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Fanfic: Consequences Of Unoriginality
Consequences of Unoriginality is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fan fiction story by Andoriol.

When Emeris Fillson is transported to Equestria, he finds himself turned not just into a pony but into an Alicorn, and a Gary Stu at that. Thanks to a curse that Emeris calls the Gary-Stu-ness Effect, or GSE, he is better than anypony at any of their special talents (especially when in direct competition), is loved obsessively by everypony he comes across aside from Celestia and, worst of all, is a Doom Magnet that continually brings devastation to Equestria in the form of monsters that only he can stop, and not without collateral damage.

After two years of this nightmare, Emeris and Celestia manage to break the curse and turn him into a Unicorn/Earth pony hybrid - and then the story begins, as Emeris attempts to make up for all the trouble he has unintentionally brought to Equestria.

Also has a Scrapbook Story spinoff by the same author, Letters From a Fascinated but Frustrated Scientist, as well as an Alternate Universe story in the form of Twisted Reflections of Consequences: The Despair of Gary Stu where everybody BUT Celestia hates him.


Consequences of Unoriginality and the canon side-stories contain examples of:

  • Abhorrent Admirer: Played with. The curse doesn't alter anyone's apperance, but does drive both mares and stallions into acting like a combination of this and a Stalker with a Crush towards Emeris. However, Emeris also points out how unfortunate it is for everyone affected, and it's later made clear that the curse caused others to act against their own wishes while being completely unable to stop themselves.
  • Above the Influence: Despite his attraction to several of those that come on to him - particularly Applejack and Rainbow Dash - Emeris refuses to take advantage of anyone and constantly turns down anyone who asks.
  • And I Must Scream:
    • Emeris's initial fate.
    • Those affected by the curse, being completely aware of their actions but forced to act against their will with no way to stop themselves.
    • What happens when Twilight's spell goes awry and merges Twilight and Emeris into a single being. Apparently this is exactly what Emeris did upon waking up, only to pass out from shock shortly afterwards.
  • Armor-Piercing Question: Rarity ends up giving one to Emeris when she asks how many ponies know him for his true self.
  • Attack of the 50-Foot Whatever: Some of the delights spawned by the GSE.
  • Berserk Button: Don't ever imply that only 'Gary' is worthwhile around Emeris.
  • Blunt "Yes": Emeris gives one to Rainbow Dash when he refuses to run her obstacle course as part of her "coolness" test.
    Rainbow Dash: Are you questioning me?
    Emeris: Yes.
  • Body Horror:
    • Emeris has his wings vaporized by the spell that breaks his curse. It's every bit as painful as it sounds.
    • The various Monsters of the Week can lead to some very nasty cases of this for ponies, as shown in Twisted Reflections of Consequences where a mare gets turned into an Eldritch Abomination.
  • Chick Magnet: The GSE turns Emeris into an extremely unwilling version of this.
  • Cooldown Hug: Emeris ends up receiving several. It would be hard for anyone to deny he needs them.
  • Curb-Stomp Battle: The magical equivalent, where Twilight crushes Emeris mentally during a test to determine how strong his magic abilities are now the curse has been broken.
  • Cut Himself Shaving: Emeris passes off his and Rainbow Dash's injuries after their fight as the result of him falling out a tree. On to a Manticore. Which Dash tried to save him from but ended up being injured as well. Needless to say, this excuse is treated with a fair amount of skepticism.
  • Deconstruction Fic: The whole premise of the story is set around deconstructing the idea of being a Gary Stu.
  • Defeat Means Friendship: Between Rainbow Dash and Emeris. Though strictly speaking, it's more like "fighting each other to a stalemate before collapsing from exhaustion and injury" means friendship.
  • Determinator: Emeris when protecting those he cares about.
  • Doom Magnet: The curse turns Emeris into this leading to immense collateral damage for anyone unfortunate enough to be caught up in it, though the effect can be partially mitigated through magic and distance.
    • And, as a pack of thirty-plus weirdly determined timberwolves seem to imply, he might not be out of the woods just yet.
  • Double Entendre: Celestia and 'Gary' have a conversation entirely comprised of these, when he reports the outcome of a successful mission to her in front of the nobility.
  • Ear Ache: When Emeris gets a mane cut from a stylist who still holds a grudge against him for the last two years, she gets reckless with her scissors and accidentally takes almost half of his ear off, causing severe bleeding.
