Webcomic: Strong Female Protagonist
"My name is Alison Green. I'm nineteen years old, I'm invincible, I'm stronger than any human being who has ever lived, and I have no idea what the fuck I am doing."Alison Green is the former superheroine Mega-Girl. Key word, former. After deciding that superheroes can't really make a difference in the world when it's not giant robots and evil masterminds, Alison goes into retirement in order to focus on her college education and figure out just what she wants out of life.Her old team, the Guardians, are still a peripheral part of her life. Pintsize can't quite handle that the heroic age isn't what the comic books made it out to be. Sonar retired to the private sector after a few years as well. Moonshadow felt like she had to take up the slack after Mega Girl quit the team, and has built up no small amount of resentment against Alison as a result.Alison's little sister Jennifer is having a hard time coping with a superpowered older sister, and Alison is just trying to do her own thing with the shadow of her own superheroic celebrity hanging over her head.Website: http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/ - Updates Tuesdays and Fridays
This work includes examples of the following tropes:
- Absurdly Sharp Blade: Cleaver's arms are less than three microns and he can cut himself by accident and at least cut Alison's skin.
- Action Girl: Alison was one as Mega Girl; she sort of finds herself still doing action girl things as the situation calls for it.
- A Dog Ate My Homework: A younger Alison tried to invoke this with her dog once. Her dad overheard and joked that he'd be willing to eat it instead.Alison's dad: What is it, Math or English? English gives me indigestion!
- A.I. Is a Crapshoot: Nearly all of Paladin's attempts to create a genuine AI end in what she sees as failure, since they all develop bizarre personality quirks that make their behavior completely incomprehensible to humans. A few of them simply commit suicide as well.
- All of the Other Reindeer: With a few exceptions, Alison's former peers in superheroics haven't taken kindly to her decision to retire. This seems to have extended to some of the supervillains as well.
- Alt Text: Which can fall into providing important background information.
- Ambiguously Evil: Patrick. He seems to be retired, yet someone is running around in his old costume. And he's definitely still up to something behind Alison's back.
- Arc Words: "Thinking of You".
- Ascended Fanboy: Hector aka Pintsize. He was a comic book geek before he discovered his powers, used them as a manual to operate as a superhero, and still reads them to the present day.
- Armor-Piercing Question: After a full page of ripping Patrick's heartless and contradictory philosophies to pieces, Allison cuts straight to the heart of the issue with one sudden realisation: "Can you not read your own mind?" Suddenly, both Patrick's conniving way with words and his cool and collected exterior are rendered null and void.
- Badass: Feral. She uses her super-healing to perpetually donate her organs over and over and over again, despite the fact that anaesthesia doesn't work on her, and will continue to do so for the rest of her (very long) natural life.
- Bait and Switch: A dark version. At the beginning of chapter 4, Alison gets a phone call with bad news. Alison heads home in a hurry, and a series of flashbacks ensue in which Alison's dog features prominently, leading the reader to believe that the bad news is that her dog has died, and she's reminiscing about the good times she had with him. When she gets home, the reader learns that the dog died weeks ago, and the bad news is that her father has cancer.
- Berserk Button: An anti-super protestor with a flamethrower bursts into the operating bay where doctors will start harvesting Feral's organs and sets Feral on fire. This causes Allison to hit him so hard she knocks him outside the hospital and kills him almost instantly. She then threatens to kill all of the other anti-super protestors if they don't disperse immediately.
- Bizarre Baby Boom: Thunderstorms occurring globally are correlated to most infants in utero during that period developing superhuman abilities in their lives. It's mentioned that because it occurred globally that there are more impoverished superhumans than there are rich.
- Blessed with Suck:
- Cleaver's blades are metastasized cancer cells, with more of them inside his body than out. If his powers don't kill him, the rest of his life will be intensely painful. And he doesn't have hands.
- Feral's amazing healing factor makes her immune to anesthetics.
