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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#6301: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:34:13 AM

I like the first one too.

Not too sure on the Voice candidate. I GUESS I could give a yes, but if so, JUST. One rape and another attempted for a pedophile is probably JUST enough.

Edited by ACW on Mar 2nd 2023 at 1:34:57 PM

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Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#6302: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:36:07 AM

I think the first quote is good

Sure to the child molester

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#6303: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:38:13 AM

Just to make sure...does he have any other confirmed vicitms? It's pushing baseline

Echidna from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
#6304: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:42:58 AM

He does have confirmed victims. Just 3 or 2 considering that one child could imply this is what he will do. No other villains do Pedophile in the series. After he is finished with Hee-Joo which makes her family and herself suffer a lot he goes after his brother who is a kindergarten and then tries to do the same to a little girl. There is also an on-screen effect on all his crimes btw. He rapes children all for sheer sadism in a series where there is barely a rapist in them from what I remember. I know it's low but this is what I am saying. After all, rape is a special kind of evil and it shows he does pass.

Edited by Echidna on Jan 9th 2024 at 6:45:19 AM

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#6305: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:44:39 AM

I'm asking if he has more than two confirmed victims?

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#6306: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:46:12 AM

Yeah, for a pedophile, 2 victims may—and I emphasize MAY—JUST pass baseline. Maybe.

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Echidna from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
#6307: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:46:41 AM

Oh, my bad Lighty. Yes, he does. Even if it wasn't true he may make it with a total of 3 victims in his title when he goes after the little girl he saw before raping the younger brother. As I said he has low resources for other villains in the series with Voice treating it as unique crimes. I do hope it clears up everything.

Edited by Echidna on Mar 2nd 2023 at 1:58:15 PM

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#6308: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:54:49 AM

Okie-dokie, on the recent topic of adaptations of characters who already count, I've got one of my own! From a childhood gameplay fav...

What's the work?

Avatar: The Last Airbender is a modern (by which I mean like 15 years ago lol) classic animated series brought about by Nickelodeon and regarded by many as one of the best shows ever made thanks to its long-running arcs, cool fight scenes, and great characters.

The basic plot...in a world where the 4 primary elements (Water, Earth, Fire, Air) can be controller by special people knowm as "benders" of each separate element, the Fire Nation has declared war on all life and begun conquering as much as they can. In the world's moment of need, "the Avatar"—an entity capable of controlling all 4 elements—arrives on the scene in the form of 12 year old Aang, who works with newfound friends to master all 4 elements before it's too late.

We're not talking the show itself today, though. We're talking 'bout the very different yet also similar video game trilogy, of all things!

Who is Ozai? What has he done?

Though the games have many, many changes throughout them, Ozai remains just as much of a dick. The ruler of the Fire Nation as Fire Lord, Ozai is an utter tyrant who reigns harshly over the land and serves as the Greater-Scope Villain for the games. Under his rule, countless brutalities are committed against the world, including mass-imprisonment of innocents; running factories that poison village's populations into sickness; starving entire groups of impoverished civilians; and launching multiple campaigns of violence and destruction against the Water Tribe and Earth Kingdom. He is also, natch, a terrible parent to Prince Zuko and viciously burned half the boy's face and exiled him years before the games.

In the final game, Ozai reveals his plan to use the power of Sozin's Comet to lead fleet onto the Earth Kingdom and burn the entire nation to the ground as the coronation ceremony for his ascension to "Phoenix King." When questioned about his motives for such an atrocity against the people of the Earth Kingdom, Ozai simply notes "The people did nothing to me. They're just in my way."

Confronting Aang in a final battle, Ozai gleefully brags that "Everything you love will burn!" before trying to kill Aang and Katara, ultimately beaten by the heroes before his bending is stolen away by Aang and Ozai locked away forever, his mad dreams of conquest along with him.

Mitigating features?

As in canon, nothing here. Raging sadist and egomaniac who has very little screentime but whose presence hangs large over the game and who uses his minimal screentime to be a total entertaining Large Ham (thanks, Mark Hamill!)

