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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
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#28101: Sep 24th 2020 at 3:22:35 PM

Hearty 'Yes' to Holdaway, great catch there, 43!

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papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
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#28102: Sep 24th 2020 at 3:27:56 PM

Wasn't his plan for the robbers to just get ambushed and arrested during the heist itself? It feels like a stretch to call him a bastard if every bad thing that happens is unintentional and just the result of Mr. Blonde's Freak Out.

EDIT: Nevermind my eyes kind of glazed over the part the explains him being bad enough. I'll give him a weak yes.

Edited by papyru30 on Sep 24th 2020 at 4:31:53 AM

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#28103: Sep 24th 2020 at 3:34:16 PM

The film does also make a point the police as a whole choose to observe the mobsters actions and even let them come and go from their safe house as they please until they can catch Joe himself. Given the glory-seeking tone the officers are given and the blatant callousness leading to things like Nash getting carved up and killed, I'm not letting him go off as a guiltless Guile Hero.

Morgenthaler Since: Feb, 2016
#28104: Sep 24th 2020 at 3:41:15 PM

The fact they were all patiently waiting outside the safehouse while Freddy was bleeding out and Nash being tortured might solely push him over from a Guile Hero to a Magnificent Bastard.

I don't think we can lay Mr. Blonde's shooting spree at his feet since Joe kept the identities of all the criminals only available to himself and Eddie. When it happened (which nobody—his bosses included—saw coming), the cops who were already lying in wait did respond immediately to protect the civilians, as Mr. Pink and Mr. White discussed.

You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
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#28105: Sep 24th 2020 at 3:45:28 PM

Yeah, the handling of the safe house is what it comes down to for me.

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jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#28107: Sep 24th 2020 at 3:53:09 PM

hmm.., Never thought of Holdaway, I guess that makes him bad enough. [tup]Holdaway.

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#28110: Sep 24th 2020 at 7:02:06 PM

Alright, something mir caught:

  • Jack Vessalius is the true mastermind behind the events of the work. The illegitimate son of a noble, Jack fled from his home, living on the streets until he met a girl from the Baskerville family. Wanting to meet her again, Jack uses his noble family's name to be able to see her. When the Baskerville girl was sacrificed to the Abyss, Jack obsesses over seeing her again, deciding to throw the whole world into the corrupted Abyss to bring it to her. Causing the catastrophic Tragedy of Sablier, Jack blames the Baskerville and Nightray families while painting himself as the hero, going on to seek a chance to recreate it. Manipulating Oz's entire life to fulfill what Jack believes is the wish of his beloved, he is an ultimately Tragic Villain, even finally redeeming himself after accepting the errors of his own acts.

With a grammar scrub:

  • Jack Vessalius is the true mastermind behind the events of the work. The illegitimate son of a noble, Jack fled from his home, and lived on the streets until he met a girl from the Baskerville family. Wanting to meet her again, Jack uses his noble family's name to be able to see her. When the Baskerville girl was sacrificed to the Abyss, Jack, obsessed with getting to see her again, decided to throw the whole world into the corrupted Abyss to bring it to her. Causing the catastrophic Tragedy of Sablier, Jack blames the Baskerville and Nightray families while painting himself as the hero, going on to seek a chance to recreate it. Manipulating Oz's entire life to fulfill what he believed to be the wish of his beloved, Jack is ultimately a Tragic Villain, even finally redeeming himself after accepting the errors of his ways.

Guys, if you need assistance writing your entries, please message me or use the get help with English thread. Plunking things on me that are below the wiki's standard of English is going to get me in trouble being the one to post these and it's quite annoying. I'm not gonna catch every little thing that comes my way, so please, pull your own weight here.

Edited by 43110 on Sep 24th 2020 at 10:12:10 AM

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
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#28111: Sep 24th 2020 at 7:13:13 PM

Hey I just thought about this, does anyone think that The Bride could count? It's been a while since I saw the 2nd film but she's definitely bad enough and I feel like she may have enough moments of cleverness to stand out with O'Ren and Bill. What do you guys think?

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#28112: Sep 24th 2020 at 7:14:45 PM

Hmm... not a bad suggestion. It's been a while though and I'd have to think on it.

erazor0707 The Unknown Unknown from The Infinitude of Meh Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
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#28113: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:14:50 PM

All right, folks. I think I'm ready. Like I said before, I want to bring a candidate to cut.

It's Sephiroth.

PolarPhantom did a pretty good job at effortposting Sephiroth here. Now, he did so during my big hiatus, so I want to reassure everyone I would be making these same arguments then if I were there. In fact, I kind of hate that he isn't here to debate with me on this.

Either way, let's begin.

In FFVII proper, Sephiroth is a guy shrouded in ambiguity for thematic effect. The writers want to keep his mystique up until the final disc. He does a good job using fake memories and whatnot to manipulate Cloud and co., he's an iconic villain so he's certainly well-loved, and he has an excellent Freudian Excuse.

So what do I want to refute?

"[Sephiroth] is not overly arrogant."

Yes, he is.

Look no farther than Advent Children. The film is a detriment to Sephiroth's credentials, and it is a microcosm of bigger issues about him.

