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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

KyleJacobs from DC - Southern efficiency, Northern charm Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: One True Dodecahedron
#36101: Feb 24th 2015 at 1:29:04 PM

Firm [tup] to Mcleach. Abstaining on Sykes until I go watch the movie again.

bobg Since: Nov, 2012
#36102: Feb 24th 2015 at 2:09:04 PM

@ Larkman: So Clinch still forces the prospector to engage in a gun fight even after he offers to give him the nugget as punishment for hiding it from him, and he cheats even though the man obviously won't win. Reminds me of Fletcher Nix. That is easily a Moral Event Horizon crossing, but if we let people in for just one Moral Event Horizon murder and two additional murders, I think that would be setting the bar slightly low. This trope is reserved for only the absolute worst villains: Serial Killers, rapists, slavers, life ruiners, torturers, arsonists, mass murderers, genocidal dictators, and Omnicidal Maniacs. He sounds very close to being a Complete Monster (very, very, close) but I think it needs just a tiny bit more. How are the other two murders executed? Why did he kill the other two people? What crimes does he commit besides murder? How many attempted murders? Does he abuse his wife? Tell us everything.

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#36103: Feb 24th 2015 at 2:30:22 PM

Tenative [tup] to Clinch. It was brought to my attention that he was a pedophile with a Marital Rape Licence.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
Larkmarn Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Hello, I love you
#36104: Feb 24th 2015 at 2:30:22 PM

@ Larkman: So Clinch still forces the prospector to engage in a gun fight even after he offers to give him the nugget as punishment for hiding it from him, and he cheats even though the man obviously won't win. Reminds me of Fletcher Nix. That is easily a Moral Event Horizon crossing, but if we let people in for just one Moral Event Horizon murder and two additional murders, I think that would be setting the bar slightly low. This trope is reserved for only the absolute worst villains: Serial Killers, rapists, slavers, life ruiners, torturers, arsonists, mass murderers, genocidal dictators, and Omnicidal Maniacs. He sounds very close to being a Complete Monster (very, very, close) but I think it needs just a tiny bit more. How are the other two murders executed? Why did he kill the other two people? What crimes does he commit besides murder? How many attempted murders? Does he abuse his wife? Tell us everything.

The basic gist of him is that he's a bandit with no qualms about killing people (whether necessary or not). The people he killed he just killed to make a point; that he's going to kill people until he finds out who kissed his wife. Just randomly chose a guy in the bar and shot him to make his point. Whom he certainly sees as property; once they're reunited he slaps her and grabs her by the throat before starting to remove his clothes saying that she has to perform her wifely duties (she then hits him with a rock and flees when he's unconscious). And again, he married her at age 9.

edited 24th Feb '15 2:30:52 PM by Larkmarn

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#36105: Feb 24th 2015 at 2:36:05 PM

I'm abstaining on Mcleach, for one reason or another, but there's really one defining factor to him- if we measure the animals he kills in the same way as humans. They're demonstrably sentient- some more so than others, but the anthropomorphism is present even in the non-speaking ones. Aside from that, Mcleach kills some animals and tortures a kid. Vile, but "torture" doesn't automatically equate to CM. If we can measure the animals he kills as comparable to humans, he's a definite stay, but if not, maybe I'll still support him, but it'll be weak.

On Sykes, my vote is and always shall be a [tup]. He's a Faux Affably Evil sociopath, and it's not the fact that he's trying to kill the heroes, it's that in the climax alone he tries to kill nearly the entire main cast. Once more, the animals are as human as the humans themselves, and among the group is a child who can't be any older than ten. He's a depraved character who shows his nature through depraved actions, and with the low standards of the setting, I feel he's heinous enough.

edited 24th Feb '15 2:39:24 PM by Scraggle

bobg Since: Nov, 2012
#36106: Feb 24th 2015 at 2:56:22 PM

@ Scraggle: Sykes and Mcleach didn't know they were sentient though.

@ Larkman: So let me get this straight: Clinch is a ruthless bandit who has a massive ego and an insatiable greed who thinks he owns the town, as such, he terrorizes the town and steals all the gold he can find. When the prospector (rightfully) tries to hide the gold nugget he found for himself fair and square from Clinch, and Clinch finds it anyway, he decides the man must be murdered as punishment for trying to hide gold from him (even if he offered to just give it to him afterward) and so, he forces the poor old man into a rigged game he has no chance of winning likely just to give him a Hope Spot, before cheating and shooting on the count of two. Upon finding out that someone kissed his wife (who he had very illegally forced into marriage when she was way below the legal age) he decides to kill that person, and, because he thinks he owns the place, he tells the townspeople that they better get looking, for he shall continue to randomly kill them off until the person is found. He also tries to rape his wife at one point. Essentially, he's greed, egotism, and Disproportionate Retribution all rolled into one. Is that it? Is that his character in a nutshell? If so, super duper[tup].

edited 24th Feb '15 2:58:22 PM by bobg

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Larkmarn Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Hello, I love you
#36107: Feb 24th 2015 at 3:03:20 PM

In a nutshell, yes. Though rather than trying to give the old prospector a Hope Spot, it was more to prolong his suffering. The guy was trying to get out of the "duel" the whole time.

