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Edited by Willbyr on Jun 21st 2021 at 9:42:03 AM
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Oh, and going back to the Fighting Spirit, how about:
"When spirited fight gets too literal..."
"The best soulution to any street fight."
"Always bring a ghost fighter to a fistfight."
Any of these good?
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I like the second.
On June 16th, someone changed the caption on Blue-and-Orange Morality from:
Ye who walk with the Path of Bacon shall be blessed with dinner. Yet ye who follow the Way of Necktie shall be dressed for dinner. |
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Ye who walk with the Path of Bacon shall be given breakfast. Yet ye who follow the Way of Necktie shall be put in appropriate attire. |
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Dressed and blessed.
edited 9th Sep '14 7:14:45 PM by Rethkir
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Agree, but the old one doesn't rhyme, it repeats the same word: "dinner".
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
Easy solution: "shall be with dinner blessed"; "shall be for dinner dressed".
Slightly odd grammar, admittedly, but oddly poetic, and it makes the rhyme more explicit.
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I like that formatting, too.
Ugh, the caption on the page pic for Rosario Vampire consists entirely of bluetext in one giant sinkhole. Suggestions?
edited 17th Sep '14 6:30:53 AM by tryrar
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I like the caption itself, it just needs the sinkholes pruned.
It helps to link to provide a link ro to the page. Do that by writing it as a Wiki Word. Rosarioto Vampire. That said, the links can all go. Here's the current caption, for reference:
And can we please do something about captions appearing blue in forum? It makes it impossible to what's a link without putting the mouse over it. Image Source. Please update whenever an image is changed.
Well, to me, they show in slightly different colour, but yeah not very good.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman^^ I have "highlight links" checked in my forum profile... links are always underlined (both forum and wiki), so I can easily see them, and as a side bonus I can easily see Chained Sink Holes. :P
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
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Can I remove the caption in Bishie Sparkle? It seems to have that "make fun of Twilight" thing going on.
I agree with removing the Bishie Sparkle caption.
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+1 to can the Bishie Sparkle caption.
iRidescence
It's gone. So, do we need to replace it with something, or does it work well enough without any?
It's fine without one, but I wouldn't mind one if it were funny.I removed all the blue from Rosarioto Vampire. If anyone wants to restore some of the links in a reasonable fashion, be my guest. Any other thoughts on Blue-and-Orange Morality?
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I say change as per @56.
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Yeah, go with 56.
Say, anyone got any thought for the caption for Fighting Spirit? The current one has to go, no doubt.
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+1 for 56 for Blue-and-Orange Morality.
Ditto.
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.Changed Blue-and-Orange Morality to the suggestion. It's much more poetic now.
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Regarding Fighting Spirit, there are several caption suggestions ... any more thoughts?
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Again, this is my suggestion:
"The best soulution to any street fight."
edited 27th Sep '14 12:44:08 PM by dRoy
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