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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#296751: Jan 11th 2022 at 8:53:09 PM

I have handled all the approved videos. It will take some time though as the admins or mods? need to approve them first.

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Overlord Since: Mar, 2013
#296752: Jan 11th 2022 at 8:58:59 PM

[up] Would my second Star Trek video be approved.

I have got some more video ideas, but I don't want to overwhelm the thread with them and a few will be needed to be edited down.

Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#296753: Jan 11th 2022 at 9:01:44 PM

I haven't done that one yet I am still waiting for more votes on that one.

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DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#296754: Jan 11th 2022 at 9:13:53 PM

[tup] Kumozawa and Tezzeret

[tdown] Yuichi and Thorne

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#296755: Jan 11th 2022 at 9:24:54 PM

[tup] Tezz and the videos

Speaking of would this video be too long? It's one of Freddy Krueger.

https://youtu.be/lpdayhJujog

Edit: If you want it shorter, I say 0:00 - 1:18 or 1:05 - 2:26. I think it conveys the point

Edited by WetFlannels on Jan 11th 2022 at 5:28:00 PM

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#296756: Jan 11th 2022 at 9:38:14 PM

That is just not long enough. Also, I love the video [tup].

By the way just as a quick reminder for anyone unaware the maximum video length is 2:30 as said on Video Guidelines.

Edited by Ordeaux26 on Jan 11th 2022 at 9:38:45 AM

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WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#296757: Jan 11th 2022 at 9:42:13 PM

Oh I thought the max limit would only be like a min and a half so I retract my statement about shortening it

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
DrUnknown Since: May, 2020
#296758: Jan 11th 2022 at 9:54:50 PM

[tup] to the Freddy Krueger video.

[tdown] to the Apocalypse video, the Kivas Fajo video, and the Dolim video (doesn't portray a heinous enough crime).

@Ordeaux26: Thank you for handling all of the approved videos. cool

Mediawatcher Since: Dec, 2015
#296759: Jan 11th 2022 at 10:07:39 PM

Just decided to come in and say I’m gonna be claiming the human target comic if that’s no trouble, sorry about your pet lighty.

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#296760: Jan 11th 2022 at 10:27:52 PM

Any opinions on this quote?

General Morando: "The delson has finally come. Ever since Seklos destroyed Gaylen, the universe has descended into chaos. It craves order, a firm hand to rule it. I will be that hand. I will be the god the galaxy has lacked! Do it!"

(The O.M.E.Ns destroy the crystal encasing Gaylen's Core.)

Kubritz: My scientists say it will take several hours.

General Morando: "Then we shall begin at once. While I'm transforming, take the Tarrons into custody. Their cores are the first I want to devour. Soon, the whole universe will tremble before me!"

Last video suggestion, it's of Palpatine - https://youtu.be/SdbpryNN7H0?t=88 from where the link starts off to about 3:50?

Edited by WetFlannels on Jan 11th 2022 at 6:36:16 PM

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#296761: Jan 11th 2022 at 10:40:58 PM

So, I actually went and looked at La Belle myself… and sadly, I think we need to cut Sergio.

His Freudian Excuse is not mitigating, true- it's tacked on, only briefly mentioned at the end and not delved into. However, he does have a clear disqualifier- he genuinely cares for Isolde and is distraught when she dies. To be more specific, it turns out that she had sacrificed herself by volunteering to insert herself in a trap he made to kill someone else, and when he, disguised as Albrecht, discovers this, is saddened. Here is the specific passage:

"N... No... Not... not Isolde..."
Albrecht fell onto the ground on his knees, gripping the edge of the table in shock. "It can't be true," he said. "It can't be."
[...]
"I see..." said Marth. "So when 'Albrecht' heard about Isolde's death, he... he wasn't acting?"
"No," replied Peach. "Isolde was also something of a close companion to Sergio. So the emotion he felt at her death was real."
Marth shook his head. "How sad..." he said. "And yet, I don't pity the man at all... It is his fault he killed her, after all..."

So he set the trap, but intended to kill someone else, not Isolde, and is genuinely in pain when he learns of his mistake.

Here is the EP- notably, the troper never mentions this scene at all. Also, the proposer in question is the one who proposed Ellen and fought to keep her for years while ignoring her clearly mitigating qualities (granted, so did I for a while- mistake on my part), and also thought Mutaclone has redeeming qualities when it was later determined he did not, so this would not be the first time they did this.

Bottom line, unless I missed something (and I double-checked the relevant chapters), he needs to go.

