Subpages cleanup: Complete Monster

Lemme shut that down right now: Astrid is in no way, shape or form, even at her worst, in the same universe as the CM trope.

MB, that's another story.

Possibly would be interesting if she ended up getting E Pd as a Magnificent Bastard. (Talking about Astrid btw). And can't wait to see if Jackie can EP the Big Bad

Also, an update regarding Kekkaishi heinous standard. Important for future monsters to come:

There's a psycho bitch who guarded the prison in Guillotine Island named Saigo Enjouji and then there's another guard of the prison, Yashiro. Both of them I guess... don't reach the heinous mark of the series. Saigo... Is an interesting person, as despite putting a friendly facade as a receptionist of Guillotine Island, when she's on the Island Manhunt mode, she become much crazier and tries at her best to decapitate the head of some prisoner and anyone who defies her will be beheaded for sure (But luckily, it was just a threat) and she has an obsession to kill any women who are younger than her to slake her inferiority complex and it's implied she had done it in the past. Fortunately, it was offscreen and Saigo's murder isn't as brutal as say, Kagurou or Mudou and when the prisoners are get in her way, iirc she was just knock them out and doesn't go into excessively brutal murder so yeah...

Also, for Yashiro, well, she attempts to brainwash the hero, Tokine and threatens Tokine that everyone in the prison would be killed if she didn't surrender. However, Yashiro ultimately isn't heinous enough and it was revealed that she was brainwashed behind the scenes by a sinister figure so yeah...

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Dec 12th 2018 at 10:35:49 PM

Abaddon.

Thanks for answering my question on the MB thread by the way, Lighty. We have a lot of overlap in our tastes, so I'm sure I'll like Darksiders when I finally get around to those.

Also, Agnes.

And a for Artus.

Now then, here's my EP for Clean Room.

Who Is she?

Introduced in Issue #13, Derica Mueller (which means "Beloved Leader"), aka the Exalted One, is the baby child of Astrid Mueller’s brother Robert, who accidentally partook in a ceremony of demonic rebirth. While a demon, she manages to be worse than any other demon in the story, acting as the Big Bad and the one the demons follow.

What has she done?

A demonic goddess of the void, Derica forces people to have visions of either her demons, or their deceased love ones/family, bragging about how many people she’s sent to insane asylums and mental wards, and how many soldiers she’s infected.

Her introduction has her mind controlling a security guard to blow his own brains out in front of Chloe and Astrid. Despite being told by Chloe that the gun doesn’t have any bullets, Derica uses her powers to still make the guy commit suicide, mocking Chloe about her dead husband and child once that’s done, even revealing to her that she was the one who had sent her visions of her late husband as a zombie. She then tells Chloe and Astrid about her plan to make a bridge out of humans (complete with a graphic picture of what it would look like; it’s not pretty to say the least). When asked by Chloe why she’s doing this, Derica responds with “Because the cow goes ‘moo,’” before sending the guard’s reanimated corpse to attack Chloe. This causes Astrid to order her men to take Derica in as a demonic prisoner.

Astrid later visits Derica in her crib prison, where Derica tells her about her master plan that’s currently in motion: to kill every human being on earth. How will she accomplish this? Well, her demons will cut the power for earth, with no internet, television, wi-fi, or radio, only to bring everything back, but keep it at one channel. While just an odd prank, that’s only phase 1. Phase 2 will then involve a plague of school bus crashes around the world, hoping to crash hundreds of them. Then, she plans to have planes crash-land on multiple cities, from Minsk to Motown. Finally, she will mind control the president to pull out a gun and shoot his wife on national television. The trick to all of this is that Derica and her demons will try to make it look like the humans did it. So in a nutshell, Derica plans to kill off humanity via trolling. Once her conversation with Astrid is finished, Derica has her demons hidden amongst Astrid’s staff reveal themselves and slaughter everyone. Meanwhile, a city is having issues with their electronics going down, with some becoming paranoid and killing each other, with one demon disguised as a little boy framing people for being demons.

Later on, one of Derica’s followers, Marcus Tyrell Webber, comes in to kill the guards, burn the building, and rescue her. Getting into his arms, Derica can’t wait to kill Astrid. When a guard stands in their way in front of the Clean Room doors, Derica has Marcus kill him, and once that’s done, Derica tells Astrid through the sealed door that she “will kill every person you ever knew…” and “will make blankets of their living skin.” However, she’s interrupted by Capone, Astrid's sidekick, who tries to stop her, but the fight ends with Capone barely alive and Marcus dead; not that Derica cares about him, congratulating Capone for kill him as she hurdles herself over the door. Unfortunately for Derica, Astrid had intentionally let her in, ordering Captain Hagan to fire a weapon at the secret demon Invisible City, which was a source of her power. With a distracted Derica, Astrid and friends exoduct (aka transporting someone via Christianity) her to another dimension.

Yeah, the climax was very rushed.

Redeeming Qualities?

None. While she’s a demon, it’s stated in the series that demons found on earth are banished by other demons for being too evil, implying that there are demons who have standards.

Heinousness?

She has all the resources of a demon, and makes good use of them to become a hateful individual. Artus still counts due to just being a simple human.

Conclusion

I think she’s a definite keep. Expect another possible candidate from the comic by Lighty.

