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Tabs Since: Jan, 2001
#1: Oct 10th 2023 at 8:21:56 AM

Sonic High School was flagged with reasoning:

This page did not violate the content policy, but was cut nonetheless.

The characters involved in sex scenes are all 18 as specified in the synopsis. Though the synopsis does lie about there being no graphic descriptions, there's no other reason to doubt that the truthfulness of of the aging up. All relevant characters are in the same grade high school. Cream, who is canonically 6, has her room covered in posters "of things teenage women liked", she is described as having boobs, and she has a "pursefull of teen girl blood diapers". Tails is the canonically second youngest relevant character, and the text notes that "he was not a woman or child" as justification for another character's in-universe actions.

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#2: Oct 12th 2023 at 1:02:22 PM

Also, on account of the story being a Troll Fic, none of the sex is remotely titulating or meant to be.

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#3: Oct 20th 2023 at 10:05:10 AM

Troll Fics are not supposed to be taken seriously right ?

greatpikminfan Since: Apr, 2009
#4: Oct 21st 2023 at 7:16:30 PM

I'm not entirely sure but I think the stance on troll fics is that they could still be cut if there's nothing to them but shock sex content, even if it's not meant to be arousing. Like King of the Hill: Episode 1: Peggy's Revenge.

I know nothing about this work or what the sex:not-sex ratio is, just saying that being a Troll Fic wouldn't necessarily excuse it if the sex outweighs the "story."

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#5: Oct 21st 2023 at 8:15:48 PM

[up] Sex isn't most of the story and I guess I could buy the characters being 18 (I've laughed hysterically at readings of this fic before so I'm familiar with it). None of the sex is remotely titillating and it's purely just the work being outrageously offensive. Also readings of the fic are allowed on You Tube for what it's worth.

Edited by TheLivingDrawing on Oct 21st 2023 at 11:17:09 AM

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Ramidel Since: Jan, 2001
#6: Oct 21st 2023 at 8:23:27 PM

It sounds like a keep. If nothing else, Youtube is usually above-our-pay-grade approval.

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#9: Oct 21st 2023 at 9:36:38 PM

Sex isn't most of the story

Okay then, keep. Doesn't sound like it's a Peggy's Revenge-type fic.

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#10: Oct 22nd 2023 at 12:19:00 AM

Revive Sonic High School's work page.

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#11: Oct 22nd 2023 at 12:52:41 AM

Revive the page.

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#13: Oct 22nd 2023 at 11:20:12 AM

I'll have to relisten/reread the fic to remember the exact ratio, but I certainly remember not taking up a significant portion of the work, no more than your average high school Sex Comedy. I also don't recall much, if any, of the fic even being censored on You Tube.

Edited by TheLivingDrawing on Oct 22nd 2023 at 2:24:16 PM

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Tabs Since: Jan, 2001
#14: Oct 22nd 2023 at 1:48:26 PM

Vote to keep. From the archive, I picked a few chapters arbitrarily to read. It's just the standard troll fic. Won't say I didn't laugh at some bits, but I don't find it cutworthy per Content Policy.

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#15: Oct 22nd 2023 at 2:25:18 PM

Anyone have a sand box with the cut page contents. We can go through it and expand and zces before relaunching

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#17: Oct 26th 2023 at 9:46:39 PM

I'll lend a hand by making suggestions on what should be cleaned up, and yeah... as of now, those former pages reek of Unintentional Period Piece.

Possession Sue is Flame Bait, and should probably be removed.

Just curious, is anyone allowed to edit those sandboxes?

Edited by callmeamuffin on Oct 27th 2023 at 2:52:24 AM

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#18: Oct 26th 2023 at 9:54:09 PM

[up] Yes, anyone is allowed, but in this particular case, we highly recommend going through this if you want to add an suggestion.

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#19: Oct 27th 2023 at 5:06:42 AM

[up] Ok.

About the Complete Monster entry from the YMMV subpage. Does anyone know if it was approved?

[down] Damn, I forgot about the fully detailed writeup part of CM entries.

Edited by callmeamuffin on Oct 27th 2023 at 10:25:02 PM

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#20: Oct 27th 2023 at 5:17:41 AM

You don't need to search the CM thread to see that the example is ZCE anyway and in unlikely case it was ever discussed wouldn't be allowed.

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#21: Nov 11th 2023 at 11:33:24 PM

This page was previously cut for the rationale "Contains sex scenes with characters as young as six. Cutlist." are we sure this isn't a thing?

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#22: Nov 12th 2023 at 7:09:44 AM

[up] Cream is canonically six, but she's aged up in this.

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#23: Nov 12th 2023 at 11:56:22 AM

Gonna clean up the description(s) we might be using. Considering the second description (The final part of the sandbox) has a lot of Conversation on the Main Page, I think we could use the first description, unless we're taking the option of remaking the description. However, the first description has issues too, such as a sentence which reads like speculation and some ambiguous complaining. Additionally, should we even begin the page with an excerpt of the fanfic?

Description without opening excerpt:

These are all excerpts from the same fanfic. SONIC HIGH SCHOOL (yes, it has to be in all caps) is a Sonic The Hedgehog High School AU Crack Fic/Troll Fic. The author is probably parodying the heaps upon heaps of Sonic fanfiction that has this exact premise. It contains many instances of bad grammar, horrible wording, mild racism, outrageous similes, and an astounding lack of logic to top it all off. In the fanfic, Sonic has to go through high school, and this year has a lot of stuff going down, such as getting diagnosed with a fatal disease, a classmate getting murdered, a bomb accidentally going off in the auditorium, and so much more.

The fanfic can be read here.

EDIT: EDITED VERSION (In progress)

SONIC HIGH SCHOOL is a Sonic the Hedgehog High School AU Crack Fic/Troll Fic.

In the fanfic, Sonic has to go through high school, and this year has a lot of stuff going down, such as getting diagnosed with a fatal disease, a classmate getting murdered, a bomb accidentally going off in the auditorium, and so much more.

The fanfic can be read here.

Internet Historian also produced an animated adaptation of the first three chapters.

Edited by callmeamuffin on Jan 4th 2024 at 6:26:10 AM

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#24: Dec 11th 2023 at 10:10:41 AM

In my opinion, I'd just keep "SONIC HIGH SCHOOL is a Sonic the Hedgehog High School AU Crack Fic/Troll Fic.", the sentence starting with "Sonic has to go through high school..." and where the fic can be read, and ditch/rewrite the rest for not being concise and encouraging complaining.

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MysteryAgain Since: Aug, 2018
#25: Jan 2nd 2024 at 7:50:31 PM

Could add this to the summary, since it gave the story a lot of exposure:

Internet Historian also produced an animated adaptation of the first three chapters

Also can think of a good number of general tropes that would fit this fanfic. Would it be best to run them by this discussion first?


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