Edited by MasterN on Jan 11th 2022 at 10:48:08 AM

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Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#296762: Jan 11th 2022 at 10:59:53 PM

Yeah, cut him. Also, no to that Morando quote.

Also, unrelated, but who thought it was a good idea to make a murder mystery featuring the cast of Super Smash Bros. and have the ultimate villain be...some random who named Sergio?

Edited by Scraggle on Jan 11th 2022 at 12:02:38 PM

Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#296763: Jan 11th 2022 at 11:00:54 PM

I guess it is possible the troper missed that. Though since he isn't around anymore who knows.

Let's just cut it and move on.

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MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#296764: Jan 11th 2022 at 11:03:44 PM

Also, the entry for Princess Ezel is way too long for a game that is only an hour long at most. It’s actually my own extension, made during a time when I though every villain needed a super-long entry. So I’m gonna trim it back down.

Current:

  • Princess Ezel was seen by her subjects as a kind, innocent girl who was unjustly murdered by her power-hungry brother, Prince Vido. In truth, Ezel is the one who kicked off the apocalypse that drives the plot. In the backstory, Ezel began cannibalizing other demons to consume their souls and steal their power. Ezel, unsatisfied with ruling the titular world of KAIMA, repeated this process many times and consumed numerous souls, endangering KAIMA in the process, in an attempt to gain enough power to leave KAIMA and move on to other planets. Stopped by her brother, Vido, and sealed away, Ezel manipulates Illy, who loves her and mourns her supposed death, into fighting Vido. Once Ezel is freed by Searina and Illy, she eats Vido alive before deciding to leave everyone else left on KAIMA to die when the planet falls apart, offering to take Illy with her if she kills Searina, though it's revealed she would have betrayed and killed Illy at some point anyway. A greedy, murderous monarch who hides behind the facade of a pure-hearted princess, Ezel far outclasses her well-intentioned brother in villainy.

Trim:

  • The seemingly-kind Princess Ezel, murdered by her brother Prince Vido, was actually a power-hungry tyrant who devoured other demons and their souls for power. Wanting to extend her rule beyond KAIMA, Ezel devoured many souls to gain the power to leave the planet and tried to destroy it before Vido stopped her and sealed her away. Potentially released by Searina and Illi, the latter of whom was her lover, Ezel eats Vido and either makes Illi her servant or orders her to kill Searina, taking Searina as a servant instead should she kill Illi, or attempting to kill them both if they refuse to harm each other.

Edited by MasterN on Jan 11th 2022 at 11:12:02 AM

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Misry6 Imperfect Disgrace from the Eternal Nothingness Since: Nov, 2021 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Imperfect Disgrace
#296765: Jan 11th 2022 at 11:06:26 PM

[tup] Tezzeret and the Tarkin video.

My deep condolences, Lighty.

Just an empty void…
Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#296766: Jan 11th 2022 at 11:19:17 PM

Okay wait a sec, I decided to take a look at the chapter for the fanfic and I found this line that was said after the one you brought up N.

"Of course, I had not expected Master Hand's poor cooperation, so I killed him. That is the only reason I spared Popo; Master Hand's soul proved to be strong enough to substitute for that pesky ice climber. If Bowser had taken my gamble, I would have killed Isolde to seal the deal, but the brave buffoon took the chance. But I have you now..."

Um, this is odd like this might subvert his redeeming quality with it directly contradicting the idea he feels remorse about killing her when he falt about admits to being perfectly willing to sacrifice her. I am now not as sure, though I am leaning keep, this is some really weird writing.

Edited by Ordeaux26 on Jan 12th 2022 at 8:27:02 AM

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Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#296767: Jan 12th 2022 at 12:34:21 AM

Hi, so I've already discussed this in PMs with Foren and bringing up a cut for Arrowverse. The one in question is Konstantin Kovar. Here's his entry:

  • General Konstantin Kovar is a member of the Russian government who rules over the village of Krasnoyarsk, and leader of a criminal organization. Planning to rule over the country, he attempts to stage a coup by gassing the Russia's entire political and military leaderships to death. As Oliver Queen foiled his attempt and nearly killed him, Kovar returns to take vengeance on him. After capturing Oliver, he tortures him by injecting him a drug that causes him to relieve all of the physical, psychological and emotional pain he lived in the past five years. Kovar then offers him a gun, expecting him to be Driven to Suicide. When Oliver escapes his cell instead, Kovar tries to kill him. Ultimately defeated, he gloats that the island will forever remain his prison. Kovar's sophisticated and polite façade only serves to hide the ruthless, power-hungry and sadistic monster he truly is.

