Karmic Twist Ending
aka: Twilight Zone Twist
Imagine, if you will, that a character does something despicable or foolish. Perhaps they were acting in an immoral way; perhaps they merely dared to rally against fate / the gods / the futility of existence / their own humanity. Whatever the reason, the universal kismet doesn't like it, so something totally unexpected but poetically just happens at the end to drive the lesson home, hard. Such endings are all but
explicitly moralistic; it isn't enough for the universe to bring a situation to a just resolution, it has to resolve the situation in such a way as to both reveal what the moral of the story is and "demonstrate" the correctness of that lesson. This is a Karmic Twist Ending
— a Twist Ending
designed to force An Aesop
Much of the power of this trope derives from the twist at the end; it isn't merely unexpected, but it suddenly puts established plot elements into an entirely new light, revealing them to be loaded with new meaning via the connection to the aesop. Sometimes these connections are causal or logical, and sometimes they're merely metaphorical. Such a sudden shift of meaning is essential to the trope.
For example, a Corrupt Corporate Executive
makes a huge deal via unethical tactics... But it turns out that the deal was with the devil
, and he's just lost his soul.
A guy comes across a device that stops time and uses it to make himself rich, spy on the girls' locker room, etc... But it breaks
, stranding him in stopped-time
A diminutive cheating jockey wishes he wasn't so short, and his wish is granted... Turning him into a 10-foot tall freak who can't ride horses any more
Whatever the case, the ending always makes the lesson to be learned abundantly clear in the end.
It's worth noting that when many people claim that a situation is an instance of 'irony
', they mean that this trope seems to apply to it. Often this usage is applied to actual situations, and denoting this trope with 'irony
' is one of the most familiar ways to apply the comfortable sense of narrative closure found in fiction to real life. Some who are supposed to know about this sort of thing think that this is an incorrect usage of the term, and the rest are familiar with the term "situational irony".
Compare to Earth All Along
, Tomato Surprise
, Fawlty Towers Plot
, and Cruel Twist Ending
As this is an Ending Trope, beware of spoilers
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Anime and Manga
- Hell Girl is fond of Twist tropes, here are a few. In this show, if you send someone to hell, you will go to hell when you die.
- An episode where a girl becomes extremely bitter at her teacher. He reads one of her notes aloud and blames someone who wasn't involved for it as well, writing it down in his book (which he claims goes on their permanent record). She starts to believe that he's just trying to mess with people and talks about rumors of him ruining people's opportunities to get into good highschools. She listens to her MP3 player in class and he takes it and writes it down. She comes back for it and he tells her he threw it away. She sends him to hell. Afterward, her friend runs up to give her her MP3 player back, saying that the teacher told her he was just joking and he would eventually give it back. They look at the book on the ground to find that it was empty aside from a few doodles. The girl transfers out and is never seen again.
- A girl becomes known for doing wiccan type stuff, which eventually leads to people asking her to put curses on other people. While she was a nobody in the past, this gets her a lot of attention including from an ex bully. She starts doing requests for this girl. The ex bully eventually tells her to kill someone who was stalking her. The girl tries her hardest to kill this person using her curses, but it doesn't work (in universe the minions of Hell Girl realize that these were all coincidences in the first place ) and is put under a lot of pressure by the ex bully. The girl uses Hell Link to send the stalker to hell. The ex bully thanks her for finally coming through, only to reveal that the guy wasn't a stalker, that was just a lie to get her to curse him. He was actually just a guy that she found creepy.
- When it isn't featuring Downer Endings or Cruel Twist Endings, Zekkyou Gakkyuu is doing this.
- In the story Supplements for the Brain, a young girl wishes to be as smart as her best friend, but no amount of studying seems to help. She finds a magazine ad promising a supplement that will boost brain power and make the user smarter without even trying. After she gets her pills, she is instructed to write down her progress daily, and above all, only take one pill a day. She follows suit at first, but when she overhears her classmates and friend wondering if perhaps her sudden good grades is a result of cheating, she takes an entire fistful of pills at once out of spite. The next day, she even surpasses her best friend in test scores and smugly rubs her face in it, thinking it's all thanks to the pills. When she goes home that day, she finds a letter from the company, saying that she has broken instruction and they will be coming to collect her to run some tests on her brain. As she hides, terrified and alone, in her house, she receives a message from her friend, apologizing for thinking sh was cheating and admitting that she was just really jealous because her friend made everything look effortless while she herself had to study all day. Realizing that she was wrong about her friend, and that she spitefully took the pills for nothing, the girl breaks down and does nothing as the company takes her to their labs to run tests on her brain—presumably forever.
