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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

HamburgerTime Since: Apr, 2010
#117001: May 2nd 2018 at 4:58:46 PM

Anyway we're getting off topic.

MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#117003: May 2nd 2018 at 5:09:04 PM

[tup] to Karl Bishop Weyland, Giichi Onizuka, Iwao Himuro, Iselda, and Wetzler.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#117004: May 2nd 2018 at 5:13:32 PM

So what's the new limit for a CM page? 6 or 7? I wanna know which ones to merge.

BTW, Lamarr and the Wilson bros. (Jack Reacher) & the Doctor (Heavy Rain) all got enough voters to cut, right?

edited 2nd May '18 5:14:57 PM by ACW

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#117005: May 2nd 2018 at 5:21:59 PM

Pretty sure it's been seven for a while now and I seriously don't get why we're keeping the six grandfathered ones but I'm so tired of pages being brought up I barely even care anymore.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#117006: May 2nd 2018 at 5:26:45 PM

New proposal for tonight, and a duo.

What's the work?

A Lonely Place to Die is a 2011 film about a group of friends hiking and mountaineering in the Scottish highlands. By chance? They come across a young girl. Buried alive with a breathing tube in the wilderness. The group obviously wants to save the girl but the people who took her ain't so eager to let their little payday free. Enter the nasty duo of Kid and Mcrae.

Who are Kid and Mcrae?

A pair of sociopaths, murderers, kidnappers and thugs. Kid and Mcrae spot heroes Alison and Rob attempting to rappel down a large mountain to get to the nearest village and go for help after rescuing the girl Anna. The two cut Rob's rope, letting him fall to his death before trying to murder Alison who escapes. Thankfully for Kid and Mcrae, they run into a pair of poachers near the cliff...Kid slits the throat of one and then they sadistically force the other over the cliff, taking their guns to have a better chance of murdering Alison and the others. Alison regroups with her friends, only for the duo to gun one of said friends down. Alison's friend Alex manages to fake Kid and Mcrae out, only for them to gun him down as well, while Alison and Anna flee to the nearby village.

Complicating things is a Serbian mobster named Darko, representative of Anna's father, has sent in a pair of mercenaries to recover Anna while he negotiates with the duo. During the negotiation with Darko, Kidd recounts a creepy story when he murdered a previous child he kidnapped when the parents refused to pay, only for Darko to catch on to how Kidd no longer has Anna. In the town, Mcrae and Kidd murder several officers and townspeople, and in an ensuing confrontation, Alison's last friend is killed and Mcrae guns down one of the mercenaries. Kidd and Mcrae show absolutely zero compunction shooting their way through anyone in their path, and Kidd realizes the going's gotten too tough and abandons Mcrae, who confronts Alison, ending with her shoving him out of a high window to his death.

Kidd? Is apprehended by the Serbian mobsters. They'd thought they'd blackmail Anna's wealthy mother but failed to consider her father is a former Serbian war criminal turned mobster who coolly informs Kidd that behind his wealthy ex-wife is a man with very deep pockets. "You should have been more concerned with how he lined them." He then orders Kidd stripped and thrown in a literal hole in the woods to torture him and bury him alive, paying off the surviving mercenary (after telling him not to mourn his partner too much since he doesn't have to halve the fee), as Alison also recovers with Anna at her side.

mitigating Qualities?

No, none to speak of. Mcrae and Kidd have no real genuine friendship. they're awful people united for the chance of a payday and nothing else. They kill a bunch of innocent people,have no compunction murdering kids if they don't get paid and are just awful in general. The Serbian mobsters are...obviously no angels but their primary goal is getting their boss's daughter back safe. Anna's dad is an ex-war criminal, but we're not shown any evil stuff he's done, and he dearly loves Anna (and even financially takes care of his ex-wife, Anna's mother). The only thing he does onscreen is have Kidd given a well-deserved horrible fate. So pass here.

Conclusion?

I'd say keep the duo.

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#117007: May 2nd 2018 at 5:34:31 PM

Easy yes there and thanks for getting the thread back on track

JoeBlitz Call me... Del Noir... Since: Dec, 2016
Call me... Del Noir...
#117009: May 2nd 2018 at 5:39:46 PM

[tup] Lighty's duo.

"Now I have a machine gun. Ho ho ho."
TommyFresh Since: Aug, 2013
#117010: May 2nd 2018 at 5:51:13 PM

[tup] Kidd and Mcrae.

edited 2nd May '18 5:51:40 PM by TommyFresh

Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin
#117011: May 2nd 2018 at 5:55:38 PM

[tup] for Kidd and Mcrae.

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
ElfenLiedFan90 Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression) from Jakarta,Indonesia Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression)
#117012: May 2nd 2018 at 6:08:25 PM

[tdown] to Shilliew

[tup] to Lighty's duo

"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."
Awesomekid42 Since: Jul, 2012
#117013: May 2nd 2018 at 6:38:00 PM

[tup] to Lighty's duo.