Now I think this guy has serious problems breaching the heinous standard. He's a flashback Big Bad with a killcount/attempted killcount which is not that notable: he wanted to take out the Russian government with a gas attack which I doubt would pass a hundred or so victims. As a Russian General, this guy has one of the highest resources among the Arrow baddies, but he's especially lacking compared to the majority of the Arrow Big Bads who have all attempted to destroy or kill everyone in Star City.

The only thing that really stands out about him is he Mind Raped Oliver, but even that on its own I don't think is enough to get him to count. We've had quite a few villains doing mind rape now including the Vertigos, Chase (kinda), Diaz, along with ones from other shows like Mallus, Neron, and Psych (who was able to be redeemed). One single mind rape on its own is not going to be bad enough.

You guys might remember Ricardo Diaz got brought up here, but he was downvoted for not being heinous enough. Well Diaz has a near identical rapsheet to Kovar, but with more meat to his crimes (Vertigo mind rape, cold blooded torture of several characters, attempted mass murder, Sadistic Choice psychological torment) and he still didn't pass. Kovar on the other hand feels like a watered-down version of Diaz.

Kovar may have counted early on, but I think he's up against waaay too much competition to be notable nowadays.

Edited by Snowy66 on Feb 22nd 2022 at 5:43:38 AM

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#296768: Jan 12th 2022 at 12:38:34 AM

Yes to Tezzeret (sorry Lighty sadsad).

Sergio...I don't know what to do. That's some damn odd writing, but I'm leaning cut.

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Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#296769: Jan 12th 2022 at 12:39:21 AM

My condolences Lighty sad

[tup]Tezzeret

Edited by Snowy66 on Jan 12th 2022 at 12:41:59 PM

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#296770: Jan 12th 2022 at 12:39:28 AM

Cut Kovar. Gonna just abstain on Sergio.

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#296771: Jan 12th 2022 at 12:55:17 AM

[tup] to Tezzeret. Condolences lighty

Klavice Since: Jan, 2011
#296772: Jan 12th 2022 at 12:55:52 AM

I'm sorry to hear that Lighty. I know we don't always see eye to eye, bit you have my complete sympathy.

Anyway so I was looking at some of these characters Ordeaux listed and honestly? I didn't effortpost that many of them looking back. Here's the ones I did. "the phantom, Sora Takeuchi, Zant, Mumkhar/"Metal Face", Dickson, Larkecius, Heishin, Heinrich von Raitenau, Kouran Mouri, and Kaima." Lighty did Naraku ages ago for example and I do remember someone else doing Hades from Kid Icarus, I simply suggested him (if we're simply going off characters I suggested, we have a longer list) and Zant was re-evaluated and deemed a keep so he doesn't count. Brokenstar and Scourge? Honestly I'm so sick of Warrior Cats now, I'd be happy to see them both gone. But I feel they are technical keeps and you don't have to necessarily like the work you do. Besides, someone else did them who was also a fan and deemed them keepers.

Everyone else? I leave them to your discretion. Dickson and Takeuchi ARE cuts though for sure. They are Graceful Losers which when they were proposed back in 2013 I didn't know was disqualifying. I cannot apologize enough for my shady behaviour.

As for Alba, I can't say if this is disqualifying or not, but I'm pretty sure it is, if you press him at one point he mentions how he sympathizes with Wendy Oldbag having a bad back in a bit of villain respect. And it's not entirely disproven that he lied either since the guy had to hunch over to keep up his frail old man look. As stated before, Villains cannot Pet the Dog if this counts.

Here's a video of Heinrich von Raitenau if you want to judge for yourselves: https://youtu.be/DGESj5Qrl3U

If you legitimately want to reevaluate them all, I won't stop you.

Edited by Klavice on Jan 12th 2022 at 1:20:03 AM

MasterJoseph Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object from Not telling. Since: Mar, 2018
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Forenperser Foreign Troper from Germany Since: Mar, 2012
Foreign Troper
#296774: Jan 12th 2022 at 1:31:30 AM

'lurks out of retirement due to the PM tongue'

Yeah I too think Kovar can be safely cut. He qualified just barely back in 2017, but since then he has received tons of competition and just doesn't compare anymore.

Edited by Forenperser on Jan 12th 2022 at 10:31:49 AM

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#296775: Jan 12th 2022 at 1:55:11 AM

[tup]tenzerret

Sorry to hear that lighty and klavice.

And yeah uh cut Kovar. Dude is blown away. Shrieve alone is a 100 times worse in both grand scale and personal villany compared to him and they both have the military general thing

Edited by miraculous on Jan 12th 2022 at 1:56:33 AM

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