- In Kasako-san is Coming, two girls meet a ghost named Kasako-san, a spirit missing her umbrella who will kill anyone sees her in three days unless they present her with her umbrella. The girls spend three days looking for it and finally find it on the third day. But the girls are always competing with one another, tied in everything in their gym class, and each thinks that if they alone present the umbrella, the other will be killed and they won't have anymore competition. After a brief struggle, one girl successfully steals the umbrella from the other, leaving her to be spirited away by Kasako-san. Then, some weeks later, that girl is stopped on her way to school by a new spirit missing an umbrella and willing to kill anyone who doesn't appease her—the friend she betrayed.
- In the 70's, DC had a short lived comic called Plop!, in which a crew of ghoulish looking folks present stories, all of which end have that kind of ending. For example, a kindly old man is actually a secret grave robber who visits funerals only to inventory the jewelry of the deceased. But when the doctor tells him his time is coming, he's frantic to avoid the same treatment at the hands of his apprentice. So he stipulates that he be buried only in everyday clothes. Alas, he forgot that a dentist who believed the man's public image, had given him a free overhaul. And in the last scene, the apprentice is happily bashing out the gold teeth from the old man's corpse. After each story, the presenters cackle over the misfortunes of the characters before going on to the next story. Naturally, at the end of each issue, something goes "Plop!" on the presenters as well.
- This particular variant (hideous narrators and all) was a staple of pre-Comics Code Authority horror comics, particularly those published by EC.
- Later comic series like House Of Mystery did these out of nostalgia for the old EC horror lines like Tales from the Crypt and its sister titles, The Vault of Horror, The Haunt of Fear, and Shock Suspenstories.
- Tharg's Future Shocks from 2000 AD typically ended with such a twist. One of the best, by Alan Moore, goes like this: A werewolf on a virtually eternal space flight to an off-world colony looking forward to feasting on everybody else on board whenever the spaceship passes a lunar body finding out the hard way that every passenger and crew member on the vessel is also a werewolf and was hoping to do the same thing (and Earth's space command post happy to know that they've finally figured out a way to get rid of all of the planet's werewolves).
- A common appearance in EC comics, just a few examples (there were dozens in total) include:
- In "The Trophy", a hunter who displays trophies of the heads of various animals he has killed is made into such a trophy himself when he is captured by a crazed man.
- In "Half-Baked!" a cook who enjoys slowly broiling lobsters alive, and later murders a lobsterman who he's been stealing from is in a car accident and burned alive.
- In "Gone... Fishing!" a fisherman finds a candybar on the beach and bites into it, only to reveal that there's a hook inside. He soon finds himself being dragged into the ocean by a fishing line.
- In "A Grim Fairy Tale" a pompous King and Queen forbid the townfolk from killing the rats that overwhelm the kingdom. Eventually an angry mob captures them, shoves live rats down their throats and sew their mouth shut, causing the rats to eat their way out of them.
Films — Live-Action
- The 1968 film Wild in the Streets has an ending that could be considered an example of this. A group of twentysomethings and teens manages to exile everybody over 30 to retirement camps. Then at the end, a group of kids exiles everybody over 10.
- Sid in Toy Story could count. He spends all his spare time sadistically destroying toys. Once the toys rise up against him, he's too terrified to even look at his sister's doll.
- Judging by the Word Of God about his cameo in the third film, he eventually got over it.
- Doubly subverted in Kind Hearts and Coronets. The story revolves around a man who attempts to become the Duke of Chalfont by murdering everyone in line to inherit the dukedom. Then he gets sentenced to death for the one murder he didn't commit. Then he gets acquitted at the last moment, but then, as he leaves the prison, he realizes that he left his memoirs—which describe the murders he actually committed—in his cell.
- The short story "Those Three Wishes", by Judith Gorog, is a literal case of Be Careful What You Wish For. The selfish and spoiled protagonist is granted a wish, and uses it to wish for 1000 more wishes. Later, when reminded of a test she forgot to study for, she facetiously blurts out "I wish I were dead."
