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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Shadao Since: Jan, 2013
#20076: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:26:35 PM

[tup] to Voller only by the skin of his teeth since well, Nazis in Indiana Jones are simply generic evil bad guys with occasional references to their racist views. Voller is perhaps the only Nazi whose racist views actually bubble up to the surface and give enough of an uncomfortable pause for the audience (namely, his interaction with an African American bellhop at the hotel).

Not surprised by Mads Mikkelsen's comments of portraying Voller as a "Well-Intentioned Extremist" since planning to kill Hitler to save Nazism despite the fact Hitler made himself the centerpiece of Nazism since the 1920s requires a lot of twisted, self-justifying logic for a fanatic Nazi.

Edited by Shadao on Jul 14th 2023 at 3:27:07 AM

Digipig Since: Nov, -0001
#20077: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:32:48 PM

Hi! Never posted before, but been lurking awhile.

With only Mola Ram to contend with, Jurgen easily breaks the heinous ceiling in my view.

[tup] Voller

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#20078: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:34:00 PM

[tup]Voller

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#20079: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:36:46 PM

Yes to Regal and Voller. Comparing him to Ram isn't entirely fair since Ram has a large cult of followers and Voller has around 2 dozen henchmen at most.

Edited by papyru30 on Jul 14th 2023 at 4:39:40 AM

Hope your prepared for an unforgettable luncheon
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#20080: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:40:11 PM

Oh and Manga [tup]Dr regal

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#20081: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:42:55 PM

[tup] to Dr. Regal and Jurgen Voller.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#20082: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:49:23 PM

Sure to Regal.

Yes to Voller. Ancient Greeks shooting down an airplane??

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therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#20083: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:49:55 PM

[tup] Regal and Voller

"No running in the halls!"
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#20085: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:50:44 PM

[tup] for Regal and Voller.

You know, it's funny, I actually brought up how Indy nazis have a hard time standing out from each other a few weeks ago, when one of the guys from the comics was proposed. Then the movie comes out, and Voller does in fact stand out as uniquely awful, so.... egg on my face I guess.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
Derv0sB2 Since: Apr, 2020
#20086: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:53:11 PM

[tup] to Palpatine/Darth Sidious, the bandit leaders, Regal and Voller.

Tentative [tup] to Malek and Asmodeus.

Tentative [tdown] to Kraznys.

[tdown] to Chelsea/Nerissa.


Walter Simmons EP:

  • Abraxas (Hrodvitnon) Recursive Fanfiction Abraxas: The Clash of Silver (link): Walter Simmons, corporate director of Apex Cybernetics, is as vile as his MonsterVerse counterpart and then some. An ambitious narcissist who feels challenged because humanity isn't the top dominant species, Simmons seeks to conquer all the emergent Titans on his terms, with his company on top. To this end, he uses subterfuge to provoke Godzilla and the pacified Titans into rampaging in multiple cities so as to turn public opinion against them, and he orders his daughter's assassination to protect his secrets. Simmons intentionally endangers millions of people in Hong Kong so that he can have Mechagodzilla kill and usurp Godzilla under the guise of saving humanity, planning to afterwards enslave, lobotomize and harvest Godzilla's allies for resources. When Ren Serizawa punches Simmons, he orders that Bernie Hayes be taken away and shot just because he was present, and he tries to fry Ren's brain via forcibly connecting him to Mechagodzilla, taunting Ren about how the Mecha is going to kill the very same Titan who Ren's father sacrificed his life to save.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#20087: Jul 14th 2023 at 3:54:31 PM

I guess this'll go under Godzilla fanfic?

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Derv0sB2 Since: Apr, 2020
Mediamagician Since: Jul, 2023
#20089: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:07:51 PM

Yes to Regal and Voller. Still doesn't feel like the time travel plot would've worked since Archimedes seemed to fix the time travel at one point in history.

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#20090: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:26:32 PM

Alright here's my guy, meet Klaber played by Boyd Holbrook.

Who is Klaber and what has he done?

A vicious American Neo-Nazi aiding Voller in his scheme to rewrite history so Germany wins WW 2, with Hitler out of picture yet the Nazi regime still continuing. Klaber enforces the No Witnesses policy with sadistic glee, demonstrated when he kills two college staff members, when he tries to get the Antikythera half from Indy before he gives it to Helena.

