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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

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#44629: Apr 22nd 2021 at 6:25:44 AM

[tup]Klaus

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#44630: Apr 22nd 2021 at 6:28:57 AM

The game seems to be a textbook case of Grey-and-Gray Morality. From what you've said Klaus adds to that, so I'll give him a [tup]. Given that it is a case of Grey-and-Gray Morality would you say anyone on the other side might have a chance of counting?

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#44631: Apr 22nd 2021 at 6:34:45 AM

Yes to Klaus.

  • A Voice from Darkness: Parapsychologist Dr. Malcolm Ryder is well known for his radio show wherein he assists people with Supernatural problems. Underneath this is a man with little compunction at manipulating others for the greater good even as he tries to assist them. Malcolm will frequently spin events in dangerous ways, enlisting the aide of some to spy upon the fiendish Traveling Salesman, placing them in danger, or figuring ways to solve supernatural problems that can be potentially fatal to those he tries to help. In the case of a man hunted by humanoid leeches, Malcolm gives him a terrarium of spiders that end up poisoning, paralyzing and using him as bait, with Malcolm saying by his calculations the victim has an over 93 percent chance of survival.

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DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
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#44633: Apr 22nd 2021 at 7:10:09 AM

[tup] to Klaus.

This'll probably be my last Payday EP for now, so in the words of my buddy A Man, I will give you my all!

Lol Gottem

What's the work?

Let's try something a bit different this time.

Payday: The Web Series is the promotional, well, web series made back in the early days of PAYDAY 2's release, created with the intent of expanding upon the series. That being said, it's canon status is basically nonexistent, with plot points that aren't revisited in the game itself and characterization being different. Thankfully, that makes my job easier.

The series focuses on numerous Payday characters and their shady operations under Crime.net. Of course, we all know who runs that, so lets get to him.

Who is Bain?

This version of our favorite drill obsessed criminal mastermind shows a more cold, calculating personality, but is still no less brilliant for it.

What's he do?

Throughout 6 episodes, the series explores a recent heist organized by Bain. Long story short, he has the gang rob the First World Bank, with Dallas, who happens to be the bank manager, providing the layout and such. As usual, they hold people hostage, steal the cash in the bank, and of course kill the cops trying to stop them. At the end of the heist, he has contractor Vlad pick them up, while Dallas has Houston punch him in order to look like a victim of the attack.

The resulting news buzz about said robbery gets the attention of a reporter, who's obsessed with busting Crime.Net. However, Bain has a mole planted in the PD to spy on her and keep her on track. In the meantime, he takes care of a few dangerous targets to keep up Crime.Net's secrecy, such as hiring the sniper Greta to assassinate a few important business men, and while she fumbles a bit, she manages to assassinate them all and leave undetected, as well as having his buddy Lucas talk to Hector for him, pointing out that it's too risky to talk to Hector himself. In one instance, he teams up with fellow MB The Elephant to eliminate the politician Charlie, Bain organizing that Simmons would lure Charlie into an alleyway, and then having weapons manufacturer Gage murder him by pretending to be a hobo looking for a smoke, quickly shooting him dead when he lets his guard down and placing fake evidence on his corpse.

Eventually, it's revealed that the reporter lady has a tracking device on Vlad and is seeking his hideout. Bain, having known this thanks to the aforementioned mole, warns him and tells Vlad to lure her over to a parking lot. Vlad does so, and when she corners him, he says that she's "over her head" and that she should quit before she learns too much. This seems to ward her off, and the series ends with Bain once again victorious, free to plot more heists and drill more vaults.

Is he Magnificent?

This series explores how much influence Bain actually has over criminals, and it's shown that he has his fingertips on every major crime in Washington, organizing bank heists, planning assassinations, and hiring the right people to do the job. Person trying to bust your business? Plant a mole to check on her. Politician planning to expose said business? Lure him into one of you assassins? The aforementioned person having a GPS on one of your buddies? Inform said buddy and intimidate her into leaving them alone. Bain, once again, has a plan for everything, ending the web series having dealt with the fallout of the First World Bank heist.

Is he a Bastard?

Aside from the obvious, he's a wee bit more ruthless here, comfortable with hiring assassins to kill targets and whatnot. Even then, he never does anything really deplorable, simply doing what's necessary to keep his business up and running. Helps that said assassination targets are usually shown to be assholes.