- Roald Dahl's The Wonderful Story of Henry Sugar digresses to suggest "what a competent writer of fiction would have done" for the sake of a Twist Ending: to give Henry, who used his powers of X-Ray Vision for personal gain, some inventive manner of Karmic Death. In this suggested ending, Henry, feeling a pain in his chest, uses his X-Ray Vision to see all his internal organs and a blood clot slowly moving towards his heart. But Henry's story is not fiction (or so Dahl claims), so it must continue to the actual, not-so-dramatic ending.
- In fact, this kind of twist occurs in many if not most of Dahl's short stories.
- Stephen King's Thinner is also a pretty good example, if tending toward a Cruel Twist Ending. Rather than a Monkey's Paw wish, the story revolves around a curse brought on largely by the main character's irresponsibility. In the end his curse is removed and placed into a pie; whoever has a piece will be cursed. In what is possibly an even less responsible move, he leaves the pie in his own refrigerator overnight. When he finds that his wife (who he wanted to eat the pie) and daughter (who he very much didn't want to eat the pie) have eaten some, he says "to hell with it," and eats some too. The End.
- "The Necklace" by Guy de Maupassant contains one of the best known examples in literature.
- Another classical example is The Queen of Spades by Alexander Pushkin. The story concerns a young gambler who wishes to gain the secret magic formula of getting three good cards in a row from an elderly countess. After she refuses to tell him, he ends up threatening and frightening her to death, and is then visited by her ghost with the secret (probably in a nightmare). Wishing to marry his much wealthier sweetheart, he places all of his money on a bet. Magic formula works (probably by coincidence), but gambler loses everything because he picks the wrong card by mistake (or because he is cursed by the dead countess).
- At least two Goosebumps books:
- A Shocker On Shock Street: The TV ending at least; the book ends on a Cruel Twist Ending, as the two protagonists find out they're robots and are deactivated by the girl's "father" to be reprogrammed. In the TV episode, the two wake up again and decide to kill their creator after putting them through so much torment and trying to replace them with new versions.
- Click: The protagonist has abused the universal remote to suit his own ends. When he's confronted about this he tries to use the device against the accuser but it doesn’t work properly, so he presses the "off" button in frustration, and the entire world vanishes as he finds himself in a black void. Then the battery runs out.
- In The Picture of Dorian Gray The protagonist's wish is granted and his painting ages and becomes ugly instead of him when him. This drives him to sin (which makes the portrait ugly), and when he his Ignored Epiphany doesn't make the painting uglier instead of more beautiful because of his vanity, he destroys the painting, inadvertedly killing himself.
- In the short story "Silent Hostages'' by Paul Gallico, two criminals escape from prison and murder their way across the country. When they stop in a small, isolated town to take hostages, they soon find that everyone in the town are mannequins. It is revealed that the town is about to be destroyed in the testing of a nuclear bomb which is going to be detonated in a few seconds. An extra layer of irony is added when it is revealed that they got into the town because the man who was supposed to be guarding it abandoned his post to comfort his dying wife in hospital after the criminals shot her and their children.
- Made famous by The Twilight Zone (former Trope Namer), though, ironically, it's the episodes that avert this trope that tend to be remembered best (such as "Time Enough At Last" which is a Cruel Twist Ending).
- Completely and utterly averted in one of its most famous stories: "It's a Good Life", about a boy named Anthony with godlike powers. Arguably not as much, however, in "It's Still a Good Life", the sequel to the story in the 2002 series. Anthony has grown up and has a daughter named Audrey. She also has powers, but she can also bring things back from "the cornfield." The remaining townspeople (including Anthony's mother) try to turn her against her father, but it backfires and she banishes them all from existence. Anthony winds up saddened by this development, so she brings everything back. The two plan a trip to New York City, as Anthony states Audrey did a "real good thing" - acknowledging he is less powerful than she is and had better think happy thoughts himself. The closing narration reveals that there was no moral. "Just an update from Peaksville, Ohio."
- In "Escape Clause," a man granted immortality in a Faustian Bargain, having accidentally killed his wife, casts it as a premeditated murder to see what the electric chair will do to him; his lawyer gets him a life sentence instead, and he calls on the Devil to collect rather than face centuries in prison.
