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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#37701: Feb 18th 2024 at 2:57:58 AM

[tup]kroleg

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
WatTambor Since: Oct, 2020
#37702: Feb 18th 2024 at 3:24:14 AM

@Ti M Ber 1566

If there is enough story, they should be viable.

ColdNovemberRain89 Since: Aug, 2021
#37703: Feb 18th 2024 at 4:01:28 AM

Back to the subject of Rain Code, everybody in Kanai Ward was killed and replaced by their clones in a science experiment gone horribly wrong. Once they stopped acting feral, they obliviously continued to live their clone parent's lives after Amaterasu Corporation covered it up. Once the truth was revealed to the public, they continue to act like as if they were the original. I hope that helps.

Edited by ColdNovemberRain89 on Feb 18th 2024 at 4:02:08 AM

AbsoluteRainbow Absolute Rainbow & the tales between worlds from Hanoi, Vietnam Since: Jul, 2023
Absolute Rainbow & the tales between worlds
#37704: Feb 18th 2024 at 4:13:41 AM

[up] That makes sense.

Absolute Rainbow
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
jlvs200s Jogo from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
Jogo
#37706: Feb 18th 2024 at 5:48:41 AM

[tup] Kenjaka, Hans Kroleg and Kaiko

Here's an SCP candidate from me to celebrate the SCP-8000 contest and the start of Series IX. I've been thinking about him as a potential candidate for around six months now, but had some doubts on him counting, so I guess it's time to rip off the band-aid and give this nasty piece of work a proper proposal.
But first, some disclaimers:

  1. I'm still not entirely sure of the candidate's migating factors and resources, so I've included a link to the original story in case someone wants to make their own judgement on the candidate's qualifications.
  2. Given everything that happened on the cleanup thread within the last few months, if there are any inaccuracies featured in my EP, then I didn't make them on purpose. This proposal is meant to be wholly in good faith, is based entirely on details included within the article and my interpretation of these details, and I've included a link to the original story to not "cover up" any inaccuracies I might have made while creating this proposal.
  3. And most importantly of all, the story my candidate comes from, and by extension, this EP, heavily focuses on child abuse, psychological torture and the mention of major injuries to one's body. If you think you're unable to handle such topics, then I advise you to skip this proposal.
     What's the work? 
SCP Foundation is a collaborative writing site focused on a secret organization that contains anomalies to protect the veil while also conducting research on these anomalies.