Anyway, here's the writeup for Iselda.

  • Critical Role-Vox Machina Origins: Iselda is a higher up within the criminal organization, The Myriad. Wishing to advance further in the ranks, Iselda attempts to take control of the swamp port city, Stillben, away from rival criminal gang, The Clasp. Iselda has Zeth, an alchemist living within Stillben, brew a dangerous poison, Aqua Caedes, and have it pollute the swamp, sending infants and ill people who live within the swamp's vicinity in a vegetative state. Iselda then has Zeth trick the residents of Stillben into believing that it's a curse that can be appeased by sacrificing those who were affected by the poison to the shark-speakers. After fleeing from the party during their first confrontation, Iselda makes a plan to kidnap Vax and use him as bait for the rest of the party, using his life as a bargaining chip to get the heroes to join The Myriad. During Vax's escape, he finds out that Iselda is using the souls of those who fell victim to Aqua Caedes as ingredients for a curse to kill every person who came into contact with the swamp water around Stillben in an attempt to wipe out it's entire population.

edited 2nd May '18 6:38:43 PM by Awesomekid42

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#117014: May 2nd 2018 at 7:02:53 PM

[tup] To Lighty’s duo

I think we should just keep the pages as is.

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
LordYAM Since: Jan, 2015
MasterJoseph Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object from Not telling. Since: Mar, 2018
Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object
#117017: May 2nd 2018 at 7:23:54 PM

[tup]To the McKidd duo.

edited 2nd May '18 7:25:58 PM by MasterJoseph

IPP Wick Check created.
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#117018: May 2nd 2018 at 7:48:24 PM

[tup] to Lighty's duo.

Just got back from Rampage, and that movie did not disappoint!

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
AmbarSonofDeshar Since: Jan, 2010
#117019: May 2nd 2018 at 9:26:43 PM

After we came to the general consensus that Machinedramon and Millenniummon should at least be split, I said that when I'd finished my rewatch of the show, I'd provide a proper write up for Machinedramon so we could discuss him on his own merits. I'm finished it, so here's my post.

Before I begin however, I want to point out that the original effortpost, which I had previously described as substantially correct? Is not. It conflates Machinedramon's actions with those of other Dark Masters, automatically assigns him responsibility for actions that we don't know were his, and essentially tries to invent bodies to add to his count. On places where my account and the original effortpost conflict I'm going to leave a note, explaining the differences.

Who is Machinedramon? What has he done?

Machinedramon is one of the four Dark Masters, alongside Piedmon, Puppetmon, and MetalSeadramon. Empowered by Apocalymon, the actual Big Bad of the initial show, the Dark Masters tried to overrun the Digital World in the past but were halted by the original Digidestined. The new Tri films expand on this, revealing that the Dark Masters actually defeated the original Digidestined and were about to execute them all before four of them evolved into the Four Digimon Sovereigns and sealed the Dark Masters away; at least one of the unevolved Digimon died in this battle.

The Dark Masters break out of confinement sometime during Digimon Adventure 1 and conquer the Digital World again, reshaping it into their base of Spiral Mountain. The specifics of what any individual Dark Master did here are hazy, though given the presence of a machine army during the conquest of the Gekomon Kingdom it's apparent Machinedramon was involved in this.note  When the Digidestined return to the Digital World, the Dark Masters attack the Digidestined as a group and defeat them. When Piximon tries to buy the Digidestined time to escape, he is killed by the Dark Masters.note 

Machinedramon sits out the Digidestined's battles with MetalSeadramon and Puppetmon. When they arrive in his city, he sends out his army to track them down. When they fail to, he levels the city.note  When the kids flee underground, they discover that Machinedramon has enslaved a large number of Numemon note  and has WaruMonzaemon acting as their slave driver. When the Numemon revolt and WaruMonzaemon is defeated, Machinedramon executes/blows of WaruMonzaemon's arm, depending on dub or sub.

Machinedramon chases the kids down themselves and threatens to kill them all. Kari volunteers to be the first to gonote  and he promises to make her death as painful as he can. The Numemon intervene and Machinedramon kills them all. He and WarGreymon then engage in a brief battle and Machinedramon dies. He's subsequently resurrected in Digimon Tri serving Dark!Gennai in the fourth film, "Loss." He makes another effort to run down and kill the Digidestined on Gennai's behalf, never speaking the entire time. He's then killed again by Seraphmon, Phoenixmon, and HerculesKabuterimon.

Are his actions heinous by the standards of the show?

