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WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition (Troper Knight)
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#2576: Nov 10th 2019 at 4:07:46 PM

[up] No it doesn't. If the description doesn't say it includes both variants, it doesn't include both variants, and this is not where we change the scope of a draft.

Trope descriptions shouldn't be based on their examples, since examples can very easily just be shoehorns. Otherwise, Drink Order would mean Trademark Favorite Drink, Lightswitch Surprise would be someone flipping on the light to see something shocking, stock phrase tropes would literally just be about the phrase itself, etc.

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#2577: Nov 10th 2019 at 6:26:35 PM

[up] In practice, it's easier to adapt the description to the examples rather than the other way around.

And I was asking here to ask for consensus, but in retrospect, it's hard to get consensus here...

Edited by 4tell0life4 on Nov 10th 2019 at 6:31:46 AM

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WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition (Troper Knight)
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#2578: Nov 10th 2019 at 6:32:40 PM

[up] Easier doesn't always mean better...

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#2579: Nov 10th 2019 at 6:44:48 PM

Okay, scratch that. I have a new question:

A good number of And I Must Scream examples (I've done a few wick checks, but it's some time ago) are just about "you're awake, but you can't move your body or do anything" while the description talks as if it's a state of being such for eternity (or at least very long).

What should we do?

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#2580: Nov 12th 2019 at 9:09:28 AM

Sorry to insist, but regarding my proposal for improving the description of Fork Fencing, am I good to go? Can I just put my proposed description there?

Edited by gc10 on Nov 12th 2019 at 6:09:47 PM

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#2581: Nov 12th 2019 at 9:13:18 AM

[up]Other than the pothole to Squick (IMO, YMMV potholes will invite YMMV in the examples as well), it looks good to go.

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#2582: Nov 12th 2019 at 11:00:32 PM

And All I Got Was This Lousy T-Shirt has a very bare bones description that fails to differentiate it from And Your Reward Is Clothes. It seems that the content is an attempt to self-demonstrate the joke in question, but doesn't really explain what the trope is about.

Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2583: Nov 13th 2019 at 1:53:16 AM

[up] - It seems to be relying on its Truth in Television nature to do all the explaining, yeah.

Maybe raid the Real Life folder for more information, if it's there?

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#2584: Nov 13th 2019 at 10:39:10 AM

Real life folder raided. How's that?

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#2587: Nov 18th 2019 at 11:06:14 AM

Number 2 on Department of Child Disservices says:

Child Services is completely incompetent at actually keeping children out of neglectful or abusive foster homes. No matter how horrific the foster home or adoptive family, once children are placed there, they're on their own.
Why just foster and adoptive parents and not abusive and neglectful birth families?

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#2588: Nov 18th 2019 at 2:18:37 PM

[up] I approve changing it.

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SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
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#2590: Nov 19th 2019 at 3:06:32 PM

The current description for Relative Button is as follows.

A long time ago, the Big Bad Bob brutally murdered Alice's family while she was away at school. Now, Alice has finally found him.

A brutal fight ensues, and then he says the following:

"You remind me of your mother. Now there was a woman with some spirit in her. A total whore, though. What fun I had with her before the end..."

Alice is incensed, and it gives her the Heroic Second Wind she needed to beat Bob to a pulp. That said, heroes should beware, as villains often use this as a means of provoking heroes into making a crucial mistake, such as getting a hero to leave their hiding spot in order to attack the villain, only to find that doing so exposed them to a whole bunch of mooks the villain brought along who actually know how to shoot, since they weren't trained at the Stormtrooper Academy.

See also Mama Bear, Papa Wolf, You Killed My Father, Would You Like to Hear How They Died?, Post-Rape Taunt, and Reminiscing About Your Victims. If this is invoked in a villain rather than by a villain, it usually overlaps with Even Evil Has Loved Ones and Even Bad Men Love Their Mamas. A subtrope of Evil Gloating.

However, I feel like the trope should also apply whenever someone mocks another for losing a loved one.

For example, in a screenplay I just wrote, an unpleasant co-worker mocks one of the main characters by telling him to "cry to [his] dead mother". This coworker is never even remotely implied to have anything to do with the death of the boy's mom. Likewise, in Gotham, Tommy Elliot mocks Bruce Wayne for being an orphan.

Therefore, I suggest we rewrite the trope description to allow for examples where people mock others for losing family members, even if the speaker had nothing to do with their deaths.

Rawr.
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#2591: Nov 19th 2019 at 3:09:41 PM

[up] I approve that.

The Example as a Thesis has to go as well, it evidently confused you.

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#2592: Nov 19th 2019 at 3:10:31 PM

About indexing: if a trope fits more in a sub index, it has to be taken off the super index, right?

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SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
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#2593: Nov 19th 2019 at 4:57:34 PM

How is this for a description?

One surefire way to get the audience to side against a character is to have that character mock another for losing a loved one, especially a parent, sibling, or child.

This can take multiple forms; be it a villain taunting their enemy about how they killed the latter's family member; a bully making fun of a classmate for being an orphan; an abusive peer telling someone to cry to their dead mother; or a rude detractor insulting the deceased.

Compare the following: Your Mom, for when someone insults another's living parents; Would You Like to Hear How They Died? which is when someone rubs a murder they committed in the grieving person's face; Reminiscing About Your Victims, when villains fondly remember the atrocities they have committed; and I Shall Taunt You, for when tropes such as this one are used to provoke one's opponent into making a mistake.

Edit: I am unfamiliar with the basics of this trope, I am not trying to redefine it so much as allow for some flexibility.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Nov 19th 2019 at 9:12:28 AM

Rawr.
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#2594: Nov 19th 2019 at 5:42:47 PM

[up] wait, it's not about "making an audience side against a character" (although the trope can ne used for that purpose). It is about "someone making another character angry by negatively remarking about/insulting their relative".

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WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition (Troper Knight)
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#2595: Nov 19th 2019 at 5:50:45 PM

Y'all realize you can't just use this thread to change the meaning of a trope, right?

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SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
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#2596: Nov 19th 2019 at 5:57:01 PM

Ok. Someone help me with the trope description? I'm not used to this.

[down] Ok. What do you think? Does my example fit?

Edited by SkyCat32 on Nov 19th 2019 at 9:13:16 AM

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WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition (Troper Knight)
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#2597: Nov 19th 2019 at 5:57:34 PM

Get consensus on this first, and then try and fix it. One person agreeing with you is not consensus.

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SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
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#2598: Nov 19th 2019 at 6:12:59 PM

How much consensus do I need? I mean, how many tropers need to weigh in?

Edited by SkyCat32 on Nov 19th 2019 at 9:15:16 AM

Rawr.
WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition (Troper Knight)
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#2599: Nov 19th 2019 at 6:13:38 PM

Quite a bit, considering you're attempting to expand the meaning of a trope.

Take it to Trope Talk and hash it out with people.

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