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edited 7th Nov '17 9:59:04 AM by Fighteer

Lightysnake And if I don't have a heart then what is broken?
And if I don't have a heart then what is broken?
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:17:13 AM

It's actually an alias....thus far, Cain is a rock solid keeper, but he's at the heart of a mystery that is spanning the entire series so I don't want to jump any guns. as opposed to, say, Kibutsuji Muzan.

Sorel is a one man show, basically.

11111001011 from 1124 Astoria Lane, Peachtree City, GA
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:18:39 AM

[tup] everyone I missed

ACW Complete Monster Editor from Arlington, VA (outside of DC) Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:24:49 AM

Ah, the Kimetsu guy. He looks like a slightly demonic Michael Jackson [lol]

Yes to Gustave and Melanie.

Edited by ACW on Jan 11th 2019 at 11:29:30 AM

Complete Monster Drafts Pending CM Writeups
randomtroper89 I am the Phoenix King from The Fire Nation
I am the Phoenix King
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:44:44 AM

[tup]Caleb, doesn't have to compete with the stiff competition from the books.

miraculous The Indaba Killer from south africa
The Indaba Killer
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:47:32 AM

Oh yeah. No way he'd count in the books.

Jim Butcher is really good at writing psychopaths like Shagnasty, Lord Raith and (I know he doesn't qualify because he loves his daughter) Nicodemus.

"Reasons..? None, really. I could do it, that's all. And it was fun... I guess that's my reason?"
Tyk5919 There’ll be no hero in the end... Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
There’ll be no hero in the end...
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:47:32 AM

Sooooooo I just saw the commercial advertising a new season of Strike Back. I'm calling dibs.

This is going to be a wonderful year for me. cool

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
Lightysnake And if I don't have a heart then what is broken?
And if I don't have a heart then what is broken?
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:48:05 AM

Think of all the Nosleep candidates you have to look forward to!

ElfenLiedFan90 The Legendary Goddess Of Evil from Jakarta,Indonesia Relationship Status: Too sexy for my shirt
The Legendary Goddess Of Evil
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:51:15 AM

@Lightysnake :gwqlabskek: Inb4 ask him to cover sum creepypastas [lol]

Anyways, back on topic... @ACW Is it fine to add the depotholed Zetman entries on the drafts? And any more votes for Gustave

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Jan 11th 2019 at 11:51:29 PM

Current story that I made.
ElfenLiedFan90 The Legendary Goddess Of Evil from Jakarta,Indonesia Relationship Status: Too sexy for my shirt
The Legendary Goddess Of Evil
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:57:31 AM

Oh and btw, someone edited the entry on Darling In The Franxx YMMV Page into this:

  • Papa/Vice Chairman are the leaders of APE, a cult that's in charge of the Plantations. He's also known as the VIRM, an ancient Hive Mind who annihilates species that refuse to be subjugated and assimilated. Prior to the main story, the VIRM arrives on Earth and disguises themselves as APE. Claiming themselves to be the savior of humanity, they develop an immortality solution that causes the humans to exhaust the supply of magma, turning the planet into a barren wasteland and making humanity a target for the Klaxosaurs. Despite portraying himself as a benevolent leader of humanity, VIRM rules the Plantations with an iron fist. Anyone who defies him will either have their minds wiped or be forcibly placed into cryo-storage, the former of which we see happen to Hiro and Zero Two during their childhood and again to Mitsuru and Kokoro after their marriage. When they tried to overtake an area known as Gran Crevasse, Papa willingly orders the detonation of most of the plantations. Later, when the Klaxosaur Princess steals the Star Entity, a weapon VIRM planned to use to wipe out the Klaxo-Sapiens for the second time, they reveal their true identity as the VIRM before absorbing the souls of the humans in his cult, along with the souls of all the inmortal humans'. They then decide to destroy the Earth and infects the Star Entity, killing the Klaxosaur Princess and forcing Zero Two to become an Empty Shell to save Hiro. Despite claiming to be well-intentioned in their goals, Papa/Vice Chairman/VIRM is a genocidal sociopath who has an unbridled thirst for power and domination over others.

Papa can stay on where he is and I think I'm cool with the changes because both Papa and Vice Chairman? Are the same character considered they are the part of a one Hive Mind with same consciousness after all. As for the inmortal humans part, think it's safe to cut it as I feel rather redundant

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Jan 11th 2019 at 11:59:54 PM

Current story that I made.
ACW Complete Monster Editor from Arlington, VA (outside of DC) Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Jan 11th 2019 at 8:59:56 AM

That entry's long (then again, the original was a lengthy 260).

As for the de-potholed entries...yeah, you can add 'em to the Drafts.

Complete Monster Drafts Pending CM Writeups
ElfenLiedFan90 The Legendary Goddess Of Evil from Jakarta,Indonesia Relationship Status: Too sexy for my shirt
The Legendary Goddess Of Evil
Jan 11th 2019 at 9:02:58 AM

@ACW I think I'm cool with leaving VIRM's entry pretty long due to VIRM's ridiculous rapsheet that they committed in a span of 24 episodes. Yeah, he's one of the worst ones that I put for now. Anyways, here's my revised entry without that inmortal part:

