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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#12726: Apr 29th 2023 at 12:54:37 AM

Yes to Hook and Fallow.

Edited by ACW on Apr 29th 2023 at 4:18:37 AM

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EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#12727: Apr 29th 2023 at 1:24:18 AM

[tup] to Captain Hook and Pierre

Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#12728: Apr 29th 2023 at 2:29:59 AM

I think I'm fine with Hook, lemme mull over that.

Anyway, I got my last Hulk villain, who was a minor recurring foe from the comics...

    What has the Galaxy Master done? 
  • Appearing first in #111-112 of Incredible Hulk, the Galaxy Master was the most evil of an already-evil race of alien horrors, which the Galaxy Master proved by wiping out every other member of its race. Now it seeks to exterminate all intelligent life so there are no threats to its rule, going about exterminating planet after planet; indeed, galaxy after galaxy, over a thousand of them left destroyed by the Galaxy Master's rampage.
  • The Galaxy Master has enslaved a race called the Saggitarians, forcing them to wipe out planets lest he wipe out their own (and the Galaxy Master fully plans on pulling a You Have Outlived Your Usefulness moment anyway). Failing in its attempt to blow up Earth, the Galaxy Master finds the Hulk spurring a rebellion among the Saggitarians. When its one genuinely loyal minion warns it ahead of time about the rebellion, the Galaxy Master thanks him by, uh, vaporizing him and then wiping out multitudes of the rebels.
  • Stopped by the Hulk, the Galaxy Master reappears over a hundred issues later in #269-270, where it repurposes the Abomination into its champion. There it starts wiping out worlds again, having the Abomination ravage and weaken them first before it comes down to finish the job. Hulk's final battle against this thing takes place on one of these ruined planets—we even see the corpses of an alien family, little kids included, who lost their life in this genocide. Ultimately, the Galaxy Master is destroyed.
    Heinous standard? 
  • It's a cosmic tier villain, but it's as reasonably nasty as they come while lacking the screentime of someone like Galactus (and in some aspects it's nastier than Galactus, since the GM doesn't actually have to feed on populated planets, but deliberately seeks them out anyway). When its second appearance starts placing direct focus on the victims of its genocides and emphasizing them as the worst evil Hulk has ever fought (up to that point, granted) you have indisputably crossed this line.
    Redeeming qualities? 
  • "I am the Galaxy Master, I destroy galaxies" isn't really grounds for a redeemable, three-dimensional character, is it?

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#12730: Apr 29th 2023 at 3:14:02 AM

[tup]Galaxy master.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#12731: Apr 29th 2023 at 3:39:47 AM

Yes to Galaxy Master. Simple keep, but an easy keep.

Also, I'd like to retract my question on La Fronte. I somehow missed the part about him being the mercenary (still seems like a needlessly complex plan though).

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Bye
#12733: Apr 29th 2023 at 4:44:20 AM

[tup] Boss, Forrest Blackwell, Cain, Tokugawa and Inugami, Ustad, Farnoq, Overlord, Dracula, La Fronte, Silanos, Fallow, Galaxy Master

[tdown] Wanyuudo

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#12735: Apr 29th 2023 at 5:03:51 AM

[tup] to Captain Hook, Pierre Fallow and Galaxy Master.

Echidna from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#12738: Apr 29th 2023 at 7:35:08 AM

[tup]Galaxy Master, Master of all Galaxies

"No running in the halls!"
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#12739: Apr 29th 2023 at 8:21:32 AM

Yes to Galaxy Master. Reserving Hell's Paradise as it's not taken on Drafts.

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#12740: Apr 29th 2023 at 8:41:26 AM

Yes to Hook, Fallow, and Galaxy Master.

What's the work?

DC: The New Frontier is a famous retelling of the age old story of the Justice League, set in the 1950s and starring Golden Age versions of classic characters as they fight oppression, superhero registration policies, and the general red scare bullshit that made that time period a living hell.

The main villain of the story has been discussed and downvoted before, but I have... thoughts on that. So without further ado!

What is Dinosaur Island/"The Centre"?

