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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#187626: Oct 17th 2019 at 4:33:04 AM

I found this on Beyond Eden

  • Complete Monster: Baron William Edenic. He abused his own sons to the point of breaking Joshua's leg so badly he could never ride again, neglected Alex's sister Beth even after she had borne him a son, indulged in hunting out of a love for blood and caused injuries to his tenants, wounded guests of the household, and showed apparently no remorse for any of it up until his fury at discovering her infidelity drove Beth to commit suicide out of fear, forcing the Baron to realize that he had actually loved her. Even though William regretted that ever after, the change in his personality only extended to his becoming a doting father to Jeremy; he still cared no more for any of his other sons, and especially continued to neglect and mistreat Joshua.
    • Even more so, Josephine Edenic. Unlike the Baron, she lacks almost any redeeming quality. At one point, she crosses the Moral Event Horizon when she tries to kill her own adoptive son with poison, who is an innocent, loving child on top of that.

Yeah William reminds me of those old shity entries where an entry would outright confess that a cm had redeeming qualities but we're added since the trooper didn't like them

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#187627: Oct 17th 2019 at 4:36:50 AM

Why has it not been cut yet?

[down]Oh, ok.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Oct 17th 2019 at 7:47:52 AM

Feels good, don't it?
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#187628: Oct 17th 2019 at 4:38:05 AM

Oh no I said it reminds me of those entries. It was actually added this year in June

I cut it now.

Edited by miraculous on Oct 17th 2019 at 4:39:39 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#187629: Oct 17th 2019 at 5:51:53 AM

I'll give a yes to Blofeld. Out of curiosity, where's part 2 of the trilogy?

Yes to the 300 duo.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#187630: Oct 17th 2019 at 6:26:45 AM

[tup] Blofeld, Xerxes and Hydarnes

Tweaking Bathsheba.

Original:

  • The Conjuring:Bathsheba is a truly vile ghost. While most ghosts are benevolent, or simply sad beings, Bathsheba is a sadistic Satanist who, having tried and failed to sacrifice her own newborn son before her suicide, shows her devotion to Satan by possessing mothers to murder their own children before forcing their own suicides. Bathsheba torments the most recent family to inhabit her lands until the paranormal Investigators Ed and Lorraine Warren arrive. When Bathsheba's attempts to drive them off fail, she heads to their house and frees Annabelle, a demon trapped in a doll, so the two can murder the Warrens's young daughter. When she succeeds in distracting them, Bathsheba possesses the original family's mother to try to murder her own children and tries to drag the mother to death with her while being exorcised.

New:

  • The Conjuring: Bathsheba Sherman is a sadistic Satanist who, having tried and failed to sacrifice her own newborn son before her suicide, shows her devotion to Satan by possessing mothers to murder their own children before forcing their own suicides. Bathsheba torments the most recent family to inhabit her lands until the paranormal investigators Ed and Lorraine Warren arrive. When Bathsheba's attempts to drive them off fail, she heads to their house and frees Annabelle, a demon trapped in a doll, so the two can murder the Warrens's young daughter. When she succeeds in distracting them, Bathsheba possesses the original family's mother to try to murder her own children and tries to drag the mother to death with her while being exorcised.

I removed some Word Cruft, added her last name and fixed a couple grammar issues.

MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#187631: Oct 17th 2019 at 6:39:20 AM

Maybe we should, on the main page, put Important Note in all caps to make it more noticeable? And put Will Be Deleted in bold as well?

