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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

erazor0707 The Unknown Unknown from The Infinitude of Meh Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
The Unknown Unknown
#35501: Jan 14th 2021 at 7:38:41 PM

... Jin was a pending discussion?

A cruel, sick joke is still a joke, and sometimes all you can do is laugh.
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#35502: Jan 14th 2021 at 7:44:07 PM

Yeah someone tried him once but they couldn’t quite communicate to those of us who hadn’t played how he met the qualifications and he’s just kinda been left since sadly.

227someguy I hate spoilers Since: Jul, 2018
I hate spoilers
#35503: Jan 14th 2021 at 8:28:04 PM

[up] I spoke to Scraggle about the subject of Jin and sent him an EP via PM, and he gave his approval towards said EP. He told me that he'd try to get him in yesterday, but admitted to having university work. This was on his MB To Do Lists. Scraggle was convinced that Jin is an "easy keep".

Edited by 227someguy on Jan 14th 2021 at 11:31:03 AM

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papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#35505: Jan 14th 2021 at 9:15:35 PM

By the way, I always highly value consistency in entries, so I'm mainly very hesitant about putting pot holes in Bwonsamdi's write up because the other entries have very few if any in a few cases.

Edited by LoreDeluxe on Jan 14th 2021 at 9:30:48 AM

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futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#35506: Jan 14th 2021 at 9:24:55 PM

Alright. Midnight where I am. Time to discuss Cobra Kai.

I was prepared to try to make the best case I could for Tory and had written an extensive follow-up EP to do so. Ultimately I can’t though. Tory suffers greatly from the fact that she’s a troubled teen girl with emotional baggage who attacks first and asks questions later.

She’s clearly too emotional and angry to the point that any kind of charm or reason in her is severely overshadowed by her desire to inflict pain as a means of channeling her frustrations and her fury. Even if she performs a Heel–Face Turn later like Hawk/Eli does at the end of this season, she’s still too jaded in the past and present to count. Admittedly, there’s too much pettiness and too many spiteful elements in her despite her better moments and I think it’s safe to say that even the most complex of individuals in the show can’t count due to many either becoming too good or being too harsh and vile when an antagonist (or just not having that element of scheming and contemplation to make them this either).

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Jan 14th 2021 at 9:32:06 AM

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#35507: Jan 14th 2021 at 9:27:33 PM

I'm very glad to hear that, Future. I agree entirely. No keepers in Cobra Kai

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#35508: Jan 14th 2021 at 9:48:31 PM

I cut potholes? Oh sorry did I grab an earlier version from Bwonsamdi?

Also I've got no problem with you giving Jin a stab if you'd like Someguy!

Edited by 43110 on Jan 14th 2021 at 12:49:53 PM

erazor0707 The Unknown Unknown from The Infinitude of Meh Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
The Unknown Unknown
#35509: Jan 14th 2021 at 9:52:16 PM

Yes to Kanto btw.

A cruel, sick joke is still a joke, and sometimes all you can do is laugh.
LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#35510: Jan 14th 2021 at 9:57:53 PM

Nah, I'm saying the other Warcraft entries don't really have pot holes so I didn't add any to Bwonsamdi for consistency.

By the way, for another entry, Drakuru, was it mentioned in the original write up that he spends the entire second half of his character story being outplayed? Going back and playing through that recently, his Zul'drak story line is sabotaging his entire operation right under his nose.

Edited by LoreDeluxe on Jan 14th 2021 at 10:01:41 AM

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GeorgieEnkoom Emperor Georgie Artémis Enkoom Evulz II from Somewhere. Since: Feb, 2017 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
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#35511: Jan 14th 2021 at 10:04:56 PM

Aye to John and Kanto.

Not feeling Lisbeth though. Going with a no, and that's all I'll say on the matter.

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#35512: Jan 14th 2021 at 10:31:20 PM

Lore...no offense, but the whole "frustration with Lighty's entries" thing is beginning to feel like a personal callout. I'd appreciate maybe a bit less of that in public, more in private talking if you have constructive critique.

I totally respect however you want to write your stuff, but I'm gonna write my entries how I choose to.

Edited by Lightysnake on Jan 14th 2021 at 10:31:46 AM

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#35513: Jan 14th 2021 at 10:37:21 PM

I... um... missed whatever was just said there but sorry Lore, just misread something in your prior statement there ('cutting' rather than 'putting' when I glanced at it).

