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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#41326: Apr 9th 2024 at 7:56:18 PM

Assuming the virtual reality Cizin is just a recreation and not the real thing, I don’t think we can attribute its actions to the real Cizin. What actions do the real Cizin brothers do, and how much are they shown on-screen?

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
Godwriter King of the Koopas from Maryland Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
King of the Koopas
#41327: Apr 9th 2024 at 8:44:55 PM

In the Spider Man Chronicles Fanfiction trilogy by Megamatt 09 I think there are two Venom Symbiotes is that true? because I’m planning to propose the First Version of Venom from the First Volume along with several other candidates from that same volume.

Edited by Godwriter on Apr 9th 2024 at 8:47:06 AM

The Ultimate Incarnation of Evil
Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#41328: Apr 9th 2024 at 8:53:43 PM

[up][up] We're only shown Cizin in the VR simulation—which is based on Ekchuah's memories of the real deal.

As for what happened to the real Hunhau & Uacmitun Ahau... Ekchuah has no idea. When Eric asks, Ekchuah states that after Draco Azul got its shiny metal ass kicked by K'uk'ulkan/Quetzalcoatl, he retired from fighting gods and monsters and left humanity to its own devices for 800 years until Draco Azul was reactivated by Eric Martinez. Now the old gods have mysteriously disappeared, and he's not sure if the current crop of entities worshipped by human are the same sort of beings.

Edited by Arawn999 on Apr 9th 2024 at 8:55:28 AM

AmateurStorytime Just a starting content creator from Home Since: Mar, 2024
Just a starting content creator
#41329: Apr 9th 2024 at 9:04:01 PM

Hey, guys. Just checking if we're currently discussing Dragon's Dogma II. I'm trying to avoid spoilers, but I also want to take part in current discussions if we aren't.

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Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
Shadao To be a Master Since: Jan, 2013 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
To be a Master
#41331: Apr 9th 2024 at 9:38:12 PM

[tup] to Rommel the Bastard. I do wonder if we have any actual Magnificent Bastard Rommel though...

TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#41332: Apr 9th 2024 at 9:41:10 PM

I think a [tup] for Cizin and Varukan.

[up][up][up] It doesn't appear to have been reserved, so...

AmateurStorytime Just a starting content creator from Home Since: Mar, 2024
Just a starting content creator
#41333: Apr 9th 2024 at 9:42:33 PM

Okay, got it. Apologies, I'm just afraid of being spoiled. Give me a moment to catch up on recent discussions.

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Klavice I Need a Freaking Drink from A bar at the edge of time (Don’t ask) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#41334: Apr 9th 2024 at 10:33:55 PM

Sorry I'm late to the party, but after careful examination and thorough reading of the effortpost, and Ravok's arguments against him trying to be as impartial as I could I think I can safely switch my [tup] from Wonka to a [tdown]. It took a lot of my time, and suffice to say I hate to do this when the voting period has passed, but I don't want us listing a Reformed Monster, as bad as the war crimes are so long as the film still happens which, according to Ravok, it does I can't give a yes. No to King Koopa, don't think he's played seriously enough even in the manga and it sounds like a Baleful Polymorph if that's still a trope.

Fair warning: I can get pretty emotional and take things too seriously.
Fireball246 Since: Jan, 2023
#41335: Apr 9th 2024 at 11:20:55 PM

[tup] Ivo, Erwin, Catherine, Varukan, Cizin

[tdown] Koopa, Satan, and Golden Freddy

Edited by Fireball246 on Apr 9th 2024 at 11:47:04 AM

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#41336: Apr 9th 2024 at 11:42:22 PM

Yes to Rommel

[up] No one was "jumping down" anyone's throat, people were pointing out that Godwriter's comment came across as a factual statement that "Bowser will count in the sequel" and how that was very, very unlikely—which it is. Ngl dude, with your...history revolving around the character and this iteration in particular, it's kind of not helping matters either here or in your personal case when you jump in with a Wall of Text complaining about people (rightfully) pointing out that Illumination!Bowser has a less-than-zero chance of ever counting for this trope, when it's been made abundantly clear in the past that your nigh-obsession with how "evil" Bowser is is a problem that needs to be kept out of the forums.