- Blood Knight: Alison, though she's not happy about it.Alison: I love fighting. I love the blood, I love the heat, I love breaking shit. It's the only thing I've ever been good at, and the fact that it never makes anything better just fucking kills me.
- Blue and Orange Morality: Patrick's morality is heartlessly pragmatic at best, something he admits to readily. As far as he's concerned, since everybody dies eventually, murder is just "moving up the date," and there's absolutely nothing wrong with killing people for a greater cause. "Lives are there to be spent." Because of this, he sees anyone who insists on saving as many lives as possible to be his greatest enemies. On the other hand, he considers general happiness and quality of life to be extremely important. He expresses disdain for chattel slavery and seems genuinely shocked when Alison suggests he might be a rapist.
- Deconstructed Trope also as Alison calls his beliefs pretty much bullshit when you put them together, as why would he care about slavery or being called a rapist if he thinks lives are to be spent?
- Catch Phrase: As Mega Girl, Alison's catchphrase was "You look like you could use a pick-me-up!" (usually said while literally picking up giant robots). She seems a little embarrassed when she hears it in the present day from an action figure of herself.
- Cat Girl: Feral's got the eyes, if not the ears or the personality.
- Chronic Hero Syndrome: Despite her retirement and doubts over what she wants to do with her life, Alison still can't stop herself from helping people.
- Deceased Parents Are the Best: Averted; the author has expressed some disdain for this trope and the related tropes of Missing Mom or Disappeared Dad as weak writing and made it a point to include Alison's parents as important supporting members without the purpose of creating angst.
- Deconstruction: Of Superheroes. Many teen heroes, Alison included, retire from superhero-ing once they realize that the problems of the world are too complex to be solved with their powers. Alison is pretty much a classic Flying Brick who realizes that being able to punch things really hard doesn't solve as many problems as she wished it could. Likewise, Patrick is a classic Supervillain who eventually discovers that Taking Over The World is an unrealistic, and frankly boring, goal, especially when there are more subtle forces for evil in the world that are frankly doing a better job than he ever did at it...
- Do Not Adjust Your Set: Menace used this trope to interrupt the presidential announcement of the existence of people like him and declare his intent to Take Over the World.
- Differently Powered Individual: The term used here is "biodynamic."
- "Dynamorphic" is also used, specifically to refer to individuals with significant physical changes.
- Disproportionate Retribution: In a flashback, Feral kisses Alison... and is punched out the nearest window in response. They end up laughing it off.
- Dramatically Missing the Point:Mega-Girl: I've been in the Pentagon like four times, but I'm not really even sure what the Pentagon does! I'm supposed to fight crime, but I don't even know how laws get passed! I mean, truth justice and the American Way? I stopped taking social studies when I was fifteen! I grew up in Westchester, and have never travelled anywhere else without this stupid domino mask on my face! Am I the only one who's scared that people are looking to me for answers just because I can lift a car over my head? This is crazy!
Reporter: Did...did you just reveal that you grew up in Westchester, New York?
- Dirty Mind-Reading: Alison invokes this trope by thinking dirty thoughts when traveling with Patrick. While Alison was just doing it for fun, Patrick looks genuinely troubled by it. Considering how he describes how he experiences his telepathy, she may as well have been forcing her hand down his pants.
- The Dreaded: Alison herself, and she does not like it one bit.
- Expy: Allison is one of Golden Age Superman, at least in powerset. And could possibly graduate to Silver Age Superman, if her anomaly continues to evolve.
- Evil All Along: When Alison comes to Patrick to ask for help finding Mary Kim, he actually degrades into a long-winded speech about what he's been doing, his way of seeing human life and even admitting he had people killed just because it amused him. The whole thing basically comes off that Patrick never stopped being a supervillain. He just changed how he does his villainy.
- To be fair, the people he murdered were terrorists who had conspired in the attempted murder of Feral and the actual murder of her medical team, purely out of racism. On the other hand, he's also purposely stealing inventions AND knowledge from scientists, purely for his own gain...it's also pointed out by Allison he seems to be TRYING to get her to hate him.
