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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#47751: May 26th 2021 at 2:24:15 PM

I guess my issue with the Zemo comparison is, with him, there was more multiple factors there not any one specific thing, he had his Petty grudge against cap, in addition To stuff like his use of chemical weaponry, and throwing all of Reality under the bus to save his skin.

I can get the arguments for cutting though.

Also if anyone was curious on the Results Thing, it's here

https://youtu.be/x_S8o3okKbA

The First man
G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#47752: May 26th 2021 at 2:24:58 PM

Tentative [tup] to Copperhead

Cut Wiley and [tdown] to Spongebob

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#47753: May 26th 2021 at 2:32:09 PM

I do concur the Zemo comparison doesn't work in many regards but I do think both overlap in that they both have a pronounced Evil Is Cool thing and that while they're both characters I don't agree with being on the list, I do think the points for keeping are articulate and well argued and won't lose sleep over him staying. That being said, where I struggle with Wily is again the pettiness and dictatorial nature of his crimes, combined with the Kill the Poor and Disposable Vagrants implications to his "disappearing" people shit.

Melinda Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: Puppy love
#47755: May 26th 2021 at 2:46:40 PM

Copperhead is posted in drafts.

ImperialMajestyXO Since: Nov, 2015
#47756: May 26th 2021 at 2:47:04 PM

[up] Standard procedure is to post the draft here first.

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#47758: May 26th 2021 at 2:51:28 PM

Yeah please post it here. Lots of folks besides me have fantastic editing suggestions and it's easier to see it.

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#47759: May 26th 2021 at 2:52:28 PM

Don't really think Irritant's going anywhere, which, in hindsight, is absolutely fair. Dude's fun, but not much context there. Traitorous has a bit more of an overarching idea of what he's done, but not too much. Not 100% confident on this, but might as well try. Not like I have much else to do.

Brain: Didn't you say you wanted to do Enoch-

Shut up! That takes time, here I can just copy and paste shit! I'll get to him later!

The candidate

Dread Emperor Traitorous is a Dread Emperor best known for... well, you can probably figure it out from the name.

    Quotes 
"Ha! And I bet you didn't even see it coming!"
"There's nothing better in life than the look on your enemy's face when they realize you've played them every step of the way. Why do you think I keep starting secret cabals trying to overthrow me?"
"Treason is more art than act."
"I've yet to encounter a situation that couldn't be improved by a copious amount of lies and body doubles."
"My dear Betrayer, I resent this accusation of selling you out to the heroes. No coin changed hands, it was really more of a bartering."
"I've been told one can only be betrayed by a friend, which is why I constantly surround myself with enemies."
- Dread Emperor Traitorous

"... such wanton deviousness had been unseen since the days of Dread Emperor Traitorous, who famously passed for his own Chancellor through cunning use of a wig and a pair of cantaloupes..."
- Extract from "The Most Illustrious Histories of the Inimitable Dread Empire of Praes", Volume IV

"Gentlemen, there is no need to worry: our plan is flawless. The Emperor will never see it coming."
- Grandmaster Ouroboros of the Order of Unholy Obsidian, later revealed to have been Dread Emperor Traitorous all along
"My dear friends, I have a confession to make. Some creative reframing of the truth may have taken place during the planning of this coup."
- Dread Emperor Traitorous, addressing the Order of the Unholy Obsidian upon successfully usurping the throne from himself

Then let us be wicked,
Let us be reddest ruin
Rent, broken, crooked
Black hearted and cruel

Then let us be doom,
To both friend and foe
Fly banner of gloom
We lowest of the low

Rise, rise all ye villains
You rogues and madmen
Proudly claim the stage,
Of this wondrous age

We are not kind or just
Deserving of any victory
We are a thing of dust
Promised only misery

So smile, Tyrants,
And let us be wicked

- Final monologue of "The Many Deaths of Traitorous", a play on the reign of the Dread Emperor Traitorous

"I'm not saying all your closest friends are shapeshifting devils I sent to spy on you after having the originals murdered, but I'm certainly implying it very heavily."
- Dread Emperor Traitorous, making small talk

"My dear prince, why would I settle for merely being on the right side of history when I could be on all sides of it instead?"
- Extract from the minutes of the Conference of the Blessed Isle, between the Shining Prince Harry Alban and Dread Emperor Traitorous