Edited by therealjackieboy on Dec 12th 2018 at 8:26:43 AM

Derica Mueller

derica

Derica

Plans to kill humanity via trolling? I know this isn't South Park, but I remember one of the reasons that guy was voted down was because using trolling like that isn't serious enough. I'll give a yes, but I assume it's played differently here?

Also, purely out of curiosity, what happened to Philip anyway?

I say trolling, but she's essentially tricking humanity into thinking that everyone's acting crazy and will create mass chaos as a response to all the crazy shit happening.

It's a definite 'played seriously. There are flourishes of Simone's trademark humor, but it's very, very straight

So how may is this for Simone?

I know Secret Six has Junoir (Whoose father Ragdoll is actually just two entries under her entry in DC Universe) and smyth

Edited by miraculous on Dec 12th 2018 at 8:32:05 AM

How is she tricking into thinking humanity is acting crazy? Part of the reason Bedrager was voted down was that the idea of startibg a world war by silly internet comments is inherently ridiculous. The other part being him not really standing out due to the jacked up heinius standard.

Edited by username2527 on Dec 12th 2018 at 8:32:42 AM

THAT makes sense. I'll give a definite yes then.

Also, I found that image of the human bridge...yikes.

Edited by ACW on Dec 12th 2018 at 11:32:30 AM

Clean Room isn't South Park. Derica's plan is to use suggestion to drive humanity into insanity and have them turn on one another. IT's played for all the horror it should be.

As for Simone, she also has (even though she didn't create) Himiko.

She also created former Wonder Woman CM Genocide, who I believe was disqualified due to being Made of Evil.

uh... I'm hesitant about Agnes. If "die a perfect death" was really Allan's wish rather than her own then her willigness to give him that might be slightly mitiging.

Btw slight tweaking to Junoir to add her name

• Original: Junior, daughter of the first Ragdoll, is a crime boss so depraved and ruthless even Intergang gives her a wide berth. Famed for her cruelty and monstrousness, Junior routinely offers her victim a choice of dying horribly or letting Junior kill their families. When most choose the second choice, Junior records it, along with the victim's horrible death, and sends it to the families. Having obtained a card that is literally a pass out of hell, Junior kills and tortures countless people, raping men and women alike. When the card is stolen, Junior attempts to have her sins absolved by a priest, only to painfully kill the man when he refuses. Junior captures Bane of the Secret Six, who has the card, and tortures him with scissors and bricks to gain the location of the others. At the end, Junior loses control and attempts to slaughter every villain present when they see her mutilated true appearance, even her own brother Peter/Ragdoll II. Despite her backstory of her father having molested her, Junior is afforded no sympathy, knowing what a depraved monster she truly is and committing countless evil deeds because she loves it and feels she can get away with anything due to the card in her possession.

• Junior, real name Alex Merkel, daughter of the first Ragdoll, is a crime boss so depraved and ruthless even Intergang gives her a wide berth. Famed for her cruelty and monstrousness, Junior routinely offers her victim a choice of dying horribly or letting Junior kill their families. When most choose the second choice, Junior records it, along with the victim's horrible death, and sends it to the families. Having obtained a card that is literally a pass out of hell, Junior kills and tortures countless people, raping men and women alike. When the card is stolen, Junior attempts to have her sins absolved by a priest, only to painfully kill the man when he refuses. Junior captures Bane of the Secret Six, who has the card, and tortures him with scissors and bricks to gain the location of the others. At the end, Junior loses control and attempts to slaughter every villain present when they see her mutilated true appearance, even her own brother Peter/Ragdoll II. Junior knows what a depraved monster she truly is and committs countless evil deeds because she loves it and feels she can get away with anything due to the card in her possession.

Edited by miraculous on Dec 12th 2018 at 8:41:33 AM

Do we even need that last sentence? 43's raised the point about why mention a Freudian Excuse only to show that it doesn't count, and I agree.

Sure Ill cut it.

Please add that to the Drafts.

Also, that's an interesting point about Agnes. Scraggle?

Well... As far as Freudian Excuse goes in the writeups. I gave some few exceptions regarding it. Sure, there are some that won't be included but I don't lose my sleep if it got cut either.

Also, as for Agnes... Eh, think it was more of an obsessive thing that she had but I'll let Scraggs handle that shit.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAND added Junior to my list

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Dec 12th 2018 at 11:47:01 PM

IT's absolutely obsession above anything else. I've seen it, too.

And here it is all potholed-up:

• Junior, real name Alex Merkel, daughter of the first Ragdoll, is a crime boss so depraved and ruthless that even Intergang gives her a wide berth. Famed for her cruelty and monstrousness, Junior routinely offers her victim a choice of dying horribly or letting Junior kill their families. When most choose the second choice, Junior records it, along with the victim's horrible death, and sends it to the families. Having obtained a card that is literally a pass out of hell, Junior kills and tortures countless people, raping men and women alike. When the card is stolen, Junior attempts to have her sins absolved by a priest, only to painfully kill the man when he refuses. Junior captures Bane of the Secret Six, who has the card, and tortures him with scissors and bricks to gain the location of the others. At the end, Junior loses control and attempts to slaughter every villain present when they see her mutilated true appearance, even her own brother Peter/Ragdoll II. Junior knows what a depraved monster she truly is and commits countless evil deeds because she loves it and feels she can get away with anything due to the card in her possession.

Derica.

Pretty sure Simone also created Astarte.

Re: Trolling.

Seems more like Junko, Nyarly or Joker stuff than anything.