He wants to resurrect himself, but his remnants don't add to him specifically. Loz and Kazoo are muscle while poor Kadaj was played by Rufus until he got tired. When he does come back, despite his stated agenda of turning the planet into an arc to sail the cosmos, Sephiroth spends the battle versus Cloud trolling and tormenting him. Lines like "I want you to beg for forgiveness" and "Tell me what you cherish most; give me the pleasure of taking it away from you."

The Complete edition attempts to make the exchange look better by having Sephiroth impale Cloud into a bloody mess, actually trying to kill him. The problem I find with this? They kept his lines intact as well as the resolution. This gives Sephiroth a petty, sadistic edge that the writer probably didn't think through about. But it's there. Sephiroth is toying with (read: torturing) his prey too long, too much, and it bites him in the ass.

That's one of Sephiroth's problems: Pride is his Fatal Flaw. He's more powerful than pretty much everyone he comes up against, but he fails to recognize an actual threat to him, and he doesn't exert the full force of his powers against them until it's too late.

Every. Single. Time.

It happens in the base game too! As far as we know, Sephiroth was fully capable of getting the Black Materia any time he wanted through one of the Sephiroth Clones, and the party even notes he is capable of doing this, but he doesn't do it because he wanted to make Cloud and the party do it. Yeah, sure, this could be interpreted as a Batman Gambit in that he gets the Black Materia in the end, but his stringing along Cloud and co. prove his undoing. Polar's comment of "Yeah, he could have just done this all in secret and likely would have won if he did... but I don't think he'd be nearly as fun without his revenge B-Scheme" certainly raised my eyebrow as well; it's awfully dismissive of a pretty big point about Sephiroth's tendency to, shall we say, play with his food too much.

And honestly? I don't think I need to go further on that. I was also going to talk about other things — like how his connection to Lifestream gives him power way, way above the people he conflicts with, or how the deliberate ambiguity in the base game that enhance his mystique henceforth requires too much use of side material to clear it up (We all know our relationship with Word of God in this cleanup) — but do I even need to?

Unless you guys just want me to.

Anyway, yeah, I would hereby like to raise a motion to cut Sephiroth. What do you all think?

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#28114: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:23:23 PM

Those are really good points, I do need to ruminate a bit.

I will say at least, the remake is setting Sephiroth up to likely qualify on his own there, at least.

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#28115: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:27:32 PM

Yeah, Remake!Sephiroth is more palatable for sure. Let's hope Nomura lets him stick the landing.

Edited by erazor0707 on Sep 24th 2020 at 11:27:53 AM

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#28116: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:36:18 PM

Cut original Sephiroth. At the time the EP was done the rest of us either didn't remember or hadn't played the games and well meaning as Polar may have been, the result was we got his interpretation of a villain whose draw is his stature and physical power. Funnily enough exactly what you brought up was what kept him off the trope initially though Polar insisted most people are subject to "misinformation" on the character. Partially blame myself for this one and not being on the ball when it came through.

Also:

  • Reservoir Dogs: Detective Holdaway is the man responsible for giving Officer Freddy Newandyke a cover story to gain acceptance into mobster Joe Cabot's heist gang. With his trickery allowing Freddy to join Joe's gang as "Mr. Orange", Holdaway's dramatic flair and masterful planning prove crucial to planting Freddy and seeing the complete eradication of Joe's crime outfit.

Edited by 43110 on Sep 24th 2020 at 11:37:00 AM

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#28117: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:37:33 PM

Yeah, I think Erazor makes very salient points and I throw myself behind a cut. That can, however, very well change depending on the remake.

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#28119: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:45:29 PM

Looks like Sephiroth...has fallen from Grace.

Honestly, while complexity addicts can and have been approved, I do think that it ultimately helps for a candidate to be a No-Nonsense Nemesis.

ImperialMajestyXO Since: Nov, 2015
#28120: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:46:54 PM

Yeah, I think the remake might deliver on this front.

DocSharp Since: Jun, 2011
#28121: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:47:27 PM

Sad to say, but yeah, cut Sephiroth.

nwotyzal Since: Sep, 2019
#28122: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:48:58 PM

Yeah, always thought Sephiroth was kind of a dick.

Klavice Since: Jan, 2011
#28123: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:51:36 PM

Cut Sephiroth.

What constitutes as "too arrogant" anyway? Personally I found another Final Fantasy villain (Kuja) also extremely arrogant and a high functioning Smug Snake (speaking little of the heroes (outright stating they aren't fit to stand on the same plane as him), calling the Rat Soldiers of Burmecia "vermin" and being incredibly petty when it comes to his lifespan being limited) and borderline racist to the black mages, calling them soulless dolls and taunting them about their lifespan as well as blackmailing them into helping him. I could give a few examples if anyone is interested in hearing me out. Of course, if these are points that were already brought up, I've said my peace and I'm okay with him staying.

Edited by Klavice on Sep 24th 2020 at 9:08:06 AM

jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#28124: Sep 24th 2020 at 8:52:21 PM

Cut sephiroth.

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Riley1sCool Since: Dec, 2014
#28125: Sep 24th 2020 at 9:02:42 PM

Sephy can be cut... love the guy but an MB he ain't.


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