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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

jlvs200s Jogo from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#34927: Jan 15th 2024 at 2:25:16 AM

[tup] to Nova Prime, Kosco, the Entity, Majin Buu, Freddy Krueger, Abdul Osman, Governor Richton, the Calamity and Ozzy.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#34928: Jan 15th 2024 at 2:41:14 AM

Sure to Richton; Calamity (game has a page); I guess Ozzy too.

Edited by ACW on Jan 15th 2024 at 5:42:04 AM

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#34929: Jan 15th 2024 at 3:10:30 AM

[tup]ozzy.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
ASghhrv6ub Best Smile from Second star to the right. Since: Jun, 2020 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Best Smile
KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#34933: Jan 15th 2024 at 9:42:52 AM

Star Wars: The Clone Wars fanfic Ventrobi: The Paradox Zone (link): Pong Krell somehow returns from death and proves himself as evil as ever. Coming to Rakata Prime in search of immortality and power to conquer the galaxy, he causes the Force drain that slowly drains life from all Force users in the galaxy. When Anakin, Obi Wan and Ventress come to Rakata Prime to investigate the origins of the Force drain, Pong Krell uses them to get through traps guarding the tomb of Rakata Sage Kindama, planning to force them to watch his victory.

MemeMaster245 Collector of Worlds from Skull Ship Since: Apr, 2022 Relationship Status: This is not my beautiful wife!
EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#34935: Jan 15th 2024 at 11:48:56 AM

Yes to the Calamity and Ozzy.

With thanks to Wet and Mir for allowing me to do this one:

Wet already covered Nova Prime from "What If... Nebula Joined the Nova Corps?", who turns traitor and decides to surrender the planet to Ronan. However, I think Yon-Rogg from the same episode stands a decent shot. So...

Who is Yon-Rogg?

In order to get the codes to deactivate the shields around Xandar, Nova Prime needs a cyborg. And the only one in her employ, Nebula, is too loyal to the cause to willingly help. So she needs a way to convince Nebula to find the codes herself… and a way to get Nebula through the many layers of security protecting the data core housing the codes.

Enter Yon-Rogg, a Kree soldier and saboteur, originally captured by Nebula for trying to sneak into Nova Corp facilities. Nebula breaks him out of prison to help her, and he manages to hack and navigate his way through the data core facility, allowing Nebula access to the core so she can download the codes… only for Yon-Rogg to then plug a USB into her head, stealing the codes and sabotaging the core so that it begins overheating.

He leaves her to die (either via drowning from the water poured in to cool down the overheating core, or via explosion from the overheating core) and delivers the code to Prime; when Nebula survives, prompting Prime to remark that she "always has been a survivor," Yon-Rogg dryly replies "We'll fix that" as they leave her to be beaten to death by Prime's men.

The two proceed to the Nova Corps headquarters to lower the shields, allowing Ronan to finally begin his genocide of the planet. Of course, Nebula sabotages things, Ronan dies, and the situation devolves into a firefight. Yon-Rogg and Prime's right-hand, Saal, try to sneak away, only to be met by Korg.

Korg: Aren't you a big deal baddie?
Yon-Rogg: ... No *begins nervously laughing* ... [Saal] is.
Saal: What?

Korg proceeds to ragdoll them both.

Mitigating factors?

Nada, just a Kree fanatic. And since it’s an AU, his (frankly dubious) redeeming qualities from Captain Marvel shouldn’t be an issue.

Heinous enough?

In the broad sense, yes. The conspiracy would be giving up Xandar to Ronan so he can enact a genocidal invasion. The main issue is whether Yon-Rogg stands out within the conspiracy itself. Nova Prime’s obviously the mastermind, and Ronan is the guy who will actually be doing all the murdering. Garthan Saal is also around as Prime’s chief flunky; he covers up Yondu’s death when he tries to expose the conspiracy, brutally beats down Nebula, and takes out honest Corpsmen so Prime can lower the shields unimpeded (though we only see one victim).

Even with all that, I would say Yon-Rogg stands out in a big way, since he’s the only one capable of acquiring the shield codes for them. The member of the conspiracy that he should probably be compared to regarding heinousness would be Saal, and while what Saal does is bad, it's small potatoes compared to that. I would liken it to an arms dealer delivering a nuke to the villain in an action movie, with full understanding of what it’ll be used for; the codes are the entire crux of their plan, and without them the invasion is fucked.

Saal himself is merely an enforcer; maybe if we got more focus on his culling of the honest Corpsmen (or if it was extended to the entire planet rather than just the one building), but as is he's just muscle with no standout crimes.

Yon-Rogg's role in the episode is a small one, but imo his part in the conspiracy is too integral to write off.

TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#34936: Jan 15th 2024 at 11:56:25 AM

[tup] for Yon-Rogg.

I assume Ronan doesn't count for one reason or another?

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#34937: Jan 15th 2024 at 11:57:45 AM

Wet already talked about this, but Ronan is too much of a vague background presence who doesn't even speak. If we were to take this episode in a vacuum, with no prior knowledge of the MCU, he'd be a textbook GDV.

Edited by EmeraldEmperor on Jan 15th 2024 at 2:58:02 PM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#34938: Jan 15th 2024 at 11:58:26 AM

[tup]Yong (uh third for Jude law?)

[up][up]Ronan is a blank void of a character and a distant threat. Like people meme about him being close to a GDV in the fikm but he's really not. Here he legit is...

Edited by miraculous on Jan 15th 2024 at 11:59:45 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#34939: Jan 15th 2024 at 11:59:31 AM

[tup] Rogg

Edited by EmperorGeode on Jan 15th 2024 at 11:59:41 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#34940: Jan 15th 2024 at 11:59:54 AM

Sure to Yon Rogg

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
emperors Messenger from another dimension. Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Messenger from another dimension.
#34941: Jan 15th 2024 at 12:02:17 PM

Yes to Rogg, Krueger, Calamity, and Ozzy and I might have had another candidate from Gliniarze but sadly my good friend from Ukraine was just killed (he served in Ukrainian military) by Russian military. I need time to myself. MAYBE I will EP in like 2 weeks, but for now I need some time to myself.

Edited by emperors on Jan 15th 2024 at 3:02:40 PM

Welcome to the world of greatest media!
jlvs200s Jogo from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
Jogo
#34942: Jan 15th 2024 at 12:03:21 PM

[tup] Yon Rogg

Edit: [up] Take all the time you need away from the thread and have my condolences for your loss.

Edited by jlvs200s on Jan 15th 2024 at 9:48:32 PM

"Stand proud, Sukuna, you are strong." | He/Him
fanman Insert title here from Earth-Prime/Earth-1218 Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Insert title here
#34943: Jan 15th 2024 at 12:03:29 PM

Okay, this one I'm not too sure about, but I think it's worth a shot.

What's the work?

The Vanishing of S.S. Willie is an Analog Horror short film made to capitalize on Steamboat Willie entering the public domain. It's a supposedly lost documentary about the S.S. Willie, a ship that mysteriously disappeared along with its crew. However, the maker of the documentary finds that the vanishing came from within...

Who are the candidates?

The Cabin Boy, Mickey and Minnie, wait, no, [Redacted] and [Redacted], were part of the S.S. Willie, but were in fact psychotic murderers. According to the captain's log, one of the deck hands disappeared after a night of "strange music". That night, the strange music played again, but interspersed with screaming. The next morning the other deck hand disappeared. When the Cabin Boy and Chambermaid "disappear" next, the captain is forced to find the nearest port, at which point, the whole ship vanishes.

The maker of the documentary sends someone with a camera to the spot he pinpointed the wreck's location to be. Said photographer finds the mutilated corpses of the crew of the S.S. Willie. A record is also found, labeled "Our Music", which is music with screams of agony spliced in.

Mitigating Factors?

Okay, so the witness the documentary's maker interviewed said Mickey was "lovestruck" when talking about his plans to get married with Minnie. The record, like I said, is also labeled "Our Music". However, what he's attracted to isn't explained, and it's arguable that they're attracted to each other out of mutual sadism.

Also, considering their victims are the animals Mickey abused in the original Steamboat Willie short to make music, this could be seen as a dark parody. However, I argue that it's a The Bikini Bottom Horror situation where the setting is so altered, it can stand on its own merits.

Conclusion?

Like I said, I'm not too confident about this, but I think there's a good case. But I'll be fine if they aren't pulled up.

TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#34944: Jan 15th 2024 at 12:04:29 PM

[up][up][up][up][up]+[up][up][up][up] Gotcha, thanks.

Also take care Emperors, very sorry to hear about that.

Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Libraryseraph Showtime! from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Showtime!
#34947: Jan 15th 2024 at 12:29:01 PM

[tup] To Yon Rogg

[tdown] To the murderers, in general we operate on a redeeming until explicitly proven standars for Even Evil Has Loved Ones

Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?
DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#34948: Jan 15th 2024 at 12:29:52 PM

[tup] to Yon-Rogg.

Leaning [tdown] on the Cabin Couple, the whole lovestruck thing combined with calling their song "Our Song" indicates a bit that they're genuinely in love, if in a twisted way.

NOISE IS CALLING, PICK UP PHONE
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#34949: Jan 15th 2024 at 12:37:02 PM

[tdown] to Mickey and Minnie as serial killers

Sorry to hear that Emperors, take all time you need.


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