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Audience-Alienating Premise is "interesting" because it can be used to either complain about shows you don't like ("Work X is a failure because it's about X, which is stupid) or gush about shows you like ("Work Y is a great work, but unfortunately many people were scared away because it's about Y, leading people to miss out on its greatness"). This, naturally, leads to lots of shoehorning.

As far as I know, the major criteria for AAP are:

  • The work is a commercial failure, which requires the work to have been released for a sufficient amount of time and be for-profit.
  • The failure is because the work's premise scared the audience off or made them lose interest.

But "the premise scared people off" is highly subjective, and "is a commercial failure" is a relatively recent addition (if it even is an official criterion - it's not currently in the trope description, although it's been used as an edit reason for some example removals), leading to many non-examples being Grandfather Claused in. So I think it could use a cleanup.

mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
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#226: Mar 30th 2021 at 1:38:48 AM

Sounds cutworthy to me. A lot of those elements, like Parental Bonus, are not necessarily alienating as many other Nick shows utilized them.

I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.
Anddrix Since: Oct, 2014
#227: Apr 4th 2021 at 1:39:25 AM

Bringing up the following example from Blood And Chocolate:

  • Audience-Alienating Premise: The film is ostensibly based upon the young adult werewolf novel by Annette Curtis Klause, but makes so many changes to the plot and characters it's barely recognizable. In the process it became a bland and generic supernatural love story that's been told a hundred times, stripping out the more unique and gritty elements from the novel. The end result is that fans of the book weren't interested because it had little in common with the story they loved, while other people weren't interested because it looked cheesy and cliched; it couldn't even appeal to horror fans because it clearly played up romantic drama over the horror elements. The film only grossed $6 million on a budget of $15 million.

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#229: Apr 4th 2021 at 6:46:07 PM

I think They Changed It, Now It Sucks! would work or [up] better instead ?

Edited by miraculous on Apr 4th 2021 at 6:46:36 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
RustBeard Since: Sep, 2016
#230: Apr 7th 2021 at 4:22:08 PM

I found this on the YMMV page for The Exception:

Coolnut Since: Jan, 2001
#231: Apr 8th 2021 at 4:11:24 AM

[up] That's just a Zero-Context Example that can be commented out for now.

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#232: Apr 8th 2021 at 4:12:26 AM

[up] The page has no other examples, so it should just be cut overall.

Edited by jandn2014 on Apr 8th 2021 at 7:12:49 AM

back lol
mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
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#233: Apr 9th 2021 at 2:33:59 PM

What happens if the author deliberately creates a work with an alienating premise, but that doesn't necessarily make it unpopular? The work in question is Hatoful Boyfriend.

I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.
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#234: Apr 9th 2021 at 2:37:39 PM

Invoked Trope (albeit mentioning it didn't work per say)

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Angry babby
#236: Apr 9th 2021 at 2:46:07 PM

[up] They didn't intend for the work to fail. They made a difficult-to-accept premise because they wanted to see if people would get into the deeper story regardless. The quote on the YMMV page is, "I wanted to create something that seems ridiculous and crazy at first glance, but that once you look into the world, you would fall into the depth."

I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.
Serac she/her Since: Mar, 2016 Relationship Status: Oh my word! I'm gay!
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#237: Apr 12th 2021 at 6:08:59 PM

AAP doesn't allow examples for specific seasons of a TV series, right? Because YMMV.Supergirl 2015 has this:

  • Audience-Alienating Premise: Season 5 is currently getting a lot of undeserved fan criticism. However, two of the main season long plots have received a negative reaction from fans and critics and been identified as a reason for declining ratings:
    • Lena's descent into evil has upset fans of Lena who had hoped the show would not take this approach and make her a villain instead of letting her be a positive role model. Seeing a fan favorite suddenly deliberately betraying and hurting her friends (while at the same time trying to forcibly remove the ability for others to do the same) has been hard to watch. Likewise, fans who wanted Lena to go evil, as well as fans who dislike Lena, are annoyed that the show still does not want to make Lena a true villain, opting instead to make her more of a sympathetic Anti-Villain and a Well-Intentioned Extremist, and are upset that the show might redeem her out of nowhere.
    • The Kara and William romance is proving to be unpopular with both fans and critics. As of March 2020, not one regular Supergirl media reviewer approves of the relationship. The lack of chemistry between the two actors, the rushed and sudden attraction between the two, and shoehorning William as part of the "Superfriends" is turning viewers (not just upset Karamel and Supercorp shippers) off and even inspired a boycott of one episode. To date the two episodes where previews made clear they would feature the William and Kara romance have been the two lowest watched in the show's history.
    • For many fans, it appears that the show is deliberately trolling them, as both fans and critics pleaded after a highly praised season 4 not to turn Lena evil or give Kara a love interest (noting that in S4, Kara was much better written without any romantic baggage). The showrunners seem to have ignored both requests.

