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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#19276: May 15th 2020 at 11:54:58 AM

Sorry about that Klavice.

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futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#19277: May 15th 2020 at 12:44:19 PM

@43 Apologies. Based on the EP, [tup] to Madeleine.

Sorry for your loss Klavice.

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#19278: May 15th 2020 at 1:02:19 PM

Keep Artemisia weak yes to the Phantom (sounds like just enough of a bastard)

My condolences Klavice.

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#19279: May 15th 2020 at 1:19:34 PM

Condolences Klavice.

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Riley1sCool Since: Dec, 2014
#19280: May 15th 2020 at 1:21:21 PM

Indeed. Condolences, Klavice.

k410ren Since: Jan, 2016
#19281: May 15th 2020 at 1:22:06 PM

Sorry for your loss, Klavice.

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#19283: May 15th 2020 at 4:43:53 PM

Sorry to hear that Klavice.

Here is my Madeleine Wallace write up:

  • Batman: Nightwalker by Marie Lu: Madeleine Wallace is a young member of a group of left-wing anarchists called the Nightwalkers and is accused of robbing and murdering several wealthy people in Gotham City and is being held in Arkham Asylum, while in reality her brother Cameron killed those people and Madeleine is taking the rap for him. Bruce Wayne is forced to work at Arkham due to community service and Madeleine decides to talk to him. Bruce tries to get information from Madeleine and Madeleine convinces Bruce to scramble the security cameras so they can talk alone. Madeleine tells Bruce convincing lies and half-truths to make her seem more sympathetic and tells Bruce of a minor Nightwalker safehouse to gain his trust. Madeleine uses origami to send messages to other Nightwalkers and uses the security back door Bruce created to escape. Madeleine hacks into Bruce's less secure bank accounts to steal his money and gives it to the poor. Madeleine and Cameron take control of some WayneTech drones and use them to hold a Wayne gala hostage to force Bruce to give them access to the rest of the accounts. Madeleine opposes her brother when he tries to murder Bruce and Madeleine seemingly is killed by Cameron, only to have faked her death and escaped.

Edited by Overlord on May 15th 2020 at 5:42:23 AM

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#19285: May 15th 2020 at 6:13:15 PM

So put in the dc icons tree.

Honestly I'm curious if anyone counts in wonder woman warbringer. As this series has now 3 / 4 books with mbs.

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#19286: May 15th 2020 at 6:42:55 PM

I'll do so in a bit... what's the release order or just go alphabetically?

Also can someone familiar rewrite this one:

  • Arrow: Adrian Chase/Prometheus. He's been ten steps ahead of Oliver from the moment he made his presence known. Having dedicated his entire existence to ruining the hero's life, Chase plays Oliver and Team Arrow like chess pieces all season long. He never once breaks character and remains dedicated to his purpose of destroying Oliver to the bitter end, even killing his own Morality Pet to prove the point. He manipulates Oliver into killing Billy Malone by baiting him into shooting the detective by putting him into a Prometheus costume. He also makes Oliver declare the Green Arrow, his own superhero alter-ego, a public criminal. He also captures and tortures Oliver, breaking him so bad that Oliver lost his will to continue being a vigilante. He also conditions Oliver into believing that he kills because he enjoys it and that he's as much of a monster as Chase was. For his grand plan, Chase has everyone close to Oliver kidnapped, including Oliver's son, and takes them all to Lian Yu. He then threatens the life of his son and gives Oliver a Sadistic Choice: save his son or save his friends, as Chase was hooked up to a Dead Man's Switch which would cause the island to explode along with Oliver's friends. Oliver must choose to either kill Chase which would kill all his friends, or let Chase kill his son. When Oliver tries to Take a Third Option and knock aside his nemesis, Chase has none of it and proceeds to kill himself as one final screw you to Oliver, where the island proceeds to blow up.

It starts with the pre-thread style of having the character's name as a sentence allow and parts are overly casual "screw you". Also I know Chase is petty enough that it came dangerously close to disqualifying him but this is just focusing on petty shit he does. Ideally revamped with more focus on his guile and gambits.

Edited by 43110 on May 15th 2020 at 11:06:08 AM

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#19288: May 15th 2020 at 9:52:04 PM

'Yes' to Madeleine

I can rewrite Prometheus if we like, but tbh, I don't even think he should be listed. He's a sadistic nutbar who is treated as way off his rocker for being so obsessed with killing Oliver, 99.9% of his crimes are petty as hell, and frankly he reeks of Villain Sue, even if that's a more subjective opinion.

