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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

DriftingSkies Grand Exhausted Poobah from The Space between nowhere and somewhere. Since: Jul, 2012
Grand Exhausted Poobah
#14451: Jul 8th 2013 at 9:06:18 PM

True, but he's seen as being less evil by a lot of the common folk. He has no sympathy for the weak, and he's not doing it for any reason but to advance his Social Darwinist agenda, but the fact that he's being looked on in a less-negative light in at least a couple of scenes, particularly in part 1 of Radiant Dawn, is warranting of additional scrutiny that I don't know if it has been debated yet.

Beyond the beaten path lies the absolute end. It matters not who you are... Death awaits you. — Nyx
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#14452: Jul 8th 2013 at 9:10:24 PM

He's 'seen as less evil' by them because they never see him at all. How they see him is utterly irrelevant and a Villain with Good Publicity can be a complete monster (See Gihren Zabi and Emperor Palpatine).

How he is seen by random peasants who never met him is completely irrelevant. Period. The facts are they are unaware their king was a psycho warmonger who murdered his father, enslaved a sentient being to serve as his tortured mate, started a war of violent conquest that led to all the problems their country is currently experiencing, and they probably don't know he was gonna release a Dark God strictly for giggles which might have killed them all.

HamburgerTime The Merry Monarch of Darkness from Dark World, where we do sincerely have cookies Since: Apr, 2010 Relationship Status: I know
The Merry Monarch of Darkness
#14453: Jul 8th 2013 at 9:10:32 PM

@ Aarfy: Hey, I added that! No, I wasn't calling the Air Force a CM; it was an in-universe You Monster! from Yossarian over Aarfy getting away with it, prompting him to desert the Air Force. That said, I'm not sure if Aarfy really fits. He's easily the worst character in the story, and the only one without a single redeeming quality or Funny Moment, but is he heinous enough compared to Milo and Cathcart, who have higher body counts despite having redeeming features (Milo loves his daughters and is, as mentioned, pretty much totally divorced from reality and Cathcart is Played for Laughs) is the question.

The pig of Hufflepuff pulsed like a large bullfrog. Dumbledore smiled at it, and placed his hand on its head: "You are Hagrid now."
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#14454: Jul 8th 2013 at 9:12:43 PM

Aarfy kills a woman he rapes, though. I'm not sure the others get up to anything that bad

HamburgerTime The Merry Monarch of Darkness from Dark World, where we do sincerely have cookies Since: Apr, 2010 Relationship Status: I know
The Merry Monarch of Darkness
#14455: Jul 8th 2013 at 9:16:12 PM

[up] Actually... keep Aarfy. He's the only villainous character in the novel whose crimes are played seriously. The nastier things Milo and Cathcart get up to (like selling all the squad's parachutes, for instance) are meant to cross the line twice.

edited 8th Jul '13 9:16:23 PM by HamburgerTime

The pig of Hufflepuff pulsed like a large bullfrog. Dumbledore smiled at it, and placed his hand on its head: "You are Hagrid now."
Camberf Since: Jan, 2012
#14456: Jul 8th 2013 at 9:53:30 PM

@14456 For the Castlevania entry: Satan doesn't show up until the very end of the game, so everything he does is Offscreen Villainy. Nobody from that game is bad enough to qualify.

Adannor from effin' belarus Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: Buried in snow, waiting for spring
#14457: Jul 9th 2013 at 12:05:23 AM

Code Geass entry looks weird. The main part talks about Bradley, but the bullet point looks like it's a leftover of a part dedicated to V.V. Shall I go request cleanup for that?

* Luciano Bradley, a hired psycho and Knight of Ten from Code Geass, is even known to be a vile bastard in the eyes of most of the other characters in the show. Fearless Action Girl Kallen is visibly frightened the moment she finds out she is in the same room with him and the fact he implies planning to rape and torture her doesn't help alleviate that fear. He also kills his own men without a care (whether needed or not) and loves to kill people slowly using his mecha's energy drill while asking them what's the most important thing for them. Luciano Bradley does get a background of being abused by his parents and, as a child, killing his abusive father apparently in self defense. However, it isn't even talked about in the actual anime, just in supplementary materials and he isn't the only character in the series to have abusive parents. Luciano doesn't have a single line of dialogue in which he isn't insulting, threatening, or otherwise expressing a desire for hurting someone. and at several points comments that his only reason for being a soldier is because that way, he can kill as many people as he wants and not be punished. It's taken to the point where neither of his KOR allies, Suzaku (whom he almost killed for the hell of it, and whose deceased girlfriend he insulted) and Gino (whom he called a rich boy whose family name is the only reason for his position), seem to care at all when Kallen kills him in battle (whereas she and Gino even exchange some semi-friendly banter).