- Fantastic Racism: There's at least one registered hate group based around attacking people with superpowers (usually, as Alison notes, they only attack those who aren't decent fighters).
- Fantastic Slurs: "Nef" for people with superpowers, apparently derived from the word "Nephilim". note
- Flashback: The story makes extensive use of these to introduce characters and plot points.
- Fate Worse Than Death: Feral willingly signs up to use her regenerating powers in order to be treated like a perpetual organ donor. Due to her powers immediately rejecting any foreign object, she can't even be anesthetized for the process, which is implied to go on 24/7 for the length of what will be her very, very long life.
- Flying Brick: Alison accidentally discovers the ability to levitate when Patrick really pisses her off. A few pages later, she turns it into full-blown flight.
- Friendly Enemy: Alison is pretty close friends with Patrick, aka Menace, her former archfoe.
- Freudian Excuse: Why is Professor Cohen so mean to Alison? She's unintentionally responsible for the death of his husband.
- Gadgeteer Genius: Paladin.
- Good Thing You Can Heal: Happened to Feral a lot.
- Hannibal Lecture:
- The whole reason Alison starting doubting herself and went into retirement is because she was on the receiving end of one of these. In an odd twist, Alison doesn't hold it against the guy who did it and considers him a close friend.
- Cohen gets his share in as well.
- Heart Is an Awesome Power: Patrick mentions people who could communicate with diseases, or provide unlimited energy. They were carefully and quietly killed before anyone even knew about super heroes...IF he isn't lying!.
- Patrick himself is sort of an example of this. Although his power, Telepathy, is pretty straightforwardly awesome, one of the things that made him the world's most dangerous supervillain was that he was actually capable of empathizing with the monstrous biodynamics who were violent menaces to everyone else. He didn't recruit his minions through mind control, he recruited them because he was the only one on earth who was capable of being their friend.
- Healing Factor: Other than her claws and catlike eyes, this appears to be Feral's sole mutation, amped up to the point that, in a flashback, we see her getting riddled with bullets and puking them back up, and a bit later in the same flashback, getting a katana shoved through her forehead only makes her a bit groggy and speech-slurred until it's removed. Then there's the events of the Fate Worse Than Death entry below, as well as her being set on fire until she's a charred and withered husk, which she recovers from within a couple minutes.
- Heel-Face Turn: Patrick, aka Menace, has one of these once he discovers the conspiracy that killed off the various supers that could have literally saved the world from poverty, disease, and so on, back when they were still children. It made his "For the Evulz" villainy (and the tights-wearing superheroes he clashed with) seem childish.
- Heroic BSOD: Alison has a pretty serious one after learning that she accidentally killed Cohen's husband. Not helped by the fact that she's also sporting a serious head wound that makes it hard to think straight. She had a minor, albeit prolonged, one after her chat with Menace/Patrick, which lead her to reveal her identity live on television and quit being a super hero.
- In a Single Bound: When Alison is late, she just kind of...hops to class.
- Improbable Age: Paladin – head of the Robotics Department of the New School at age 21. Of course, thanks to her biodynamic power, she's been doing groundbreaking research since she was 15. Like most, Deconstructed, because she's in a horrifically evil contract. With Patrick.
- Incredible Shrinking Man: Who goes by the appropriate (if unimpressive) name "Pintsize".
- Innocently Insensitive: Alison's friend Violet.
- Played straight: Violet asks a DJ to play "Bulletproof" at a club because she thinks Alison would like it (despite Alison famously taking off her mask and quitting superheroing on national television). When Alison asks to leave, Violet cheerfully suggests the girlfriends all get little tattoos, having forgotten that Alison literally can't be cut to get the tattoo.
- Subverted: Violet gets extra brave at protests knowing Alison is there and has powers to protect her if things go badly.
- Subverted again: Violet gets Allison kicked out after the incident where Allison threatened a date-rapist. She was never Allison's friend after all
- Kill It with Fire: A mutant hater tries to kill Feral this way.