Along with Voller, Klaber follows Helena and Indy to Morroco at an illegal auction and interrupt it at gunpoint, managing to steal the half after a fight. After escaping the heroes and ending up arrested by a CIA Team led by Voller's handler Mason for the murder of the college professors and taken to a plane, Klaber kills all of the agents and personally shoots Mason with glee, allowing the villains to take control of the plane and head to retrieve the other half of the Antikythera.

Waiting for Jones and Helena to retrieve the Graphikos from a shipwreck, Voller and Klaber hijack Indy's friend Renaldo's boat, with Klaber killing all of the crew bar Renaldo (who Voller shoots.) Chasing Indy to Sicily, Klaber and Voller capture Teddy and force him to to say where they're going, murdering a worker at the cave who tells them the cave is closed. When the token Giant Mook Hauke (who's handcuffed to Teddy) is dragged by him underwater and is drowning, Klaber leaves his ally behind to die and continues with Voller.

Capturing Indy and completing the Antikythera, Klaber joins Voller with looking for a time fissure to rewrite history so the Nazis are the successors of WW 2. Unfortunately for them, the fissure was rigged to lead to 212BC in a roman siege who mistake the plane they're in to be a dragon. While Voller is franticly trying to use the plane to escape, Klaber decides to go down a different route and just starts mowing down upon the people down below. Klaber meets his fiery end along with Voller when the plane is shot down and explodes.

Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Quite simply, no. His partnership with Voller is standard The Dragon with no care between them and likewise with Voller's intent on removing Hitler, Klaber is also a part of that scheme so he also lacks any possible mitigating beliefs in the cause and is just a firm believer of the Nazi ideology.

Heinous Standard?

Now while Voller is the hand, Klaber's the gun... a very trigger happy and sadistic gun. Typically if there's a random innocent character sharing a scene with Klaber, they die. For The Dragon in the Indy films, Klaber is unparalled with death count under his hand and is easily the worst of that tier except maybe the Giant Mook Thuggee priest but in Klaber's case, he's got a much more prominent personality and shares a different kind of evil with the goal he's aiming for with Voller being much more grandiose with you know trying to rewrite history so the Nazis are the winners of WW 2.

What also makes Klaber an extra vile piece of Nazi shit is that he doesn't even have the reason of being in WW 2 on the Nazi side as a rhetoric, he's an American willing to do with out of fascistic sadism.

Final Verdict?

For his tier? I think he's good.

Edited by WetFlannels on Jul 14th 2023 at 12:26:50 PM

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PolarPhantom Since: Jun, 2012
#20091: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:26:36 PM

Yes to the Nazi that wants to kill Hitler.

EDIT: and also his second in command.

Edited by PolarPhantom on Jul 14th 2023 at 10:57:16 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#20092: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:27:54 PM

Sure to Klaber, also the Indy page is finally gonna have more movies other than just Mola Ram

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G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#20094: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:30:52 PM

[tup] to Dr Regal, Klaber and Voller

Anywho it’s now a month from when season 4 of Solar Opposites will premiere so can I reserve discussion for that show now?

Edited by G-Editor on Jul 14th 2023 at 2:20:47 AM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#20096: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:32:47 PM

Yes to Klaber. I assume the Thugee is too flat?

Seriously though, what kind of plane can be destroyed by ancient Greeks?

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Kookosbanaani Since: May, 2015
#20097: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:36:14 PM

Unsure on Klaber and you can correct me if I'm wrong, but there's a moment where he doesn't seem to like the idea that Voller wants them to abandon one of their comrades to drown. He does so due to Voller's orders, but seemed like he was willing to at least consider helping him.

Edited by Kookosbanaani on Jul 14th 2023 at 4:38:35 AM

Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#20098: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:36:19 PM

[tup] to Jürgen and Klaber after seeing the movie!

[tup] to Dr. Regal as well.

Edited by Powermaster201 on Jul 14th 2023 at 7:53:53 AM

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#20099: Jul 14th 2023 at 4:41:17 PM

[up][up]Klaber pauses for a second when he falls into the river but immediately forgets him when Voler tells him to. Yes there

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