  • Fee Fi Faux Pas: Emeris gets several as a result of his lack of knowledge of Equestrian culture. In particular he ends up grooming AJ and bumping cutie marks with her, both flirtatious gestures. AJ is quite understanding however, and well aware that Emeris doesn't know what he's doing, as she points out to Rainbow Dash.
  • Follow the Leader: Readers may note several similarities between this version of Equestria and that found in Xenophilia, something which the author readily admits to taking inspiration from.
  • Gary Stu / Parody Sue: Emeris. Deliberately invoked to deconstruct the idea.
  • Gender Bender: Twilight, when she messes up her spell and accidentally merges both herself and Emeris into a male alicorn.
  • Genre Savvy: Emeris is well aware he's an Invincible Hero under the GSE and takes full advantage of it.
  • Heroic Willpower: Emeris when he manages to avoid the temptation offered by the mares who come onto him. He even manages to resist Fluttershy's stare, albeit with great difficulty. Also applies when a spell cures his curse, where he's still able to keep control of himself despite the agonising pain.
  • Hero with Bad Publicity: Played With. While everyone publicly espouses the virtues of 'Gary' and how awesome he is, they all secretly dislike him due to the way the curse makes them act. This is Double Subverted when ponies actually get to know the real Emeris and find him to be a likeable guy.
  • Informed Flaw: Emeris enthusiastically and repeatedly describes himself as an antisocial asshole, yet is constantly trying to help others and generally be an all around nice guy. The former might have to do with him staying away from town as much as possible as "Gary" to reduce others' exposure to the GSE. The latter just seems to be plain Self-Deprecation.
    • The intent could also be that he was more of an antisocial asshole as a human before being brought to Equestria and put through two years under the GSE.
  • Imagination-Based Superpower: Emeris's ability to make constructs with his magic, which he compares to the Green Lantern Ring by name.
  • In-Series Nickname: Rainbow Dash comes to start calling Emeris as "big guy".
  • Instant Expert: The GSE turns Emeris into one at almost anything he tries, which causes him much frustration because it cheapens everyone else's legitimate talents, including several of his own skills.
  • Invincible Hero: Emeris under the GSE. He takes full advantage of it.
  • Irony: After Emeris has his curse broken, Rainbow Dash admits to Applejack she actually liked 'Gary' and that her attraction to him under the GSE was mostly genuine. The idea that Emeris might not actually be "cool" after all causes her a lot of frustration.
  • Known Only by Their Nickname: Emeris takes on the name of Gary while under the GSE, with Celestia being the only one who calls him by his real name when in private.
  • Meaningful Name: While under the GSE, Emeris takes on the name of Gary to everyone except Celestia.
  • The Mind Is a Plaything of the Body: Being turned into a pony completely alters what Emeris finds physically attractive, thus making it much harder for him to resist any mare that comes on to him.
  • No Social Skills: Given his imposed isolation during his curse, Emeris ends up being completely oblivious to many of the social cues everyone else takes for granted, and inadvertently leads to several Fee Fi Faux Pas due to his lack of knowledge of Equestrian culture.
  • Only Sane Man: Subverted. While Emeris and Celestia appear to be the only ones not caught up in the craziness surrounding the GSE, it's later revealed that everyone else is completely aware of how they're acting, but the curse prevents them from controlling themselves, to the point where they're physically incapable of spouting anything other than mindless adoration for 'Gary'.
  • Prolonged Prologue: Weighing in at over 10,000 words, the story spends considerable time setting the stage and showing just how bad the curse actually is.
  • Rape as Drama: While this doesn't actually occur, this trope is played mostly straight when Twilight believes that Emeris ended up raping her friends by taking advantage of their behaviour under the GSE, not realising her attempts to trick him into sex were actually the closest anyone had gotten.
  • Reality Warper:
    • The GSE curse itself works like this, as Celestia and Emeris discover when it spontaneously creates new laws declaring him a prince of Equestria and continually preventing him from abdicating.
    • Inverted with Emeris, who becomes a master of "Reality Calcification"; the magic of restoring things to their proper order. He becomes so skilled at it that it's one of the few abilities he keeps after the curse is broken, and his proficiency is on a par with the princesses.
