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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#726: Jan 18th 2023 at 10:05:14 PM

[up]Hmmm... That's... tricky here. I technically have two pairs of characters from two seperate storylines that both need their own entries due to being distinct from one another, so I have to ask, how would that factor in?

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Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#727: Jan 18th 2023 at 10:07:38 PM

I say just give each one their own separate EP per post to make it easier for you.

Edited by Powermaster201 on Jan 18th 2023 at 1:08:22 PM

Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#728: Jan 18th 2023 at 10:07:59 PM

Double post

Edited by Powermaster201 on Jan 18th 2023 at 1:08:11 PM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#729: Jan 18th 2023 at 10:11:22 PM

Also, I know I can only have two active at a time, but my first, Philip Wittebane is about to cross the three day threshold for writeup, so does that mean he can be scratched off the list once the time comes and I will be free to post at least two of the four?

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#730: Jan 18th 2023 at 10:38:13 PM

Basically you can't have more than two works for proposals active during the 3 day period.

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#731: Jan 18th 2023 at 10:41:27 PM

Okay but... Hmm... Does that mean separate works or separate Effort Posts?

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Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#733: Jan 18th 2023 at 10:49:48 PM

Huh. So that means I can put in the four seperate Effort Posts since they all come from the same work?

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Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#734: Jan 18th 2023 at 11:05:14 PM

I think try to space your effort posts out, instead of doing them all at once I think?

Tabs Since: Jan, 2001
#735: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:01:16 AM

The 24-hour restriction is no more.

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#736: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:04:14 AM

[up]Cool! In light of that major [tup] to Fanfic!Mari. shudders Reading her entry made my skin crawl...

Edited by ForgoLight on Jan 19th 2023 at 12:04:29 PM

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Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#737: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:13:49 AM

Here is all the ones that can now be voted on.

I will have my votes in a sec.

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EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#738: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:23:00 AM

[tup] to worm duo, Ons’thesnou, Sargon, Dark pictures duo, weak to Aponi, Vengerov, Jax, Oswyn and big one to Mary.

Lean [tdown] to crossbones

Planing to watch Inspector sun so gonna hold out on voting there for a little bit.

Edited by EmperorGeode on Jan 19th 2023 at 12:39:41 PM

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#739: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:26:03 AM

Finally anywho [tup] to Worm duo, Ons’thesnou, Sargon, Dark pictures duo, Aponi, Vengerov, Jax, Oswyn, Crossbones, Red Locus, Mary, and a happy [tup] to HH Homes (looking forward to Du’Met)

Edited by G-Editor on Jan 19th 2023 at 10:28:21 AM

Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#740: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:32:39 AM

[tup] to Jax Asturias, Aponi, and HH Holmes.

Edited by Snoketrope on Jan 19th 2023 at 12:41:47 PM

The First man
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#741: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:48:40 AM

[up][up][up][up]Scuse me? Could you give me a refresher on how many candidates from a single work I can EP at once?

Also leaning to [tup] on Rumlow. And can I post my write up for Bellhop now?

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#742: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:50:23 AM

There technically isn't any limit as long as it's the same work, but as I said I would recommend spacing your ones out a bit.

Also yes you can post your writeup.

Edited by Ordeaux26 on Jan 19th 2023 at 12:50:43 PM

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ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#743: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:51:44 AM

Okay. Would two at a time work since they are both most prominent in pairs per story arc?

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#744: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:53:28 AM

[up] That should be okay, though maybe wait like one or two days in-between the first duo and the second, that is my recommendation so people can better vote on the ones you do.

[tup] Bakuda, Gray Boy, Sargon, Simon Carver, H.H. Holmes, Aponi, Joseph Vengerov, Jax, Red Locust, Mari

Abstain on Crossbones

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ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#745: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:55:23 AM

Alrighty. First off, here is my writeup for Philip. How soon should I post it in the Disney Fan Works page?

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Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#746: Jan 19th 2023 at 12:58:30 AM

You can post it on the page right away if you want since the voting block is other, you can also post it on the Drafts page if you want for instance for other people to look it over and edit it, or you just don't want to place it directly on the page.

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ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#747: Jan 19th 2023 at 1:01:40 AM

I think I wanna post it directly... the only problem is that the page is locked from edits. Also, [tup] to Sargon, Locust, Aponi, and Bakuda.

Here are my first two EP's for the game City of Heroes!

What is the work?

City of Heroes was a popular MMO in the early 2000s to 2012 when it was sadly shut down. In the game you play as a Hero (or as a Villain) and go around doing deeds and fighting mighty foes.

    Gerhardt Eisenstadt/Nemesis 
Who is Nemesis and what has he done?