- Knight Templar: Moonshadow.Mercenary: Why us? What did we ever do to you?
Moonshadow: I'm a superhero. It's not about me. You're evil. You kill people.
Mercenary: So do you.
Moonshadow: Yeah. But I do it for free.
- Lady Swears-A-Lot: Alison's got a pretty foul mouth, to say the least.
- Manipulative Bastard: Patrick uses his mind-reading to control people. He does not have mind-control, but everyone thinks he does. He just figures out what motivates them and uses it to manipulate them.
- More Than Mind Control "The idea that I would need mind control to get people to do what I need them to is, frankly, insulting. If you can hear someone's darkest desire and see their entire memory laid out in front of you, and you still can't get them to do what you'd like, it says more about you than the people you're attempting to control."
- Irony: Patrick can't understand HIMSELF.
- Master of Illusion: This is Moonshadow's power set. When fighting, she mostly uses it to make herself invisible and/or create illusionary copies of herself.
- Meaningful Echo: "...it's time to put away the toys and grow up" is both said by Menace/Patrick (upon his retirement from villainy) and later Mega Girl/Alison (upon hers from heroism).
- Mind over Matter: Discussed as a potential power of a slasher in recent news. Also mentioned earlier as a possible application for the Absurd Cutting Power of Cleaver's blades.
- Missing Mom: Deconstructed. Alison's mother is a teacher, to the point where she taught some of Alison's own classes. She teaches Alison empathy, and that hiding her intelligence because other kids think she's weird is a bad idea. She was present emotionally and supportively until the government effectively drafted Alison to fight as Mega Girl. She feels she didn't fight hard enough to protect Alison. She also feels that the rift growing between her daughters due to Jennifer's jealousy is her fault, and that it all makes her a bad mother.
- Mundane Utility:
- Alison isn't above using her powers this way, such as leaping over crowds to get to class on time.
- Feral eventually uses her Wolverine-level Healing Factor to provide donated organs that work better than donations from family members. She can donate her heart 8-10 times a day, her lungs 15-20, her liver and kidneys 30, and liters of blood, all with no risk of transferring disease or her mutation. She probably saved more lives in the first day than she did in her entire career as a superhero.
- Nice Guy: Sonar – even the Alt Text text says so.
- Nigh Invulnerable:
- Alison is completely impervious to anything that's not Sharpened to a Single Atom. Her skin is easier to cut through than her bones, though.
- Cleaver can take hits from Alison herself without injury.
- No Man Wants An Amazon: Invoked by Alison's physician while discussing her sexual activity and how her super-strength relates to being intimate with a partner.
- Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex: Averted. Her therapist points out that if she REALLY had this, she's break the bed whenever she had a nightmare.
- Not So Different: In a reversal of the usual villain-accuses-hero dynamic, Alison uses this trope to connect with Cleaver, starting here.
- Petting Zoo People: Sonar is one of the chiropteran sort (which fits in nicely with his powers).
- Power Incontinence: Patrick, the biodynamic formerly known as Menace is a receiving-only telepath, and he cannot turn it off.
- Punched Across the Room: Alison punches Feral's (attempted) murderer out of the hospital he's in, killing him.
- Reconstruction: In issue 5, the Guardians are breaking apart because of not having supervillains to fight anymore and stopping normal crime is a lot harder for them. Thinking all this started with Alison, Pintsize just starts yelling and crying at her, basically hating the concept of trying to overcomplicate the idea of Superheroes. How he hates the idea of people laughing at him just because he wants to save the world with his friends and just wanting to do the right thing. In a sense, it's seemingly a speech against people who choose to deconstruct Superheroes all the time and it feels to him that all they want to do is make people sad in the name of being "smart". Surprisingly, Alison actually agrees with him and fully supports superheroes when there are supervillains or disasters going on and generally believes the Guardians always was a good idea. The problem is it's not a good idea anymore.