My candidate comes from SCP-6618, written by Ecronak. Prior to the events of the article, a chain of disappearances happened in the state of Wyoming. While investigating these disappearances, SCP-6618, an anomaly seemingly tied to said disappearances, was discovered and contained by the Foundation. SCP-6618 is a VCD called “PAPA’S WAYS ON HOW TO RAISE AND DISCIPLINE YOUR CHILD” that plays a different video when replayed. These videos retain mostly the same format: James Vane, a 20-year-old college student, is subjected to various... unorthodox disciplinary methods by another entity.
     Who is SCP-6618-A/"Papa" and what has he done? 
SCP-6618-A, referred to as "Papa" within the recordings, is the creator? of SCP-6618 and the one that subjects Vane to several extreme disciplinary techniques, causing Vane's mental state to regress. His identity, appearance and purpose are unknown, but he's seemingly a Technopath with the ability to "exercise unlimited control over a technological medium through the use of a specific object of focus."
  • In the first recording, "Papa" subjects Vane to a "Time-Out" by placing him by the corner of the wall and making him unable to move his body. Vane makes twenty-two unsuccessful attempts over the course of 19 hours to break free and screams for somebody to help him. Over the next 78 hours, Vane, suffering from the effects of dehydration, mostly stops moving and only makes an attempt to move his head 52 hours into the time-lapse. After around 4 days of being trapped at the corner of the wall, Vane's "Time-Out" ends as Papa approaches Vane, while the latter lets out a raspy scream.
  • In the second recording, Papa places Vane, who's stated within the logs to be thinner than in the first recording, at a dinner table with several plates of food and water. Vane happily consumes the dishes given to him, but avoids eating dishes with vegetables and tries to hide his belching. After he's done eating, Vane notices that Papa has seemingly left and attempts to escape while being relieved. However, this attempt fails as Papa forces Vane back to the dining table, forcefully stuffs lettuce in his mouth, and commands him to chew. Vane refuses and tries to vomit, but Papa forces the lettuce further down Vane's mouth, with Vane sobbing quietly. The spotlight turns off again as Vane is heard sobbing and retching, and when the light turns on again, Vane is shown eating the lettuce and is in pain as he swallows it.
  • The article then proceeds to skip to the sixth recording. Papa gives Vane a broom and forces him to sweep the floor in order to teach him responsibility. However, Vane hatches a plan to escape by throwing the broom at the camera and applies tape to the spotlight to ensure that it can't turn off, preventing Papa from harming him further. It's noted Vane's voice is starting to mimic the voice of a prepubescent boy during his celebration. Papa undergoes a Villainous Breakdown in which he repeatedly places 'NO' on the screen. Unfortunately for Vane, the tape is ripped off, the spotlight turns off again, and Papa then proceeds to punish Vane by repeatedly throwing his body to the floor for forty minutes straight as the sounds of bones breaking and Vane's screams are heard while the word "PUNISHMENT." fills up the screen.
  • The eighth recording starts with the title "PAPA’S WAYS ON HOW TO PUNISH YOUR CHILD". In this recording, Papa rants about how he showed "love" towards James, gave him food and "raised" him, yet the latter still chose to rebel against him. Papa slaps Vane, causing liquid to splat onto the floor, and states he will undergo the same fate as his siblings. During Papa's rant, James is heard crying like a small child, begs for Papa's forgiveness, and states that he loves his "Papa". The camera turns away and shows parts of crushed corpses sticking to the surface of the wall, and the sounds of Vane's screaming get louder as he looks into the mirror.
  • In the ninth and final recording, Vane is shown lying down in a bed with a small blanket while also mimicking the behavior of an infant. Vane's body is shown to have sustained several injuries, such as contorted limbs, a missing finger nail, and flayed skin. While this is happening, "Papa" advises to the viewers that they should ignore the crying of babies as they are just seeking your attention, and if they still continue to cry, you must "force them to cry it all out.". At the end of the video, faint crying is heard alongside Vane's cries as the words 'Papa loves you all, my babies' appear at the bottom of the screen.
  • The article then shifts to four months after the discovery and containment of SCP-6618. Foundation Web crawlers have successfully managed to trace Papa's location to a small cabin in Wyoming (which is stated in the article to be placed near the site of several disappearances from 1990 to 2004). The Foundation sends a Mobile Task Force (MTF) to investigate the location. The MTF enters the basement of the cabin, drawing their weapons in case Papa's still around, only to discover that Papa has already left. What the MTF does find, however, are several boxes filled with other SCP-6618 instances, as well as twenty television sets displaying videos similar to those of SCP-6618 but with different individuals. Noteworthy among those videos is one of a malnourished woman being chained to a wall, and another one features a person crushed against and sticking to a wall.
  • The MTF continues to watch the videos until they are interrupted by a rumbling sound coming from a well-like structure. The MTF's captain removes the lid and looks into the pit. Within the pit are at least several hundred bodies, all of them churning like thick liquid and wailing like infants. Several of these corpses have been crushed to the wall to the point of near liquefaction or granularization. Among these corpses is one with a damaged face, contorted bones and a single arm that's climbing on the side of the well. The MTF identifies said corpse as Vane's, who's only able to scream "Papa!"
     Any migating qualities? 
My main doubt about Papa keeping as a CM is whether he actually cares for his victims. One line that's important to consider is this one from recording 7:
"I LOVED YOU. I FED YOU. I RAISED YOU. AND NOW YOU REBEL AGAINST ME?!"
That love Papa supposedly showed to Vane—that's entirely non-existent, as up until this point in the article, Papa has only been shown horrifically abusing Vane; the closest thing to a moment of care is when he gives Vane food and water in recording 2. But I don't feel that action is redeeming, since that act was directly used by Papa to set up another one of his abusive actions. Furthermore, the above line is dropped when Papa is verbally punishing Vane for "rebelling" against him (trying to escape his abuser), and directly before this, he physically abused Vane by slapping him. Considering the previous details, I feel that it's reasonable enough to assume the above line isn't an indication of care, but an attempt at manipulating Vane into thinking that he loves him, while also trying to guilt-trip Vane into making him think that he's at fault for his own punishment and not Papa.

