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This is the thread to use if you feel that the page image itself is good but the caption needs help.

If you think that both the image and the caption are poor, please make a thread in Image Pickin' for the page, and we'll work on the image and caption both at the same time.

As with other TRS and IP threads, please state your reasons and make your case in your first post. Don't make the other posters spend time trying to pry it out of you.

Edited by Willbyr on Jun 21st 2021 at 9:42:03 AM

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He/Him
#5501: Dec 22nd 2023 at 3:42:25 PM

The caption on NightmareFuel.Tetsuo The Iron Man is one of those garbage "The standard reaction to" captions

Remove?

Edited by AudioSpeaks2 on Dec 22nd 2023 at 7:42:41 PM

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GracieLizzy Usagi's done something stupid again (she/her) from Sunderland, UK Since: Dec, 2012
Usagi's done something stupid again (she/her)
#5502: Dec 22nd 2023 at 5:46:50 PM

Yeah that's kinda blah, remove [tup]

So I can't think of anything right now... meh.
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
FernandoLemon Nobody Here from Argentina (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: In season
Tylerbear12 Just a guy. from The Green Hills. Since: Apr, 2015 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Just a guy.
#5505: Dec 24th 2023 at 2:00:12 PM

So Harmony Bunny 2000 has changed the caption slightly on Conjoined Eyes.

Originally it was this:

Beyond the "And" being pointless, since it's standing on its own instead of being a part of a larger sentence, like it was originally.

My main point of contention is the change from eye to eyes. I know, it's a simple thing and that's the original line, but it misses the point of the caption's joke and why I suggested it (that it looks like one big eye). Is it okay to revert this or to keep it?

Edited by Tylerbear12 on Dec 24th 2023 at 4:02:52 AM

jandn2014 Very Spooky from somewhere in Connecticut Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Hiding
Very Spooky
#5506: Dec 24th 2023 at 2:02:16 PM

Revert; that breaks the intended joke.

back lol
FernandoLemon Nobody Here from Argentina (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: In season
#5507: Dec 24th 2023 at 2:16:05 PM

No strong feeling on the "and", but definitely revert "eyes" to "eye".

I'd like to apologize for all this.
CompletelyNormalGuy Am I a weirdo? from that rainy city where they throw fish (Oldest One in the Book)
Am I a weirdo?
#5508: Dec 25th 2023 at 8:47:10 PM

Revert.

Bigotry will NEVER be welcome on TV Tropes.
Synchronicity (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#5509: Dec 26th 2023 at 5:16:35 AM

Closed the crowner,

He could really use a hammerhead-shark right now.

is in and tagged on Cement Shoes.


(Topic change) so lately, I have found myself removing work page captions that list one of the film/show's taglines while potholing them to Tag Line... despite said tagline already being on the poster like here and here. (I personally don't like using the caption space for film/show taglines as I find them perfunctory at best — just trope the words under Tag Line if you must — but this strikes me as particularly lazy and redundant.) Similarly, while I don't touch captions while replacing pictures for work pages with IP-selected ones if the new caption still appears to apply to the old pic, if the new pic is a poster that also contains the old caption, I remove the latter.

I don't think there's any reason the caption should be repeating what's already on the poster, but if there is any reason why I should stop doing that, sound off please. Also, thoughts on caption-for-tagline in general?

Edited by Synchronicity on Dec 26th 2023 at 8:16:52 AM

GracieLizzy Usagi's done something stupid again (she/her) from Sunderland, UK Since: Dec, 2012
Usagi's done something stupid again (she/her)
#5510: Dec 26th 2023 at 8:34:37 AM

I like the caption for tagline myself but I completely agree it seems silly when the tagline is on the pic. My only reservation is a potentially accessibility one - i.e. it could help for people who use screen readers. But then if we ever get alt text on the images I would put the taglines there as then people who rely on screen readers will get the tagline, I'm not sure if the site has that technology yet though?

So I can't think of anything right now... meh.
jandn2014 Very Spooky from somewhere in Connecticut Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Hiding
Very Spooky
#5511: Dec 26th 2023 at 8:58:07 AM

I feel a bit similarly to [up], though my concern is that the tagline may be too small to read at wikisize or does not appear on the poster at all. I’m fine with cutting if the tagline text is clearly visible, however (Red, White & Royal Blue is a borderline case for me).

back lol
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#5512: Dec 28th 2023 at 8:13:05 PM

From Slow Transformation:

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/seth_flytransformation.png
Don't do drugs, kids!

Can confirm, having seen the movie: The transformation wasn't caused by drugs at all, so I have no idea where this caption came from. I don't have anything immediate to change it to, but it looks to me like it has to go.

E: Maybe "Sheesh, Brundle, you're looking different today. New haircut?"

Edited by number9robotic on Dec 28th 2023 at 8:16:14 AM

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jandn2014 Very Spooky from somewhere in Connecticut Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Hiding
Very Spooky
#5513: Dec 28th 2023 at 8:16:46 PM

Just like This Image Is Not an Example, many captions aren't representative of the works which images they underline. That said, the caption's rather lame, so I'd be fine with cutting it. Suggestion is pretty good.

Edited by jandn2014 on Dec 28th 2023 at 11:17:05 AM

back lol
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#5515: Dec 29th 2023 at 6:44:26 AM

The caption for Foil is 5 words long and every word is a different pothole, is there a way to rewrite this to be a little easier to read?

GracieLizzy Usagi's done something stupid again (she/her) from Sunderland, UK Since: Dec, 2012
Usagi's done something stupid again (she/her)
#5516: Dec 29th 2023 at 6:57:04 AM

[up] I'd be tempted to drop it down to just:

"Don Quixote and Sancho Panza"

Perhaps?

Edited by GracieLizzy on Dec 29th 2023 at 2:57:28 PM

So I can't think of anything right now... meh.
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uwu'd too hard
#5519: Dec 29th 2023 at 12:36:14 PM

For Episode Title Card:

"Tonight's episode: Witty Caption"

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Wizards Don't Own Cats (she/her)
GracieLizzy Usagi's done something stupid again (she/her) from Sunderland, UK Since: Dec, 2012
Usagi's done something stupid again (she/her)
#5521: Dec 29th 2023 at 2:41:37 PM

[up][up]evil grin[awesome]

So I can't think of anything right now... meh.
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R3Ked uwu'd too hard Since: Mar, 2020 Relationship Status: RelationshipOutOfBoundsException: 1
DrNoPuma Gengar from Toon Town Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: I think I love you, so what am I so afraid of?
Gengar
#5524: Dec 30th 2023 at 10:57:36 AM

Caption suggestions for Kaizo Trap:

Should've hit that P Switch when you had the chance.

As if this wasn't bad enough, the switch to prevent this from happening is right in front of the end goal, making it easy to miss.

Gengars are so Creepy Cute. :D
MyFinalEdits Officially intimidated from Parts Unknown (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Officially intimidated
#5525: Dec 30th 2023 at 11:00:28 AM

[up]I'd choose the second one.

135 - 158 - 273 - 191 - 188 - 230 - 300

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