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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#12201: Apr 22nd 2023 at 6:58:51 PM

Belos is a several-century year old who is vastly more powerful then Odalia.

And the Coven Heads are not shown to be aware. Terra is shown completely confused as to what is happening, and not in a 'didnt know we were going to get killed too' way. In a 'has no clue what's even going on' way.

Edited by Snoketrope on Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:00:30 AM

The First man
AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#12202: Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:00:17 PM

Yeah. That is what I mean; Belos has 400 years of experience to accumulate his resources and up his vileness. Odalia, on the other hand, lacks that. Which is why she qualifies IMO from the niche she is in. The other coven heads for the most part didn't fully know what they were getting into hence Terra's shock at what was really happening.

That, and unlike Snapdragon, Eberwolf, Raine, etc., they have actual personalities/characteristics while the other coven heads are barely given characterization or quotes. They come across as non-characters.

That, and Odalia trumps several of them anyway because she is also a familial abuser in addition to supplying security for Belos. So I wouldn't recommend downvoting just on the fact that she is weaker than Belos.

Honestly feels kind of suspicious that there are some downvotes now, especially one regarding whether her final fate was meant to be serious. Won't name names, but just feels suspicious.

[up] That is true.

Edited by AustinDR on Apr 23rd 2023 at 9:28:04 AM

YamiVizziniX Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
#12203: Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:02:30 PM

Sure to Director Hoover, Set, Lady Anna, Damon Dran, Al Conaghan, Sy, Commander Hung, Valli, and... oh, yes, long-awaited [tup]s to Emperor Bellhop and Mamadalia (a wannabe in the end but I'll allow that willingly abetting genocide puts her over, even if she didn't think through how likely it was to end well for her). Just a little longer than I had imagined for Belos to join Disney TV animation's other vile colonialist abusive father figure of recent years.[lol]

There is no beginning. There is no end. There is only... Hooty.
AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#12204: Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:10:39 PM

Again fail to understand that the final scene she appears in means she is somehow not meant to be taken seriously. As I have stated, given her absence in the time skip, and the fact she was disowned by her family, she was not Easily Forgiven or freely walking around. I get that it is anticlimactic, but saying that the show does not treat her seriously enough is not true especially when you have characters like Kikimora who actually are treated as jokes.

Edited by AustinDR on Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:11:52 AM

nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#12205: Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:14:20 PM

Yeah, I've historically argued that what happens to a character in the end can be a sign on how seriously they're taken, but it's not a 100 percent thing. Without having seen the series I can't absolutely judge for myself, but the description at least doesn't sound like it disqualifies Odalia. (And it definitely doesn't sound like she's just 'unwittingly complicit' like the other coven heads are).

It's actually funny people are bringing this up, because I literally just raised a possible objection to another villain with a somewhat humorous comeuppance in the other thread - and that wasn't it.

Dark-Triad The Obsessive Void from Wouldn't you like to know? Since: Apr, 2023 Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
The Obsessive Void
#12206: Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:16:06 PM

So, the Hiiragi write-up is on the Etra-Chan page. Just to make sure, I'm not the one who posts the write-up on the Web Animation page right?

[up][up] I'm with you on just because Odalia is not focused on doesn't mean she was forgiven or a joke, especially since they ran out of time. Gotta hard disagree with the people saying Odalia does not count.

Edited by Dark-Triad on Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:30:03 AM

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rosewood47 from A Padded Cell Since: Apr, 2016 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
#12207: Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:21:40 PM

I could've sworn Conaghan was already up, and had been for like a decade. Anyway, [tup] to him.

SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#12208: Apr 22nd 2023 at 7:26:31 PM

Yeah, no. I disagree with the people saying Odalia doesn’t count.

I’m plotting my schemes wherever I go! They’re perfect in every way…
AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#12209: Apr 22nd 2023 at 8:42:12 PM

Yes to Sy and Hung.

Edited by AustinDR on Apr 22nd 2023 at 8:51:29 AM

TBmacho22 Since: Jul, 2021 Relationship Status: Holding out for a hero
G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#12211: Apr 22nd 2023 at 8:58:57 PM

Yeah the comparisons between Belos and Odalia doesn’t seem fair since the former has more resources than the latter . I’m keeping my [tup] for Odalia

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#12212: Apr 22nd 2023 at 9:03:58 PM

Yes to Valli, Hoover, Set, A, Damon, Al, Sy, Hung, Belos, Odelia.

Rawr.
AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#12213: Apr 22nd 2023 at 9:06:28 PM

Also a yes for Conaghan while I'm at it.

KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Shin Megami Tensei IV
#12214: Apr 22nd 2023 at 9:42:54 PM

[tup] Belos

[tup] Odalia

[tup]Commander Hung

Edited by KazuyaProta on Apr 22nd 2023 at 11:43:15 AM

Watch me destroying my country
Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#12215: Apr 23rd 2023 at 12:20:10 AM

Also finished RWBY volume 9. DM if you'd like to talk on it.

Edited by Snoketrope on Apr 23rd 2023 at 12:20:34 PM

The First man
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
TheImmortalAngelNewton The MILF Virus Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
The MILF Virus
#12217: Apr 23rd 2023 at 1:38:00 AM

[tup] Conaghan, Sy, and Hung

So the deadline for the voting of Yoko from PARANORMASIGHT: The Seven Mysteries of Honjo is fast approach and were currently at 8-4. Guessing if she doesn't get another upvote she doesn't make the cut.

Gonna be honest, I'm a bit bum because it felt like it got ignored after me and Wrong disputed the thing going against her about her being possess, presenting why it's definitely not the case. The guy who tried to dispute her even said it was never confirm she was possess, while we presented the game itself confirm she was in control. It's fine if it was a legit argument, but really it's seems more like Fridge Logic and outright headcanon then anything factual.

"Are you the devil?" "Don't compare to me to those small fry" - Mir
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#12218: Apr 23rd 2023 at 1:40:34 AM

I'll switch from no to yes. Now having read it all.

Edited by miraculous on Apr 23rd 2023 at 1:40:48 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#12221: Apr 23rd 2023 at 5:21:10 AM

Alright let's finish Diagnosis murder. The last of The sure fire ones. Next we move onto the iffier ones. From "Murder X4"

Who is Ernest Rogin?

A computer consultant helping the hospital with their new system. Rogin also owns an insurance company and has created A very profitable side business. Forcing the terminally ill to become his pet assassins or he withholds the life insurance to their families. Rogin has been using the hospital to scout of victims to hell perpetuate his scheme.

Over the episode he has the following ordered:

  • A skin care doctor shoots a woman due to her husband paying for her death. The assailant later takes his own life to help his family by not getting in trouble with rogin.

  • A real estate Investor is bludgeoned by another who is arrested.

  • A travel sales agent is gunned down and the entire agency taken hostage by a desperate man. The only reason it not escalating to more murder is that Steve talks him down. The event devastates the poor mans mind.

Anyway they find out Rogin is linked to all three. He smugly reveals that another murder will happen if they don't cut a deal with him for taking the main sentence off. They refuse and as they check his clients they capture them one at a time. He reveals their not the one their looking for and taunts it's a loving wife to a husband who will do. Steve decides to not take his deal as they figure it out and arrest the suspect be for he stabs that woman.

It's revealed that Rogin has been involved in this scheme in a number of hospitals before. He does a few in each to avoid detection before moving onto the next. His reign of terror put at end end.

Heinous standard ?'

Not the biggest body count in the actual episode but the pattern is More than Enough . Hes response for three deaths, an attempted and a seige that directly nearly endangers 8. But it's revealed that this is just one time he's done this and has done this multiple times over multiple hospitals. And honestly his MO is bar none one of the grossiest in the show. He takes advantage of terminally ill people to have then murder others or their families will get nothing. That's shockingly low for this show. And marks him as one of the nastiest bad guys the show produced

Mitigating factors ? Oh nah. He seems like a reasonable guy at first but he's cold blood sociopath who's taking advantage of the most insecure people he can to make a profit. He also enjoys holding the deal over their heads so they gave to cut him one or else the woman dies.

The truth is despite the fact that Rogin initially claims that this is on he people who ordered the murders not him. He is the one who made sure this happened.

  • Sloan: So your fine just sitting here and letting it happen. (On the murder that will happen).
  • Rogin: Won't be on my conscience. I don't have one.

Conclusion?

The last easy keep.

Edited by miraculous on Apr 23rd 2023 at 5:30:01 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#12223: Apr 23rd 2023 at 6:10:48 AM

Yes to Ernest, but I'm a bit confused: Why does he have the people killed?

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Lumberwood Outdated af account from Wouldn't you like to know? Since: Aug, 2018 Relationship Status: And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
Outdated af account
#12224: Apr 23rd 2023 at 6:10:58 AM

Definite [tup] to Ernest, Belos, and Odalia.

Edited by Lumberwood on Apr 23rd 2023 at 6:20:06 AM

Sincerely, Lumberwood
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