Besides the line mentioned above, the article has two other lines that imply Papa cares for his victims that I feel are harder to write off:
"Papa loves all of you, my babies."
"I HAVE TO LEAVE. PAPA LOVES YOU SO MUCH."
Let's look at the context of these lines, shall we?
  • The first one is dropped at the end of the last recording. By this point in the article, Papa has regressed his victims' (including Vane's) mental state to that of an infant and dumped their bodies within the pit. I'd also like to point out that the first line is dropped after Papa gives the viewers a speech about how they should ignore their "babies" and "force them to cry it all out." Given that the babies mentioned by Papa in this speech are a metaphor for his victims, and "forcing them to cry it out" seems to mean him dumping his victims' bodies in his well'where several of these bodies have been crushed, it's highly unlikely that Papa will ever let them out of that pit since they continue crying even after their corpses have rotted away and won't stop crying anytime soon.
  • The second one is hastily written on the lid of the well at the end of the article. By this point in the article, Papa has left his cabin in order to escape from the Foundation and literally leaves his "kids" to rot.

Taking everything mentioned above and everything that's shown within the article into consideration, I don't think Papa has any care for Vane or his other victims: He horrifically abuses Vane on several occasions, causes a regression in his mental state, tries to guilt-trip him after a failed escape attempt, dumps his body in a pit with a high likelihood of him being crushed, and literally leaves him and his other victims (who, through context clues found within the article, are indicated to have undergone similar abuse as Vane) to rot after he's done abusing them.

The only lines that might indicate any care or love for his victims are dropped when he's punishing Vane for defying him or when he's already finished destroying his victims mental states and dumps their corpses in a pit where they have a high chance of being crushed, with his speech in the last recording also implying that he isn't going to interact with them anymore or let them out of the pit. This, alongside the fact that he's already established himself as an Abusive Parent who's willing to emotionally manipulate one of his victims, makes it very likely that these lines aren't an actual display of care, but instead an attempt by an abuser to manipulate their victims into thinking he loves them.

As for the other potentional migating factors:

  • While never making a physical appearance within the article itself, The captions of the videos and his actions do enough to establish Papa's personality as that of a seemingly jovial parent trying to discipline their kids while also giving parenting advice to the viewer watching. However, that kindness is a facade, given that he dishes cruel punishments to his "kids" the moment they slightly step out of line and even undergoes a Villainous Breakdown when Vane manages to temporarily) escape his grasp.
  • There isn't any indication that Papa suffers from Blue-and-Orange Morality, given that he knows what "good" and "bad" behavior is and, by all accounts, is just showing the behavior of your average abuser. One whose abuse of his victims is extreme, mind you, but still just an ordinary abuser who even undergoes a Villainous Breakdown the moment his victim manages to turn against him.
  • The article has a substantial enough plot to have a candidate.
All in all, I'd say this quote gives a better description of Papa than I could ever create:
“Well, we saw the logs. Guy’s a sicko.”
- Gomez
     Is he bad enough? 
I'm not exaggerating when I say that SCP has a high heinous standard, with some of our current keepers inflicting A Fate Worse Than Death on their victims, and some of them are even rapists.
But even with such a high standard, I still feel that Papa stands out enough from our current keepers.

Firstly, Papa's abuse of Vane is genuinely horrifying and repulsive. Within the article, Papa is heavily implied to have kidnapped Vane, places him in an And I Must Scream scenario for about 4 days while he starts to suffer from dehydration (and given that he's thinner in the next recording, possibly also starvation), forcefully shoves food down his mouth when he refuses to eat his vegetables, almost causing him to vomit, and he horrifically punishes Vane when he rebels by throwing him to the floor for forty minutes, causing severe injuries to Vane's body. And to make things worse, the abuse suffered by Vane causes his mind to gradually regress to that of an infant, and after that, Papa dumps his body in a well where he'll be literally left to rot. But of course, even if his abuse is terrible, there's still only one victim.

But here's the thing: while Vane is the only victim given a full, in-depth look within the article, there's enough evidence to suggest that the abusive actions displayed by Papa within the article are routine for him and that he inflicted a similar type of abuse on his other victims. These pieces of evidence include things like the existence of boxes full of SCP-6618 instances, videos similar to those on SCP-6618 playing on the televisions in Papa's basement, and the mention of "siblings" during Papa's punishment of Vane. That's right, Papa didn't just abuse Vane and caused his mental state to regress; he also uses a similar style of abuse on and regressed the mental state of at least several hundred different individuals, as indicated by the fact that the pit contains at least several hundred corpses in a similar state to Vane's. And to top it all off, Papa's victims continue to wail like infants even after they've rotted away and should've died, while there's also the high likelihood they will be crushed ato the point of near liquification or granularization due to the sheer volume of bodies within the pit.