Well, the above was blanked without explanation so I'll just be striking my comment for now.

Edited by Ravok on Apr 9th 2024 at 11:53:25 AM

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
Fireball246 Since: Jan, 2023
#41337: Apr 9th 2024 at 11:56:56 PM

Ignore this. Sorry.

Edited by Fireball246 on Apr 10th 2024 at 12:01:03 PM

Klavice I Need a Freaking Drink from A bar at the edge of time (Don’t ask) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#41338: Apr 10th 2024 at 12:07:56 AM

Yes to Rommel too.

Fair warning: I can get pretty emotional and take things too seriously.
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
TheGrayFox ...Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
...Phenomenal
#41340: Apr 10th 2024 at 12:58:43 AM

[tup] for Rommel, Varukan, and Cizin.

[tdown] for Koopa and Freddy.

Abstain on Catherine.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#41341: Apr 10th 2024 at 1:06:31 AM

[tup]rommel, verukan

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Starkrafty pronounced 'Scraggle' (Pentatroper)
pronounced 'Scraggle'
#41344: Apr 10th 2024 at 7:01:11 AM

Got a quick trio from Gwendolyn Kiste's short horror story "All The Ways to Hollow Out a Girl."

What have the boys done?

  • An unnamed trio of nasty sadistic youths who haven't even entered the ninth grade yet, the boys have been spending their summer break tormenting our viewpoint character, Nyssa, a timid girl around the same age as them. The torment escalates to an Accidental Murder where they accidentally push Nyssa onto a hard rock and break her skull open...only for her to come back to life just a few minutes later.
  • The boys' initial shock at this quickly turns to opportunistic glee as they realize A. Nyssa is too timid to fight back against them and B. every time she comes back to life, her wounds disappear—and thus any evidence of their crimes. So they decide to start their summer break killing Nyssa. Over. And over. And over. And over. They beat her, drown her—by about the fifth or so time they murder her, they've escalated to burning her alive. All this they treat like a cruel game, asking her what death is like every time she comes back.
  • Eventually, Nyssa learns from her mother that her Resurrective Immortality originated all the way back from when she was a toddler. After her abusive dad beat her to death, she came back to life and Nyssa's mom killed the dad in revenge and disposed of hiS body in the nearby lake. Nyssa uses this information to her advantage, convincing the boys that she fears drowning more than anything. This gives the boys a sinister idea...they row her out to the lake with plans to chain her to the bottom of the lake, so she can drown, come back to life, drown again, come back to life, and so on for the rest of the summer. They promise that won't even be the end of it, either, and that they'll fish her back up when they want to continue tormenting.
  • Unfortunately for the boys, the boys can't swim well....and the boat they're on is flimsy and decayed. One kick destroys it. Nyssa sinks and brings the boys down with her. She resurfaces. They don't.
Any mitigating factors?
  • Nothing. The story never presents them as anything but two-dimensional sadists who need killing.
Heinous standard?
  • These guys take Kids Are Cruel as far as it can go. For one victim—albeit one they can kill over and over—they do everything within their resources and short page time to be as over-the-too sadistic as possible.

Watch for the sign of the Saint — he will be back!
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#41346: Apr 10th 2024 at 7:15:31 AM

[tup] to The Boys

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SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#41348: Apr 10th 2024 at 7:21:59 AM

[tup] The Boys. Geeze.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
Evanpotter09 Since: Sep, 2023 Relationship Status: It was only a kiss
#41349: Apr 10th 2024 at 7:30:29 AM

[tup] to the boys.

Edited by Evanpotter09 on Apr 10th 2024 at 3:30:48 PM

What, like it's hard?
Purgatoryisof2 Man in the Yellow Hat Since: Aug, 2022
Man in the Yellow Hat
#41350: Apr 10th 2024 at 7:31:25 AM

[tup] to the Boys trio.

He/Him

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