"Traitorous's Law: while redemption is the greatest victory one can achieve over a villain, to function it does require the villain to have at least a single redeemable quality.
Addendum: Yes, even if a Choir is involved."
- Extract from 'The Axiom Appendix', multiple contributors

"At which point Lord Bujune and Lady Rania both accused the other of being the Emperor in disguise, and the meeting devolved into protracted argument until the final quarter hour had passed."
- Extract from the minutes of the fourth meeting of the Red Fox Conspiracy, as taken by the stenographer Shamna Mehere (later revealed to have been Dread Emperor Traitorous all along)

"A ruler should always join regicide plots: is the finest possible teacher for a locksmith not a thief?"
- Dread Emperor Traitorous

"You bargained for my soul, dear devil, and that is what you received. Is it my fault you did not stipulate it was to be my original one?"
- Dread Emperor Traitorous, trading the soul of a single gnat for infernal enlightenment

"The finest summation of Traitorous's reign I ever heard came from an illiterate peasant from the outskirts of Ater, who described it as follows: 'Like watching a snake eat its own tail, only the tail was fake the snake was an angry badger and also you are poisoned.'"
- Introduction to 'More Art Than Act' by Hakim of Kahtan, the Haunted Scholar

"Just as planned."
- Inscription on the front gates of the mausoleum of Dread Emperor Traitorous

Traitorous was a particularly infamous Dread Emperor, remembered for basically turning betrayal into an art form - and damn if he wasn't good at it.

Most notably, of course, he frequently started conspiracies with the intent to overthrow himself, succeeding multiple times only to reveal his true identity to his conspirators (this was apparently done under the logic that "the best teacher for a locksmith is a thief"). It got to the point where members would fall to infighting, paranoid that other members were the Dread Emperor in disguise, with Traitorous just lying in the background as the group's stenographer.

Other notable exploits include the time he betrayed a villain named "the Betrayer" to heroes; the time he managed to disguise himself as his (female) chancellor; and the time he tricked a devil into giving him "infernal enlightenment." He managed to trick heroes into thinking he was redeemed, even though he supposedly had no redeeming qualities, and apparently managed to do it a second time even after an Angel Choir got involved. And, I mean, I already put this in the quotes folder, but this is simultaneously horrifying and hilarious.

"I'm not saying all your closest friends are shapeshifting devils I sent to spy on you after having the originals murdered, but I'm certainly implying it very heavily."
- Dread Emperor Traitorous, making small talk

He ultimately died after committing suicide, framing over a hundred different people for his murder.

Magnificence and Bastardness

He's easily the most popular Dread Emperor, and for a reason. Traitorous betrayed literally anyone and anything he could with hilarious audacity, a common joke being that many of the other Dread Emperors (Irritant especially) were actually Traitorous in disguise. Even In-Universe, he's apparently well-regarded - Praes as a whole is basically filled with snakes who would gladly poison each other for opera tickets, so the man who made treachery into an art form is a bit of a folk hero.

Of course, he falls into the same problem as Irritant, namely that he's... you know, dead, and therefore without much presence besides the quotes. Still, I feel he gets a somewhat more concrete feel of what he was like and what his schemes entailed, namely backstabbing his royal court at any opportunity he could get (and, again, they're kind of pricks, so they have it coming).

The "no redeeming qualities" thing gives me pause, but I think that's more referring to him having no interest in redeeming himself rather than saying that he was a Complete Monster. If he did some really horrible shit we definitely would have heard about it by now.

Not really expecting him to do well, but might as well try. Thoughts?

Edited by EmeraldEmperor on May 26th 2021 at 2:54:31 AM

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#47760: May 26th 2021 at 2:56:00 PM

Here's Mel's draft.

  • Gotham: Larissa "Copperhead" Diaz is an assassin who spends her one episode pursuing Selina Kyle. She's introduced being surprised on Wayne Manor grounds by a gardener who she lulls into a false sense of security before breaking his neck and using his blood to make herself look like an accident victim as a Wounded Gazelle Gambit to attack Selina. She gives both Bruce and Gordon a chance to save their lives by not opposing her and is impressed enough to spare both of them when they resist her anyway. She also warns Bruce not to mistake bravery for good sense in the future. While she fails to kill Selina, she does eliminate a secondary target (using Gordon's gun to frame him for the shooting) and then escapes as the police arrive.

