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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#14601: May 16th 2023 at 9:51:02 AM

We agreed on the Restart thread that plot and narrative was still a requirement at the same time we decided to get rid of the taste rule

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#14602: May 16th 2023 at 9:51:30 AM

I wonder if using the restart thread, which has now been repurposed to focus on CM/MB thread culture and policy, would be a good place for the preliminary discussion?

Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#14603: May 16th 2023 at 9:53:53 AM

Sounds good.

The First man
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#14604: May 16th 2023 at 9:54:29 AM

One more from Hooves of death on whom I am not sure

Check here for setting in case you missed it

Who is The Sorceress and what has she done?

Servant of Pestilence, Sorceress is in charge of experiments that enable him to infect magical creatures that would normally be immune. She was given Commander Sprinkles to infect, spending months experimenting on him. Eventually she broke his horn and turned him into sentient zombie, doing same to many other unicorns and creatures like gryffins and Sphinxes.

Making her lair into grand Canyon, where summer fairies Hide from the zombies. She filled lair with skeletons of animals and magical creatures she killed, including unicorn skin. She started capturing fairies, eventually capturing queen.

Glimer, Blaze and Queen’s Ambiguously Gay right hand Peeble venture onto caves to rescue queen. Sorceress unleshes her unicorn on them, but Glimer uses power burst to crystalise most of them. Sorceress turns into a bear in attempt to kill the heroes, but is slani by Kate.

Mitigating Factors?

Okay there is problem.

First of her relatioship to Pestilence is nothing more than boss and Psycho for Hire. She even gloats that her zombies are Superior to Pestilence’s.

More concerning is her reaction on Glimer petrifiying her unicorns. She goes “no my children!!” before saying she would enjoy killing them. Question is does she geniunely care for her unicorn creations or was she simply being over dramatic. To make it clear her creations are unicorns she captured and brainwashed into undead minions and before she treats them coldly as lackeys. Ultimately I Lean more on her simply being over dramatic that her “superior zombies” were beaten.

Heinousness?

So to give more information about general standard, If I had to describe it would be like Lupin III, not huge baseline but ones who do cross it make standard High. We have Horsemen of the Apocalypse, already mentioned loyal Fairies responsible for Black death, Peeble is mentioned to formerly be evil Banshee who lured hundreds of men to their deaths (thought it falls under Off Stage Villiany due to being one of mention).

Sorceress isn’t powefull entity with natural calamities on her side like Horsemen or ruler of one of seeting’s most powerful magical races. She is one of magical creature who filled Cave with bones of her victims, in charge of experiments which enable Pestilence to infect even more magical creatures (we don’t see experiments themselves except in brief glimpse, bit we see its effect and Sprinkles makes it clear it was a nightmare), the most Direct role out all Pestilence’s subortinates and allies.

Conclusion?

Lean yes, thought I will get if people think her one line is to geniunely mitigating.

Edited by EmperorGeode on May 16th 2023 at 9:54:51 AM

Mr-ex777 Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#14605: May 16th 2023 at 9:56:33 AM

[tup] Sorceress

This sounds like a General Grievous/Singularity case.

Edited by Mr-ex777 on May 17th 2023 at 12:56:41 AM

Echidna Astolfo my Man from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
Astolfo my Man
#14606: May 16th 2023 at 10:00:16 AM

[tup] Sorceress

I don't want to brag or anything but when it comes to being the worst, I'm always at the top!
AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#14608: May 16th 2023 at 10:08:31 AM

[tup] Sorceress.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
Iampureevil from Parts unknown Since: Nov, 2015 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
#14609: May 16th 2023 at 10:23:20 AM

"Human Centipede has so many people doing such awful things that there's no way for anyone to stand out, so regardless of taste no one would keep anyway."

This isn't really true, at least for the first movie. Maybe you could make the case for the second and at a stretch also the third, but in the first Heiter stands far above anyone else, as there's not really any other villains in that movie and I don't think comparisons to the people in the other two movies should hold that much weight, given each individual movie is a different universe/continuity.

Granted, for the second and third movies I think the people who'd most likely to be considered CMs have other reasons they wouldn't qualify, Martin has too much of a Freudian Excuse and arguable agency issues, and Bill Boss probably isn't played serious enough.

If the only reason Heiter doesn't qualify is because it doesn't have "enough plot" or it's too "tasteless" (lol), then sure, whatever, though what counts for these thresholds seems very arbitrary to me from my time lurking around here.

(Maybe this message would better fit in the other thread, but I'm putting it here as it's a reply to something from this thread.)

Edited by Iampureevil on May 16th 2023 at 5:24:34 PM

I'm barely there, I'm everywhere
AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#14610: May 16th 2023 at 10:24:39 AM

Each movie has the characters make their own HC. No one stands out in heinousness.

MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#14611: May 16th 2023 at 10:28:49 AM

[tup] to Dread Emperor Traitorous, Pestilence, Ryuk and Bonko the Clown.

Abstain on the Sorceress, that sounds a bit to much for something that isn't directly controdicted.

Iampureevil from Parts unknown Since: Nov, 2015 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
#14612: May 16th 2023 at 10:28:50 AM

Well, I already said why comparing between the movies doesn't make much sense, but even if you do, I think you could argue Heiter does, because he's played a lot more seriously than Bill Boss, and doesn't have the same level of Freudian Excuse as Martin.

I'm barely there, I'm everywhere
Purgatoryisof2 Man in the Yellow Hat Since: Aug, 2022
Man in the Yellow Hat
#14613: May 16th 2023 at 10:28:58 AM

Isn't each movie a separate canon?

Abstain on the Sorceress, this sounds more extreme than the typical cases where villains who are displeased at their minions dying get upvoted. Had she shown herself to be overdramatic before?

[down][down] Was replying to Austin.

Edited by Purgatoryisof2 on May 16th 2023 at 1:31:05 PM

He/Him
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#14614: May 16th 2023 at 10:29:51 AM

[up][up][up][up][up] Given that the other movies were exactly what I was talking about, yeah, heinousness is the issue there. Heiter started it, but each antagonist makes a far worse HC than he ever did. Canon or not, it's the same series and the characters are basing their crimes on his, so there's still connections there.

Yes to the Sorceress while I'm here.

Edited by STARCRUSHER99 on May 16th 2023 at 1:30:44 PM

Iampureevil from Parts unknown Since: Nov, 2015 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
#14615: May 16th 2023 at 10:29:53 AM

"Isn't each movie a separate canon?"

Yes, I said that in my first message. Granted, I'm still not sure if he would qualify, anyway, because Sadistic Horror movies have a high heinous standard as a genre.

Edited by Iampureevil on May 16th 2023 at 5:34:19 PM

I'm barely there, I'm everywhere
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#14616: May 16th 2023 at 10:37:03 AM

Yes to Ryuk, Bonko and the Sorceress

Even if the argument is there for Heiter in heinousness, I don't think there's anything to invalidate his feelings over his dead dog(s). I'd need more than proof than just "maybe he only cared about it as an experiment" when he has a grave for it, keeps pictures, and seems genuinely sorrowful when reminiscing. So unless that could be explained away, debating the heinous standard isn't really needed.

[down] So sorry to hear, mir. Take all the time you need.

Edited by Ravok on May 16th 2023 at 11:06:03 AM

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#14617: May 16th 2023 at 10:45:55 AM

[tup]pestilence and sorceress.

Well sad news. My uncle has passed. So uh I think I'll be taking a break from the thread for a few days.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#14619: May 16th 2023 at 10:52:43 AM

To answer Purgatory’s question she has shown a flair for dramatic. Just a chapter before most of them are Crystalised she boasts about how their will beleng to her and only one she has Direct interaction with (Sprinkles) she is shown to be controling sadist giddy at idea of making him kill his friends.

Really sorry to hear that Mir, take all time you need.

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#14620: May 16th 2023 at 10:56:31 AM

Condolences mir. Yes to the sorceress.

username2527 Since: Nov, 2013
#14621: May 16th 2023 at 11:06:41 AM

I am going to go against the grain and abstain on Ryuk. Even if he passes the standard (and I am even Wary there considering Mia/Misa has a lot of kills despite being infinitely less powerful than Ryuk), his actions feel underwhelming for a death god.

Echidna Astolfo my Man from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
Astolfo my Man
#14622: May 16th 2023 at 11:11:51 AM

Sorry to hear what happened to your uncle Mir. Really hope you get better

I don't want to brag or anything but when it comes to being the worst, I'm always at the top!
emperors Messenger from another dimension. Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Messenger from another dimension.
#14623: May 16th 2023 at 11:20:36 AM

I am so sorry mir. All the best.

Yes to Sorceress by the way.

Welcome to the world of greatest media!
futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#14624: May 16th 2023 at 11:35:14 AM

Sorry to hear that mir. Best wishes.

Siegfried1337 Unofficial co-Wiki Curator for Magnificent Bastard from the Ashes Since: Sep, 2018 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
#14625: May 16th 2023 at 11:36:56 AM

About Ethiron, I think it's just more than just brainwashing. Apparently closer proximity to it causes time dilation, and Ethiron being partially unsealed resulted in the inhabitants of New Kyrsa going insane from the space-time dilation. Just a tidbit. Also, Ethiron used the New Kyrsa soldiers to raid the Celestial City Constellia, which was a major contributing factor to the Celestials' loss and the city beginning to soon crash onto the surface, and some of the consequences can be seen in the game with Stone Knights and Space Mudskippers attacking anyone they land from the debris.

Edited by Siegfried1337 on May 16th 2023 at 11:40:44 AM

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