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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#4926: Feb 17th 2023 at 4:37:00 AM

[up] As I said we're not given a concrete number of how many Vaen there are, but 6 seems to be based on the 3 inside Lenne who sacrifice themselves to save her after she dies at one point and she apparently vital to killing the Harbinger while the other 3 are the genocidal ones I've proposed who have no problem trying to kill Lenne along with everyone else.

Also Frederik is revealed right at the end to have been doing all these atrocities in a Zero-Approval Gambit to secure a "true peace" and then stabs himself, and as he's dying he says to Lenne that while he could handle making everyone hate him, making her hate him was the worst part.

Edited by Agentofchaos on Feb 17th 2023 at 8:45:41 AM

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#4927: Feb 17th 2023 at 4:39:49 AM

Huh, if there are good Vaen, that makes those 3 even clearer keepers.

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HighfalutinQuelea Since: Sep, 2016
#4929: Feb 17th 2023 at 6:40:48 AM

  • Infamous Chinese Emperors:
    • Empress Jiang is the conniving, power-hungry wife of Sima Zhong. As a concubine, Jiang fatally poisoned Sima Zhong's infant children, stopping only to prevent an investigation into the deaths, resulting in the birth of Sima Yu. Later marrying Sima Zhong and becoming his Empress, Jiang grows dissatisfied with him and has her subordinates kidnap men off the streets and force them to have sex with her. Seeing Sima Yu as a threat, she tricks him into drunkenly copying a threat to Sima Zhong, resulting in Sima Yu being imprisoned. Empress Jiang then has him poisoned in his jail cell, presenting poisoned wine to him as a gift from his father.

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#4930: Feb 17th 2023 at 6:42:03 AM

It's too early for that write up to go up, the pending page says the voting period is over on the 19th

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#4931: Feb 17th 2023 at 6:48:11 AM

Yeah, that's why I removed it from the Drafts.

When it does go up though, where in the tree should it go?

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#4932: Feb 17th 2023 at 7:26:56 AM

So I first posted my CM entry on the GHWEH post, but since I haven't gotten any response there yet and my Nigel Malloy is now in pending write-ups I'll just post his entry here now.

  • Castle: "Scared To Death": Nigel Malloy, the Grim Reaper, tortured numerous women to death by branding them. Malloy lets a mentally unstable man, David Collier, take the fall for his first murder, resulting in David killing himself, while Malloy goes on to torture and kill five more women, manipulating his mentally ill brother, Leopold, into helping him commit these heinous crimes. When Malloy is found and arrested, Malloy declares that more people will die after he’s been executed, which proves to be true when David’s daughter, Amanda, kills two people as a result of Malloy’s actions.

Malloy would go between Dunn and Carol

Edited by G-Editor on Feb 17th 2023 at 10:27:51 AM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#4933: Feb 17th 2023 at 9:36:25 AM

Well, while Lighty is checking out the King, I have my own Anime continuity horror.

What is the work?

GARO: Crimson Moon is second series in Garo Anime continuity. Set in Heian-era Faudal Japan, it follows golden knight Raikou and his companions Kintoki and Seimei, as they protect the capital from the Horrors. But evil Ashiya Douman thretens peace. It all comes to his and his master’s scheme.

Who is Rudra? What has it done?

Ancient Horror who long ago brought the catastrophe upon the world. Rudra was sealed away in the moon by the Abe family with help of living Mato tool Kaguya.

Thanks to scheming of the Douma Hoshi, Seimei is made the vessel for the Rudra. Allied with Douman after he betrays Douma, Rudra causes chaos and death across the capital, empowering the Horrors and causing destructive Lightning, all to gather the strength to completely Break its seal.

Thought Seimei is succesufully freed it is too late. Rudra, with help of Ashiya Douman is free at last. Sending Horrors on the capital, intent on razing the world. Thanks to combination of Kaguya’s powers and Raikou centuring inside Rudra and facing Douman, Rudra is banished once more and world is saved.

Mitigating factors?

So, Horrors are one of straightest examples of Made of Evil in modern fiction. That said, as stated in this continuity Zaruba is Horror who made a contract with Garo, helping him fight the Horrors and being his constant companion in return for day of the knight’s life on each new moon. I think it is enough of argument for agency.

We get to a good grasp on Rudra’s personallity while possesing Seimei, a sadistic and pridefull one.

Heinous standard?

Garo Anime continuity has the High standard.