The games aren't exactly high art but they get the story across and all of Ozai and the Fire Nation's nastiness is played with the brutality it needs.

Heinousness?

He's obviously the worst in the games, and everything the Fire Nation does that the Gaang goes up against can be traced right back to him, even as an Orcus on His Throne. Throw in his attempted immolation of the entire Earth Kingdom as his coup de grace, and Ozai keeps just as simply as in the show.

Final Verdict?

Yes to our second official Ozai.

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
Echidna from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#6311: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:57:45 AM

Shit I forgot about those games, played the first one on the Wii years ago, but anyway [tup] to Ozai, whose dialogue seems to be an even bigger Jerkass than in canon as well

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VengefulBale Dagded Dujardin from The Universe (it's his room) Since: Feb, 2016 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Dagded Dujardin
#6312: Mar 2nd 2023 at 10:58:56 AM

[tup] Charlie, Hendricks and Games!Ozai

Edited by VengefulBale on Mar 2nd 2023 at 12:59:24 PM

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#6314: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:03:31 AM

[tup]Ozai. Only thing I know about the games is that you can get all the Achievements in the first game by mashing the wind button in the first level.

"No running in the halls!"
SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#6315: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:27:15 AM

Yes to Ozai.

I did change my mind about Sera Myu. There’s two more candidates I’ll be doing. There’s Another Wiseman in a different Musical (How many times is he gonna be a CM?!) and a Nehellenia.

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Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#6316: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:28:32 AM

[tup] to Ozai

Might be a dumb question what's this about no longer doing any similarities thing again? Because that got me thinking about doing a character from the Stargate movie now that's been brought up.

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#6318: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:32:08 AM

[up][up] Characters with identical crimes from different media can count now, hence why Crystal Wiseman, Crystal Tomoe and Curry Pennywise were able to get eps

Edited by SailorVenus372 on Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:32:18 AM

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Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#6319: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:34:04 AM

@Powermaster: [nja]'d by [up]

Edited by Ravok on Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:34:47 AM

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#6320: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:47:53 AM

Ah, so does that mean if the crime are the same but it's in a different media they can count separately like with what's going on with miniseries It? ([tup] to that btw).

[down] perfect, thank you.

Edited by Powermaster201 on Mar 2nd 2023 at 2:49:38 PM

SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#6321: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:48:42 AM

[up] Yes.

I’m plotting my schemes wherever I go! They’re perfect in every way…
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#6322: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:54:25 AM

So the various fan songs candidates (my Frieza and Joker, I think DDD had several as well) are all eligible now?

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SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#6323: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:54:49 AM

[up] Yep. Would MOTI Ridley be eligible too since he’s similar to Manga who does keep?

I’m plotting my schemes wherever I go! They’re perfect in every way…
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#6324: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:56:38 AM

My next, and an equally short one:

What's the work?

Caged Heat is a 1974 women-in-prison film. Our heroine is convicted of drug dealing sent to prison where our villain is the sadistic warden: Superintendent Mc Queen

Who is Mc Queen?

A cold, sadistic woman, Mc Queen runs her prison horribly. Prisoners are subjected ton the worst treatment. Horrible conditions, starvations, sadistic guards, beatings and tortures. When the heroine, Erica, tries to escape and gets caught? Mc Queen has her viciously tortured.

This is pretty common. Woman are subject to beatings, molestation, torture...we see it happen plenty, while Erica and her friends plot to escape. Upon Erica's torture, Mc Queen reveals an even worse habit she has: those who prove too intransigent are sent to the prison doctor...where they get painfully lobotomized into dolls. Suffice to say, the heroines break free, take Mc Queen hostage and flee in a shootout, but Mc Queen takes a stray bullet fired by one of her own, dying as a result.

Mtiigating issues?

Nope. It's an old b-movie and she's a warden. What do you expect? Tortures, molestation, beatings, oppression, lobotomies...

There's not much to say here.

Conclusion?

Keep.

SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#6325: Mar 2nd 2023 at 11:57:16 AM

[up] Yep.[tup]

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