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nuclearneo577 from My computer. Since: Dec, 2009
#1: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:00:24 PM

This is the most X Just X I have seen in a while. Here is a dump of all of it. I will try to cover the web original stuff.

Anime & Manga

Film

Literature

Live-Action TV

Music

New Media

Radio

  • The Goon Show. Practically the Ur-Example, at least if you're British.
  • This is a staple of [[Firesign Theatre]] material. ("Radio" is the closest fit ....)

Stand-Up Comedy

Web Comics

Web Original

  • Homestar Runner. Anything that belches forth Sweet Cuppin' Cakes can only be describes as this.

Western Animation

Real Life/Other

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#2: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:26:16 PM

Generally, I just dump it on the discussion page and move on. Was there something else?

edited 6th Mar '11 1:26:33 PM by Deboss

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nuclearneo577 from My computer. Since: Dec, 2009
#3: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:31:53 PM

[up]Normally I would do that, but the X Just X here is about 90% of the examples.

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#4: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:34:50 PM

It happens. I nuked the entire example list on Guilty Pleasures for being not objective examples.

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nuclearneo577 from My computer. Since: Dec, 2009
#5: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:37:37 PM

I moved them to the discussion page also. This page really needs help.

EternalSeptember Since: Sep, 2010
#6: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:45:30 PM

Move them back. It's an art style. What do you expect to be described?

Not every trope usage has to have descriptions, for example ususally you can't say much about Bald Woman, on a character page, about Colon Cancer, on a work page, or about Romance Novel on a Romance Novel work page.

edited 6th Mar '11 1:45:44 PM by EternalSeptember

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#7: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:48:46 PM

But those are self explanatory, surreal humor isn't.

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Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#8: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:49:15 PM

Sorry ES, but X Just X is not an acceptable way to write examples.

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EternalSeptember Since: Sep, 2010
#9: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:55:18 PM

[up][up] Yes, it is. It's a style. If a comedy's humor is written in this style, you can either tell that it is, or resort to Word Cruft repeating how it uses this stlye all along, or describe the entire plot in detail. The only examples that could stay on the page are because of this, but they are all extremely short stories, or suversions, surprising examples, etc.

edited 6th Mar '11 1:56:23 PM by EternalSeptember

nuclearneo577 from My computer. Since: Dec, 2009
#10: Mar 6th 2011 at 1:58:00 PM

[up]No it is not. Read this that I just wrote.

That is how you explain Surreal Humor.

edited 6th Mar '11 1:58:52 PM by nuclearneo577

EternalSeptember Since: Sep, 2010
#11: Mar 6th 2011 at 2:10:40 PM

[up] This is one of those shorts I was talking about. It' 1:42 minute long, of course you can describe how it is surreal, but only because you can write down the entire plot.

With longer works, that would look like describing a generic Romance Novel's generic plot points to prove that it is romantic. D'uh, it's obvious, that's it's genre.

If something is listed under Surreal Humor, that is because surreal humor is it's genre.

edited 6th Mar '11 2:12:19 PM by EternalSeptember

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#12: Mar 6th 2011 at 2:20:44 PM

It doesn't appear to be set up as a genre though.

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EternalSeptember Since: Sep, 2010
#13: Mar 6th 2011 at 2:31:30 PM

Maybe genre is not the right term, but it's still something like this, something that goes all along the work. Unless it's a non-surreal work that used one rare surreal scene, there is not much to note about the fact that a whole story was written that way.

Like... Cel Shading. You don't start describing how cel shaded XIII is all along, only that in The Iron Giant, the giant alone is cel shaded

Daremo Misanthrope Supreme from Parts Unknown Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: If it's you, it's okay
#14: Mar 6th 2011 at 2:37:16 PM

I'm mostly agreeing with Eternal here, it's not as if links aren't right there with a much fuller description. Describing The Mighty Boosh in a sentence or two...

Having to point out specific examples for every entry is a bit much to ask, particularly when a lot of those state quite clearly that surreal humor isn't just something that occurs once and then is never spoken of again, but a major part of the basis of the work. They're telling you, "This is where surreal comedy happens".

Reworking things to read more like a genre page, rather than, "This one time, something wacky happened..." might be a better fix than removing all the examples that don't spell out what, "That one time" is.

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nuclearneo577 from My computer. Since: Dec, 2009
#15: Mar 6th 2011 at 2:51:58 PM

[up]Some things can get away with X Just X. This can not, as it is easy to explain.