A Genius Loci and one of the oldest beings on the planet, the Centre's story is best told by itself:

     The Centre's story 
Like all things on this hurtling sphere, I emerged from the molten centre of creation. But mine has been a unique path. Isolated, I developed attributes beyond those of lesser things.
Peaceful millennia passed, until our home was struck by a vast celestial stone.
The force of contact plunged our idyllic sphere into a chaotic garden of death. Light was life, and black chunks of death had filled the skies.
With great haste, I set to the task of preparing an environment in which I could sustain the lesser things. With flora and flesh, I would find sustenance. At the centre of the great ocean I would ensure that life would survive.
Then came an era of pristine beauty and blessed quiet. Our sphere lay dead under a glistening pearl coat, but life prevailed through my will. I lived and fed on the lesser things, growing from the centre.
But the peace was all too brief.
Soon the heavens opened, and the sphere began to nurture and sustain curious new kinds of life. All were lesser things, but one creature soon came to stand above the rest.
Unlike my things, the blood ran hot through this one's impatient heart. Its fragile shell belied a vicious nature, and its clever mind was quick to find new ways to control the sphere.
In what seemed a heartbeat, these things had proliferated in both numbers, and destructive means. Another heartbeat, and they had brought their conflicts to my haven.
By the time they had harnessed the most destructive forces on our sphere, I concluded it was time to leave my azure home. Long have I dreamt of travelling the spheres beyond mine, claiming them for the centre's glory.
I sent forth an airborne centrist to seek the rich energies I will require to tear away from my sphere's embrace. I have no wish to show these vermin the glory of the centre but should they task me, I shall cleanse the sphere for the greater good.
I have grown restless in my youth, and yearn to explore the other spheres that cycle endlessly round the glowing centre of my world. I shall feed and I shall grow, as always, from the centre.

TL;DR, The Centre was born alongside the dinosaurs, but evolved beyond what it saw to be "lesser things". When their extinction came in the form of a meteor, the Centre protected as many of the dinosaurs as it could so life could survive... and, more importantly, itself, as it found sustenance from eating and mutating the dinosaurs into its loyal servants.

Centuries passed, and the Centre took refuge in the ocean with its subjects. However, new life soon began to take the place of the dinosaurs. Humans. The Centre stayed away from these new things out of disgust and fear, though humanity would come to know and fear it—hundreds of civilizations over the centuries have their own myth of the beast, a great, moving island populated by massive reptiles and dragons. An ominous thing always subconsciously present in the back of every living thing's mind, whose very existence is synonymous with "Death and then endless suffering. Fire. Extinction." Atlantis, in particular, likens it to the boogeyman—be good, kids, or the Centre will claim you as its own.

Eventually, humanity invents the nuclear bomb. Finally having enough, the Centre decides to leave Earth to escape the danger these "ants" may pose to it with their destructive powers. It sends out its servants to find the materials it will need to journey the stars, to claim the entire solar system as its own. It has no wish to reveal its existence to the "vermin," but if they stand in its way? It will annihilate them all. Very, very quickly, it decides to go full-throttle on the latter option.

The Centre is also, unfortunately, a powerful psychic. Its mere intentions begin causing global mass hysteria—shootings, kidnappings, insanity and despair on unprecedented levels. Aquaman's mind is haunted by "broad, horrific strokes" of what it plans to do. One of Rick Flagg's Suicide Squad subordinates (here depicted as their original military special ops unit rather than a team of supervillains) is driven to suicide, throwing himself into space when on a rocket and sabotaging the ship so its massive payload of nukes and bioweapons (long story) threatens to crash onto Earth. Cults begin popping up all over the globe, worshipping the Centre and sacrificing children to sustain its might.

Eventually, after one of its scouts finds a massive depot of rocket fuel it can use to leave the planet, the Centre begins its "cleansing," launching a devastating attack on Themyscira before moving onto the fuel depot. There it's confronted by a massive army of heroes, led by Martian Manhunter and King Faraday, who have assembled to stop the beast. The Centre begins sending out unending waves of its mutated servants to slaughter them, while using its psychic powers to Mind Rape everything in the vicinity—it dissects their minds, using every bad thought or memory it can get its hands on to convince its opposition of the futility of their existence. Briefly, it manages to completely overwhelm J'onn's mind (the Martian's own psychic powers naturally making him vulnerable), boasting "Ants! Warm-blooded vermin! You should have killed him, King vermin! I have the alien's mind now!"