- In "I Shot an Arrow into the Air" the crew of a spaceship crashes on a hot, barren landscape with little hope of being rescued. One of the crew members, seeing that their water supplies are running low, kills the other surviving crew members to take their water. Then he finds out they weren't on a foreign world like they thought, but were actually in the Nevada desert, just a few miles from the road, and he breaks down upon realizing how pointless his actions were. The closing narration even refers to this twist as "A practical joke perpetrated by Mother Nature and a combination of improbable events, practical joke wearing the trappings of a nightmare of terror, of desperation."
- Early B&W Lost in Space episode. Creepy skeletal starship wreck contains a device which will grant all wishes. No-one seems to notice the surviving bulkhead and door in the back of the wreck. Too many wishes (or irresponsibility) result in the door slowly opening...
- The Revival version of The Outer Limits did this fairly often.
- In "New Lease", two scientists invent a device that can revive the dead. They test it on various cryogenically frozen animals, then a person, but they find that every test subject can only last a day before it dies again. When one of the scientists is killed by a mugger, his partner decides to bring him back so they can have one last day together. The revived scientist, unable to let go of his desire for revenge and feeling he has nothing to lose, wastes the day tracking down the mugger, ignoring his friend and his family. When he finds the mugger, he murders him in public. To his horror, he finds out that the problem all along was the cryogenic freezing; having been revived as a fresh corpse, he's going to get to live to be arrested for the murder and most likely sentenced to life in prison.
- "Decompression" has a recently-elected senator aboard a plane that's going to crash. A time traveler tells him that he has to open the door and leap out, sacrificing the lives of all on board, so he can live to be elected President and usher in a new enlightenment, or else his opponent would be elected and become a ruthless tyrant. In the end, he jumps out with seconds to spare... whereupon the time traveler tells him that he was destined to become the tyrant, and lets him fall to his death while the plane lands safely.
- "Skin Deep" has a nerdy guy gain a device that lets him change his appearance. He murders a handsome coworker and steals his identity, reveling in his new popularity and hot girlfriend and letting it all go to his head. Some mob enforcers whom the handsome coworker apparently had dealings with and cheated murder him.
- "Second Thoughts" has a guy regularly murder people and use a device to absorb their memories and intelligence. He is greedy for knowledge. He makes the mistake of absorbing the mind of a suicidal artist, which causes him to go crazy and shoot himself in the head.
- "Bits of Love" has a nuclear war survivor living in a bunker with holograms for companionship. Even though the holograms think and feel emotion like real people, he treats them with incredible disrespect, saying things like that they are not real so their opinions don't matter. In the end, the holograms reprogram themselves to completely ignore him and create a holographic society for themselves. The man lasts about a minute before he cracks from loneliness.
- "To Tell The Truth" has a discredited scientist discover that his newly-founded colony is about to be wiped out by a solar flare. Given that his discrediting was due to a prediction of volcanic activity that caused the colony to be moved at great expense but failed to occur, no one believes him except his assistant and his mentor. He keeps on raising a fuss, until the colony's security chief reveals that evidence was found of an indigenous alien race when the colony was set up on the most valuable land on the planet - and not only accuses the scientist of being a shapeshifting saboteur trying to break up the colony, but condemns him with a DNA test that shows bizarre readings. He is then imprisoned and threatened with dissection, but the assistant, holding one last ounce of trust in her mentor, meets him in secret and tests him again to reveal that he is in fact human. As time is running out, the scientist, mentor and assistant attempt to escape the planet in the single emergency shuttle - and the scientist is mauled to death by a crazed mob while ensuring the escape of his two supporters. Afterward, the security chief mourns the scientist, and is mocked by the colony administrator for caring about an alien. The chief then reveals that he is the alien saboteur - he used his own DNA to fake the test - and states that it's ironic that the scientist, the only human in the colony he wished he could have spared for being "the gentlest of you", was the first to die, and at the hands of other humans - and then the solar flare hits, wiping out the colony and triggering the rebirth of the alien civilization.
