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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

PassingThrough Since: Feb, 2024
#41176: Apr 7th 2024 at 9:37:03 PM

Before I pass out and having talked this one over with you—looking over the script to doublecheck myself—I'm gonna strengthen the yes I gave years back. It's minimalist but we see the cruelty of the witches, mysterious as they may be, throughout the film as they terrorize the family by zoning in on and brutally murder (possibly raping) the kids until poor Thomasin is left alone and despondent at which point Black Phillip "gallantly" strides in to creepily seduce the (naked) teenager into becoming a witch by selling her soul to him and then she ends the film cackling mad. We see what the witches do, we see he makes her into one and we see him lead her to the circle where they're performing their cult ceremony. It's all but spelled out he's Satan and to me there's enough implication he's behind everything and a vile, seductive creep to boot.

Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#41178: Apr 7th 2024 at 9:41:56 PM

Next up for Dceased, this is a pretty short one. Just enough presence to be a genuine threat, but very basic adaptation.

Who is Trigon?

A demonic overlord, Trigon... isn't exactly happy with everything going on with this zombie apocalypse. Those infected by Anti-Life don't truly die and will remain as they are in perpetuity unless killed, so Hell isn't getting their due in souls from the horrors above. Trigon decides to take matters into his own hands and personally invade, burning the entire planet of the living and Anti-Living alike. John Constantine, receiving warning of this, goes on a long quest to collect dozens of magical trinkets capable of putting him on even footing with the hell lord.

After emerging and devastating Paris, Trigon is confronted by Constantine, whom the demon king promises will be tortured forever in hell. Constantine inevitable dies... but then, in classic Constantine fashion, bullshits his way into keeping all that uber powerful magic as a ghost, giving him enough power to possess Trigon. He proceeds to stab himself with the Spear of Destiny to end the demon for good.

Mitigating factors?

Nothing redeeming or agency-impairing. The main question is if he's heinous enough, but he should be fine with trying to blow up the planet. The only other real competition is Anti-Life itself, and it's a primordial god; there are other villains with histories of galactic genocide like Brainiac, but his stuff isn't too in focus aside from a brief recap of Supergirl's origin, and even then, Trigon is still a major figure in hell where torture is common place—we don't see it, but he promises he'll join in on what the other demons do to Constantine, and his description isn't pretty.

Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#41180: Apr 7th 2024 at 9:50:53 PM

[tup] for Black Philip and Trigon.

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#41181: Apr 7th 2024 at 9:55:31 PM

And a yes to Trigon

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#41182: Apr 7th 2024 at 9:56:33 PM

Sure to Trigon

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#41183: Apr 7th 2024 at 10:02:20 PM

[tup] ALE, Devil Goat, and Trigon

"No running in the halls!"
Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#41184: Apr 7th 2024 at 10:18:13 PM

[tup] Wonka, Gaunt, Anti-Life Equation, Palpatine, Black Philip, Trigon

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#41185: Apr 7th 2024 at 10:22:15 PM

[tup]anti life and trigon.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ComputeryGuy1614 Since: Oct, 2022
Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#41187: Apr 7th 2024 at 11:07:40 PM

[tup] to the Anti-Life equation and Trigon.

The First man
TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#41188: Apr 7th 2024 at 11:38:38 PM

[tup] for Black Phillip (fun fact, he gets a shoutout in Darkest Dungeon II) and Trigon.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
jlvs200s Jogo from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
Jogo
#41190: Apr 7th 2024 at 11:52:23 PM

[tup] The Anti-Life Equation (is this the first incarnation of it to count?), Another version Palpatine and Trigon and Black Phillip.

"Stand proud, Sukuna, you are strong." | He/Him
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#41191: Apr 8th 2024 at 12:07:01 AM

Yes to the Anti-Life Equation, Palpatine, Black Phillip, and Trigon.

Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup thread
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#41192: Apr 8th 2024 at 12:58:56 AM

[tup] Anti-Life Equation itself, Palpatine, demonic Goat and Trigon

Just to announce that Ghal-Sur will be joining me in disscusing Rebel Moon part two.

Edited by EmperorGeode on Apr 8th 2024 at 8:59:33 AM

VeryVileVillian (Apprentice)
#41193: Apr 8th 2024 at 2:37:21 AM

Yes to Gaunt, the Anti-Life Equation, Palpatine, Black Phillip, and Trigon

Edited by VeryVileVillian on Apr 8th 2024 at 12:38:04 PM

Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#41194: Apr 8th 2024 at 2:47:12 AM

[tup]Anti-Life, Palp, Trigon, and Phil

PolarPhantom Since: Jun, 2012
#41195: Apr 8th 2024 at 3:21:35 AM

[tdown] Willy Wonka.

[tup] Anti-Life, which justifies my hate.

Also [tup] Palpatine, Trigon and Phillip.

Edited by PolarPhantom on Apr 8th 2024 at 11:06:03 AM

LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
#41196: Apr 8th 2024 at 4:02:32 AM

[tup]Anti-Life Equation, Black Philip, Trigon and infinityith and 1 Palpatine

In honor of Akira Toriyama
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
Bozzy Since: Feb, 2023
#41198: Apr 8th 2024 at 4:28:25 AM

Hey, everyone, sorry for disappearing with a write-up due. Real life got hellish for a while but things are good now and I have Ashley's write-up ready

  • The Night in Question**: Ashley Henderson, a sociopathic teenage girl and classmate of the protagonist obsessed with becoming a famous actress, discovers that she is the great-granddaughter of Hollywood starlet Mona Moody. After learning this, she ruthlessly attacks those she perceives as standing in the way of the glamorous life she deserves due to her lineage. Ashley seduces a party caterer to help beat her classmate Rebecca into a coma for owning a necklace that once belonged to Mona that Ashley now covets, framing another girl, being gleeful over sending the latter to prison. Posing as Rebecca, Ashley cruelly exploits her victim's relative, Mona's old doctor, suffering from dementia, pressing him for information, leading to his fatal overdose on medication. Ashley attempts to silence Rebecca by posing as a nurse and inducing life-threatening heart attacks in elderly hospital patients simply as a distraction before nearly smothering her classmate with a pillow, showing no remorse when caught in the act. Driven by pure arrogance and entitlement, Ashley shows no regard for human life and is willing to do anything to satisfy her deluded dreams of stardom.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#41199: Apr 8th 2024 at 5:03:33 AM

Yes to Palpatine, Devil Goat, DC duo.

Though for the Equation, can someone please explain how DC usually handles those agency issues? Is it like Demons in Marvel where they have agency even though they're created out of evil or something?

Edited by ACW on Apr 8th 2024 at 8:55:27 AM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
MermaidEyes15 A Girl, Just One of Many Kinds from The Grand Dance of the Vast Universe of Life Since: Dec, 2021 Relationship Status: Puppy love
A Girl, Just One of Many Kinds
#41200: Apr 8th 2024 at 5:43:21 AM

Yes to Black Philip. Wanna ask, what about The Witch herself? Or the entity who is doing all the witchy stuff in service of Philip?

Edited by MermaidEyes15 on Apr 8th 2024 at 8:43:49 AM

Keep Fighting. Keep Loving.

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