Hal Jordan and a bunch of other fighter pilots fly into the Centre, where they find a massive cavern of hundreds of tortured... things. This is heavily implied to be where the Centre creates its mutant servants, and as Hal mows the creatures down, a wave of psychic relief washes over him as they're released from their torment. The Centre ramps up its Mind Rape as Hal flies deeper into the beast, but he successfully sets off a bomb in the thing's brain. The Flash, meanwhile, runs across the Centre's surface, exposing every inch of the beast's skin to the Atom's shrink ray—though because it's still a prototype, instead of shrinking its targets, the ray instead makes them... well, they blow up.

The dying Centre nonetheless makes one last mad dash to the mainland, intent on taking as many lesser things out with it as possible in the explosion in a final act of spite, but Hal uses his Green Lantern ring to take hold of the beast and throw it into space. As it explodes and finally dies, humanity collectively breaths a sigh of relief. That hateful, violent voice in the back of everyone's minds is finally gone. The world is safe.

Mitigating factors?

When the Centre (or at least its animated counterpart) was first brought up, it was downvoted because its goal was to save the planet from humanity. Which, on the surface, is true. But looking into it myself, I find the Centre actually caring about the planet to be very questionable. From its narration above, pretty much every time it mentions how it saved the dinosaurs from extinction, it's always immediately undercut by how this was done to sustain itself by maintaining a constant food source.

On its own, that probably wouldn't be enough. It's just a predator trying to survive. But then we get to... well, anytime it speaks. The Centre is an ego made flesh. It constantly boasts of how it's so much better than the "lesser things," deriding warm-blooded creatures as vermin. Even its own servants are referred to as "my things," it strokes its own ego about how "life persisted through my will," and that's not even mentioning the hundreds of its servants it keeps in perpetual agony—again, "death and then endless suffering." Faraday puts it best:

"It has decided that mankind poses a threat to its home. So it wants to do a little housecleaning before it goes on holiday."

It's not "saving the planet" out of good intentions. It's doing this because the planet is where it keeps its stuff, and it wants to fumigate before setting out to sate its desire for total domination of the universe.

Now, Aquaman admittedly notes "It has no quarrel with my kingdom, but there are those on which it has cast its fancy. It's after the poisoners. The murderers. It seeks to cleanse the surface." But, again, the Centre is doing all this entirely for selfish reasons. Humanity poses a potential danger to it. Atlantis, on the other hand, it never even acknowledges exists; they're not a threat, so it presumably couldn't care less about them. Yet that doesn't stop its psychic power from catching its citizens in the range of its Mind Rape, to which it does nothing to prevent, and they're terrified enough of it that they have nursery rhymes about the beast. There is no solidarity in its goals, it's merely out to clean house.

Verdict?

I understand if this is a little contentious, but I'm a yes. Every potential redeeming quality, in my eyes, is pretty thoroughly squashed.

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#12743: Apr 29th 2023 at 9:11:06 AM

[tup]The Center

  • Assassin Blue: "Boss" is the shadowy dictator and handler of Blue and Red who desires to increase his power. Manipulating Blue and Red into murdering countless politicians and innocent civilians—including children—under the promise of ending the war, Boss's real plan involves killing those who could pose a threat to him, even forcing his assassins to Leave No Witnesses. Turning on Blue after he refuses to kill an innocent man, Boss, despite his claims of using his increasing territory to spread peace, has ultimately wasted thousands of lives for nobody but himself.

"No running in the halls!"
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Echidna from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
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Goku Black
#12746: Apr 29th 2023 at 9:39:52 AM

[tup]center

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Overlord Since: Mar, 2013
#12747: Apr 29th 2023 at 9:57:22 AM

Yes to Center and Galaxy Master.

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
Smiley100P Since: Sep, 2017
#12749: Apr 29th 2023 at 10:29:29 AM

Shoutout to [tup] Boss for stealing the title of "First Greg Lobanov CM" from Audrey Redheart. I knew about him and thought he was just a tiny bit of a WIE but but this placement makes more sense tbh. Also [tup] to Galaxy Master and The Centre.

Edited by Smiley100P on Apr 29th 2023 at 10:34:23 AM

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