- "Family Values" has Tom Arnold play the workaholic, neglectful dad. He's annoyed by all the stuff his family wants him to do that keeps piling up while he spends nights and weekends with his boss and clients, so after being (deservedly) relegated to the couch by his wife, he sees an infomercial for a servant robot called the 'Gideon 4000.' He orders one for no money down. Initially, his family is creeped out, but the robot looks out for them and they grow to like it. However, after Tom Arnold sees the thing teaching his son how to play baseball, he sees it as moving in on his family. He can't return it without his wife's signature, which she won't grant. After an unsuccessful attempt to destroy it, the robot points out that he's become nothing but a money faucet because of his neglectfulness and that he's easily disposed of. The episode ends with the dad meekly apologizing to Gideon for forgetting to wear a tie to dinner and a montage shot of several families sitting down to dinner with their Gideon robots.
- In the Tales from the Crypt episode "Top Billing," a struggling actor played by John Lovitz competes with his more handsome and successful former rival for a role in a production of Hamlet. When his rival is chosen for the role based purely on his looks, Lovitz's character murders him, and in his absence is accepted to fill in his role... which the murderous director reveals it to be the role of Yorick's skull.
- A similar example happens in the episode "Beauty Rest" where a would-be pageant queen murders a rival in order to win the contest ... only to discover that it's "Miss Autopsy" where the winner is eviscerated and displayed for the audience.
- In "Dead Right", a Gold Digger marries a hideous and abusive man after being told by a fortune teller that he will inherit a large amount of money and then die. This turns out to be a Prophecy Twist - the woman wins the money and then tells her husband she's leaving. He murders her in a rage and then inherits her winnings right before being executed for the murder.
- The lyrics in Ozzy Osbourne's Trapdoor (from his 2010 album Scream) seem to talk about someone that fell victim to his own hubris (and the Nemesis that comes with it).
- Spoofed in a Bloom County story arc. Oliver invents a device that turns people black (as in, of African descent) and tests it on an unwitting Steve Dallas. A couple of strips later, Steve finally noticed and, when talking to Binkley, theorizes that it's a Twilight Zone-style event where he was turned black in return for his occasional racism. The strip ends with Steve searching the bushes for Rod Serling.
- The artist of Ctrl+Alt+Del notes that this was what he intended with his conclusion to the main comic story. Ethan spent most of the comic making horribly dangerous and stupid decisions, so it was inevitable one or more would finally catch up with him. A time machine he built is used to show Ethan a Bad Future that came about solely due to his creation of Zeke. Before he can be sent back to stop it the machine overloads, forcing Ethan to commit a Heroic Sacrifice.
- Also happens in some of the story branches of his Space Archaeologist pick-your-adventure arcs.
- This trope was more than once parodied on Futurama's The Scary Door:
Finally! Solitude! I can read books for all eternity! (glasses fall off) It's not fair! IT'S NOT... Oh, well, my eyes aren't that bad. I can still read the large print books. (eyes fall out) IT'S NOT... Oh, well, lucky I know Braille. (hands fall off, screams, tongue falls out, head falls off) Hey, look at that weird mirror!
Bender: Cursed by his own hubris.
- A second Scary Door segment piles on one nonsensical twist after another (most of which based on real Twilight Zone episodes); a professional gambler is hit by a car and wakes up in front of a slot machine. He keeps on winning and believes himself to be in heaven, but when he realises winning all the time is boring, he realises he is in hell... Until a man arrives, pulls back a curtain and reveals he is in fact on an airplane. The gambler notices a gremlin on the wing and tries to tell the man, who simply replies "Why should I believe you? You're Hitler!" and holds up a mirror to reveal that the gambler has transformed into Hitler. He then begs Eva Braun, who is sitting next to him for help, but she pulls off a mask to reveal she has the head of a fly. Cutting back to the characters watching the TV show, Bender nonchalantly says "Saw it coming."
- And in another:
: I have combined the DNA of the world's most evil animals to make the most evil creature of them all!
- Then there's this parody:
- A more recent episode had a Brilliant, but Lazy scientist invent a robot to do all his work and fulfill his social obligations. When the robot starts winning Nobel Prizes and the love of the scientist's family:
- In the "Wasted Talent" episode of Family Guy where Peter had to get drunk to play the piano, the final scene shows his solitary bookworm brain cell in despair after breaking his glasses, alluding to the Twilight Zone episode "Time Enough at Last."
- The Simpsons took a twist on the Twilight Zone episode “A Kind of a Stopwatch” in "Treehouse of Horror XIV." Bart and Milhouse find a stop watch that stops time, make mischief, and break the watch. Unlike the Twilight Zone episode, they luckily find a Watch Repair book- and they take 15 years to fix it.