One last thing I'd like to mention is that, from what we can infer from the article, Papa's resources aren't exactly the highest: he's seen working alone throughout the whole article, and while the description states that Papa is able to "exercise unlimited control over a technological medium through the use of a specific object of focus", what we see within the article is more limited. Papa's anomalous abilities seem to be mostly limited to adding captions to the videos on SCP-6618 and using them to communicate with Vane, somehow keeping his victims alive even when they should've died thanks to things like crushing or dehydration, and the possibility he knew the Foundation was coming for him due to them either watching the videos or using his website to track his IP address to his cabin. There is the possibility that Papa might have used his technopathy to further Vane's abuse by using the darkness caused by the turned-off spotlight to move and alter Vane's body, but I don't think there's enough evidence within the article to confirm this theory, and it could just be me looking too deep into things. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

In conclusion, I think Papa is heinous enough to stand out within the high heinous standard of the SCP universe due to the horrific nature of his abuse, the rather unique crime of regressing his victims mental state, the A Fate Worse Than Death of being crushed against the walls of the pit while also continuing to cry even after their bodies have rotten away, and his relatively low resources.

Final Verdict

I'm personally leaning yes on him, but I can understand if he's rejected due there potentially being uncertainty over his redeeming qualities and even if he's rejected, I hope we can all agree that he was worth the discussion.

Edited by jlvs200s on Feb 18th 2024 at 2:56:09 PM

"Stand proud, Sukuna, you are strong." | He/Him
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Elimations1 King Kandy Kane from Kandy Kingdom Since: Jan, 2023 Relationship Status: Coming soon to theaters
GamerBoy18 Mr. Since: Apr, 2022 Relationship Status: Abstaining
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition (Troper Knight)
Big Catch, Sparkle Edition
#37713: Feb 18th 2024 at 7:15:21 AM

We normally do new EP in cases like that.

Alright, cool. One will be up for Kevin after work today. cool

Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure Pureness
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#37714: Feb 18th 2024 at 7:52:44 AM

Alrighty. The moment has arrived. I give you all...

  • Road Kill:
    • Vol. 4:
      • "From These Muddy Waters", by Patrick C. Harrison III: The Caddaja is a mythical man-eating sea monster. More than just a mindless beast, the Caddaja telepathically lures people to dive in his lake in order to devour them, such as forcing Pappy’s childhood friend Otto Franklin to jump in or else he’ll reveal his secret to the world. Having been the true cause behind Joe’s father Jacob’s demise, the Caddaja had originally intended to sadistically eat the baby Joe before Jacob gave up his life to protect him.
      • "Hometown Hero", by Dan Fields: Bobby Roy "Lone Star" Leighton was once the star track runner for Adams Creek High School before going on a road trip following his graduation. Having turned to a life of crime to fuel his drug habits, Bobby Roy teamed up with "Jupiter Genie" to slaughter an entire family, including a toddler and pregnant woman, for their car. Settling in Utah, Bobby Roy became a cult leader of hedonistic cave dwellers, encouraging them to commit crimes to score drugs and money, which led to such incidents as an old man getting beaten to near death and buried under rocks.
    • Vol 5’s "Serial Killers Anonymous", by John Kojack: Bruce Hatchet, a seemingly ordinary truck driver, is revealed to be a twisted serial killer who murders for fun. Heavily implied to have attended numerous get-togethers all across Texas in order to kill people, Bruce, feeling annoyed that killers like Bundy get more recognition from the titular group than him, proceeds to brutally murder every member of the group, including the innocent employees at the hosting spot, with his sadistic killings even earning approval from the demonic Bloody Bethany.
    • Vol 6’s "The Sons of Billy Clay", by Stephen Graham Jones:
      • Billy Clay himself was a psychopath with a thirst for murder that only increased after his return from the Second World War. Killing people and hiding their bodies in his dad’s barn, the townsfolk had enough and decided to lock him inside his barn and burn it down. Having predicted this, Billy transferred his soul to a nearby bull, who escaped before the barn’s destruction. Joining the rodeo, Billy would go on to kill numerous employees, fellow bulls, and audience members before being put down, his murderous rampage inspiring the likes of Charlie Tinker to continue his legacy.
      • Charlie Tinker, aka "C Bar T", is a butcher who carries on Billy Clay’s legacy for the sake of profit. Having carved up Billy’s bull body for beef and finding him delicious, Charlie created a serum from Billy’s flesh that he uses to transfer death row inmates’ souls into rodeo bulls, having them cause enough mayhem until they’d have to be put down, with their meat sold by Charlie. With many dying from his bulls, Charlie’s even willing to turn his own traitorous henchmen into rodeo bulls as punishment.
    • Vol 7’s "We Share Our Rage with the River", by Josh Rountree: The narrator’s Father is a racist, controlling farmer who sees everything as his property. Having discovered the river women inhabiting the Brazos river, the Father took to fishing them out to make them his river brides, enslaving them while simultaneously having an affair with one of them in the past. Harboring a strong hatred for the Karankawa tribe, to the point of killing any he sees, the Father uses the mercy killing of his river bride Mama Agatha as an excuse to slaughter the tribe and collect their scalps, despite having grown bored of Agatha.

