from both them and the ATCU. Cornered by HYDRA assassins, he transforms into Lash and kills them, and sets the store ablaze to cover his tracks. Upon being discovered by May, he kidnaps her and takes her to an abandoned Culver University building. Cornered by S.H.I.E.L.D. and the ATCU, Lash is able to overpower them, only detained by May using her former relationship with Garner to talk him down. Finding himself in HYDRA's custody, he talks Simmons into setting him free to protect her, proceeding to slaughter both HYDRA's forces and the Inhumans being held in stasis. After spending months on the run, Garner hands himself into S.H.I.E.L.D. to take one last shot at taking out Hive, putting the abomination on the backfoot and setting Daisy free from his influence. Dying from being stabbed In the Back by Hellfire, Lash carries Daisy to safety in his final moments.

  • New: Andrew Garner is a psychologist and an Inhuman researcher who becomes an Inhuman himself. Developing an urge to transform into the monstrous Lash and kill other Inhumans, he keeps up appearances with his colleagues at S.H.I.E.L.D. and evades detection from both them and the ATCU, using an Inhuman-detecting mole in the government to find his victims before silencing him when he's discovered. Cornered by HYDRA assassins, Garner transforms into Lash and kills them, setting the store ablaze to cover his tracks. Upon being discovered by his ex-wife May, Garner kidnaps her and overpowers S.H.I.E.L.D. and the ATCU's efforts to stop him, ultimately only being detained when May talks him down as a distraction. Finding himself in HYDRA's custody, Garner convinces Simmons to set him free to protect her, proceeding to slaughter both HYDRA's forces and the Inhumans they're holding in stasis. After spending months on the run, Garner hands himself into S.H.I.E.L.D. to be used as one last shot at taking out Hive, putting the abomination on the backfoot and setting Daisy free from his influence in his final moments.


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