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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#36951: Feb 9th 2024 at 2:59:22 AM

Yeah, I'm probably not the best person to ask as I have always thought Yung does kinda have the unique cruelty to count, but the argument back in the day to cut him was simply that he wasn't bad enough since villains like Faba also experiment on Pokemon, yet Faba redeems himself. Yung's kinda unique in that he is creating Pokemon just to abuse and discard them at will, but it was decided to not be quite enough.

Edited by Ravok on Feb 9th 2024 at 2:59:53 AM

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
#36952: Feb 9th 2024 at 3:36:19 AM

[tup] Ein, Novelization!Masked Marauder and Yoshiyuki

In honor of Akira Toriyama
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#36953: Feb 9th 2024 at 4:10:23 AM

Wouldn't there be hundreds if not thousands of Pokemon in the forest? Even IF J tries to kill that many, still seems rare enough that Marauder could still count?

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#36954: Feb 9th 2024 at 4:26:57 AM

Uh I mean Alva beats him if we're being honest. Since he tries blowing up a city and has a way, way more painful brain washing method.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#36956: Feb 9th 2024 at 4:31:38 AM

I wouldn't mind a re evulation of Yung though if theirs new arguments to make

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
RobertTYL Since: Oct, 2019 Relationship Status: Holding out for a hero
#36957: Feb 9th 2024 at 4:47:24 AM

[tup] Hordak, Daddy, Gwi-Nam, Manhua Tarkin, Demon from Ruin, Ein, Marauder, Yoshiyuki and Yoshikuni

TheMadCr0w Gentle Laborer from Insignificant Little Blue Planet Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: Get out of here, STALKER
Gentle Laborer
#36958: Feb 9th 2024 at 6:55:26 AM

[tup] IMM and Yoshiyuki

[tdown] Yoshikuni

Libraryseraph Showtime! from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Showtime!
#36959: Feb 9th 2024 at 8:16:24 AM

[tup] to marauder and Yoshiyuki

Abstain on Yoshikuni, he attempts to rape the protag in addition to the animal abuse but he might still be outheinoused by his dad

Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?
MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#36960: Feb 9th 2024 at 9:23:44 AM

[tup] Pokemon candidates and Yoshiyuki. I also think Yung might be worth a re-eval.

Edited by MasterN on Feb 9th 2024 at 9:29:58 AM

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
Godwriter King of the Koopas from Maryland Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
King of the Koopas
#36961: Feb 9th 2024 at 9:47:06 AM

Has anyone done an effortpost for Jason Kruger myers total drama fanfiction total alternate island?

The Ultimate Incarnation of Evil
SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#36962: Feb 9th 2024 at 10:08:25 AM

Sounds to me like Yung’s essentially the Anime’s version of Ein? Is that correct?

I’m plotting my schemes wherever I go! They’re perfect in every way…
MasterJoseph Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object from Not telling. Since: Mar, 2018
Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object
#36963: Feb 9th 2024 at 10:25:05 AM

I did find this on the work page for the Mirage Master special which was aired in the USA in April 2006, several months before the Diamond and Pearl anime, but I still am keeping crossed fingers.

  • Loose Canon: It's unclear whether the special is canon to the main anime or not. It was made by a different studio than the main series, debuted in the United States before Japan, and featured some discrepancies, such as Pikachu knowing Volt Tackle when he hadn't learned that attack yet in the dub of the main series (although this may simply mean that it takes place sometime after he learned it), Professor Oak having a Dragonite (which has never appeared outside of the special), and Misty's involvement despite it being said previously that her Gym Leader duties kept her from traveling note . Furthermore, the events of the special have never been referenced in the main anime, despite the seeming Sequel Hook endingnote .

IPP Wick Check created.
Ghal-Sur Since: Jan, 2023
#36964: Feb 9th 2024 at 10:26:47 AM

[tup]Yoshiyuki.

Edited by Ghal-Sur on Feb 9th 2024 at 10:28:33 AM

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#36965: Feb 9th 2024 at 10:29:12 AM

Reserving Roadhouse 2024, looks stupid so I'm in lmao. Welcome to any collabs!