Also, it's not so much he feels like he "owns the town" as he just doesn't think anyone in the west (he's not limited to one town) is able or willing to stop him.

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#36109: Feb 24th 2015 at 3:40:33 PM

Only hesitation about Clinch:

Clinch shoots the gun out of Albert's hand, then prepares to kill him. Albert buys himself time by asking him to spare Anna, even though she lied to him...

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#36110: Feb 24th 2015 at 3:50:11 PM

Requesting for more upvotes on Rage of Bahamut: Genesis's Gilles de Rais.

References are at posts 36053 and 36066.

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sanfranman91 from Boston, MA Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#36111: Feb 24th 2015 at 4:01:05 PM

Sorry for being MIA for so long. Truth was, I was being swamped by school work and I felt that I wouldn't be able to contribute satisfactory candidates or entries to the cleanup thread. I should be out of my hiatus completely in a month or so, but for now I finally finished an entry for Kancha Cheena from Agneepath (see post 32292 for the effortpost). Let me know if you think it's ready for primetime.

  • Agneepath (2012): Kancha Cheena is a sadistic drug kingpin who seeks to establish a criminal empire in Mumbai. Kancha firmly believes in having no desire nor attachments in life, which he proves by manipulating his father into giving up the island village of Mandwa before he murders a school girl and frames Master Dinanath Chauhan, a highly respected school teacher, for the crime. After executing Master Chauhan and chasing the Master's family out of the island, Kancha begins running Mandwa as a concentration camp for the next 15 years. During this time, Mumbai’s police commissioner Gaitonde compares Kancha to Adolf Hitler given how horribly Kancha exploits and massacres villagers. When Vijay Dinanath Chauhan (the Master’s son) returns to the island, he finds out first-hand that Kancha will gleefully torture and kill anyone who opposes him. The extent of Kancha's brutality ranges from personally executing a dissenting villager and having his henchmen ambush and brutally murder Vijay’s newlywed wife during the hero's wedding day to callously tossing his own father down a flight of stairs to his death during the climax. What makes Kancha’s crimes truly standout, however, is that he embraces his own atrocities by comparing himself to the Devil or Ravana ruling his Lanka. Overall, Kancha’s ruthless nature and his shameless pride in his atrocities help him go down as one of the most vicious villains ever created in Bollywood history.

edited 24th Feb '15 8:05:52 PM by sanfranman91

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OccasionalExister Since: Jul, 2012
#36113: Feb 24th 2015 at 5:30:42 PM

@36102: Yeah but, when all is said and done, Cody's still just one kid. No matter how harshly McLeach abuses and tries to kill him, McLeach's treatment of Cody only makes him barely more heinous than Medusa from the same series. I just personally have a hard time including a character when they only have one attempted victim.

@36103: Sykes also showed no indication that he planned on not honoring his part of the deal. After all, he let Fagin live after the sap inadvertently came up with a way to pay him back, even if Fagin didn't know he planned on kidnapping Jenny. He's also clearly not trying to kill her in the climax, he's trying to recapture her. He needs her if he wants his money. That's why he's trying to grab her when she lands on the hood of his car instead of throwing her off, or doing anything else that would result in her death. This means his attempted body count is only centered on one person and his pets, after the man purposefully interfered with his plans.

@36117: As bobg said, the problem is neither character knows animals in their verse are thinking and feeling beings, meaning they don't know they're essentially trying to "murder" a "person" when they try to kill animals. Adults in The Rescuers movies can't understand animals (though strangely the kids can), and no human in Oliver and Company can understand animals at all. And since we don't treat cruelty to animals the same as cruelty to people, this leaves both villains with an attempted body count of one person each. No matter how dark the villains make their movies, that still doesn't reach the baseline heinous level.

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#36114: Feb 24th 2015 at 5:40:30 PM

Those are actually some reasonable points there. I agree with Occasssional Exister here.

edited 24th Feb '15 6:01:56 PM by AustinDR

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#36115: Feb 24th 2015 at 5:52:28 PM

I agree with Occasional Exister. We know the animals are sentient but neither Sykes or Percivil do. Although while I don't consider simple killing of animals heinous, there are some levels of animal cruelty I can say meets the baseline - for example using zoo animals as slaughterhouse meat or starving an animal and beating it when it whines for food. But no the simple killing is heinous.

