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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#20401: Jan 1st 2014 at 10:11:19 AM

I think Mercer overshadows Cassidy on the rape front alone. Serial rapist is worse than one rape, even if Cassidy is worse in every other area and can't count.

Also, you're right about Ezekiel Rage, I'd forgotten that

edited 1st Jan '14 10:14:17 AM by Lightysnake

Nohbody "In distress", my ass. from Somewhere in Dixie Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
"In distress", my ass.
#20402: Jan 1st 2014 at 10:20:40 AM

On the kid bomb entry, I thought we had gone through all of the NCIS entries here, but didn't recall it being mentioned. I don't watch the show, so I can't really contribute on the subject beyond wiki work once it's discussed in this thread.

All your safe space are belong to Trump
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#20403: Jan 1st 2014 at 1:26:44 PM

Okay, not sure about Surd (what are his feelings toward Julia?), but from HERE seems like Rage might be a cross of Well-Intentioned Extremist and Even Evil Has Loved Ones, set off by a Freudian Excuse:

Rage started off as a friendly, caring man, until the government he worked for, refused to help him which lead to the death of his wife and daughter. This tragedy made him lose his sanity with bitterness, a great hatred towards the world and a lack of trust in people. He is insane when it comes to his schemes to end the world and as he sees it "Bring judgement on the wicked". He allows no one to stand in his way. His only weakness is the hallucinations he has of his daughter, which he mistook Jessie for twice that led to him undoing his plans and turning against his own men.

Oh, and from LEGO Adaptation Game:

**Lex Luthor. Brainwashing most of the US to secure his election victory puts him well over the Moral Event Horizon, but what secures his place here is his attempt to tear down Wayne Tower and murder everyone inside, purely out of spite for snubbing him at the Man of the Year awards.
  • Loki, in Marvel Super Heroes, actually takes control of Galactus to ensure the complete destruction of both Earth and Asgard. All the other villains, including Red Skull and Doctor Doom, were at least trying to save the world (if only so they could conquer it later, but still).
Really?

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TVRulezAgain Since: Sep, 2011
#20404: Jan 1st 2014 at 1:53:51 PM

For Katz from Courage the Cowardly Dog, I came across another notable deed.

In his 4th appearance "Katz Under the Sea", he poses as the captain of a submarine cruise line and rigs the submarine to explode when it reaches the bottom of the sea, while he swims to safety leaving all the guests to die. In this episode he actually does have a motive: he wants to make the company's cruise line look bad so his own company's cruise will get all the business.

Random question, but in his first appearance, did he care about his spiders? He called them "my loves" though that could just be a case of Faux Affably Evil. But was there any indication that his Hell Hotel was to provide food for them?

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#20405: Jan 1st 2014 at 2:07:10 PM

it seemed more the creepy Serial Killer thing. He seems more happy using them to kill people. It's the only thing that gets emotion from him.. He never shows concern over them or anything, except scolding them about keeping the webs untidy

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#20406: Jan 1st 2014 at 2:08:20 PM

Spiders? What does caring for spiders have anything to do with Katz's inclusion? He was still shown as being very sadistic and there's also the fact that the spiders never appeared again. There's also the fact that again when he had no further use for his guests on the submarine, he tries to blow them to kingdom come, and most likely would do so again. There's also the fact that he takes jobs just so he could get a chance to kill people. Still, a pretty easy keep.

edited 1st Jan '14 2:13:33 PM by AustinDR

TVRulezAgain Since: Sep, 2011
#20407: Jan 1st 2014 at 2:14:13 PM

[up] Caring for spiders would disqualify him for having an altruistic quality. But Lighty made a good case that he shows no actual concern for them.

Anyway, I think the submarine episode is worth mentioning as a heinous deed. He's planning to crush competition by killing innocent people.

edited 1st Jan '14 2:18:31 PM by TVRulezAgain

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doineedaname from Eastern US Since: Nov, 2010
#20409: Jan 1st 2014 at 3:25:57 PM

Were the examples for Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha voted as cuts? The series's subpage was deleted and I couldn't find any of the examples on the main page, but they're all still listed on the series YMMV pages.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#20410: Jan 1st 2014 at 3:29:55 PM

Yeah, those were cuts a long time ago.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
TVRulezAgain Since: Sep, 2011
#20412: Jan 1st 2014 at 6:34:31 PM

Here are some potential keeps.