Here is my take:

  • Gotham:
    • "Lovecraft": Larissa "Copperhead" Diaz is an assassin who spends her one episode pursuing Selina Kyle. She's introduced being surprised on Wayne Manor grounds by a gardener who she lulls into a false sense of security before breaking his neck and using his blood to make herself look like an accident victim as a Wounded Gazelle Gambit to attack Selina. She gives both Bruce and Gordon a chance to save their lives by not opposing her and is impressed enough to spare both of them when they resist her anyway. She also warns Bruce not to mistake bravery for good sense in the future. While she fails to kill Selina, she does eliminate a secondary target (using Gordon's gun to frame him for the shooting) and then escapes as the police arrive.

Feels good, don't it?
jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#47761: May 26th 2021 at 3:02:24 PM

[up][up]Again does anyone want to protest my comparison of Irritant to the Devil from Sympathy for the Devil? I do feel the similarities are there: we don't get much context, but we do have a charming man doing evil things with demonstrations of cunning.

For Traitorous is there more context than just the quotes? Just judging by the quotes there I can get inkling of a story, and I think I'm leaniing [tup].

[down][down] I'm not talking about his relationship to Wily, I'm talking about how I view it as a similar situation to Irritant. Emeralds candidate.

Edited by jjjj2 on May 26th 2021 at 6:07:25 AM

You can only write so much in your forum signature. It's not fair that I want to write a piece of writing yet it will cut me off in the mid
EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#47762: May 26th 2021 at 3:04:16 PM

He doesn't come up too much. Due to his popularity he's referenced every once in a while, but besides the details of his death not much has been expanded upon so far.

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#47763: May 26th 2021 at 3:05:59 PM

I mean I already discussed the Devil with 43110; the reason I am fine with the Devil unlike with Wily is because it's not graphic in the details he explains how he had been manipulating mankind from the beginning and the forefront is more on him being a Man of Wealth and Taste.

[up][up] I'm not seeing the comparison here (one is a web novel v. a song for instance); but I'm leaning towards abstaining for Irritant .

Edited by AustinDR on May 26th 2021 at 3:32:16 AM

Riley1sCool Since: Dec, 2014
#47764: May 26th 2021 at 3:23:52 PM

I mean, I don't want to spread misconceptions... Wily isn't "graphic," per se. We don't get gory descriptions of horrific crimes he committed. The issue doesn't come in him being graphic so much as the fact he's got a pattern of horrible deeds and pettiness.

Oh, and one atrocity I left out because I was so focused on Act II, by the by? Wily brings Protoman back to life and pits him against his father, Light, and his own brother. Mind you, I'm actually gonna be charitable and note that the Face–Heel Turn there seems to have been of Proto's own volition but it's still another dick move to pad out Wily's resume of dick moves.

MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#47765: May 26th 2021 at 3:33:37 PM

[tup] to Traitorous.

In light of Starcrushers arguments I'll go against the grain and [tdown] to Copperhead.

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#47766: May 26th 2021 at 3:38:07 PM

'Yes' to Traitorous...Copperhead is ehhh difficult, I think I lean slightly 'Yes' at the moment all things considered.

I'm gonna wait to vote on Wily until Scrags chimes in...might use this time to also finally listen to the albums to get a better grasp on the character, been putting it off awhile anyway.

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
Riley1sCool Since: Dec, 2014
#47767: May 26th 2021 at 3:42:29 PM

They're really good stuff, hope you enjoy them.

Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#47768: May 26th 2021 at 3:42:54 PM

Highly Recomend, there was a video set with Act 2 featuring the story bits over here

https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLVm_FP4-CHnqlc1Sy4hnmfmG05xrvoxAF

The First man
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#47769: May 26th 2021 at 3:51:45 PM

I’m cool with Traitorous!

Riley1sCool Since: Dec, 2014
#47770: May 26th 2021 at 3:53:04 PM

Yes to Lord Traitorous of the nuanced name.

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#47771: May 26th 2021 at 3:54:28 PM

Also did you mind letting us know if you’ve got everything on Irritant or even just making a full post on him here Emerald? I’d like to give them a fair shot too!

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#47774: May 26th 2021 at 3:59:43 PM

Also you edits to Melinda's entry look good Sky.

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#47775: May 26th 2021 at 3:59:49 PM

[up][up][up][up] I updated Irritant with a better summary, it's still pretty much everything we know about him so far. The current arc has Cat invading Praes, so we might get a bit of expansion on a few past Emperors, but I wouldn't hold my breath.

Edited by EmeraldEmperor on May 26th 2021 at 4:00:27 AM


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