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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#2076: Jan 24th 2023 at 10:14:11 PM

Yes to Miriam, Omen, and Orchard. I'm gonna wait for more opinions of those more knowledgeable to chime in before voting on Double, although the level of personal betrayal here and direct intent to help in an apocalyptic goal edges me towards yes.

Here's the Warcraft write up. I'm thinking I'm gonna reorder the page to be order of introduction rather than alphabetical as the latter is going to get confusing with characters with two parts to their name. I'll think on it and get back to that in a couple of days.

Warcraft: Kargath Bladefist is the founder and leader of the Shattered Hand clan whose insatiable love of pain created one of the most cruel orcs in existence. Kargath led his clan to torture new recruits either to death or until they began to enjoy the suffering, and he would gleefully torture victims by flaying, burning, or having them eaten alive all the while injecting them with poisons that kept them conscious and aware for as long as possible. Caring nothing for the orcs, Kargath became the only non-warlock to join Gul'dan's Shadow Council and sell out his race into enslavement to the Burning Legion. Reveling in the Old Horde's cruelties, Kargath successfully led the genocide of the arakkoa save for a handful of outcasts, and stayed behind on Draenor to keep the more savage clans in line. Betraying master after master over the following decades, Kargath ultimately settled on following Illidan Stormrage in exchange for ruling over the Fel Horde and further corrupting the last of his race to satiate his never ending sadism.

Think you're tough because you made it through Lord of the Rings? Real men survive The Silmarillion.
Elimations1 King Kandy Kane from Kandy Kingdom Since: Jan, 2023 Relationship Status: Coming soon to theaters
King Kandy Kane
#2077: Jan 24th 2023 at 10:14:50 PM

I'll give a [tup] to the Lady, Duke Red, Neville, and Miriam Bell

(police siren)
Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#2078: Jan 24th 2023 at 10:20:34 PM

No to Double. The massacre is nasty but it's not enough for a Reploid in Mega Man X (the problems begin at the mass-murdering Magma Dragoon). He's not taking a particularly proactive role in "destroying the world," either—all he's officially doing is acting as a spy for Sigma to keep an eye on Mega Man and Zero. You'd really have stretch to emphasize that as a qualifying detail, IMHO.

Edited by Scraggle on Jan 24th 2023 at 11:21:16 AM

Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#2079: Jan 24th 2023 at 10:23:11 PM

Yeah that is what I thought. Magma Dragoon alone outdoes anything he does so yeah [tdown]. It was a good attempt the heinous standard is just crazy high.

CM Sandboxes, MB Sandboxes
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#2080: Jan 24th 2023 at 10:23:26 PM

Good Kargath and Pardis.

Voting: I'll lean yes on Orchard, and Omen. But agreed as a no for Double here. But solid EP!

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Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#2082: Jan 24th 2023 at 10:24:19 PM

Reading it though I will also lean [tup] Orchard

CM Sandboxes, MB Sandboxes
BrianKT Since: Jan, 2020
#2083: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:13:05 PM

[tup] to Turbo. While it's unknown if any of the characters in "Turbo-Time" or "Roadblasters" died or not, he is still responsible for ruining a lot of lives, especially Vanellope's. And any humor he displays does not detract from his villainy.

Edited by BrianKT on Jan 24th 2023 at 11:15:11 AM

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
The wifi here sucks
#2084: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:18:41 PM

No to Turbo, making a bunch of people homeless is nowhere near bad enough for this trope.

Hope your prepared for an unforgettable luncheon
BrianKT Since: Jan, 2020
#2085: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:25:59 PM

That's just it. We don't know if they are homeless or just dead. And another thing, he was clearly aware of what he was doing, and not following any programming. Not even when he was fused with a cy-bug and announced his plan to take over the whole arcade.

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#2086: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:33:24 PM

[tup] Orchard, Omen

[tdown] Double, heinous standard strikes again unfortunately.

Gonna give a late [tdown] to Turbo. If the film outright stated it cost the lives of the two games disconnected, I'd be more willing but they don't. And this is the film which sprouts this line about watching a child get murdered by large bugs

"Aw-haw! Look at that, it's your little friend. Let's watch her die together, shall we?"