My one real concern is that one of his contracts, Vlad, runs a prostitution ring, but Bain himself is never seen fully endorsing it, merely watching over it, and we don't get much details on it other than Vlad himself, who's an affable if ruthless guy. Again, it's said to be Vlad's ring, not Bains.

Overall?

How's he looking?

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#44634: Apr 22nd 2021 at 7:11:17 AM

[tup]Bain

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
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#44637: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:12:47 AM

Also seriously... can we chill on the writeups like I just asked last night?

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#44639: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:14:21 AM

Sorry.

My bad.

I'm just going them one at a time. So I promise the others will come later.

Edited by miraculous on Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:14:47 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#44640: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:17:25 AM

Thank you... can you also assist me with trimming Sec? He's gotta lose about 100 words right now.

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#44641: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:18:20 AM

Sorry. I'm bad at trimming lol. Could you ask snowy ?

I can help ensure the details are correct afterwards.

Edited by miraculous on Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:18:33 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#44642: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:18:48 AM

Thanks bud, that would be immensely helpful still!

Snowy you good for cutting back on that one or just want me to go through with the hedge trimmers for you?

Edited by 43110 on Apr 22nd 2021 at 11:19:35 AM

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#44643: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:29:51 AM

[tup] to Filler Brushbill, Klaus Waltz and a big ol yes to Bain having just rewatched the web series.

Kinda strange actually, when Bain was first upvoted he was on the same page as a Klaus and now he is again. Odd.

I must say, we are getting ever closer to a Payday page. I'd be fine with waiting until my next one or just creating it now and adding it when I finish the EP, either is good with me.

"For a second there, I mistook ya for a threat... but you're just a dirty little man!"
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Goku Black
#44644: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:31:29 AM

How many do we have now ?

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
falcontalons from Earth-2 Since: Apr, 2019
#44645: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:32:36 AM

[tup] to Cessair, Filler, Klaus, and Bain.

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#44647: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:41:15 AM

[tup] Bain

So about candidates for Valkyria Chronicles 4, let me layout some people I considered and let me hear your thoughts.

Forseti: X-O main strategist, a defector from the Federation to the Empire, was willing to do anything even sacrifice an innocent village and use her sister as a spy and berate her when defying him to save the Valkyria's the Federation were planning to use as sacrificial bombs to annihiliate the capital. Problem is he can be considered extremely hypocritical by supporting an Empire engaging in that.

Crymaria: An extremely powerful Valkyria that was able to drive Squad E to the brink and has some genuine good moments despite her willingness to massacre to gain the approval of an Empire who abuse her, also symphatetic for Federation Valkyria's. However she doesn't seem to show any tactical prowess aside working well with Klaus and might be too mentally unstable.

Claude Wallace: The protagonist that is a brilliant leader who grew his way to get there and manage to overcome impossible like situations, but was practically complicent with allowing a child he got to know and love to be used as a sacrifice. He was also on the verge of committing genocide at the capital when the Empire surrendered for revenge. His other flaw is he can bias with friends and his other subordinates.

Minerva: A fellow commander and rival of Claude. Genuinely loyal to the Federation... however she ends up becoming a general failure with her squad massacred by Klaus and ultimately having to rely on Claude to finish the mission. Also would've committed the genocide Claude refuses had she not been stop despite the Empire surrendering.

Kai (Leena): Forseti's sister. A genius sniper with a cold yet determine will to achieve the mission. Alsos served as Forseti's successful but reluctant spy. She also has similar tactical prowess almost equal to Claude.

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jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#44648: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:54:06 AM

[tup] Bain.

Claude and Kai might be worth an EP. Just reading over Minervas trope page, I think she might be too jealous of Claude as well.

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#44649: Apr 22nd 2021 at 8:56:27 AM

Newton we don't know the game. It depends on how hypocritical someone is but mental instability, lack of tactical ability and wrathful genocide are probably disqualifiers. If you think someone is worth it, please make a more comprehensive post so we can actually see what we're putting our opinions on.

I'll start the Payday page after this week... got enough with the ones on drafts now.

DeathsApprentice Jaded Techie Fox from The Grim Since: Aug, 2011 Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
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#44650: Apr 22nd 2021 at 9:06:06 AM

[tup] to Filler, Klaus, and Bain

Trust you? The only person I can trust is myself.

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