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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

fanman Insert title here from Earth-Prime/Earth-1218 Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Insert title here
#27226: Oct 5th 2023 at 11:57:46 AM

[tup]Hitler, Abden, Shogun, Sektor, Ah Tsui, and Alice

JoeBertInc (Pilot) Relationship Status: Abstaining
#27227: Oct 5th 2023 at 12:30:17 PM

Merrick's listed on the pending writeups page, but I thought Merrick was rejected. Was there something I missed?

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#27228: Oct 5th 2023 at 12:31:32 PM

Can someone please tell me if any of the three candidates I proposed made it? Please?

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#27229: Oct 5th 2023 at 12:32:41 PM

Looking it over it seems all three passed.

Merric was probably simple mistake.

JoeBertInc (Pilot) Relationship Status: Abstaining
#27230: Oct 5th 2023 at 12:32:55 PM

[up][up] Judging from the pending writeups page, it seems like they probably did.

Edited by JoeBertInc on Oct 5th 2023 at 3:33:07 PM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#27231: Oct 5th 2023 at 12:44:15 PM

If I'm not sure, I have it at the pending writeups. Counting the votes is the job of the proposer.

On that note, did Gordian make it? I don't think so.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
Ghal-Sur Since: Jan, 2023
#27232: Oct 5th 2023 at 12:49:38 PM

Yes to Cooper and Changeling Woman, but no to B'Vat. Even if he doesn't mention his son anymore, including in the game itself, that doesn't mean he stopped caring about him. Mark Hoffman doesn't mention his sister anymore after the 4th movie, but does that mean he doesn't care about her anymore? Of course not. We need definitive proof that the villain has stopped caring. We've had plenty of examples where villains may no longer mention their loved ones, but that doesn't mean they don't care anymore.

The fact that he takes revenge on Mo'Kai and there is no evidence that he does it for selfish or selfish reasons (such as seeing his son's death as an insult to himself) alone shows how truly angry he was. Even though he doesn't show grief or mourning or even be mentioned in the game itself, that again doesn't automatically mean he doesn't care about him anymore.

Moreover, he has already taken revenge,so it hardly makes sense for him to mourn him again now, given that he already did so before the events of the game anyway. And while there may be doubts that all this is in the backstory, considering that we almost cut Ronald Taylor from Mass Effect 2 because of one email where he showed concern for Jacob (his son), although in the game itself Ronald or his son doesn’t talk about it, then I don’t think it’s any different. Very good work Forgo, but I say it again sincerely and honestly [tdown]B'Vat.

Bad enough, but I think another case of a villain that comes very close to the trop, but because of its one redeeming quality, it doesn't fit, at least in my personal opinion. If the game had made it clear that he no longer cares about his son (like the aforementioned Ronald), then yes.

TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#27233: Oct 5th 2023 at 1:15:06 PM

[tup] for Ah Tsui, Sektor, Alice, Shogun, Hitler, and Abhen.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
Splonk Harbinger of Cringe from Basement Since: Sep, 2022 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
Harbinger of Cringe
#27234: Oct 5th 2023 at 3:27:26 PM

[up] x 9. I explained that considering we've seen that ink creatures can be good (Boris) there is little reason why she can't. It's not like she's portrayed as some overly crazy loon who can barely think for herself, she's shown to be perfectly capable of acting on her own will.

My mere presence makes everyone's day worse.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#27236: Oct 5th 2023 at 4:15:36 PM

[tup] to Commander Shih-Le, Unnamed Eunach, Scumocide, Ah Tsui, Sektor, Alice, Shogun Takahatsu Hitotsubashi, Hitler and Abhen the Slayer.

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#27237: Oct 5th 2023 at 4:34:18 PM

Aight it's midnight where I live so here we go.

What is the work?

Expend4bles is the fourth entry within the Expendables series. To quoteth the trope page: The plot has the titular Expendables facing off against a group of terrorists who are planning a conspiracy to start World War III between the United States and Russia with the use of nuclear weapons. Me and ACW have got a guy each, him having the Big Bad and me The Heavy so meet Rahmat, played by Iko Uwais who's heavily Playing Against Type.

Who is Rahmat and what has he done?

A oddly cheerful mercenary and psychopath, Rahmat is The Heavy of the film and is the driving force for Big Bad Marsh to kickstart WW3. Introduced having raiding a military general's compound in Libya, Rahmat has all the guard within slaughtered with him also killing the general's wife. Wanting the nuclear warheads from the general, Rahmat threatens to murder his young son if he doesn't comply, going through with it when he complied anyway with a smile on his face.

