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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#302026: Feb 16th 2022 at 3:47:32 PM

Yeah, I agree with ASghhrv6ub. Mr. Pink is easily heinous enough but he has a bunch of mitigating factors that render him incapable of qualifying. Ryan somehow manages to get even worse I will have his expanded writeup out in a second.

Also in case someone asks about Ralph Leder. Even ignoring possible heinous standard problems he has a legitimate Freudian Excuse that gives him possible loved ones.

CM Sandboxes, MB Sandboxes
Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#302027: Feb 16th 2022 at 3:49:54 PM

No to Mip. This is a textbook example on why we decline nearly all of these Adult Swim comedy candidates.

CloisterTheStupid from Oop North Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Misry6 Imperfect Disgrace from the Eternal Nothingness Since: Nov, 2021 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Imperfect Disgrace
#302029: Feb 16th 2022 at 3:56:05 PM

[tup] Velana. [tdown] Mip.

Just an empty void…
MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#302030: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:00:24 PM

[tup] Velena.

Also, considering that we reject any character who is not played seriously enough, why is it not on the official Administrivia.Complete Monster FAQ as a bullet point? None of the bullet points mention “played seriously” and it might by why tropers keep proposing candiiates who are too comedic to qualify.

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#302031: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:03:31 PM

[up] Yeah why isn't that on the FAQ it feels like it should be.

Alright, here it is.

  • 30 Days in Spring & Project A75: Ryan Rhodes is a sociopathic teenager who has been committing atrocities since childhood, including murdering a disabled boy in fifth grade. After he and many other students are stuck in the woods during a class trip, Ryan joins up with three other boys to commit more atrocities for fun. After beating a group of fourteen-year-olds to death, the boys gang-rape a girl to death and murder her boyfriend when he comes looking for revenge. The boys soon find gold, drowning two guys who found it and torturing others to death when they do the same, before burning a shack full of sixth-graders alive. Eventually, the other boys get tired of the violence, but Ryan makes them keep going under pain of death. After forcing two girls to strangle each other, the gang is attacked by the rest of the students, and Ryan abandons his goons to their fate as he tries to escape. After being freed by Mr. Pink, Ryan helps him with glee, thinking he wants to wipe out all of humanity which Ryan wants for the opportunity to kill more people for sadistic thrills. During his fight with the heroes, Ryan murders Ralph and Adam and declares his intention to make Amelia his Sex Slave.

Edited by Ordeaux26 on Feb 16th 2022 at 4:03:42 AM

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Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#302032: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:05:52 PM

Well, if someone wants to draft a bullet point for the FAQ, they've got my encouragement.

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#302033: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:07:18 PM

Wai that isn't already in adminstriva?

No wonder we're getting swarmed with examples like this.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#302034: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:12:07 PM

I can do it.

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from The Daily Bugle (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#302035: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:16:36 PM

I found this on the FAQ:

Can a Laughably Evil villain be a Complete Monster?:

Yes, as long as their actions are taken seriously in the story. Take The Joker: He manages to be funny and horrifying at the same time, sometimes in the same scene; see the mob meeting and "magic trick" for an example.

Are we considering adding a point about conduciveness?

Edited by SkyCat32 on Feb 16th 2022 at 7:17:13 AM

Your friendly neighbourhood Spider-Man.
Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#302036: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:19:16 PM

[up] A point about conducivness would be a good idea as well.

Also, does anyone have an opinion on my expansion?

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TellAll111 Since: Jun, 2010
#302037: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:19:48 PM

[tup] for Landon, Crowley, Mary Hunt, Danarius, Randall, his quote, the Deep Learnest, Silas, Pittiker, Pizzaro, Denton, Sphinx, YHVH (tentative), Proctor, and Velana.

[tdown] for Mip.

MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#302038: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:25:23 PM

  • They must be played seriously: their crimes and threat must not be played for comedy.

    Played Seriously 
“Dicklord Assrapist McNazi kills a hero by flushing them down a giant toilet, destroys an entire alternate universe to power his car battery, eats babies for breakfast, and tries to poison the world populace with deadly farts- why doesn't he qualify?” Ask yourself this- does this really sound like the kind of character who is taken seriously as a threat? A proper Complete Monster has to be taken seriously by the narrative. If the villain regularly commits horrible crimes, but is treated as no worse than a standard Unsympathetic Comedy Protagonist, then they are not being treated as a complete monster by the story. And even if the villain does do realistically dark things, if they are treated as a joke, then it also renders the audience unable to take them seriously as a villain. That is not to say that a Laughably Evil character cannot qualify- they can, but they must still be treated by the story as a serious threat and their crimes must be played seriously.

I know we have the FAQ item listed above, but moving it to a main bullet point and folder will make it more visible and thus less likely to be overlooked by tropers.

Edited by MasterN on Feb 16th 2022 at 4:26:26 AM

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
GeorgieEnkoom Emperor Georgie Artémis Enkoom Evulz II from Somewhere. Since: Feb, 2017 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
Emperor Georgie Artémis Enkoom Evulz II
#302039: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:28:01 PM

Aye to the Ryan Rhodes expansion, needless to say.

@Ordeaux26 Not to forget that not even Ralph, despite being a family annihilator, approves of Ryan's crimes.

@MasterN Looks good.

Edited by GeorgieEnkoom on Feb 16th 2022 at 1:30:42 PM

J’m’arrête pas tant qu’j’vois pas des lignes sur les moniteurs (Not stoppin 'til I see Flatlines)
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from The Daily Bugle (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#302040: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:29:40 PM

Great work, N.

No to Mip.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Feb 16th 2022 at 7:41:45 AM

Your friendly neighbourhood Spider-Man.
Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#302041: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:36:20 PM

[tup]Velana.

So, this is just a minor note: Princess Adriana's name is currently potholed to God Save Us from the Queen!. Given that Villainous Princess is now a thing, I feel that's more fitting and should be swapped for that.

Why so serious?
G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#302042: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:37:05 PM

[tup]Velena, Denton, and YHVH

[tdown] to Mip

Edited by G-Editor on Feb 16th 2022 at 8:28:14 AM

Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#302043: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:37:56 PM

I like that one N good job.

[up][up] There is probably more to be swapped for that.

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therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#302044: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:39:11 PM

[tdown] Mip

"No running in the halls!"
ASghhrv6ub Best Smile from Second star to the right. Since: Jun, 2020 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Misry6 Imperfect Disgrace from the Eternal Nothingness Since: Nov, 2021 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Imperfect Disgrace
#302046: Feb 16th 2022 at 4:56:23 PM

[tup] N's suggestion.

Just an empty void…
Mediawatcher Since: Dec, 2015
#302047: Feb 16th 2022 at 5:22:24 PM

[tdown] mip, too absurd to qualify

Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#302048: Feb 16th 2022 at 5:49:04 PM

[tdown] to Mip, he's not even bad enough in the first place

But [tup] to Velana and YHWH

MistaClean from Newfoundland Since: Dec, 2021 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
Pemulis_128 A 20th Century Boy from Teleporting behind you Since: Jul, 2018 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
A 20th Century Boy
#302050: Feb 16th 2022 at 5:58:32 PM

[tup] to Apocalypse!YHVH, [tdown] to Mip


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