  • Here's the interesting atrocity that puts him in Moral Event Horizon: he killed Lelouch's mother Marianne purely out of petty jealousy and hid it from his father Charles. It finally gets his own twin brother, who was NOT an angel himself, to finally kill him after he has lost the battle with Lelouch. If you're making Emperor Charles look good, you're definately really bad.

edited 9th Jul '13 12:05:57 AM by Adannor

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#14458: Jul 9th 2013 at 12:14:38 AM

yep, you caught that one. That's definitely a leftover V.V. entry and needs to be deleted

Anyways, here's my thing on Ashnard from Fire Emblem Path Of Radiance

The scene that' referred to is a scene in the sequel when two commoners comment things were better under Ashnard's rule, and he'd promote anyone, regardless of background or status. The latter is true, the former, however, needs explanation.

Put bluntly, Ashnard doesn't give a damn about the well being of his people. He rises to power by getting his father to sign a Blood Pact, a magical contract that kills every single other person who might possibly have a claim to the throne. He then murders his father and forms his nation into a warmongering dictatorship. Ashnard's philosophy is basically "the weak are meat, the strong eat." He's a Social Darwinist in the extreme. His egalitarian promotion policy is not "everyone deserves a chance" it's simply that he has no regard for social customs, wants the best army possible and will promote whoever can as an example of Pragmatic Villainy.

He also used his lover as bait to draw in her brother. They're from a race of shape shifting dragons. Once he caught said brother, he enslaves him in dragon form as a feral weapon and mount for himself. He has zero regard for his lover or their son, either. he has a Motive Rant where he reveal his entire goal is creating a world ruled by the strong where the weak submit or die. He also intends to release an evil god that might well kill everyone. His response when called out on this is more or less "and your point is what? I'm strong, I can do what I want."

Oh, and if that wasn't enough, he employs Izuka, a sadistic Mad Scientist who conducts hideous experiments on the shapeshifting beast people to turn them into feral weapons for Ashnard.

In essence, this scene isn't meant to establish sympathy. It's not giving him better traits. It's simply two peasants commenting on a Villain with Good Publicity. No different than in A Song Of Ice And Fire when people reminisce what a great King Joffrey was until that evil Imp murdered him, or how everything was so peaceful under Palpatine in Star Wars.

Ashnard has zero by way of redeeming qualities, is never presented as positive except by two ignorant peasants who probably don't know their role in his grand design was "slave or dead" and he's extremely heinous.

edited 9th Jul '13 12:55:30 AM by Lightysnake

AquaRegia Since: Jun, 2011
#14459: Jul 9th 2013 at 1:01:28 AM

...and that's just about the perfect summary for that issue. Ashnard is a keeper; the only reason why those people could even bring themselves to utter such a statement was because Ashnard failed to create his ideal world. Otherwise, they'd be yet another set of corpses on the pile, and I'm pretty sure they wouldn't be saying that he'd be a better ruler under those circumstances.

edited 9th Jul '13 1:03:15 AM by AquaRegia

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#14460: Jul 9th 2013 at 1:04:35 AM

Not only that, but they'd never met the man. Ashnard is pretty Obviously Evil. The man wears black armor with spikes, walks around with a Slasher Smile all the time and is not exactly shy about his ambitions. The strangest thing about his son being alive is Ashnard not eating him at birth.

And again, it also ignores a lot of the problems is country is facing is kind of because of the war of conquest and horrible, horrible things he constantly did. Yeah, there are issues when you start a brutal war with neighboring countries, let sentient beings be subject to horrible experiments and possible extermination and weaken the fabric of reality.

lrrose Since: Jul, 2009
#14461: Jul 9th 2013 at 4:21:49 AM

I support keeping Aarfy. As Hamburger Time said, he commits horrible crimes and unlike everyone else, those crimes aren't played for laughs.

DriftingSkies Grand Exhausted Poobah from The Space between nowhere and somewhere. Since: Jul, 2012
Grand Exhausted Poobah
#14462: Jul 9th 2013 at 4:34:45 AM

[up][up] I'm fine with keeping Ashnard - the couple of scenes there warranted debate since it makes him seem not so bad in comparison to some of the Begnion overlords, but I agree that the man had no redeeming traits except that his policies could have, unintentionally, caused some commoners to be slightly better off.

I still believe that bringing those scenes up was warranted.

