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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

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#70951: Mar 5th 2022 at 8:11:37 PM

Even though Cersei won, Margaery saw it. It was the High Septon who doomed them in his stubbornness. [tup]Margaery.

Edited by jjjj2 on Mar 5th 2022 at 11:26:26 AM

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#70953: Mar 5th 2022 at 8:15:49 PM

[tup]Blackfish, Marge

Alright second Skyrim character that I'm not so sure on...

What is the work? Skyrim...you know it (probably), What is Dawnguard? The first expansion following vampires and vampire hunters. The main item of interest is Auriel's Bow, a powerful weapon that is imbued with The Power of the Sun. Unfortunately Harkon (our resident Big Bad of the expansion) is wanting to use the bow to fulfill a prophecy called the "Tyranny Of The Sun" that will create an eternal night that will allow vampires to run freely unoppressed from daylight. Eventually the player and Serana will find out the location of the bow, in a seemingly normal cave until you meet a snow elf (a falmer before being twisted) called Gelebor who shows you the way to the bow's location but also asks you to kills his brother Vyrthur who is our candidate for today.

Who is he and what has he done?

Vyrthur is the Arch Curate of the Chantry of Auriel, a place where a small clan of snow elves fled to when the rest of their race fled to the dwarves (who in turn corrupted them to become the Falmer.) Although him and his kind were isolated from Skyrim's affairs, the falmer eventually found a way into the valley and broke into the Chantry, killing all of the snow elves except for Vyrthur who managed to freeze all of the falmer and seal the chantry. According to Gelebor, Vyrthur had seemingly changed and been corrupted by the falmer somehow.

When the Dragonborn and Serana finally enter the Chantry, they find Vyrthur on a throne behind a wall of ice when he immediately attacks the heroes by reanimating the frozen falmer and charus (giant insectoid creatures) in waves. When the heroes defeat the waves, Vyrthur causes the roof to cave in and briefly knocking down the Dragonborn. When Serana confronts Vyrthur and tells him to surrender the bow. Vyrthur then reveals that he was the one to create the prophecy. He did it because he was unwillingly infected with vampirism by another initiate and Auriel didn't protect him despite his loyalties to the god. Knowing that he couldn't do anything to the god himself, Vyrthur created the prophecy to dispel his influence onto the mortal realm (Auriel is a god linked to the sun so blocking out the sun would do that) and all he needed was the blood of a pureblood vampire like Serana since he would able to weaponize Auriel's bow to do that. After this revelation, Vythur has one final battle against Serana and the Dragonborn before dying.

Is he magnificent?

He managed to deal with an onslaught of falmer and freeze them in place (every falmer dungeon shows that they're always the bigger power apart from possibly the dwarven machines) so he's no slouch and is formidable in his skills. He also knew how to weaponize a god's weapon to suit his own agenda. There's also making the prophecy itself to try and stop a gods influence on the mortal realm (although different races see the same type of god in different ways, they still exist so he's not aiming for a pointless goal.)

There is one massive factor that will make you go hmm, the fact he's an Orcus On The Throne and has been just waiting in the Chantry all this time. Despite this I'm not sure it's too negating because: he's in a very isolated part of Skyrim so getting anywhere would be difficult, he has the bow so he wouldn't want to risk losing it, the prophecy could only be done with the blood of a female pure vampire-basically a female who went through the ceremony with Molag Bal and its said that only a few survive it so trying to find one of them would be more hassle than creating a prophecy and having the vampires come to him. Like Valerica he's shown to be content with playing the long game with waiting it out and when the opportunity appears he goes straight for it

Is he a bastard?

He intends to block out the sun to spite Auriel and as soon as the heroes appear to him he immediately goes for the kill to get Serana's blood.

On his character page on this site, it says he let the falmer in to kill the other initiates (apart from his brother, who he hasn't harmed despite knowing that he'd be by a wayshrine which he could easily access to) before freezing them which is a definite bastard part. The problem is that I don't recall hearing anything about that in the game and I checked the Skyrim wikis to find out if it happened and there's no note he did that? However, there are lots of frozen falmer corpses in the chantry as soon as you enter along with skeletons so there is some possible truth to it.

Unlike Harkon who just wanted the bow to allow vampires run amok unopposed, Vyrthur had a genuine grievance before falling into evil with his god not protecting him from vampirism and "turning his back on him".

Final Verdict?

A cautious yes overall. Unsure on the clarity of the slaughter though

Edited by WetFlannels on Mar 5th 2022 at 4:16:15 PM

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#70954: Mar 5th 2022 at 8:18:39 PM

[tup] Daario, Blackfish, weaker one for Marg

Gonna go [tdown] for Vyrthur, given that is whole plan is trying to destroy the sun to spite a god seems too petty for me

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#70955: Mar 5th 2022 at 8:19:12 PM

Leaning yea there

And leaning yea on Margaery. It's really only her bastard credentials that tie me up and it's not her fault she didn't know there was hidden Wildfyre down below

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#70956: Mar 5th 2022 at 8:22:55 PM

For me, her knowing full well Tyrion was innocent and letting him take the fall is what pushed it over for me. In a lighter series, she'd be much easier but I think she just hits the mark.

I lean yes to Vyrthur as well. Both he and Valerica were ones I thought about during my initial deep dive but I got tired of Elder Scrolls after doing over a dozen effort posts for it.