  • Papa/Vice Chairman are the leaders of APE, a cult that's in charge of the Plantations. He's also known as the VIRM, an ancient Hive Mind who annihilates species that refuse to be subjugated and assimilated. Prior to the main story, the VIRM arrives on Earth and disguises themselves as APE. Claiming themselves to be the savior of humanity, they develop an immortality solution that causes the humans to exhaust the supply of magma, turning the planet into a barren wasteland and making humanity a target for the Klaxosaurs. Despite portraying himself as a benevolent leader of humanity, VIRM rules the Plantations with an iron fist. Anyone who defies him will either have their minds wiped or be forcibly placed into cryo-storage, the former of which we see happen to Hiro and Zero Two during their childhood and again to Mitsuru and Kokoro after their marriage. When they tried to overtake an area known as Gran Crevasse, Papa willingly orders the detonation of most of the plantations. Later, when the Klaxosaur Princess steals the Star Entity, a weapon VIRM planned to use to wipe out the Klaxo-Sapiens for the second time, they reveal their true identity as the VIRM before absorbing the souls of the humans in his cult. They then decide to destroy the Earth and infects the Star Entity, killing the Klaxosaur Princess and forcing Zero Two to become an Empty Shell to save Hiro. Despite claiming to be well-intentioned in their goals, Papa/Vice Chairman/VIRM is a genocidal sociopath who has an unbridled thirst for power and domination over others.

I'll send this to the drafts too. But make sure you need to spoil his entry on the YMMV page because the VIRM are truly a walking spoiler of the show after all

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Jan 12th 2019 at 12:04:10 AM

Current story that I made.
Jan 11th 2019 at 9:15:40 AM

Another Complete Monster pothole I cleaned up. This was on the page for GARO Kami No Kiba JINGA. I don't anything about the series, but it appears to be a Enemy Within sort of situation. Anyone interested can do the EP.

G-Editor I can't believe I'm back in Skewl from Skewl Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
I can't believe I'm back in Skewl
Jan 11th 2019 at 9:53:44 AM

[tup] To Gustave and Melanie

Edited by G-Editor on Jan 11th 2019 at 7:54:18 AM

I’d Rather Be in Jail Than in Skewl
ElfenLiedFan90 The Legendary Goddess Of Evil from Jakarta,Indonesia Relationship Status: Too sexy for my shirt
The Legendary Goddess Of Evil
Jan 11th 2019 at 9:57:33 AM

I'm going to add the revised entry and the depotholed entry tomorrow. See ya later

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Jan 12th 2019 at 12:57:53 AM

Current story that I made.
Jan 11th 2019 at 10:01:13 AM

[tup] to Jamwaal, Solus, Caleb and Sorel Degerlund.

HamburgerTime Glimmer of civilization. from The Former Republic of Zubrowka Relationship Status: I know
Glimmer of civilization.
Jan 11th 2019 at 10:02:06 AM

[tup] Jamwaal, Solus, Caleb, Gustave.

BE SURE TO DRINK YOUR OVALTINE
TheUnsquished Apparently unsquishable from Southern Limey Land Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
Apparently unsquishable
Jan 11th 2019 at 10:20:45 AM

Anyone familiar with the Nintendo DS game Again!!? I think the "!!" is because there's a manga with the same name. I ask because there's a ZCE Complete Monster entry on the YMMV page that was added back in 2012:

Lost: Marbles. Reward if found.
PolarPhantom Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
Jan 11th 2019 at 11:11:43 AM

[tup] Melanie - as far as I'm aware she's not a character that would be too out of place in a Twilight story, or at least one aimed at mature audiences. Twilight is bad, but it gets a worse rap than it deserves. Glad I grew out of that.

Also, [tup] Sorel.

Darkness rises and Light to meet it.
Lightysnake And if I don't have a heart then what is broken?
And if I don't have a heart then what is broken?
Jan 11th 2019 at 11:14:53 AM

I'll check tha tProvidnece one

miraculous The Indaba Killer from south africa
The Indaba Killer
Jan 11th 2019 at 11:17:12 AM

Ah [tup] to Sorel

I forgot who that was since this thread moves super fast. It was The Witcher dude upon doing a search.

Edited by miraculous on Jan 11th 2019 at 11:17:57 AM

"Reasons..? None, really. I could do it, that's all. And it was fun... I guess that's my reason?"
TheMadCr0w Ace Detective from Nowhere Relationship Status: Don't hug me; I'm scared
Ace Detective
Jan 11th 2019 at 11:24:54 AM

[tup] To the previous candidates.

Edited by TheMadCr0w on Jan 11th 2019 at 5:25:03 PM

You are the trash of society. I will kill you! Destroy you! Crush you...! Teammates are nothing but trash!
KazuyaProta This is just like-!!! from Mobius Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
TheUnsquished Apparently unsquishable from Southern Limey Land Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
Apparently unsquishable
Jan 11th 2019 at 12:01:09 PM

There's also this from a manhwa called Redrum 327 that was added in 2013:

  • Complete Monster: Most of the group turns out to be this, but arguably the one who deserves it the most is Hyeri. Not only does she lock some poor girl in a safe because the boy she liked was talking to her, years later, she plots to ostracize that same girl because of the same boy embracing her.

I'm guessing it can simply be deleted?

Edited by TheUnsquished on Jan 11th 2019 at 8:01:27 PM

Lost: Marbles. Reward if found.
Jan 11th 2019 at 12:03:08 PM
Thumped: This post was thumped by the Stick of Off-Topic Thumping. Stay on topic, please.
Lightysnake And if I don't have a heart then what is broken?
And if I don't have a heart then what is broken?
Jan 11th 2019 at 12:06:08 PM

Future, we just got done with this.

Moratorium on Dora the Explorer. Don't discuss it. Don't bring it up. Don't mention t. All of us will be a LOT happier. There is stuff we don't wanna deal with.

Unsquished, please do delete that.


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