OP listed quite a few red flags. Voting cut.
she/her | TRS needs your help! | Contributor of Trope ReportEasy cut, mainly due to the sexualization of a minor.
Art Museum Curator and frequent helper of the Web Original deprecation projectBecause of the last sentence, cut it!
The pessimist sees a dark tunnel, the optimist sees a light, the realist sees two lights and the engineer sees three idiots.Along with other things, from the page itself...
Rhayla gets secretly married to her mother, Jill, in the epilogue.
CUT!
Yep. The tags on AO3 include "Sister/Sister Incest", "Mother/Child Incest" and "Barely Legal". More red flags.
If anyone wants to give it a look to make sure if I'm not overreacting, be my guest. It's the part conveniently labelled "15 year old".
I'd like to apologize for all this.Cut per stated reasons
TRS Queue | Works That Require Cleanup of Complaining | Troper WallCut per what's mentioned above
"Leftover items still have value!"Cut
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessI don't think P5 mentions anything about incest, and based on the trope page it seems like there is something of a superhero story, so there is at least an attempt at a plot. It's one of those things where half the AO3 tags are sex tags, which is never a good sign (one being "barely legal"), but given that even video games that are little more than people getting killed in fetishized ways were voted keep for having some story, if there was enough plot this could still be keepable...
...BUT I read the first chapter alone and I'm still voting cut. It goes over the history of the twins growing up, and like FernandoLemon said, it gets super sexual when they're fifteen. It's brief, but there's a very graphic description of how the one twins wants to have sex with her sister and the narrative mentions her "habits" regarding this. I don't think this would be surprising considering all other things about the story, but it's clearly not handled in a mature manner of teenagers exploring their growing sexuality and instead flat-out fetish material.
The rest of the chapter is still pretty gross but would have had nothing straightup cutworthy (aside from a brief mention of how "pubic hair grew on their dicks and balls" when 13). But even if the rest of the story dove in to the serious superhero narrative and had everyone stay as an adult, I think that the segment of them at 15 alone is enough to get this cut.
Edited by greatpikminfan on Aug 21st 2023 at 6:05:29 AM
First, a couple of the tropers here are calling cut for invalid reasons. Incest fic is not against our rules in any way, shape or form.
Second, there are in fact valid reasons (specifically pedopandering) to cut this.
Cut.
Edited. Either way, the point stands.
Edited by Ramidel on Aug 21st 2023 at 6:32:06 AM
A lot? Only Cardboard specifically mentioned incest alone. Everyone else was way more focused on the sexualized minor thing.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessArt Museum Curator and frequent helper of the Web Original deprecation project
Ok that's bad enough but we've allowed this thing befor-
Ok nevermind cut it.
MB Pending | MB Drafts | MB DatesCut.
Come play Character Uplift Game!Cut for underage characters.
skimmed a little bit of it myself, and i hate to say that the coming out scene between the titular twins genuinely made me smile a little... aaand then it got to the girls at 12 just "lightly" pecking each other on the lips. knowing what I know about the 15-on-15 everyone else brought up... easy yeet.
ETA: i got to the scene in question, skimmed one twin thinking about sucking her twin sister's junk, immediately closed the tab. Incest is the least of this fic's problems, pack this up for a priority Uber Yeets order
Edited by worldwidewoomy on Aug 21st 2023 at 1:02:37 PM
Stan GaruKaru for clear skinYeah, this seems like a cut.
Bigotry will NEVER be welcome on TV Tropes.Sounds like a cut of all of the info given are true.
Cut
Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?Cut.
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."Here's the section in question:
15 years old.
When they were showering one night, Ashley was washing her sister’s chest and briefly imagined her having breasts. One day they might get some, she thought. And when they did, how would it feel to touch Anna’s breasts? She didn’t know why this thought had come into her mind, but now that it had, she blushed heavily. And her dick was hardening.
Um…wow….Should sisters be thinking that stuff about each other? She didn’t think so and tried to repress it. But…it kept on creeping into her mind every time thye were alone together or in the shower. She began noticing more of Anna’s body in a different, more sexual way. She wondered how it would feel to hold and even suck on Anna’s cock. They once measured how big one another was in the shower, and Ashley’s was slightly larger. She blushed at the thought of comparing them again, and even touching her sister’s dick.
But why? Why do I feel this way? Have I just been desensitised or something by Game of Thrones and Song of Ice and Fire? Jesus Christ….I need to find a girlfriend or something. Then maybe these thoughts will stop.
They didn’t stop. They only got more intense over time. When they were alone in bed together, and Anna pecked her on the lips goodnight, she imagined Anna roughly pushing her against the wall and kissing her hard. Such sexual violence horrified her and Ashley tried to repress it. But no matter how hard she would try, it always came back like the tide. It had a hold on her.
She had sex dreams about her twin, masturbated thinking about her, and watched trans porn imagining she was fucking Anna’s ass. Afterwards, she always felt disgusted and horrified with herself.
You disgusting freak, you masturbated to your own sister. Why am I like this? I can't love my own sister! But…I do…I fucking do…I’m…I’m fucking in love with Baby Sis. Fuck, I love her so much!
This final revelation calmed her down somewhat. She now knew what she was feeling. She was in love with her own twin sister who was trans as well. Now could she get rid of this love? There was only one way to find out. She had to try and move on from Anna.
I probably should're reported this sooner, since I brought this page up a year ago but never did anything about it. I forgot about it until today, I guess.
Anyway, this is transgender twincest porn. I decided to leaf through it and the first chapter also contains sexualization of a character who is stated to be 15 years old.
Edited by FernandoLemon on Aug 21st 2023 at 9:13:27 AM
I'd like to apologize for all this.