RustBeard Since: Sep, 2016
#238: Apr 12th 2021 at 7:34:48 PM

Most of that can go under Seasonal Rot or Broken Base. I'd get rid of the part accusing the authors of deliberately trolling the audience. Unless there's proof of that, it's an uncalled for accusation.

TheLivingDrawing Lucas the Dreamer from The Town of Clayton Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
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#239: Apr 14th 2021 at 9:26:32 AM

Should I remove this example from Chick Tracts? Chick Tracts are massively successful, and thus don’t really qualify in my opinion.

Chick Tracts are about a world where the devil literally controls everything and anything, people are almost always amoral idiots, monsters roam the night, and the only path to salvation is a tiny, fringe religious denomination that is entirely fine with over 99% of the rest of the world population going to hell if they don't decide to convert. Anybody who doesn't share these beliefs will most likely either be offended by the tracts, be uninterested, or only read them to make fun of them, and anybody who agrees with Jack's beliefs doesn't need the tracts to change their mind.

Why waste time when you can see the last sunset last?
RustBeard Since: Sep, 2016
#240: Apr 14th 2021 at 12:23:52 PM

I don't know if Chick Tracts are massively successful. My understanding is his following is pretty cult, made up mostly of people who make fun of the comics.

WarJay77 Bonnie's Artistic Cousin from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
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#241: Apr 14th 2021 at 12:40:55 PM

Yeah, I've never heard of anyone genuinely, unironically liking them.

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TheLivingDrawing Lucas the Dreamer from The Town of Clayton Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Lucas the Dreamer
#242: Apr 14th 2021 at 1:30:56 PM

[up] Yes but from what I’ve heard the tracts have sales in the range of millions of dollars (if Jontron’s video on Darkest Dungeons is any indication).

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WarJay77 Bonnie's Artistic Cousin from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
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#243: Apr 14th 2021 at 3:03:30 PM

Right, from ironic fans. People buy them to mock them, or at least I think. I could be wrong, but sales numbers aren't enough.

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#244: Apr 15th 2021 at 1:41:52 AM

I admit, I am a little concerned that "ironic fans" could become an argument that allows folks to dismiss genuine audiences. Opinion Myopia is a common thing and I worry that we are disregarding actual fans if we assume (without concrete evidence) that an audience is not legitimate.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
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#245: Apr 15th 2021 at 11:37:23 AM

Edit: Ignore, I was confused at what we were talking about and my post was stupid.

Edited by WarJay77 on Apr 15th 2021 at 2:38:46 PM

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#246: Apr 15th 2021 at 11:38:18 AM

Chick Tracts are/were well received by their intended audience, so I'll say they don't belong in AAP as no one who would buy them unironically is being "alienated." It's basically equivalent to calling Teletubbies AAP because no one without kids is buying it.

Anddrix Since: Oct, 2014
#247: Apr 17th 2021 at 5:54:58 PM

Bringing up the following example from John Carter:

  • Audience-Alienating Premise: Some people who didn't want to watch the movie said they couldn't buy into the premise of a former Confederate soldier who goes to Mars and dresses like Conan. Furthermore, the source material has been copied so much that the official adaptation succumbed to Seinfeld Is Unfunny.

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#248: Apr 19th 2021 at 9:56:55 AM

[up] I'd say it passes. A Confederate Soldier as the Protagonist was inevitably going to limit its appeal, and the movie performed dismally enough to can what was planned to be a trilogy.
[down] Done.

Edited by DDRMASTERM on Apr 19th 2021 at 12:15:13 PM

mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Angry babby
#249: Apr 19th 2021 at 10:03:48 AM

[up] It should mention the bad performance in the example though, for full context.

I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.
Anddrix Since: Oct, 2014
#250: Apr 27th 2021 at 8:21:22 AM

Bringing up the following example from Miami Vice:

  • Audience-Alienating Premise: Actually, the basic premise is fairly standard...it's the execution that threw a lot of people off. Part of the mixed reception that the film received among audiences (initially at least) was because of its emphasis on atmosphere and texture instead of plot, dialogue, or character development. The fact that Michael Mann seemed to try as hard as he could to distance the movie from the original series probably didn't help.


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