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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#27851: Oct 14th 2023 at 12:49:33 PM

Oh hey, I’ve actually seen this one. [tup] Clowny

"No running in the halls!"
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#27852: Oct 14th 2023 at 12:58:35 PM

[tup] to the Clown Prince of Crime! Wait a minute... Wrong Clown! Still [tup]. (What's funny in a horrible way is that Joker himself has started chopping off people's faces in recent stories)

Also I would like to apologize for the writeups of the Nictus Duo and Giovanna Scaldi taking a while! I've been distracted by College!

And this may be a bit of a tangent, but I've always been kinda curious why there isn't a YMMV trope for a pure good character when there is one for a pure evil character. Should I bring the question elsewhere?

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#27853: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:00:57 PM

[tup] for Wellber, Samukai, the Deity of Death Duo, Chthon, and Clown.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#27854: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:01:42 PM

[up][up] Incorruptible Pure Pureness.

Edited by Beast on Oct 14th 2023 at 1:01:58 AM

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#27855: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:02:54 PM

[up]Oh okay. I guess I just didn't make the connection since CM is YMMV and IPP isn't. Sorry!

Back to the thread topic...

  • City of Heroes:
    • Arakhn is the leader of the Nictus, and she shows herself to be one of the cruelest of them all. Seeking a new home base for her Nictus forces in the war with the other Kheldians opposed to her monstrous ways, Arakhn would come to Earth during the time of WWII, and make contact with the Axis powers. Arakhn would then craft a plan alongside the equally monstrous Requiem to subsume the entirety of Planet Earth with Nictus forces. Helping to overthrow the 5th Column in order to gain the resources of the newly formed Council, Arakhn would begin conducting horrific experiments on unwitting members of other villain groups, and even her own soldiers in order to create more warriors who bore the powers of a Nictus symbiote. Gathering up Shadow Seeds to summon her armies to Earth, Arakhn is thwarted by the heroes of Paragon City before later escaping, vowing to never stop her work until all life on Earth has been fully consumed by the Nictus.

Here's writeup #1! Working on the other two now.

Edited by ForgoLight on Oct 14th 2023 at 1:12:39 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
fanman Insert title here from Earth-Prime/Earth-1218 Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Insert title here
#27856: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:04:30 PM

[up]There is a Pure Good category on the Heroes Wiki where users vote, but you should go over to Fandom for that.

[tup]Chthon, Clown, Samukai.

Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#27857: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:08:09 PM

[tup] Lavos.

[tup] Wellber.

[tup] Samukai.

[tup] Zeni and Kurreli.

[tup] Chthon.

[tup] The Clown.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#27859: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:13:32 PM

So I just finished Arakhn's writeup, as seen above. Thoughts?

Edited by ForgoLight on Oct 14th 2023 at 1:13:46 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#27861: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:21:25 PM

Assuming they have prior victims—which seems to be the case—yes to the Clown.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#27862: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:36:21 PM

And my last for today from the 1977...

The I Sland of Dr. Moreau. You know who!

Who is Dr. Moreau?

a depraved mad scientist wholly exiled from the field of medicine for his theories and methods. Moreau set up shop on an island with his entourage and has used injections to turn the animals into humanlike beings. To keep this system going, Moreau enforces a brutal system of law upon them. Anyone who breaks the law is taken to the House of Pain, to be subject to new surgery and torture. Upon the arrival of Braddock, a traveler, Moreau sees a chance to involve B Raddock in his experimentation and has the beautiful young Maria seduce him

When Braddock runs afoul of the beast men, Moreau arrives and cruelly dominates the group. Moreau is so bad that one beast man begs Braddock to kill it rather than be forced to go back to the House of Pain, prommpting an issue when killing occurs. Moreau sets about turning the place into his own torture chamber to restore order and beats the beast men into submission before taking Braddock and painfully injecting him with the serum to see him degrade into a beast.

As things spiral downward, Montgomery tries to save Braddock only for Moreau to straight up murder hi. Upon seeing Montgomery killed, the Beast men rebel and Moreau is mortally wounded trying to kill or beat them down before being killed b y Braddock

Mitigating issues?

Nope. Moreau is even worse than normal here. He's turned into a harsh control freak whose actions and deeds surpass even his other CM incarnations.

Conclusion?

And another keep.

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#27863: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:38:41 PM

[tup]Dr. Moreau

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#27865: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:41:15 PM

[tup]Clown and Moreau.

Why so serious?
fanman Insert title here from Earth-Prime/Earth-1218 Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#27867: Oct 14th 2023 at 1:52:48 PM

Yes to the Good Doctor.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#27869: Oct 14th 2023 at 2:01:58 PM

[tup] to the Clown, and damn I was gonna check that version of Moreau lol, [tup] to him.

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#27871: Oct 14th 2023 at 2:23:06 PM

[tup] Dr. Moreau

"No running in the halls!"
Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#27872: Oct 14th 2023 at 2:27:07 PM

[tup] Dr. Moreau

@ACW What page did Cortland and Dormammu get stuck on?

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#27874: Oct 14th 2023 at 2:57:20 PM

Btw lily carnation is still pending

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."

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