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#35514: Jan 14th 2021 at 10:44:09 PM

That's why I deleted italmost immediately after Lighty. I didn't mean for it to sound like a personal call out.

If anything, I need to work on writing my own entries better. I think Bwonsamdi is good example of trying to write them better. I wanted to make the Magic write ups shorter but I couldn't figure out how to on that.

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#35515: Jan 14th 2021 at 11:00:36 PM

No harm, no foul. Just wanted to get it off my chest. If you have an improvement or suggestion for my entry, I'm glad to listen

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#35516: Jan 14th 2021 at 11:32:03 PM

On another Warcraft character I mentioned earlier, I went to look at Drakuru's effort post but didn't find one, and it looks like he was grandfathered in. Having recently leveled an alt through the Zul'drak story line, you spend what is the entire second half of Drakuru's story arc undermining his operations right under his nose.

To summarize, still wanting you as a servant after helping him in the Grizzly Hills, he sets up to have a mind controlling necklace drop from a random undead mob that would have turned you into a loyal undead servant. Suspicious, you bring the necklace to a Death Knight named Stephan Vadu who alters the necklace to disguise you as undead. You then go to Drakuru in disguise and he takes you in immediately as his right hand. He sends you out to finish up his plans, while at the same time you perform sabotage on his operations. He never once figures this out and never even seems to connect you to the sabotage, so confident is he in your obedience. Keep in mind that the disguise fails regularly and the player has to reapply the buff to keep nearby undead from turning hostile. Of course, the disguise fails at the worst possible moment when Drakuru is showing you his empowered undead trolls, and only then does he finally realize you've betrayed him. You then use the controlling rod he had you build to turn his undead against him and defeat him, only for him to summon the Lich King to try to save him. The Lich King then calls him a failure and promptly cuts his head off. Here is the full in-game exchange.

Overlord Drakuru yells: ENOUGH! Dis foolish treachery has cost ya your destiny!

Drakuru summons the Lich King.

Overlord Drakuru says: Master, dis mortal scum be double-crossin' us. Dey must be made to suffer!

The Lich King says: You have failed me, Drakuru! It is you who should suffer. Be content that your death is a quick one....

The Lich King kills Drakuru. His head lands some distance away.

On top of getting out-gambitted for half of his entire story, his death is also rather ignoble. I think I personally lean for a cut, especially since it looks like he never properly discussed in the first place.

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DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#35518: Jan 15th 2021 at 6:43:47 AM

Found some Unnaproved MB wicks:

  • From Bioshock:
    • The Reveal that Frank Fontaine's was the mastermind behind the entire thing definitely counts as well, and instantly seals his spot as a Magnificent Bastard. While many such Bastards are indeed Magnificent, not very many have sold themselves as such within the first minute of their entry into the story.

Went over this, too evil to count. Unlike what this post implies, nobody else does, either.

  • 8-Bit Theatre:
    • The fact that he planned out the Onion Kid's rise as Sarda, which is caused by the entirety of the subsequent comic over nearly a decade's time. Holy shit. Brian Clevinger, you Magnificent Bastard.

He's the creator of the comic, so no dice.

Evangelion:

  • The manga version has Shinji with several moments where he shows honest signs of badass. The most epic moment being after Toji is killed during the fight with Bardiel which Gendo forced Shinji to do by using the dummy plug to take over Unit 01. He later faces his father and asks him if he has anything to say about it. When Gendo says no, Shinji tries to punch him in the face and is only stopped by Kaji when his fist is literally an inch away from Gendo's face. The moment is so unexpected that Gendo Ikari is thrown off guard and has a look of complete shock on his face.

Pretty sure he doesn't count.

Oh, and cut Drakuru.

Edited by DoodSlayer136 on Jan 15th 2021 at 7:21:08 AM

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#35520: Jan 15th 2021 at 7:08:52 AM

Drakuru sounds like a cut.

Yes to Kanto, however.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Jan 15th 2021 at 10:09:57 AM

jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#35521: Jan 15th 2021 at 7:12:36 AM

Yeah cut Drakuru.

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43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#35522: Jan 15th 2021 at 7:12:49 AM

Yeah that sounds like he can go there Lore.

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Goku Black
#35523: Jan 15th 2021 at 7:23:51 AM

Seems Drakaru can go

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
PurpleEyedGuma Since: Apr, 2020
#35524: Jan 15th 2021 at 7:27:01 AM

Yes to Kanto. Cut Drakuru.

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