Without the stuff as Millenniummon? I can't say that I think so. Most of his actions are shared with the other Dark Masters to one extent or another, and when you look at the specifics of things he did by himself, he's got stiff competition. Let's go down the list:

1. Threatening to kill Kari? All the villainous Digimon are trying to kill the kids, and plenty (particularly Piedmon) came a lot closer. Myotismon, for the record, made killing Kari his entire raison d'etre. His whole arc was about his efforts to enter the real world, track down Kari, and kill her before she could become a Digidestined. At least Machinedramon was threatening to murder someone who was actually a danger to him.

2. Threatening to kill her as painfully as possible? Piedmon orders LadyDevimon to do the same to all the Digidestined. Not to mention—it's a detail-less threat.

3. Being a Bad Boss to WaruMonzaemon and the rest of his troops? Puppetmon murdered Cherrymon for giving him advice he didn't like. Devimon enslaved his associates via Black Gears and "Touch of Evil." MetalSeadramon executes Scoriopmon for failure. And Myotismon is the single worst boss in the entire show, torturing DemiDevimon and Gatomon (and brainwashing the latter), killing Pumpinmon and Gotsumon for bailing on him, and devouring all of his henchmen in order to achieve his final form (and that's just in Adventure 1, in Adventure 2 he goes onto kill more of his employees).

4. Enslaving and killing all the Numemon. This is probably Machinedramon's standout crime. That said, he's still got competition when it comes to ratcheting up the body count. The Dark Masters as a group killed Piximon. MetalEtamon killed Leomon. MetalSeadramon killed Whamon. And Myotismon's invasion of the surface world left a sizeable number of humans dead—between the girls he drains blood from, and those killed during his rampage and those of his Digimon he rivals Machinedramon on this front despite being notably less powerful (the dub, of course, tries to pretend that no one was killed, but while it has human reporters say the girls just have anemia and that no one was killed during any of the battles, it forgets to delete the footage of bodybags going into ambulances).

As for the question of how he stacks powerwise, Machinedramon is probably Second Among Equals within the Dark Masters, and therefore, the third strongest villain in the show after Piedmon (strongest Dark Master) and Apocalymon himself.note 

Any redeeming qualities?

None.

Freudian Excuse or other mitigating factors?

Piedmon does state that Machinedramon is designed only for total annihilation. If you want to interpret that as a statement about his moral agency, you can do so.

Final verdict?

Severed from Millenniummon, Machinedramon looks a lot less heinous, and the original post exaggerated a number of his crimes, and created implied crimes (like assuming he destroyed his own army when he leveled the city, even though we don't see this). Most of his major crimes are shared with his four compatriots, and his individual crimes, while noteworthy, don't make him stand out from the crowd in any real way. You could argue him up on the basis of his enslaving and killing the Numemon, but even then, he's only the third worst villain on the show, with both Piedmon and Myotismon edging him out, and while you can make the case Piedmon is stronger than he is, Myotismon isn't.

Something else we also need to consider here is that Digimon Adventure 1 is in canon with Digimon Adventure 2. Which means Machinedramon has to stack with all the things Ken pulled in his Digimon Emperor phase, all the things that various other arc villains did in that show, and of course, all the stuff Myotismon does after returning as MaloMyotismon. He'll also have to stack with anyone who may emerge from the Digimon Tri discussion that we'll be having sometime shortly.

I personally do not think he counts. That said, I do concur you could make the case, based on his killing of all the Numemon. If we were to do that, his entry would need a significant rewrite, not only to remove the Millenniummon stuff, but to put the emphasis where it should be.

I vote cut, but what say we all?

edited 2nd May '18 9:46:43 PM by AmbarSonofDeshar

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#117020: May 2nd 2018 at 9:33:39 PM

[tup] to Lighty's McKidds duo.

So one of my theater managers recommended this series to me, and I decided to check it out, thinking that there might be some candidates (and since it looked interesting).

What Is the Work?

Red Riding is a 2009 British trilogy of TV movies (based on the Quartet novel series by David Peace) aired on Channel 4. The series is composed of 1974, 1980, and 1983. I highly recommend this trilogy, as it’s filled with gruesome murders, twisted themes, disturbing imagery, and English accents so thick, you need subtitles to understand them.

Set in the three districts/ridings of Yorkshire, the trilogy tells the tale of a series of child kidnappings and murders based on the Yorkshire Ripper murders. Despite the famous real life killer making an appearance in 1980, the characters and events are all fictional. It’s up to various reporters and a few kind-hearted cops to solve this case, one that spans 9 years. Unfortunately, the police are extremely corrupt, and will do anything to prevent the truth from leaking out to the public.

Just a fair warning, I’ll be spoiling this series rotten, so if you ever want to see it, turn back now.

Who Is he?

Reverend Martin Laws, aka “The Wolf,” is the leader of a child sex & murder ring, and the main antagonist of the whole trilogy.

What has he done?