Speaking of needless animal cruelty, about Anton Bartok. Last night I rewatched The Fly II, and I'd say it's safe to say he still counts, as he doesn't really have any points against him, and his treatment of the dog meets what I'd call baseline animal cruelty - keeping it alive and in pain for two years.

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Klavice Since: Jan, 2011
#36116: Feb 24th 2015 at 5:58:21 PM

Is that the reason Andross or the Aparoid Queen don't count? Because their victims were (albeit sentient and very humanoid) animals?

I doubt it has to do with the heinous standard as both pass it easily what with them being the Big Bad of their games. Also keep in mind that the Aparoid are not Always Chaotic Evil as the Aparoid queen does indeed possess moral agency (for one, the Aparoids talk) and she has a pretty high body count of several Cornerian civilians, General Pepper, Pigma, and almost Peppy.

As for Andross, didn't he kill Fox's father, experiment on many civilians, and try to destroy the universe? Not to mention being responsible for all of General Scales' atrocities. I'm not a huge Star Fox fan, but that's what I got.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#36117: Feb 24th 2015 at 6:18:27 PM

I just need to say...we covered these points with Sykes and Percival before. They were still keeps. Not just once before, but at least two-three. That means it should be dropped.

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bobg Since: Nov, 2012
#36119: Feb 24th 2015 at 6:27:04 PM

[tdown] Sykes I also think the horned king needs to go too).

@ Occasional Exister: it IS POSSBLE to have a CM with only one victim or attempted victim though, a great example would be Matt Engarde from the Ace Attorney series. The character just has to either have a large enough number of other crimes under their belt or have the execution of the murder (or attempted murder) be exceptionally heinouess. What makes the execution of Mcleaches attempted murder of Cody come across as extra evil to me, is the fact that he straight out toys with him for fun by repeatedly lowering him into and out of the water (all while singing no less). He also seemed very upset when his fun was interrupted and he had to just shoot the rope. He also did not even need to kill Cody, he could have just let him go, taken the captured eagle and any other captured animals he had back at his home that he could fit into his truck, and left before the rangers showed up at his home. Also, while Mcleach did not know the animals were sentient, and animal cruelty Is less heinouess than human cruelty, it is still illegal, and would count toward his rapsheet. Obviouessly animal cruelty alone would not make you a CM (unless it was really really really bad like say slaughtering a puppy farm or killing all animal life in a zoo or something of that level), but when combined with his attempted murder of a child...

Any more oppinions on Clinch? From what Larkman described, e sounds really bad.

Edit[up] and [up][up] Sorry, I was not done putting this post up until you had already put yours up.

edited 24th Feb '15 6:29:04 PM by bobg

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#36120: Feb 24th 2015 at 6:29:36 PM

Why should the Horned King go?

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#36121: Feb 24th 2015 at 6:31:14 PM

Bob, seriously. You know the rules of this thread. The Horned King, Mcleach and Sykes have been argued multiple times.

bobg Since: Nov, 2012
#36122: Feb 24th 2015 at 6:34:00 PM

Should they go on the "deffinately a cm" section then?

jjj
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#36123: Feb 24th 2015 at 6:47:07 PM

And if a new argument comes up, then they can be reevaluated(let's not forget this key thing, as this has happened many times before). Now, I don't know if the argument that Occasional Eater brought up was brought up before(if it was, could somebody link to it? I never voted for these two after all, so I wouldn't know when it was). But if it wasn't, that's reason for a revote.

If it wasn't, I agree and voting [tdown] on them due the baseline standard not being met.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#36124: Feb 24th 2015 at 6:52:26 PM

I'm quite sure this is a rehash. It definitely is on Mcleach.

Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#36125: Feb 24th 2015 at 7:00:44 PM

My [tup] for Sykes and Mcleach remains unchanged, especially seeing how this has already been brought up before. If we want to continue this argument, maybe we should find the dozen or so others and stop repeating points that seem to have been brought up before?

And the Horned King isn't going anywhere. Ignoring the fact he's attempted for child murder and willing harvests his own men, he's got the largest attempted body-count of any Disney villain listed there- it goes beyond genocide and village massacres and extends to the world at large. There are other villains with such a goal in mind, but they don't count for one reason or another.

[down] Everything listed in Sykes' writeup happens in film, from threatening to kill the girl ("Don't cry, little girl- they only eat when I tell them to) to instructing others how to do it (Cement Shoes, no less). He more than once deploys his dogs on Fagin's pets and looses them on him and Dodger the moment he thinks he's not getting paid. There's no evidence suggesting otherwise that he was intending to let her go after he grabbed the girl, and it was with all intents attempted murder of everyone in the climax, so my [tup] remains unchanged. I will say, though, my [tup] for Mcleach has shaken a little, assuming this isn't all a repeat.

edited 24th Feb '15 7:45:24 PM by Scraggle


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