Beyond the beaten path lies the absolute end. It matters not who you are... Death awaits you. — Nyx
AnewMan A total has-been. Since: Apr, 2013 Relationship Status: Don't hug me; I'm scared
A total has-been.
#14463: Jul 9th 2013 at 8:23:14 AM

With Ashnard, that moment with the commoners seems like a Broken Pedestal that just didn't happen because Ashnard is already dead after the fact. If people who knew the guy personally revealed some big Pet the Dog moment from him, it'd be a different story. But these are people who were not personal with Ashnard talking about how they percieved him. The irony of that dialogue is that their idea of Ashnard doesn't quite match up with what Ashnard actually was.

Morgenthaler Since: Feb, 2016
#14464: Jul 9th 2013 at 9:30:04 AM

With the consensus for a cut of all the other examples from Sons of Anarchy, I did a write-up for Jimmy O'Phelan as he seems like the only genuine example.

  • Jimmy O'Phelan is a member of the True IRA, an Irish terrorist organization and criminal syndicate involved in gun running with the gangs in California, chiefly the motorcycle gang SAMCRO. O'Phelan ran current SAMCRO member Chibs out of the IRA years before, then married his wife Fiona and adopted his daughter Kerrianne. When he tries to mend the business relation with SAMCRO he meets with Chibs again, gloats that he took what was his, and threatens to dump Fiona and marry Kerrianne next because he says her mother has become too old. Enraged, Chibs gives him up to the authorities, and O'Phelan flees back to Ireland. He withholds information about Jax's kidnapped baby son Abel to maintain the good dealings with SAMCRO. He goes rogue when the IRA intends to demote him for his failure in the States, and he plans to destroy SoA's Belfast chapter to take over the IRA himself. He tries to have SAMCRO killed in an explosion in which many Belfast members die, and Fiona and Kerrianne have to be put under IRA protection because he poses a threat to their safety. He kills an IRA member trying to take them back, and tortures and executes another one to find Abel. He murders the adoptive family Abel was placed with. He takes Abel hostage to ensure his escape to the States, then exchanges him for another hostage whom he later kills. He tries to escape to South America through the Russian mob, but is double crossed and given up to SAMCRO, who kill him. Unlike the other gang members in the show he has no real loved ones or shows remorse for any of his crimes, and there seems to be no point behind his actions beyond power, cruelty, and trying to save his own hide.

edited 9th Jul '13 9:37:54 AM by Morgenthaler

You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
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Lizzid people!
#14465: Jul 9th 2013 at 9:34:23 AM

As I recall on Xykon, he counts because even when the audience members find him funny, he's still treated as a horrible threat in-universe, especially the part where he murders Roy. Everything just stopped being funny at that point. Just look up 32Footstep's discussion on him.

Fighteer Lost in Space from The Time Vortex (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Lost in Space
#14466: Jul 9th 2013 at 9:40:34 AM

Yeah, the thing about Xykon is that being funny only makes his evil seem that much worse. He cracks jokes while he horribly murders people. It's played for laughs for the audience, but not for the characters.

"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"
AmbarSonofDeshar Since: Jan, 2010
#14467: Jul 9th 2013 at 10:31:46 AM

Okay, I'm back after a vacation. Looking at things that are under discussion:

Keep O'Phelan. Sounds like the worst person in the show by a longshot.

Cut that bullet point that was under Bradley. It is a holdover from VV, and several people have pointed it out.

Keep Ashnard. That bit about the commoners liking Ashnard just goes to show what a CM has to do in order to stay in power—namely, give the people something that they want.

Keep the Elder and the stepdad from Yu Yu Hakusho. I don't know enough about anybody else to comment.

Butch Cavendish sounds like CM material Occasional Exister. Anything else we should no about him? Also, on a sidenote, is the movie worth seeing?

On the subject of Wonder Woman, one of the most consistent problems with The Cheetah is that as the most recognisable of Wonder Woman's non-mythical rogues, she gets used in a lot of villain team ups. So while in the Wonder Woman comics she's a Tragic Villain with flashes of humanity, in crossovers, she has to be portrayed as the sort of psycho who stand up alongside Luthor and The Joker is the evil department. Hence lines like that one about eating kids. I'll do some more research on Doctor Poison II, and see if I can craft a write up for him/her.

And Post # 13080 sounds like a keeper to me.

edited 9th Jul '13 10:33:16 AM by AmbarSonofDeshar

Godzillawolf Since: Jul, 2010
#14468: Jul 9th 2013 at 11:31:05 AM

I'd like to second Butch Cavendish from The Lone Ranger. I've seen the film and agree he more than qualifies as a Complete Monster and would be willing to list my reasons why.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#14469: Jul 9th 2013 at 12:03:25 PM

The Laughably Evil CompleteMonsters can be the scariest.

BTW, I'm starting Order Of The Stick.