"No running in the halls!"
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#37716: Feb 18th 2024 at 8:26:18 AM

Jackie, you wanna create a work page for the series so we can create a CM page?

Also, did the Disturbed dude get enough votes? I remember there being concern about another music video.

Edited by ACW on Feb 18th 2024 at 11:27:03 AM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#37717: Feb 18th 2024 at 8:35:34 AM

[up] I’ll see what I can do

"No running in the halls!"
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
#37719: Feb 18th 2024 at 8:56:02 AM

Yes: library, turtles, Kazuya, Ravok, rainbow, jlvs, geode, grey, umaprasis, Larry(me), duck, Robert, emerald, (13)

No: (0)

Abstain: Idisagree (1)

He’s good, anyways, I don’t think the videos take place in the same continuity

Edited by LarryT on Feb 18th 2024 at 8:57:08 AM

In honor of Akira Toriyama
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#37720: Feb 18th 2024 at 9:55:16 AM

  • Forbidden Worlds issue 137’s “Brainwashed!”: Queen Malva is the vile leader of the Kruzians from the planet Nova. After the peaceful species with which they shared the planet drive them off after the Kruzians try to exterminate them, Malva sets her sights on Earth as their new home and base of operations. She leads a destructive invasion, intent on completely destroying humanity. When Magicman tries to fight the invasion, Malva has him captured and brainwashed into believing he is a Kruzian, unleashing him on Earth’s military and using him as a propaganda tool. After Magicman is freed from her control and goes to Nova to ask for help, Malva brainwashes him once again to turn him against potential allies while her army finishes its conquest of Earth.
  • Chaotic series finale “Son Of The Spiritlands”: Vitog is a cruel Spirit Creature of War who terrorised the Spiritlands until he was defeated and reduced to a non-corporeal form by Tangath Toborn. Vitog comes to Perim and spreads destruction across the land, at one point attacking an innocent village, threatening to completely destroy Perim unless Tangath Toborn fights him. When Tangath Toborn faces him, Vitog uses Mugic to gain the upper hand, intent on completely destroying both him and Perim.

[down] Yep

Edited by EmperorGeode on Feb 18th 2024 at 11:11:47 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
JoeDevaney29 Since: Oct, 2023
#37722: Feb 18th 2024 at 11:19:14 AM

Going by what the person above said, if the original and the homonculus are treated as the same person, then Yomi Hellsmile should definitely be added. He has absolutely no redeeming qualities and pole-vaults over the game's (quite high) heinous standard.

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#37723: Feb 18th 2024 at 12:30:35 PM

Yes to Hans and Papa

  • Hijacked: Rostow Pawlak is a chief agent of the terrorist organization known as the Tribe, who enacts a hijacking plot to finance more of the Tribe's deadly mass murder plots. Ambushing and killing a squad of MI6 agents who suspected the plot, Rostow takes everyone onboard billionaire Bruce Lieb's private plane hostage, threatening them all to extort an exorbitant ransom. Killing his own insider when she outlives her usefulness, Rostow slowly murders more of the hostages to indicate his threat, and he reveals that even when the ransom is paid, he plans to blow up the entire plane and leave his team to die while he makes his escape.

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#37724: Feb 18th 2024 at 12:50:41 PM

[tup] to Tamashiki Shigaraki, Unnamed Father, Bansi Sahu, Jenjaku, Kaiko and Hans Kroleg.

Joe: If that's the case, you need to propose them.

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#37725: Feb 18th 2024 at 12:59:15 PM

Just finished setting up the Road Kill: Texas Horror by Texas Writers page. Now I just need a quote, which I'll look into tomorrow.

"No running in the halls!"

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