Daremo Misanthrope Supreme from Parts Unknown Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: If it's you, it's okay
#16: Mar 6th 2011 at 3:08:56 PM

Ok, explain Robot Chicken in a sentence or two(and if it's that easy, wouldn't it make more sense to just fix the examples?).

I don't think it's easy at all, not in any meaningful way. "A sketch show, where surreal things frequently happen." Otherwise you're just trying to isolate individual instances, which I think would be an even greater failure in saying anything about a show with this kind of basis.

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EternalSeptember Since: Sep, 2010
#17: Mar 6th 2011 at 3:11:37 PM

While you are at it, also explain how our True Art page uses Surreal Humor.

Micah from traveling the post-doc circuit Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#18: Mar 6th 2011 at 3:14:59 PM

[up][up] What's wrong with isolating individual instances? "Frequently used in The Alice And Bob Show; for example..."

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Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#19: Mar 6th 2011 at 3:18:30 PM

^^ It doesn't; it's got a whole bunch of people who stay camped on it, thinking that "random shit" is the same thing as "surreal humor". And you know very well that "this other page is also screwed up" is no defense at all.

Saying "Robot Chicken. Just Robot Chicken." as an example on the surreal humor page tells anyone who doesn't already know what Robot Chicken is not a damn thing thing about Robot Chicken or surreal humor, except that someone thinks it's an example.

edited 6th Mar '11 3:19:31 PM by Madrugada

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EternalSeptember Since: Sep, 2010
#20: Mar 6th 2011 at 3:22:35 PM

[up][up] It takes away focus from the fact that it's constantly used. It's like writing on XIII:

  • Cel Shading: It was frequently used through the game, for example in this scene.

Cel Shading wasn't "freqently used", it is a technique that was applied to thee entirety of the game. Just like Surreal Humor.

Our True Art page doesn't frequently us esurreal humor, for example in the page quote". It is based on surreal humor, just as many of the work examples are.

edited 6th Mar '11 3:23:01 PM by EternalSeptember

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#21: Mar 6th 2011 at 3:33:15 PM

Except it's not used throughout the work that way. Robot Chicken, for instance, also does parodies.

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Micah from traveling the post-doc circuit Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#22: Mar 6th 2011 at 3:36:19 PM

[up][up]Rewrite that to be "used throughout the game, go here for an example of the style" and it's a way better example than just "used throughout the game" (especially if "here" is a link to a page on the wiki, so it doesn't get broken) — people can actually make a judgement about what the style is, whether it's an appropriate example, and so on.

Similarly, "used throughout the True Art page, e.g., in the page quote" is meaningless, but "used throughout the True Art page; for example, the page quotes range from Homer (author of the Iliad) to Homer (the Simpsons character) and have nothing to do with each other" means people know what you're talking about. Which is your goal in writing the example in the first place, right?

edited 6th Mar '11 3:36:43 PM by Micah

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EternalSeptember Since: Sep, 2010
#23: Mar 6th 2011 at 4:41:32 PM

[up] These examples would still feel incredibly forced. Cel Shading, and Surreal Humor, are self-explanatory ways to create a work with. If you already know what the term means, giving a random sample from it is like describing a horrific scene to prove why a story is a horror, or naming a scene in which the Pink Haired Girl had pink hair, to demonstrate how pink her hair is.

I think, the main problem is that the X Just X page was written with plot-related tropes in mind, but it doesn't mention that, and it sounds like it applies to all tropes.

Of course you have to explain how a show's Big Damn Heroes scene turned out, and who participated in it, who got saved, from who, etc. but there is also a long list of genres, visuals, art styles, Title Tropes, flat character's single Character As Device, etc. where you simply can't, or it would sound like it was written for morons, by morons.

edited 6th Mar '11 4:43:40 PM by EternalSeptember

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#24: Mar 6th 2011 at 6:35:24 PM

Pink Haired Girl is self explanatory but still requires you to name the character. Surreal Humor is not self explanatory. We are writing for people who do not know about the trope not for people who already know it.

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peccantis Since: Oct, 2010
#25: Mar 6th 2011 at 9:22:29 PM

Joining the chorus, I dislike X Just X. All other things aside, this wiki is supposed to be both informative and amusing, and inside jokes aren't too funny for the majority of outsiders.

I give you that there are times where X Just X indeed is appropriate (like with most of the Title Tropes), but most of the time the examples listed like this come off as lazy, boring and expendable. I want to know the hows and whys. In the case of Surreal Humor, the why is given (for the lulz), so at least give the how. No surreal work is like the other.

(In the case of Cel Shading, "how" is self evident (except for those wacky experiments) and "why" is almost always as well.)

edited 6th Mar '11 9:24:32 PM by peccantis


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