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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1: Jul 21st 2022 at 2:37:49 PM

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Kinda... weirdly fetishy. A fanfic about 14-year-old girls being fattened up and eaten and in the YMMV page it seems the writer of the page has a thing for this. Not inherently pornographic, but you can tell there's a sexual bent.

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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#2: Aug 15th 2022 at 7:57:33 AM

Bumping this from the bottom. I skimmed this fic and I have to say, it doesn't sound particularly fetishistic to me - not enough attention to detail and obsessive descriptions, at least, for me to call it fetishistic. But it was just a skim.

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#3: Aug 15th 2022 at 8:01:26 AM

I also skimmed the fic and didn't find anything particularly alarming but I am not interested enough to do a deeper dive on it.

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#4: Aug 15th 2022 at 11:29:40 AM

The premise seems no worse than, say, The Promised Neverland, and that's definitely non-sexual. Something being a fetish doesn't mean a work is a fetish work, ya know?

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Amonimus the Retromancer from <<|Wiki Talk|>> (Sergeant) Relationship Status: In another castle
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#5: Aug 28th 2022 at 2:21:45 PM

Went to read a thing. It's basically just a retelling of the first half of Madoka with a new plot and ending, but the contract has an immediate price of getting stupid thick (there's an explanation for it). Beside that it's effectively a novelization of the original story (plus spin-offs mixed in), with all horror carried over. Rather, it's even more depressing.

The girls' physique are described very sparingly, and nowhere in erotic matter. Actually, a sudden permanent change in width is treated as a serious problem to normal life, from convinience, health and public opinion points, it also makes it hard to keep Secret Identity from the family, and one lesson of the day is that when helping others appearances shouldn't matter.

The only real issue in the fic is occasional grammar.

Edited by Amonimus on Aug 28th 2022 at 12:22:35 PM

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#6: Aug 28th 2022 at 4:38:02 PM

Okay this seems okay. Premise is a bit strange....

But it has no sex or anything explicit. And has a plot.

Seems perfectly fine to keep.

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#7: Aug 28th 2022 at 4:57:30 PM

This is absolutely fetish material, I feel like that's worth clarifying, it's quite obviously weight gain/vore fetishism.

But, I don't intend to dive any further, so that's my input.

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#9: Aug 30th 2022 at 9:08:18 PM

Keep, it full well may be the author's fetish but it doesn't violate content policy.

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#10: Aug 30th 2022 at 9:10:18 PM

Keep, doesn't break the policy whatsoever. Just another darker fic(of what is already a very dark manga).

...It's weird having so many websites and no way to properly display now, lol.
Amonimus the Retromancer from <<|Wiki Talk|>> (Sergeant) Relationship Status: In another castle
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#11: Aug 30th 2022 at 10:37:25 PM

As Wayjay said earlier, everything is someone's fetish, and weight gain is not portrayed here in excessive detail or in positive manner. Also I may have missed where "vore" comes in other than death scenes that aren't too more detailed than in original.

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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#12: Sep 16th 2022 at 12:37:49 AM

Bumping to get this out of the stack of locked threads.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#13: Sep 27th 2022 at 12:33:19 AM

Bumping so that it doesn't remain stuck between locked threads.

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#14: Sep 27th 2022 at 3:13:42 AM

Enough plot to pass on the 'is it pointless porn' test. Probably passes on 'pedo pandering' too- we don't nuke every work that has schoolgirls wearing stupid swimsuits or providing panty shots and the influence of the weight gain fetish on the work is about on that level.

And I don't see where the vore is either.

The names of the electrical charges really ought to be swapped. It is just DUMB that the place with MORE electrons is NEGATIVELY charged.
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#15: Oct 3rd 2022 at 12:37:54 AM

Bumping to get this out of the stack of locked threads.

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#18: Oct 15th 2022 at 1:31:01 AM

Bumping to get it out of the stack of locked threads.

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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#21: Oct 19th 2022 at 5:24:39 AM

Seems like we have consensus to keep. I'll do the record-keeping; locking up in the meantime.

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