And considering Cy Bugs have no agency apart from: devour everything with, there's no implications on how Turbo could conquer anything.

Edited by WetFlannels on Jan 24th 2023 at 7:34:38 PM

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
MasterJoseph Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object from Not telling. Since: Mar, 2018
Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object
#2087: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:33:31 PM

Cannot recall if I voted, but [tdown]Turbo.

Also [tdown]Double

Edited by MasterJoseph on Jan 24th 2023 at 11:34:33 AM

IPP Wick Check created.
BrianKT Since: Jan, 2020
#2088: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:34:11 PM

On a side note, I would give a [tup] to Jack Horner as well. Because he has no redeeming traits or legitimate Freudian Excuse for his actions (he actually had a privileged life, which he considered "useless crap"), has a very selfish and dangerous agenda that could've doomed the whole world, lets pretty much all of his minions die, is willing to harm children (such as those baby unicorns), threatened to kill an innocent dog (Perrito), and honesty, while he is Laughably Evil, saying his humor detracts from his villainy is like saying McLeach, Negaduck, or Bill Cipher's humor detracts from their villainy.

Edited by BrianKT on Jan 24th 2023 at 11:48:26 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#2089: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:35:50 PM

[up][up][up] Agreed. While that line in question actually comes from Turbo himself, the fact that he specifically differentiates between homelessness and death indicates that it doesn't actually kill them unless one applies Fridge Horror.

Oh and [tdown] to Double. Damn you heinous standards!

Edited by ForgoLight on Jan 24th 2023 at 11:36:41 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
BrianKT Since: Jan, 2020
#2090: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:39:13 PM

[up][up] So Turbo is voted [tdown] because he was only implied to have killed a bunch of people? Like how Bill Cipher was implied to have killed everyone on his home planet?

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#2091: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:43:39 PM

[up] There is a huge difference between the two. Bill is also shown explicitly murdering or attempting to murder dozens if not hundreds and is explicitly stated to have destroyed his entire universe with all of the death that entails. Turbo doesn't have any of that. And again, Cybugs have no agency. Not to mention it isn't even clear that the final Cybug even truly is Turbo or if it's just a Cybug that copied everything about him including his personality when it ate him.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
BrianKT Since: Jan, 2020
#2092: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:49:43 PM

Okay, fair enough. But how about my [tup] vote for Jack?

Edited by BrianKT on Jan 24th 2023 at 11:49:58 AM

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#2093: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:54:41 PM

[up] When Bill said he "liberated" his universe, there was fire in his eyes and you could hear screaming, and Bill intending on using our universe as a playground for mayhem easily pushed him across.

I'm not sure what you mean about your vote for Jack?

Edited by WetFlannels on Jan 24th 2023 at 7:55:14 PM

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
BrianKT Since: Jan, 2020
#2094: Jan 24th 2023 at 11:59:15 PM

Just read what I wrote about Jack Horner above. [up][up][up]

Edited by BrianKT on Jan 25th 2023 at 12:05:45 PM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#2095: Jan 25th 2023 at 12:42:41 AM

Yes to Bara Nightmare, Omen, Lean yes for Ward duo

No to Double.

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#2096: Jan 25th 2023 at 1:08:30 AM

[up][up] Yeah what about it?

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#2097: Jan 25th 2023 at 1:08:33 AM

As someone who thinks Turbo counts for other reasons(Won't push it here though) so weird how people highlight the 'got 2 games unplugged' thing. I never felt that was a particular moment of villainy.

But moving on. Are you asking for thoughts on your vote? Because that's typically not something needed.

The First man
Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#2098: Jan 25th 2023 at 1:09:13 AM

If I didn't say it before, yes to Miriam. Yes to Omen and Orchard as well, but gonna go with a No on Double. But good work, everyone!

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#2099: Jan 25th 2023 at 1:29:57 AM

Yes to Bara (what the fuck?), Miriam, Omen, Orchard.

I've added Pardis to Monster Octopath Traveler.

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#2100: Jan 25th 2023 at 1:35:49 AM

[tup]Bara Nightmare and Nur-Ab-Sal

@ HT: I googled. I think you mean this dude from Dairanger General Cactus: He kidnaps young girls paralyses them and turns then into living dolls.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."

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