The Farside Trilogy

  • The Elder Quaie. He orders his soldiers to rape the women he's captured, before throwing them to the dogs, and wants to kill off the Sisterhood instead of bringing them in peacefully and reintegrating them into the Ylven Empires. The fact that his son is just as psychotic as he is shows that he wasn't any nicer to his family than he was to his enemies.

Fear, Loathing and Gumbo on the Campaign Trail '72

  • Complete Monster: The Lesser Mao. He manages to be even worse than his predecessor, and not only does he carry on the worst policies of his predecessor and turn China into what is, effectively, post-Cold War North Korea meets Khmer Rouge-era Cambodia, he also suppresses a military rebellion by [[spoiler: nuking the rebel-controlled city of Kwangsi, making it the first time nuclear weapons have been used in anger since Nagasaki.

From the New World

  • Complete Monster: Boy A. Upon discovering his PK powers, he uses it to rape 19 women (and killed 17 of them afterwards).
    • Also, the Emperor in the flashback in Episode 2. After his coronation, he forces the crowd attending his coronation to keep clapping by psychokinetically immolating the first 100 people who stop clapping as "sacrifices" for the festivities, all of this done with a smile. And he was one of the early ones — they got worse and worse over time.
    • One word: K. It's bad enough that he grew up as a sociopathic boy. And then he realizes that his Power Limiter doesn't work and proceeds to brutally slaughter 1,000 people (yes, that includes school children) on the first day of his rampage alone. The kicker? He gets euphoria from all the chaos he causes.

Klavice Since: Jan, 2011
#20413: Jan 1st 2014 at 8:58:27 PM

Somebody cut Kristoph and Phantom from Apollo Justice and Dual Destinies YMMV. Probably because the examples were bad and full of natter. Personally I think they should be re-added with the CM page entries. They both definitely qualify, unless anyone has any objections to either of them?

Also here's a ZCE from Xena, Warrior Princess: Complete Monster: Atyminius, who enjoys cutting brides-to-be into tiny pieces.

Honestly, I think this could qualify, but it's hard to say unless anybody here has watched the show.

edited 1st Jan '14 9:00:50 PM by Klavice

deaconsfan21 Since: Jun, 2012
#20414: Jan 1st 2014 at 9:06:26 PM

The first example in FromTheNewWorld seems like OffscreenVillainy to me. From what I remember about the episode, the emperor is shown immolating people and K's rampage is shown, but I think that Boy A was just mentioned. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.

edited 1st Jan '14 9:06:53 PM by deaconsfan21

doineedaname from Eastern US Since: Nov, 2010
#20415: Jan 1st 2014 at 9:07:10 PM

[up][up][up][up][up] Just to be clear it was Jail, Precia, and Quattro who were voted as cuts? The only discussion I ever saw for them had them as keeps and the Hucks as cuts for being a group. I'll removed the three of them from the YMMV pages when I get a chance if so.

On an unrelated topic, would Darth Bane's Freudian Excuse disqualify him, or is it completely irrelevant since he basically stopped caring about it at all after leaving his homeworld behind and never used it to try and justify being evil?

edited 1st Jan '14 9:14:38 PM by doineedaname

HamburgerTime Since: Apr, 2010
#20416: Jan 1st 2014 at 9:08:44 PM

The Lesser Mao sounds like a keep if he appears. Topping the historical Mao is impressive in and of itself, but as with many dictators featured in fiction, I have to ask if he is a direct villain or an offscreen Bigger Bad?

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#20417: Jan 1st 2014 at 9:44:31 PM

I'm actually doing a watch through of Hercules and Xena now. I'm only on Herc now, so I can't comment on Antyminus. However, Hercules has a guy who counts thus far.

Readd Kristoph and Dahlia with their Ace Attorney monster examples.