Now tbh a lot of the plot is mostly on Rahmat's ship where he has Marsh go through the facade of benevolent leader, beating him to make the CIA exchange the eye witness for Marsh. Plot stuff happens and Rahmat and Christmas duel on the boat, eventually getting a hatchet into his chest. When Christmas demands Rahmat to turn over the nuke detonators, Rahmat just laughs and says his boss has them in which Christmas just kicks the hatchet further into his chest, killing him.

Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Nope, nothing. His loyalty to Marsh is not to a mitigating issue and his final moments are him just being smug about not having the detonators.

Heinous Standard?

No comparing to the other right hand villains in the series? Rahmat clears them IMO with him being in on trying to kickstart WW3. In terms of scale, no one apart from Marsh clears it since Vilain's goal of selling the plutonium into the black market is never delved into. The other dragon type antagonists just tend to have a Kick the Dog moment that let's them stand out but don't push pass enough for the genre.

Final Verdict?

What say we?

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#27238: Oct 5th 2023 at 4:36:50 PM

[tup]Rahmat

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
TheMadCr0w Gentle Laborer from Insignificant Little Blue Planet Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: Get out of here, STALKER
Gentle Laborer
#27239: Oct 5th 2023 at 4:36:53 PM

[tup] Rahmat

Ghal-Sur makes a very good point... I don't see why B'Val would stop caring about his son. [tdown] to him.

  • Hellnight: That Which Whispers, one of the leaders of the Hive, is the worst of the monstrous Old Ones. Fully supporting of the plans to enact the Great Union and see all of humanity becoming one with the Dark Messiah, That Which Whispers has countless people enslaved and indoctrinated into the Holy Ring to serve the will of the Dark Messiah. Unwilling to let humans escape from the grasp of the Old Ones, That Which Whispers has the souls of his own cultists and their human sacrifices condemned to the Hive's cyberspace, where they suffer for eternity under the fist of the Old Ones.

Edited by TheMadCr0w on Oct 5th 2023 at 8:38:50 AM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#27240: Oct 5th 2023 at 4:37:48 PM

[tup] to Rahmat

Decided to give [tup] to Alice as well

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
LucasdaKool Angie the Angel Fish from In the tank Since: Sep, 2022 Relationship Status: A heart full of love
Angie the Angel Fish
#27242: Oct 5th 2023 at 4:44:16 PM

Does the man from Man count? He destroys everything without any sign of regret.

Swimming freely, reviving dead fish
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#27243: Oct 5th 2023 at 4:59:01 PM

[up] That depends. Does it have a story, is the character in question played seriously.

[down] I see, not even played seriously at all based on that.

Edited by Michealthehero21 on Oct 5th 2023 at 5:22:28 AM

MermaidEyes15 A Girl, Just One of Many Kinds from The Grand Dance of the Vast Universe of Life Since: Dec, 2021 Relationship Status: Puppy love
A Girl, Just One of Many Kinds
#27244: Oct 5th 2023 at 5:07:00 PM

[up][up] Uhhh…nahh. Ending scene just kinda feels like a punchline joke

Keep Fighting. Keep Loving.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#27245: Oct 5th 2023 at 5:08:42 PM

Yes to Rahmat.

Did Gordian get enough votes?

EDIT: Looks like he did. But...is that type of game conducive to a CM?

Edited by ACW on Oct 5th 2023 at 8:12:34 AM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#27246: Oct 5th 2023 at 5:24:23 PM

[tup] Rahmat

"No running in the halls!"
RobertTYL Since: Oct, 2019 Relationship Status: Holding out for a hero
#27248: Oct 5th 2023 at 5:46:42 PM

[tup] Rahmat (incidentally, that's the name of my sister's ex-boss, yes really)

Edited by RobertTYL on Oct 5th 2023 at 8:51:32 PM

JoeBertInc (Pilot) Relationship Status: Abstaining
ShootingStar7X Just call me Solemn. Since: Dec, 2017
Just call me Solemn.
#27250: Oct 5th 2023 at 6:50:37 PM

Just saw both MAN videos. There's no plot beyond the man destroying wildlife and nature for no given reason, the first video has a Black Comedy vibe to it, and the man only kills one sapient bug in the second video.

Edited by ShootingStar7X on Oct 5th 2023 at 6:55:19 AM

Otherwise known as SolemnStormcloud.

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