Edited by LoreDeluxe on Mar 5th 2022 at 8:25:18 AM

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#70958: Mar 5th 2022 at 8:51:26 PM

[tup] Breacher, Daario, Blackfish, Margaery, and Vyrthur.

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#70959: Mar 5th 2022 at 8:58:35 PM

[tup] to Noah, the Amazon Killer, Breacher, Daario, the Blackfish, Tyrell and Vyrthur.

"For a second there, I mistook ya for a threat... but you're just a dirty little man!"
futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#70960: Mar 5th 2022 at 9:10:13 PM

@Lore Jaqen was the one you almost did, right?

Yeah, [tup] to Daario. He's also spared of Greyworm totally losing it after Missandei's killed too.

That's five now for the show. Two more and we watch CM.

EDIT: Make that six. Of course [tup] to Margery.

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Mar 5th 2022 at 9:17:32 AM

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#70961: Mar 5th 2022 at 9:28:08 PM

  • Alex Rider: Yassen Gregorovich is a ruthless and efficient SCORPIA-affiliated assassin. After escaping the destruction of his home village, he uses his wits to survive before being rescued by a SCORPIA assassin. During his training, he develops a friendship with an undercover John Rider, who encourages him to leave the organization. After finding out that Rider is an MI6 agent, he is inspired to remain with SCORPIA, his first target being the man who was responsible for the destruction of his hometown. In the present day, despite his willingness to work alongside villains such as Herod Sayle and Damian Cray, he proves to have a moral code as he refuses to directly kill children - especially John's son Alex, telling him that he shouldn't be a spy and that he should be living a normal life.

Is this good for Yassen?

Edited by magnumtropus on Mar 5th 2022 at 5:45:37 PM

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#70962: Mar 5th 2022 at 10:13:04 PM

  • Taiyou Sentai Sun Vulcan: Amazon Killer is a Vader Clan field officer who joins Machine Empire Black Magma out of loyalty to Queen Hedrian. Upon her arrival on Earth, Amazon Killer formulates a plan that brings about the destruction of Sun Vulcan's base, and keeps Sun Vulcan on their toes throughout the series with both her cunning and combat prowess. When Führer Hell Saturn appoints Inazuma Ginga to be his new right-hand man, Amazon Killer conspires with Queen Hedrian to manipulate Inazuma Ginga into killing Hell Saturn in a duel. She then nominates Inazuma Ginga to succeed him, causing the Zero Girls to back Queen Hedrian as a response and give her the support she needs to become the new ruler of Black Magma. When the Omnipotent God intervenes to kill Hedrian and appoints Amazon Killer as its new Puppet Queen, Amazon Killer reveals the Omnipotent God's location to Sun Vulcan before committing suicide rather than continue serving it.

Just imagine something here.
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#70963: Mar 5th 2022 at 11:18:18 PM

[tup]Daario, Blackfish, Margaery, and Arthur.

[up][up] and [up]. Looks good. Add to drafts.

Edited by miraculous on Mar 6th 2022 at 4:28:37 AM

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#70964: Mar 6th 2022 at 12:31:07 AM

[tup] Breacher, Daario, Brynden, Margaery and Vyrthur

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#70966: Mar 6th 2022 at 6:09:52 AM

Sure to Daario, Brynden, and Margaery. Abstain on Vyrthur.

jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#70967: Mar 6th 2022 at 7:07:40 AM

Not sure on Vythur. I do agree with Chaos that making the world sunless over a grudge, that is legitimate to be fair, seems pretty bad. I'll abstain.

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#70968: Mar 6th 2022 at 7:20:09 AM

I'm already a cautious yes with him overall but about the world being sunless. Here's how it appears in game so it's not a typical pitch black night there's still some form of light.

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#70969: Mar 6th 2022 at 7:22:58 AM

How do the NPCs react? Is there chatter about how there way of life is going to change?

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#70970: Mar 6th 2022 at 7:26:59 AM

When the player does it it only lasts for the day and NPC s are like "What happened to the sun?" but if you talk to them they act as normal. Thing is, this appears to be Gameplay and Story Segregation, since when the Dawnguard people are talking about blocking out the sun, they talk about it being permanent, how this will such a fundamentally change to the world that every faction in the world would pull an Enemy Mine to try to get the sun back and exterminate all vampires

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jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#70971: Mar 6th 2022 at 7:32:41 AM

Yeah that's what I was afraid of Gameplay and Story Segregation, I'm keeping my abstention.

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#70972: Mar 6th 2022 at 8:05:02 AM

[tup] Daaario, and Blackfush Tully.

Sure to Margaery.

Also [tup] Vyrthur.

Edited by Beast on Mar 6th 2022 at 8:15:31 AM

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
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#70973: Mar 6th 2022 at 8:31:54 AM

[tup] to Vythur

[tdown] to Margaery. I don't think someone in her early-mid 20s having sex with a 15 year old is ignorable because "she only did it once"

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#70974: Mar 6th 2022 at 8:42:55 AM

Wait what a grown woman having sex with a 15 year old boy? [tdown][tdown][tdown][tdown]Margaeey

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#70975: Mar 6th 2022 at 8:58:02 AM

[tup] for Breacher, Daario, the Blackfish, Margaery (tentative), and Vythur (tentative).


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