And yes, we voted the Nanoha big bads as cuts LONG ago. Also, no, Bane's Freudian Excuse means nothing. He himself stops caring about it utterly.

Now, keep Elder Quaie...keep Lesser Mao

For From The New World keep The Emperor and the third example. Can anyone verify things on who's onscreen?

Ok, have some rewrites and others here.

For Hercules: The Legendary Journeys the page is a mess. Hera isn't pure evil and I don't know about the Sovereign. Dahak is a keeper if he has agency, and everyone in Hercules seems to. The real monster of the early seasons though, is Darphus and I'll let his writeup here speak for itself.

  • Darphus of Hercules: The Legendary Journeys is the former second in command of Xena before her Heel–Face Turn. Darphus earns Xena's disfavor by sacking innocent villages and slaughtering women and children for fun. When Xena objects, Darphus stages a coup on her after trying to force her to murder a baby. When Xena survives the gauntlet to leave the army, Darphus tries to have her killed anyways. After being killed by Xena, Darphus is revived by Ares and carries on a brutal campaign of slaughter where he also has care of Ares' monstrous pet. Darphus feeds innocent victims to said monster and shows no hesitation in killing his own men as well just for displeasing him.

Also, an entry from the series Arago was deleted for no context. I'd like to do a writeup there.

One other I'd like to propose before I do my other writeups...likewise, I'll let his writeup speak for itself. The series is dark with a lot of Jerkass Gods but this guy takes the freaking cake except for two others, and they're heinous in different ways. One has minor redeeming qualities and the other's arc seems ongoing.

  • Bai Lian of Feng Shen Ji manages to eclipse many of his fellow Jerkass Gods for evil. One of the Sage Kings of heaven, Bai Lian engages The Hero Wu Geng in combat and reminds Wu Geng of when he was enslaved in the mines. It is then revealed Bai Lian has murdered every slave who ever befriended or helped Wu Geng and presents their preserved heads to him. Bai Lian says he had no reason to kill them. He just felt like it. He is also forcing the mines' master, who loved the slaves, to assist him by holding the man's beloved son hostage. When Wu Geng convinces Master Li to help him, Bai Lian orders the child killed without a second thought. He also lures Wu Geng to where Wu Geng's grandfather Fu Yi is held hostage so Wu Geng will be forced to euthanize him. Bai Lian chose that spot solely so he could bask in Wu Geng's despair, knowing what the young hero would be forced to do and how it would affect him.

Now, for the past three...

  • Queen Gedren of Red Sonja is an evil tyrant who opens the film by vamping on to Sonja herself. When Sonja resists her advances, Gedren has her family butchered and has Sonja gangraped by Gedren's soldiers. She later massacres a temple of peaceful priestesses to get her hands on an Artifact of Doom that will allow her to Take Over the World and shows no hesitation exterminating any country who resists her. When Sonja herself confronts Gedren later, Gedren says the lives of Sonja's family mean nothing next to a scar Sonja dealt her.

  • Carmilla, the Blood Countess of the Vampire Hunter D film Bloodlust. Famed for her dark excesses when she lived, Carmilla was slain by the vampire King Dracula for her bloodlust and gluttony. However, Carmilla's ghost still haunts her old palace. She lures the Star-Crossed Lovers, vampire Meier Link and his mortal lover Charlotte to her with promises of protection, only to use her illusions to separate them and slice Meier in half before feeding on Charlotte and using her blood to revive herself. When D himself and other vampire hunters enter her manor, Charlotte uses her illusions to Mind Rape them with visions of their past. She murders one hunter and turns him into a vampire so he'll kill D and the other hunter Leila- his own adopted sister. When she fights D himself, she tries to torture him out of fury that he, a Dhampir himself, hunts her. Carmilla views herself as above any human being and when D bests her, she immediately tries to devour the rest of Charlotte's life, stopped only by the intervention of Meier himself.