Gerhardt Eisenstadt more commonly known as "Lord Nemesis" is a prominent villain in the story and is responsible for a great many calamities throughout City of Heroes. He originally began life as a Prussian ally of the Confederate States of America with a talent for machinery, later making himself an automoton body and army. After V-Day in WWII, Nemesis laid seige to Washington DC and took control of the Capitol, declaring himself Emperor Nemesis and killing numerous people before he was ousted from his short lived rule by an army of returning Super Heroes, who just barely managed to stop his plan to gas the entire population of America out of spite for losing his throne.

Angered but patient, Nemesis bid his time until his next chance to take over made itself clear in the form of the Rikti. The Rikti were originally a peaceful group of Humans who discovered alien tech and mutated themselves into their alien in all but name status that they are in the modern day. Creating Automotons of the Freedom Phalanx, the premier Superhero team, Nemesis sends them to attack the Rikti, prompting an unimaingably devestating retaliatory strike which led to the Rikti War, and the deaths of millions on both sides across the globe.

Nemesis' plan was to allow the Rikti to wreak havoc and then swoop in to pick up the pieces as a new hero for the war. Fortunately, his plan was foiled when a brave group of Heroes called the Omega Team went on a suicide mission and closed the Rikti Invasion portal. However, the Rikti would later invade once more, with Nemesis now having a new plan. Uploading a copy of his intellegence to the Rikti Psychic Network and perform a mass mind control on the entire Rikti Population before conquering Primal Earth as well. He is ultimately defeated, but he lurks in the shadows, plotting his revenge...

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

Zero, Zilch, Nada. Nemesis is a cruel bigot who allied with the confederates turned MCU Red Skull style megalomaniac who orchestrated unspeakable war crimes and nearly got Humanity erradicated just for the sake of his own arrogance. He never shows any sort of loyalty or kindness to anyone and lives only to satiate his own greed and lust for power.

Is he bad enough?

I think he certainly is. Even before the Rikti War, his body count was in the hundreds if not thousands from his attempt to take over Washington DC and attempted mass slaughter of America, and then he went on to be the sole reason for the first Rikti War, and he has basically no allies so his only resources are ones that he produces himself.

Final verdict?

Easily a keeper, and I am genuinely shocked he was never Effort Posted until now.

    Lord of War: Hro'Dtohz 
Who is Hro'Dtohz and what has he done?

Hro'Dtohz was initially little more than an ambitious Rikti warrior before Nemesis orchestrated the false attack upon the Rikti Earth. Seeing his chance to seize power, Hro'Dtohz effectively took over the new wartime Rikti Government called the Rikti Lineage of War. While Nemesis was the ultimate mastermind of the First Rikti War, Hro'Dtohz was still all too happy to push for the total genocide of all Humans for the attack.

Years later, Hro'Dtohz manages to open enough portals in Paragon City to initiate a second Rikti Invasion, this time free of Nemesis' intervention at least at first, and once again with the full intent of eradicating all of Humanity. This invasion proves to be unpopular as cracks begin to form in the Rikti Hierarchy with a seperate faction, the Rikti Traditionalists emerging to oppose the war. Several of the Traditionalists end up on Primal Earth... where Hro'Dtohz orders them to be killed by his forces.

It is soon revealed that Nemesis was the cause of the attacks that prompted retaliation from the Rikti, which prompts mass desertion from the Rikti Army, but Hro'Dtohz orders any and all defectors killed just like the traditionalists as he knows that if he doesn't kill all of Humanity, his status as a War Criminal will return to Rikti Earth and he will lose all of his power. To that end after Nemesis is dealt with, Hro'Dtohz seeks to bring forth a being called "The Honoree", who turns out to be the former leader of the Omega Team, Hero One whom Hro'Dtohz ordered Riktified to be used as a living weapon to slaughter the world he originally died to protect.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

Absolutely None. His own people who aren't themselves fanatics of his cause explicitly label him as a brutish, bloodthirsty thug who was given far too much power for his own good. The speed with which he orders the deaths of his own people shows that he is only interested in himself and his status, and Humanity gets punished for slighting his ego.

Is he bad enough?

I would say so. While the first Rikti War was Nemesis' fault, Hro'Dtohz can claim full responsibility for the Second, and all of the people who died from it, not to mention how his goal in eradicating Humanity the second time was to kill the truth with them.

Final Verdict?

While not as vile as Nemesis, Hro'Dtohz still does more than enough to cement himself as one of the worst. Solid keeper in my eyes.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#748: Jan 19th 2023 at 1:05:26 AM

[up] I will read your EP's tomorrow, but if you want to post the writeup directly on the page then you can use Monster: Disney Fan Works.

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ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#749: Jan 19th 2023 at 1:07:04 AM

Roger. And to be clear I can add it to the YMMV page of Blight right now correct?

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Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#750: Jan 19th 2023 at 1:08:23 AM

Yes, you can. You should probably mention though that it was approved by the thread, preferably with a link to the EP.

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