Perfect representation of Chase's personality: When his wife realizes he's a supervillain, he has an emotional breakdown and sobbingly apologizes to her...then stabs her to death, immediately turns to Oliver and starts screaming that her death is his fault...somehow. Chase is a fucking psychopath, and for as smart as he is (writers probably legitimately tried to write him with "magnificent" in mind), Chase's personality is a few fries short of a Happy Meal, and he comes off as an utterly despicable piece of shit first and foremost—not a brilliant, charming mastermind meant to have respect of the audience.

I'm not gonna raise too many waves to get him cut, and again, I'd be fine rewriting his entry having watched all of Arrow, but this is a case where I do not think he should be listed, especially compared to other MBs from the Arrowverse

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#19289: May 15th 2020 at 9:59:49 PM

I'll abstain on that one since I hadn't watched any shows from the Arrowverse, but it is contentious enough to maybe warrant a reevalutaion.

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#19290: May 15th 2020 at 10:11:58 PM

Huh...funny, I was actually planning to PM Ravok about those exact concerns to talk about them. Well, I don't think he falls into Villain Sue at least.

His true persona, beneath his Guise as the DA? Is a smug, downright disturbed Psychopath. And his crimes tend to get in the personal, "Under your skin" level of awful.

A good comparison I came up for recently is that Adrian is, more or less a lower Tier Atrocitus. Yes, he has clear factors that keep him from being a CM, but that doesn't stop him from being a sadistic prick who goes way past the line.

Another thing is....the Effortpost seems to acknowledge all of this.

"Is he a Bastard? Too much a bastard?

Absolutely. He's dedicated his entire existence to destroying one hero in every way possible, we're talking Batman-Joker levels of obsession here. While he does sort of have a Freudian Excuse, ultimately that got blown aside too as he knew his father never loved him and still didn't care. He also killed his own Morality Pet just to emphasize he's cut all ties with humanity.

There is nothing remotely redeeming or sympathetic about this guy. The one and only way to stop him is to put him in the ground."

Edited by Kylotrope on May 15th 2020 at 7:14:07 AM

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#19291: May 15th 2020 at 10:14:24 PM

I'd be up for a reevaluation.

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#19292: May 15th 2020 at 10:16:38 PM

Sounds like he may need to be cut, I won't formally vote without a second opinion. I'll admit to not being too familiar with either the comic or show version of Prometheus but what I do know about them makes me feel like they probably could be Complete Monsters if it weren't for the fact that they have dead loved ones since they're both pretty heinous and as far as I know don't have redeeming qualities otherwise.

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#19293: May 15th 2020 at 10:47:56 PM

You know what sure cut Prometheus. I haven't seen Arrow, but I've read his character page and he seems like a god awful bastard (I'm actually shocked that he isn't listed as a Complete Monster because he really sounds like he could count)

Edited by G-Editor on May 15th 2020 at 7:51:36 AM

Kylotrope Barb(Its a thread joke you wouldn't get it) from Honolulu Hawaii Since: Apr, 2018
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#19294: May 15th 2020 at 10:56:45 PM

Nada, he's Awful as hell but his motivation is Avenging his Father.

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#19296: May 16th 2020 at 3:26:14 AM

Yeah, cut Prometheus; I haven't seen the season, but I always had the impression he was just a sadistic monster, redeeming qualities aside.

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#19297: May 16th 2020 at 6:29:16 AM

Honestly if that is the most "Magnificent" a writeup can be made? Sure, a cut makes my life easier. Honestly it reads like one of the many CM entries I've purged over the years where their candidacy is transparently questionable even in the entry that's supposed to present their best qualifications.

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#19298: May 16th 2020 at 7:02:10 AM

I guess we can cut Prometheus. Shame to see him go though. He's one of my favorite Arrowverse villains. But compare him to Slade (my actual favorite) and yeah he is to sadistic.

Also late yes to Madeliene.

Edited by Bullman on May 16th 2020 at 9:03:00 AM

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#19299: May 16th 2020 at 7:49:31 AM

Cut Prometheus.

Btw I found this on Eternal Darkness

I'll change it to chessmaster but would in asking here if anyone whose played it could say whether this dude could count ?

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#19300: May 16th 2020 at 7:53:12 AM

I have... Mantarok doesn't count: the true ending shows he played Pious and the Ancient he was serving. It's clearly smart and has something schemed but a sequel never materialized so lord knows where that would have ended up and there really isn't anything to find charming about it.

Also on The Big O? I've come to the conclusion only one person keeps. Ravok will present them when he's ready.

Edited by 43110 on May 16th 2020 at 10:54:45 AM


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