  • Revi Rah, the Evil Sorcerer Big Bad of Demon City Shinjuku made a pact with the powers of darkness for power out of envy over his fellow pupil Genichiro being superior to him. Promised power in return for granting the demons dominion over earth, Revi Rah defeats Genichiro but is prevented from summoning the demons further than Shinjuku. Men are killed, women raped and children go missing while Shinjuku becomes a twisted hellhole where demons prowl and Revi Rah himself reigns. When Genichiro's son arrives to stop Revi Rah, the sorcerer tries to have the world's president assassinated and use his daughter as a ritual sacrifice so he can complete his work and give demons dominion over all the world.

finally for YMMV.Legacy Of The Drow Series

Pretty bad as well. Errtu is a Balor, which might be without moral agency and Vierna admits she was Brainwashed and Crazy. Vendes Baenre can count, and possibly Matron Yvonnel. Erivale has another he mentioned from later in the Drizzt stuff. A Shadovar Tiefling pedophile rapist.

edited 3rd Jan '14 3:04:29 PM by Lightysnake

Erivale Since: Oct, 2013
#20418: Jan 1st 2014 at 10:03:59 PM

As if on cue, here I am:

Herzgo Alegni:

Unlike most of the relatively few rapists in the forgotten realms setting, Alegni likes preying on kids. At one point, he and his warband raided a village, killing all the men and taking possession of the women. Alegni took a woman hostage to force her ten year old daughter, Dahlia, to let him rape her. When he was finished, he had his men hold Dahlia upside down to make her more likely to get pregnant before he broke the mother's neck for fun. This is how we're introduced to the scumbag.

He also uses a powerful magical sword to enslave Artemis Entreri (a former villain who had undergone a Heel–Face Turn and just wanted to be left alone) as his personal assassin, and used the sword to stab pain directly into Entreri's soul whenever he was pissed or just plain bored. And on top of that, he's a high-ranking warlord in an army whose primary purpose is to slaughter as many people as possible for the purpose of appeasing some divine overlord or the other, but unlike them, Alegni only does it for personal power instead of any loyalty to anything. He also commits murder for the pettiest of reasons, like, say, somebody named a bridge after somebody else besides him, even though he had nothing to do with the bridge's construction.

edited 1st Jan '14 10:06:29 PM by Erivale

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#20419: Jan 2nd 2014 at 12:59:54 AM

The Phantom add was terrible. I might have deleted that since Ace Attorney now has its own page.

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doineedaname from Eastern US Since: Nov, 2010
#20420: Jan 2nd 2014 at 8:14:40 AM

[up][up][up] Alright then, removing the Nanoha entries for Jail, Precia, and Quattro from their YMMV pages now. How'd they stick around for so long after getting cut?

edited 2nd Jan '14 8:14:53 AM by doineedaname

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#20421: Jan 2nd 2014 at 9:48:42 AM

[up]I have no idea.

edited 2nd Jan '14 9:48:52 AM by AustinDR

verymelon Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
#20422: Jan 2nd 2014 at 9:48:58 AM

Sometimes we miss a few things.

TVRulezAgain Since: Sep, 2011
#20423: Jan 2nd 2014 at 9:51:43 AM

I did some checking around and I seriously have to question keeping Francis Wolcott from Deadwood. I mean this Wikipedia entry says it well:

"Wolcott is a self-deprecating and unstable character. He has a sexually violent attitude towards women and has murdered prostitutes. He seems unable to control these impulses and struggles to explain them, showing at times sorrow and regret for doing them, feeling ashamed in front of what he sees as normal people."

And his section on the character page lists several tropes that don't fit CM.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#20424: Jan 2nd 2014 at 10:16:17 AM

Having rewatched the show to season 2 I am inclined to cut everyone from Deadwood. Hearst seems genuinely horrified at Wolcott's proclivities but it may just be bad for business. At any rate the show is so damn dark but so many are given humanizing traits

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
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#20425: Jan 2nd 2014 at 11:30:38 AM

I was doing some research on the Black Wolf from The Flight Before Christmas, and I found out that in the sequel, the Black Wolf had a sister named White Wolf who wanted to avenge her brother's death. Does this disqualify the Black Wolf?


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