  • Rule of Cool: The GSE invokes this, with several of the monsters being spawned for the sole purpose of allowing Emeris to defeat them in flashy and spectacular ways.
  • Secret Test of Character: Celestia threatens to attack Emeris to determine his level of self-control, and thus whether it would be safe to cast the spell to remove his curse. She does apologise afterwards however, and comforts him when his fear at possibly having to fight her reduces him to the verge of tears.
  • Shell-Shocked Veteran: Of sorts. While Emeris doesn't show many ill effects after the curse is broken, when Rarity starts fussing over his appearance it gives him a panic attack, and when Twilight's spell goes wrong and he thinks his curse has returned he becomes hysterical with fear before passing out. Twilight diagnoses him with PTSD, in part due to the years he's spent trying to avoid being molested or raped by his GSE-affected fans. She's proven right when Applejack and Rainbow Dash both ask him out and he suffers another panic attack.
  • Shoutout:
    • Rainbow Dash's nickname for Emeris may seem familiar to anyone who's read Xenophilia, along with several other references.
    • When Pinkie asks what his name is, Emeris's first thought is "Sir Lancelot".
    • Emeris channels his inner Yoda at several points before lampshading it.
  • Slap Slap Nuzzle: Not strictly a romantic example, but after fighting each other to a draw and collapsing in exhaustion, Emeris and Rainbow Dash immediately start nuzzling each other, showing several characteristics of this trope.
  • Slipping a Mickey: Twilight ends up doing this to 'Gary' to try and trick him into sex, though thankfully the arrival of Pinkie Pie brings Emeris to his senses and allows him to escape before anything happens. Played for Drama later on however, where Twilight doesn't realise she was the closest anyone had gotten to pulling this off, and believed Emeris had been taking advantage of her friends and other mares in this way.
  • Stalker with a Crush: The curse tends to turn ponies into this towards Emeris. See Abhorrent Admirer.
  • Take That:
    • At many Human-in-Equestria fics by deconstructing the idea of a Gary Stu, and by pointing out the ridiculous characteristics many badly-written Self Insert characters have, such as the clichéd red-and-black maned alicorn.
    • At Twilight, when Emeris compares his predicament to being stuck in the Twilight universe as a self-aware Bella Swan.
  • Two Beings, One Body: The result of one of Twilight's spells going badly wrong.
  • What the Hell, Hero?:
    • Celestia admonishes Twilight for attacking and injuring Emeris unprovoked, the day after his curse is broken.
    • The rest of the Mane 6 deliver one to Twilight when her spell goes awry and fuses both her and Emeris into a single being. Luna and Celestia are no less disappointed when they find out, and punish her by banning her from magic for a month, as well as doing anything (beyond walking and personal hygiene) without asking for help from her friends.
  • What Measure is a Non Pony?: Twilight tries to assuage her guilt after bullying Emeris - something she states herself no well brought up mare should do - by reminding herself that he's not actually a stallion, even if he looks like one.
  • You Shall Not Pass: Emeris gets a rather epic one where he holds off a large group of timber wolves to give Apple Bloom time to escape, though it leaves him a hairsbreadth from death by the time Applejack and Big Macintosh show up to help.

Twisted Reflections of Consequences contains examples of:

  • Bloodier and Gorier: Unlike the original story, Twisted Reflections of Consequences is not shy about showing just how horrific the Monsters of the Week are, and how bad the collateral damage for the rest of Equestria is.
  • Darker and Edgier: Considering how dark elements of the original story were, this is saying something. Though according to Word of God, the kinds of horrors described in the story also took place in the canon original, albeit off-page.
  • For Want of a Nail: What if the curse made Emeris hated instead of universally loved?
  • Hero with Bad Publicity: This version of the GSE turns Emeris into one, where everyone despises him to the point that they'll often attack him, even when he's in the middle of saving somepony's life.
  • Infant Immortality: Oh so averted. The collateral damage of the GSE does not discriminate.
  • Parental Substitute: While it happens in the original to an extent, Celestia becomes much more of a mother-figure to Emeris in this version.
  • Tears of Blood: Emeris explicitly points out how stupid and messy this is, when his transformation in this version causes him to cry tears of blood.


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