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Prematurely launched pages and pages that weren't fully fleshed out at the point of launching, are a big problem. Since these usually share several problems at once, this thread is aimed at re-running them through the TLP for fixing - the usual fix - or cutting them if they are too bad.

Problems this thread deals with include bad names, not enough/bad examples, unclear description, etc.

For the interested, here's a list of recently created pages. Launches

Note: Please do not request a mod to unlaunch drafts that don't have any issues besides lacking a launch notice/24hr launch notice. While 24hr launch notices are mandatory, there are a few exceptions to the rule. If you see a draft's sponsor launch a TLP without an announcement, it's best to remind them of our TLP Guidelines first. If they continue to repeatedly launch drafts without a launch notice, you can report them on Ask The Tropers or the TLP Community Issues thread.

Edited by MacronNotes on Jun 24th 2023 at 12:24:55 PM

Karxrida The Unknown from Eureka, the Forbidden Land Since: May, 2012 Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
The Unknown
#3426: Jul 31st 2015 at 1:39:26 PM

I mistakenly used Film, when according to your post 4 pages ago it was listed under Anime.

How about Anime.Pokemon Hoopa And The Clash Of Ages?

edited 31st Jul '15 1:41:41 PM by Karxrida

If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#3427: Jul 31st 2015 at 1:48:13 PM

Aye, there is a page there, but almost all ZCE.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Karxrida The Unknown from Eureka, the Forbidden Land Since: May, 2012 Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
The Unknown
#3428: Jul 31st 2015 at 2:32:33 PM

If you restore it, I can probably fix it if the only issue is the ZCEs

If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?
Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#3429: Jul 31st 2015 at 8:07:23 PM

The page isn't locked, so you can edit it when you like. smile

I'd recommend whipping it up in the Sandbox namespace first, to make sure it's up to snuff. (Because life happens.)

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
Karxrida The Unknown from Eureka, the Forbidden Land Since: May, 2012 Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
The Unknown
#3430: Jul 31st 2015 at 9:28:53 PM

I don't think I can re-create it from scratch, if that's what you're implying. I lack the drive, experience, and know how (mostly for formatting) to do a write-up of the movie, which is why I wanted to know if we still had the page contents on file so I could work with that.

If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#3431: Aug 1st 2015 at 2:41:37 AM

Recreated that page under Pokemon Hoopa And The Clash Of Ages.

Otherwise, worklist:

edited 1st Aug '15 2:41:56 AM by SeptimusHeap

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Karxrida The Unknown from Eureka, the Forbidden Land Since: May, 2012 Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
The Unknown
#3432: Aug 1st 2015 at 3:14:05 AM

I'm on it.

I know the minimum trope requirement is five, but that intro paragraph looks short. How long does it need to be?

If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?
Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#3433: Aug 1st 2015 at 3:40:34 AM

A couple paragraphs minimum is good. At least long enough that people can get a good idea of what the work is about and what the storyline is.

I would recommend more, but I tend to be wordy with my descriptions. tongue

Main thing to remember is to write it as though Spock's dad has come to Earth and is learning about the work for the first time. (/teasing) In other words, assume no prior knowledge in the reader. You don't have to spoil anything, but it should be a good introduction.

edited 1st Aug '15 3:42:14 AM by Candi

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
thatother1dude Ready to see true darkness from Land of the Ill, Annoyin' Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
Ready to see true darkness
#3434: Aug 1st 2015 at 5:56:16 AM

I'll get on adding examples to Rising Thunder ASAP, I just wanted to get the description done before I went to bed last night.

Morgenthaler Since: Feb, 2016
#3435: Aug 1st 2015 at 6:05:27 AM

Additional stubs: Alamaailman Vasarat, Applause, and The Cursing Hedgehog.

You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#3436: Aug 2nd 2015 at 1:46:35 AM

~singing30, ~Moon_Girl and ~xxbiasonxxx, please do not make empty unindexed character pages, thanks!

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
singing30 Since: May, 2015
#3437: Aug 2nd 2015 at 10:49:10 AM

^Alight, but I'm confused about how to make indexed character pages

Moon_Girl Since: May, 2014
#3438: Aug 2nd 2015 at 11:47:22 AM

Sorry about that! It was a long night and I figured I would complete everything the next day! I'm a little confused on indexing as well, but I'm going to look into it. grin

SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#3439: Aug 3rd 2015 at 2:12:05 AM

~singing30: Please check out How Indexing Works.

Otherwise, worklist:

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Morgenthaler Since: Feb, 2016
#3440: Aug 3rd 2015 at 12:17:21 PM

Additional stubs: Adderly, Gothic Sports, and Robert Schumann.

You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#3441: Aug 4th 2015 at 8:37:58 AM

Today's worklist:

One Missed Call and Tomie need to be moved to namespaces that are actually suitable - as they are, they currently aren't.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
lakingsif Since: Dec, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#3442: Aug 4th 2015 at 8:51:59 AM

[up] One Missed Call to Film, but isn't the second one okay? (If not, merge with the manga page or Film)

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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#3443: Aug 4th 2015 at 8:53:09 AM

No, they'd have to have their own pages as well.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
lakingsif Since: Dec, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#3444: Aug 4th 2015 at 9:01:29 AM

I don't know enough about it to make all of the pages, but I can move the first one

OH MY GOD; MY PARENTS ARE GARDENIIIIINNNNGGGGG!!!!!
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#3445: Aug 4th 2015 at 9:10:03 AM

I've moved the page back and locked the redirect pending an actual split.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
singing30 Since: May, 2015
#3446: Aug 4th 2015 at 5:18:17 PM

Septimus Heap: I checked it out...it is still confusing, so I'm just going to avoid creating index until i really understand it

Larkmarn Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Hello, I love you
#3447: Aug 4th 2015 at 11:23:28 PM

Looking for more input on these:

Lack of gestation aside, Captive Push is decently written, but very much People Sit In Chairs. Cut To The Funny, on the other hand, is pretty much entirely covered by Funny Background Event and/or not tropeworthy... it's so unclear because it isn't written very well.

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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#3448: Aug 5th 2015 at 2:55:48 AM

singing30, it appears to me that your page was indexed by someone else.

Cut To The Funny is stupendously vague, but Captive Push does mention narrative reasons, so not PSOC.

Otherwise, worklist:

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
lakingsif Since: Dec, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#3449: Aug 5th 2015 at 4:06:21 AM

Yeah, I rewrote Captive Push to make it not PSOC (I don't know about the ZC Es, though), and Cut To The Funny is back in ykttw so it can go.

edited 5th Aug '15 4:07:08 AM by lakingsif

OH MY GOD; MY PARENTS ARE GARDENIIIIINNNNGGGGG!!!!!
Valyr Since: Aug, 2015
#3450: Aug 5th 2015 at 2:33:53 PM

I'm the creator of the Thar Shaddin stub page mentioned two messages earlier. Sorry about that, had to leave mid-creation. I realize now I probably should have removed what I had and posted the whole thing later, but I was rushed at the time and that didn't occur to me.

I'm picking up working on it immediately, and it won't happen again. My mistake!

edited 5th Aug '15 2:39:49 PM by Valyr


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