He works with the West Yorkshire Constabulary (WYC) to cover up his practices, including Detective Superintendent Maurice Jobson (played by David Morrissey), with some other policemen having to murder or torture those who come close to knowing. He has his men kidnap kids and take them to his underground club located under a pigeon coop, which is comprised of several businessmen (one we’ll get to later) and policemen. Once the kids are fucked, tortured, and murdered, they have swan wings sewed to their backs and are placed in various locations, framing a mentally retarded man named Michael Myshkin for the murders (since he knew about Laws’ real motives). One of the kids—the first one ever captured in fact—was BJ, a young gay boy who would eventually grow up to be a prostitute (Laws described him as "the one who got away."). He has done this to dozens and dozens of children, which we see via large amounts of pictures containing the corpses and the children prior their deaths.

Throughout the trilogy, Laws presents himself as a kindhearted fellow, one who helps people with their problems. As stated above, he’s the exact opposite. He even keeps photos of the little girls and boys he murdered. In 1983, he has a young girl name Hazel Atkins kidnapped, framing a man named Leonard Cole, who found the swan-stitched victim back in 1974 that started that movie’s plot; Cole is then killed by the police while in custody.

At the end of 1983 when the now adult BJ confronts Laws with a shotgun at his house, Laws coerces him into giving it to him, using his domineering influence to get him on his knees and tell him that everything’s going to be okay. He does this as he pulls out a power drill to use on BJ. He’s thankfully interrupted by a now heroic DS Jobson, who shoots him three times with his shotgun, killing the bastard for good.

Redeeming Qualities?

None. He has a wife, but he’s never shown having any true affection for her, and she isn’t seen often. And unlike the Yorkshire Ripper, who’s mentally ill and unstable, Laws is clearly aware of what he’s doing.

Heinousness?

As the main villain, he’s easily the worst figure. While DS Jobson helped him with his plans, he later develops a conscience in 1983 and later tries to stop him.

Conclusion

I think he’s a keep. I’ll be proposing one more candidate from this trilogy.

edited 2nd May '18 9:39:49 PM by therealjackieboy

"No running in the halls!"
hopeshalllive Since: Jan, 2016
#117021: May 2nd 2018 at 9:36:44 PM

[tup] to Reverend Laws. Though I honestly think the corrupt cop should have gotten some jail time for all the other hell he put the kids through.

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#117022: May 2nd 2018 at 9:45:22 PM

Cut Machinedramon, yes to Laws

edited 2nd May '18 9:45:37 PM by 43110

Irene Since: Aug, 2012
#117023: May 2nd 2018 at 9:51:52 PM

The difference with the dub is upon learning Kari is very ill, Machinedramon intentionally does his best to make sure there's no way for her to recover by blowing up all the hospitals/etc. Or trying to, at least. That's not in the subs. This isn't the same thing as "regularly trying to defeat the heroes". It's targeting someone who can't defend themselves and to make them suffer overall. That's his goal.

I can't say this honestly makes him heinous enough, though. Just that it's a unique crime to him. The other villains in 01 don't do any of this in particular either. Though yeah, I can see how the rest easily outheinous him in other ways. He just has one major point that makes him stand out. Possibly not enough, though.

KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Shin Megami Tensei IV
#117024: May 2nd 2018 at 9:53:29 PM

[tdown] Machinedramon. I was always dubious of it honestly.

[tup] The Wolf

Also, the line of "Brainwashed!Kamoshida was still evil because he tried to kill himself to avoid justice" is still on his entry on Shin Megami Tensei.

Where we're gonna delete it? We agreed that the scene actually showed the Brainwashed Kamoshida feeling guilt, Kamoshida still counts of course, but his Brainwashed Self wanted kill himself out of guilt for his crimes, in a scene where he's played with some sympathy.

Ann still hates him and Accentuate the Negative but we shouldn't be judging him from her personal perspective.

PD: I am still akward by having a ephebophile teacher here in the same game that let the male teenage MC date his own teacher.

edited 2nd May '18 10:02:47 PM by KazuyaProta

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AmbarSonofDeshar Since: Jan, 2010
#117025: May 2nd 2018 at 9:56:02 PM

The difference with the dub is upon learning Kari is very ill, Machinedramon intentionally does his best to make sure there's no way for her to recover by blowing up all the hospitals/etc

No, he doesn't. He blows up all the hospitals because he thinks the kids are in a hospital. I just watched the episode today. There's no "let's make her linger and die," or anything like that. He's told the kids are searching for hospitals, and he blows up all the hospitals.

He doesn't even know which of the kids is sick, or hell, that one of the kids is sick when he gives the order. It's not until an episode later that he even interacts with the kids directly.

And I don't know why people are trying to act like Kari's a cancer patient. She's got heatstroke. Tai and Izzy's search for medication? The medication in question is Aspirin.

edited 2nd May '18 9:59:13 PM by AmbarSonofDeshar


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