- And eventually reconstructs superheroes helping society. They just need to figure out a better way, by working together and contributing. Basically, what Feral is doing, only without the sacrifice. Mega Girl starts a woman's help group.
- Reed Richards Is Useless: A theme throughout the entire comic is that the superheroes running around the world can stop localized threats but are unable to solve the bigger ills (racism, sexism, homo/transphobia, starvation, poverty, genocide, war, disease, and so on) of the world. The realization of this trope is what drives Mega Girl to quit superheroing to go to college, and Feral to volunteer to be cut open and have her organs harvested 24/7 without anesthesia, just so people who need them can have them.
- Heartbreakingly upheld by Paladin, who signed a contract as a minor which gives her no legal control over her inventions. She could change the world, but the people who own her are too comfortable to mess with the status quo.
- Patrick owns the contract, as well...and utterly dismisses her idea.
- Sadist Teacher: Professor Cohen. Unusually for the trope, he gets fired for this. (It helps that a lot of people are secretly scared that Alison could kill everyone.)
- Samaritan Syndrome: this seems to be the basis of Feral's plan to donate her organs repeatedly for the rest of her life, as she figures its the best way to help the most amount of people with her powers. Interestingly, a version of this is also why Alison opposes her plan, as she doesn't want to see her friend going through agony for the rest of her life in order to only save a fraction of the people who need help.
- Sharpened to a Single Atom: The blades on Cleaver's arms have a thickness of less than 3 microns.
- Shut Up, Hannibal!: After several strips of Patrick laying out his own personal morality and what he thinks of humanity as a whole, Allison proceeds to tear apart all of his arguments and ultimately why he was the biggest obstacle for her to be a real superhero in the first place in just one page.
- Strapped to an Operating Table: Feral. By choice.
- Super Strength: A power and nuanced on whether muscles are meaningful or not. Alison's superpower allows her super strength without an apparent change in mass but Cleaver's strength is traced to three different physiological changes.
- Surreal Humor:
- Paladin's swarm robots exhibit this. She didn't program it into them, but it spontaneously developed as a side effect of their prototype AI:Alison: [in Paladin's HQ] This place is so awesome! It's so beautiful, the art and everything, and the robots are incredible!
Swarm Robot 1: We are not robots. We are The Frick Collection, and you are the Famed Civil Rights Lawyer Ron Kuby.
Swarm Robot 2: HAHAHAHA!
Swarm Robot 3: FALSE!
Swarm Robot 4: DEMONSTRABLY FALSE!
Swarm Robot 5: HAHAHAHAHAHA!
- On the other hand, her androids seem to tend towards Dead Baby Comedy:
- Paladin's swarm robots exhibit this. She didn't program it into them, but it spontaneously developed as a side effect of their prototype AI:
- Übermensch: This gets thrown in Alison's face when she writes a class paper criticizing Nietzsche's views. Cohen gives her an F for it, claiming that she shouldn't be criticizing Nietzsche since she's such a good example of what he was talking about.
- Irony: She's closer to The Last Man, only she doesn't have views to cling to!
- Vigilante Man: There's an invisible serial killer that exclusively targets the worst sorts of people (rapists, domestic abusers, Private Military Contractors). Turns out to be Moonshadow.
- "World of Cardboard" Speech:
- Alison delivers one after beating Cleaver.
- And another, somewhat scarier, one to Cleaver when she visits him in prison.Alison: NO FUCKING SHIT I KILL PEOPLE! I put holes in mountains! I break shit constantly without even trying! I saved the world on no less than seven fucking occasions, and guess what, super-accuracy is not one of my anomalies! Am I supposed to be impressed that you've never killed anybody? What a bold moral choice from someone who's terrified of violence and scared shitless of going to jail! It's like, have you ever had the option of murdering a bunch of people? Okay, then why the FUCK am I listening to your opinion on the matter? Every day I don't kill a thousand fucking people, they should throw me a god-damned tickertape parade!