One who count are:

  • Mendoza- who caused horrors to plague Valiantis and leads witch hunt against makai people, leading to Valiantis attacking other nations to spread the hunt and using souls of Knights and Priests to summon ancient horror and rule the world.
  • Douma Hoshi- who sexualy abused young Seimei and masterminded release of Rudra, spreading Horrors across the capital to acomplish it.
  • Michinaga- who uses hisinfluence to let the Horrors run as long as they attack mostly commoners.
  • Queen, Knight and Stanley- Who assist in King’s plan to turn humanity into a digitalized food.

Rudra causes Catasprophe across the world and when brought back intents on swalowing the world in darkness. King has more deeds under him, but he has modern technology and powefull company on his employ, plus eons being free to plot and plan, while Rudra was imprisoned for most of its existence.

Conclusion.

Gonna go with [tup].

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#4934: Feb 17th 2023 at 9:49:47 AM

My sole issue: does Rudra have any characterization or is he just a generic giant monster? I can’t recall

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#4935: Feb 17th 2023 at 9:51:32 AM

While possesing Seimei, Rudra was shown to be sadictic and constantly mocks Raikou for his seemingly weakness. It is not much, but it is just enought of personallity.

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#4936: Feb 17th 2023 at 11:11:42 AM

I'll say sure to Rudra

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#4938: Feb 17th 2023 at 11:18:52 AM

Leaning yes on Rudra, but I wanna know about the Zaruba not being Made of Evil.

Edited by ACW on Feb 17th 2023 at 2:19:05 PM

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#4940: Feb 17th 2023 at 11:21:00 AM

If in this continuity, Zaruba is an ancient horror who wants to protect humanity, that's agency right there

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#4941: Feb 17th 2023 at 11:33:18 AM

  • Danganronpa: Junko Enoshima, the Ultimate Fashionista/Ultimate Despair, is a young, chaotic psychopath obsessed with making everybody, even herself, feel despair. Corrupting and tormenting the students of Hope’s Peak Academy’s Class 77 to assist her in her plans, Junko was able to use them to launch countless wars, disasters, and terrorist attacks, with millions dying in the process. Seeking to further drench the world in despair, Junko wipes the memories of the Hope’s Peak survivors to force them all to kill each other to escape while being broadcasted worldwide, even killing her own "boring" sister Mukuro to enjoy the despair of losing a loved one. Forced to live out of punishment, Junko installs an AI built from her consciousness into the Neo-World Program, forcing the recovering Class 77 students into another killing game to corrupt them all into becoming her copies to rule the world alongside her.
  • Danganronpa: Trigger Happy Havoc IF: Junko Enoshima, in this What If? scenario, is the same despair-adoring psychopath and abusive younger sister of Mukuro Ikusaba who conditioned her into admiring despair. Having kickstarted "The Tragedy" with Mukuro, resulting in tons of destruction and riots, Junko wipes the memories of her friends at Hope’s Peak Academy to have them all kill each other. Lying to Mukuro that she’ll survive the killing game, after her attempt to kill her fails, Junko tries to pin her and the injured Makoto Naegi as the masterminds behind the game. When Mukuro turns against her, Junko promises to reset the game and have an amnesiac Mukuro compete as herself to make her and everyone else suffer, later presenting the students with an impossible deadly challenge to win their freedom, knowing they will most likely fail and fall into despair.

"No running in the halls!"
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#4942: Feb 17th 2023 at 11:49:20 AM

[tup]Zaruba. Naruda

Edited by miraculous on Feb 17th 2023 at 12:40:08 PM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#4943: Feb 17th 2023 at 12:10:48 PM

[up][up] Actually this makes me curious, how many Danganronpa does this make?

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#4944: Feb 17th 2023 at 12:11:44 PM

5.

2 in visual novels, 1 In stage, 1 in literature and 2 in anime .manga

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#4945: Feb 17th 2023 at 12:14:42 PM

That's 6 dude.

And honestly, if we get a 7th, I'd not be opposed to a page if only because the franchise is spread out through AniManga, Visual Novels, and now Lit + Theatre. There may also be a video game one somewhere we haven't put up.

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Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#4947: Feb 17th 2023 at 12:31:20 PM

Zaruda is the good Horror, we’re voting on Rudra.

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#4948: Feb 17th 2023 at 12:41:17 PM

Right my bad. Fixed that.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#4949: Feb 17th 2023 at 12:43:59 PM

Any thoughts on The Vaen and Daimbert? Only a couple of people voted on them

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#4950: Feb 17th 2023 at 12:45:51 PM

[tup]Daimbert and the Vaen trio

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."

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