Edited by WetFlannels on Feb 9th 2024 at 6:29:26 PM

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#36966: Feb 9th 2024 at 10:44:07 AM

[tup] for Iron-Masked Maurauder and Yoshiyuki.

Abstain on Yoshiyuni.

Am not opposed to a reproposal of Yung.

[up][up][up][up][up] Don't believe so.

Edited by TurlesTheVegan on Feb 9th 2024 at 1:44:21 PM

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#36967: Feb 9th 2024 at 11:15:15 AM

Yes to Ein, the Iron Masked Marauder and Yoshiyuki. Not sure on Yoshiyuni.

  • James Ellroy works:
    • Clandestine: William "Doc" Harris is a charming, clever criminal convinced of his superiority. Wooing Marcella to marry her, Doc corrupts her brother Johnny and two other men into absolute devotion to him, having them perform oral sex on him to demonstrate his dominance. Stealing tons of military morphine, Doc uses it to perform abortions of "inferior" children. Out of misogyny, Doc also kills any women not referred to him by men, with "lots and lots" buried in unmarked graves after he does the deed, and later makes one underling take the fall by threatening to expose his homosexuality. When his own child is stillborn, Doc has Johnny give up his own son to raise as Doc's "moral heir" and attempts to corrupt the boy by preaching his elitist philosophy, and personally kills Johnny and Marcella.
    • The L.A. Quartet & The Second L.A. Quartet:
      • [Entries]

I know there's no page ACW so I'll say Control Freak is probably best for his name, other potholes that work (pick your favs) would be Faux Affably Evil, Smug Snake, The Corruptor, Serial Killer, He-Man Woman Hater and Übermensch.

SatoshiBakura (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#36968: Feb 9th 2024 at 11:18:12 AM

Not downvoting Ein, but I would like to point out that Shadow Pokémon from Colosseum/XD and Shadow Pokémon from Go are kind of supposed to be different in the Japanese versions, with the various localized versions making them effectively the same. Not sure how that would effect Ein's chances of counting, but I think we should keep this in mind.

[tup] to Iron Mask though.

Edited by SatoshiBakura on Feb 9th 2024 at 2:31:09 PM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#36969: Feb 9th 2024 at 11:18:26 AM

If we want, we could cheat a little and create an LA Quartet page, and add Doc there?

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43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#36970: Feb 9th 2024 at 11:24:40 AM

Technically we have enough for a James Ellroy page... in addition to the four book villains he's got two from the White Jazz script he wrote and a film villain Ravok got, Dark Blue.

Ghal-Sur Since: Jan, 2023
#36971: Feb 9th 2024 at 11:35:05 AM

What do we think of the shortened Paladin quote?

Jeremy: Tell me, why don't you want to return the seal to its rightful place?
The First Paladin: RETURN the seal? I WILL DESTROY her and unleash a Flood that Noah never dreamed of!
Jeremy: But why, paladin? You will kill millions of people!
Paladin: And will return the survivors to the fold of the church. People have lost faith. Then instill the fear of God in their souls!
Jeremy: Rome is ready to sacrifice the lives of thousands - no, millions? In order to revive faith in people? This is madness!
Paladin: There is no faith without sacrifice. You are a vampire. You can't understand.
—>— Video Game/Blood Knights

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
jlvs200s Jogo from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
Luisdalas Since: Sep, 2023
#36974: Feb 9th 2024 at 11:58:14 AM

I forgot that the Masters of Universe discussion was yesterday, but a late one [tup] for Hordak. (Perhaps this will change if he is overshadowed by his boss, or shows affection for Despera)

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#36975: Feb 9th 2024 at 12:04:30 PM

Only question is if the film is in the same universe, like Stephen King's works or Matthew Reilly's.

Also, please no more writeups for the next 1-2 hours. I'm gonna be clearing out the Drafts.

Edited by ACW on Feb 9th 2024 at 3:04:51 PM

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