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#187633: Oct 17th 2019 at 6:52:32 AM

[up][up][up] Her last name is Sherman??? That makes me [lol] for some reason.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
KingofNightmares Since: Sep, 2016 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#187634: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:00:53 AM

[tup] Havik, Blofield, Xerxes and Hydames

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#187635: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:02:38 AM

[tup]Havik, Blofeld and 300 duo

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
AlmightyKingPrawn I can chase the wind, I can race the rain from Down at Fraggle Rock *clap clap* Since: Oct, 2019 Relationship Status: I love you for psychological reasons
I can chase the wind, I can race the rain
#187636: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:03:53 AM

Sorry it's been a while. I forgot my password and my linked email was an old deleted account, so I had to make a new one. [tup] Tate, Faust, Xana, 300 guys [tdown] D-stroy

She/her. Profile pic is by Richard Michael Gomez @StarmansArt. Please watch Fraggle Rock: Back to the Rock. https://youtu.be/Vm92JNgPbqk
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#187637: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:09:11 AM

Ok, I feel like people are starting to miss my candidates due to the fact that the effortposts were folderized. You can find the effortposts here if you wish to weigh in and have not already.

Thanks.

[down] Yes, you already voted.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Oct 17th 2019 at 10:38:29 AM

Feels good, don't it?
ElfenLiedFan90 Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression) from Jakarta,Indonesia Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression)
#187638: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:15:17 AM

I feel like that I have voted for the human trafficking duo. I'll give a yes again in case if I miss something.

Anyways, for my writeups? I guess they come tomorrow once I finished my mid-term tests

"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
dragonfire5000 from Where gods fear to tread Since: Jan, 2001
#187640: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:30:43 AM

After some thought, I'm going to give a [tdown] to Kamiya. That bit with his maybe-girlfriend just proves way too iffy; his interactions with her ghost just screams "not as bad as he could be," making him a vile person but not someone that crosses that line into complete monsterhood.

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#187641: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:33:00 AM

Anymore votes on Faust ?

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ElfenLiedFan90 Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression) from Jakarta,Indonesia Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression)
#187642: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:36:08 AM

Yea... For Kamiya, I'm abstaining but leaning no. The moment with Sayaka feels like a genuine love for me. Even if he seems abandoned it, its still there. Even if Kamiya didn't get up, you did a great job at E Ping him Cr0w!

[up] already give my vote so don't worry... Perhaps I should add more due to his disgusting MO cool[tup][tup]

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Oct 17th 2019 at 7:38:13 AM

"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."
GeorgieEnkoom Emperor Georgie Artémis Enkoom Evulz II from Somewhere. Since: Feb, 2017 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
Emperor Georgie Artémis Enkoom Evulz II
Keshali Since: Jul, 2019
#187644: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:38:20 AM

[tup] Xerxes, Hydra and Blomberg

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#187645: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:40:08 AM

[up] You mean Blofeld?

Edited by SkyCat32 on Oct 17th 2019 at 10:50:05 AM

Feels good, don't it?
TheMadCr0w Gentle Laborer from Insignificant Little Blue Planet Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: Get out of here, STALKER
Gentle Laborer
#187646: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:44:42 AM

@Elfen I appreciate the compliment!

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#187647: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:48:54 AM

In any case, it looks like Henessey has 8[tup] and Oliver has 6[tup], so I'm not sure if I should post my writeups yet.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Oct 17th 2019 at 10:49:26 AM

Feels good, don't it?
KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Shin Megami Tensei IV
#187648: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:50:49 AM

[tup] Ernest Stravo Blofeld

[tup] Xerxes

[tup] Havik

[tup] Cobra Commander.

Sorry for not being here on several days

Edited by KazuyaProta on Oct 17th 2019 at 9:52:31 AM

Watch me destroying my country
TheMadCr0w Gentle Laborer from Insignificant Little Blue Planet Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: Get out of here, STALKER
Gentle Laborer
#187649: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:52:54 AM

[up] Oh hi Kaz, I proposed YHVH and a guy from the Imperial Army, check it out. IIRC you are interested in those topics.

[tup] Havik, Bond's Arch-Enemy, Xerxes and Hydarnes.

Edited by TheMadCr0w on Oct 17th 2019 at 11:58:45 AM

CloisterTheStupid from Oop North Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
#187650: Oct 17th 2019 at 7:57:54 AM

[tup] to Havik, Blofeld, Xerxes and Hydarnes.


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