Main reason I came here: This is from Deadpool YMMV

*T-Ray, Ajax/The Attending/Francis, and Evil Deadpool (my Evil Twin). Assholes.
  • Also, Ultimate Marvel's In Name Only version of me.
  • The version of me from "Deadpool Kills the Marvel Universe". He even killed the Power Pack!
These either need cutting or context, and didn't we cut Ultimate from the X Men Monsters?

edited 9th Jul '13 12:05:07 PM by ACW

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nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#14470: Jul 9th 2013 at 4:12:02 PM

Re: Butch Cavendish - the reviewer in my local paper (who I generally disregard, but that's besides the point) heavily criticized The Lone Ranger for Mood Whiplash resulting from mixing an essentially cartoonish take on the mythos with extremely dark villains. I don't really plan on seeing the movie myself, but his comments make me inclined to lean towards thinking he's an example.

RLNice Bigfoot Puncher from a computer Since: Sep, 2010
Bigfoot Puncher
#14471: Jul 9th 2013 at 5:30:36 PM

I think a clarification is needed for SHODAN of System Shock. She's not motivated by pure logic or some misinterpreted goal like most other villainous A.I.'s. She is motivated by pure ego-maniacal arrogance. She wants to exterminate humanity for no reason other than because she's a massive narcissist.

A fistful of me.
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#14472: Jul 9th 2013 at 5:41:47 PM

Yeah, pure logic doesn't really apply when you decide you're god and everything else is "a footnote" to your glory...

AmbarSonofDeshar Since: Jan, 2010
#14473: Jul 9th 2013 at 6:30:47 PM

[up][up]That sounds like it would be worth including in an entry.

RLNice Bigfoot Puncher from a computer Since: Sep, 2010
Bigfoot Puncher
#14474: Jul 9th 2013 at 6:31:25 PM

Yup. Either way, the Blue-and-Orange Morality that excuses most homicidal AIs doesn't apply to SHODAN.

A fistful of me.
AmbarSonofDeshar Since: Jan, 2010
#14475: Jul 9th 2013 at 8:03:59 PM

So, on the subject of those Wonder Woman examples we were briefly discussing:

Doctor Poison

Doctor Poison II (from what I could find out) has only appeared a few times, but gets up to some pretty heinous behaviour in a few of those. In her first appearance, she develops the Pandora Virus, a virus which mutates its victims into some of the worst beings of myth. It's first use was on the poor bastard in the link I posted some pages back, Richard Agodas, whom she first tortured and then transformed into a horrific spider monster. Following his defeat, she released the virus into the air, with the intent of causing more people to go through the experience that Agodas did. That the virus failed to work in the atmosphere, and no cases were reported, speaks to her incompetency, not her lack of evil. She later joined up with Villainy Incorporated, and following their invasiong of Sakartis, used the prisoners they took as test subjects for further experiments with toxins and infections. She also played a role in the creation of Genocide, which was a Moral Event Horizon worthy moment for everybody involved.

I could go either way on this one. Doctor Poison II hasn't appeared very often. That said, her few appearances have all been godawful, and she's crossed a lot of lines in those appearances. I suspect that if the Pandora Virus plotline hadn't been dropped (which is the real reason why the airborne virus failed) we wouldn't be debating her presence; she'd be on the list. With that in mind, I think I lean towards including though not by much.

Alkyone

I reread Alkyone's first appearance to make sure I was remembering things correctly, and I've got to say, that in it she doesn't come off as that evil. She's obsessed with the Amazons and Amazon culture. When she finds out that the queen is going to have a child, she feels horribly jealous, decides that the rest of the Amazons will feel the same way, and therefore decides to try and kill Diana in the name of preserving peace on the island. She knows that it's a terrible act, and fully expects to be damned for it. In her second appearance, she does the standard villain act of trying to take over Themyscira. She does it while under the influence of Genocide's soul, and the guidance of Ares who is playing her like a sock puppet. Given that half of Wonder Woman's rogues have at one point or another tried to wipe out Themyscira, I have trouble qualifying her based on that.

Earlier on I was questioning her inclusion, but now I am one hundred percent against it. Alkyone has, if not redeeming traits, then at least some sympathetic ones, may not be acting of her own accord during her later appearances, and fails the heinous standard when measured against Ares, Circe, The Cheetah II, The Cheetah III, Doctor Psycho, or even Doctor Poison II. Cut.

EDIT: The YMMV page for Wonder Woman references the version of her from the failed 2011 pilot as a Complete Monster. Now, I know they derailed the character, but that much? Anybody know if it went that far? I've removed the references in the meantime.

edited 9th Jul '13 8:17:44 PM by AmbarSonofDeshar


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