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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Atlantis1930 Since: May, 2012
#38876: Mar 8th 2024 at 11:33:55 AM

I can definetly see the arguments for Bruce but I think the main problem here is that it's not just the two keeps from his series that he has to contend with. He also has to compete with all of the other keeps in the franchise due to it being a Shared Universe and unfortunately with that taken into account I'm not quite sure he does enough. If this was just a Crime Drama say or a standalone series I'd be happy with him keeping but unfortunately he also has to rub shoulders with the likes of James March and the Devil himself.

Edited by Atlantis1930 on Mar 8th 2024 at 7:35:13 PM

Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#38877: Mar 8th 2024 at 11:40:27 AM

[tup]Plagueis

[tdown]Hawk

@ACW, This Zamasu and Crimson Masked Saiyan were pulled from different points in the timeline, which altered their personal histories and caused them to split into further Alternate Self.

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#38878: Mar 8th 2024 at 11:41:05 AM

[tup] to Zamasu. Truly a shocker.

And may Toriyama be reunited with his friend Android 16 in Other World. He will be missed.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#38879: Mar 8th 2024 at 11:48:00 AM

[tup] Zamasu. RIP Akira Toriyama.

Atlantis1930 Since: May, 2012
#38880: Mar 8th 2024 at 11:51:57 AM

I have another EP and it's a short one from EC Comics. This one is from the companies Impact series (which included more realistic stories than their usual). I was casually reading through some ones the other day and found this guy from the short "Master Race". I was surprised to find this as I thought the company's output had been rather extensively covered by the thread but doing some digging I don't think this guy’s been added yet. Apparently this particular story was quite influential but since I'm not a comics guy generally I don't know for sure.

The story centers around a man named Carl Reissman. Initially appearing to be a refugee displaced by the events of World War 2, there is more to Carl that meets the eye. At the beginning of the story, Carl reflects on his memories of the war and his escape. Whilst lost in thought, Carl boards a New York subway train and then spots a familiar face from his past. Terrified, Carl tries to hide himself but the man eventually recognises him. As it turns out, this man has sworn vengeance on Carl, and he has a VERY good reason for doing so.

What has he done?

Carl is not the innocent refugee he appears to be. Carl was in fact the head of the infamous Belsen concentration camp. At first repulsed by Nazism and Hitler, Reissman chose to embrace it as a way of gaining power for himself. Making a name for himself after denouncing many of his own friends, Reissman eventually commandeered the camp and ran it with all the brutality you would expect. Slaughtering hundreds of people everyday, Reissman had prisoners taken away for grotesque human experimentation, forced prisoners into mass graves and had them buried alive and even skinned some to use as lampshades in the offices of the camps, all of which is shown in detail by the comic. This carried on for years and years, until the allies eventually arrived and liberated the camp and one of his former prisoners swore eternal vengeance upon him before Reissman fled.

Escaping to America, Reissman thought he had gotten away with everything until meeting the same man again at the beginning of the story. When the man gives chase, Reissman flees but plummets to his death into the path of an oncoming train.

Redeeming Qualities or Freudian Excuse?

Not a chance. Although he was repulsed by Nazism at first, he willingly threw that away as soon as it came to securing power for himself. Other than that, not a thing to speak of.

Heinous Standard?

He's the leader of a concentration camp that killed millions. That's all that needs to be said.

Conclusion?

Keep.

Edited by Atlantis1930 on Mar 8th 2024 at 9:21:26 AM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#38881: Mar 8th 2024 at 11:55:29 AM

[tup]Carl

OH wait I've heard of this one. Kinda surprised no one tried for him before

Edited by miraculous on Mar 8th 2024 at 11:56:41 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#38882: Mar 8th 2024 at 11:55:32 AM

[tup] Zamasu and Carl

"No running in the halls!"
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#38884: Mar 8th 2024 at 11:56:45 AM

[tup] Carl, Zamasu (RIP Toriyama)

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
TheMadCr0w Gentle Laborer from Insignificant Little Blue Planet Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: Get out of here, STALKER
Gentle Laborer
#38888: Mar 8th 2024 at 12:23:50 PM

[tup] Zamasu (RIP Akira Toriyama) and Carl

[tdown] Bruce—while definitely a threat, he's still a Butt-Monkey and a pathetic Big Bad Wannabe, especially when compared to Ramirez.

TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#38889: Mar 8th 2024 at 1:16:13 PM

[tup] for Plagueis, Zamasu (shocker), and Carl.

[tdown] for Hawk and Bruce.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
WilyGryphon Since: Apr, 2023
Braz The Digital from Cyberspace (Troper in training) Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
The Digital
#38891: Mar 8th 2024 at 1:51:46 PM

[tup] to Plagueis and Zamasu.

RIP Akira Toriyama.

LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#38893: Mar 8th 2024 at 2:34:11 PM

[tup] to Darth Plagueis, Zamasu and Carl Reissman.

[tdown] to Hawk and Bruce.

RIP Akira Toriyama.

VengefulBale Dagded Dujardin from The Universe (it's his room) Since: Feb, 2016 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Dagded Dujardin
#38894: Mar 8th 2024 at 2:35:31 PM

[tup] Plagueis, Zamasu and Carl

"Bingo! If two species hate each other, they will wipe each other out on their own."
MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#38895: Mar 8th 2024 at 2:37:03 PM

[tup] Zamazu.

RIP Toriyama. Hope he and Miura are happy wherever they are.

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
227someguy I hate spoilers Since: Jul, 2018
I hate spoilers
#38896: Mar 8th 2024 at 2:56:44 PM

[tup] Zamasu. RIP Toriyama, who also gave us many examples, including Cell (who might have the most incarnations if you count fan works).

Everyone look at my sandbox
Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#38897: Mar 8th 2024 at 3:13:23 PM

Yea to Zamasu

  • 300: Theron is a Spartan Senator who betrays his people to Persia in exchange for riches. Manipulating the Senate and military into standing idly by while brutal Persia slowly conquers the land, Theron deliberately isolates King Leonidas and his army of 300 soldiers without backup so they will be slaughtered by the Persians. When Queen Gorgo comes to him desperate to send aid to Leonidas, Theron claims he will help her, but first violently rapes her. He then refuses to keep his promise and tries to frame Gorgo as a harlot so as to silence her for good and leave Sparta in Theron's hands to deliver to Persia.

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#38898: Mar 8th 2024 at 3:16:43 PM

Alright since people commented. Seems [tdown]Bruce

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#38900: Mar 8th 2024 at 4:41:29 PM

Bumpity

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.

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