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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#239851: Dec 12th 2020 at 11:10:17 AM

For a quote, there's this:

"I need nothing from you but your barely-beating heart to lure that snivelling (sic) wretch right where I want him. When you die, you will die knowing that I have tortured your little friend with horrors beyond horrors. If you could only see the morbid vividness of mutilation and degradation that this half-human parasite will soon endure...only then would you truly understand how easy you have it."
Damien Finch to Fats, The Crow: 2037

For a description...not sure beyond the basic, but I DO know I wanna have something about "Whether original (something about amateurs vs. professionals? Maybe not) or fan works..."

Edited by ACW on Dec 12th 2020 at 2:10:34 PM

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Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#239853: Dec 12th 2020 at 11:20:00 AM

I'll create the page tomorrow if nobody objects. A good header would be appreciated.

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TiMBer1566 The Dragon from Virginia Since: Nov, 2018 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
The Dragon
#239854: Dec 12th 2020 at 11:21:37 AM

I have a potential cut

God from Austin DR's story In Heaven.

In Heaven (archive) by Austin DR: God, in a desire to be worshipped, created angels, but it wasn't enough, so he created humanity. When a part of the angels, led by Satan, rebelled against him, God punished them by turning a third of them into his throne, while they were fully conscious and in eternal suffering. When greeting the deceased reverend, God revealed that he was actually all the deities humanity ever believed in, mocked him for his faith in him, and showed him his dead loved ones, whose souls were robbed of personality and free will alongside anyone who ever believed in God, and even some non-religious people, so that they could be God's perfect followers. God then turned the reverend into one of his many slaves.

Having just read the story, there doesn't seem to be much plot outside of: 'Reverend dies, goes to Heaven, and God turns out to be evil'.

captainmarkle Limited Patients from Behind you Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
#239855: Dec 12th 2020 at 11:27:33 AM

Congrats on finishing your finals, jackie!

Here are my writeups for Fantastic Four (if anyone wants to read the effort posts, in case I miss a particularly nasty crime, they are here). Adding to drafts; I'm very rusty (I think the last writeup I did was the Shoggy Big Bad) and would appreciate help / feedback.

  • Fantastic Four:
    • "To Battle The Living Planet": Ego is the titular Living Planet and a galactic menace characterised by extreme pettiness and selfishness, to the extent. Confronting Galactus - who considered Ego an insane threat to the wider galaxy - and fighting him to a stalemate, Ego agreed to a ceasefire if the former provided him with thrusters to faster traverse the galaxy, secretly fixing them to spread death and destruction as he saw fit. Coming to Earth, Ego mistakenly assumes it is under Galactus's protection and causes multiple natural disasters on its surface, rendering Thor comatose when he attempts to intervene and later attempting to drown the Fantastic Four when they intervene as "vengeance" against his sworn enemy. A being so dangerous he forced Galactus, Thor and the Fantastic Four to ally with one another, Ego's only reaction to the Devourer's arrival was sadistic pleasure at finishing what he started.
    • Terrax initially appears to be merely the Jerkass replacement as Galactus's herald once Silver Surfer defects to Earth, but reveals himself to be considerably worse. Starting as the bloodthirsty tyrant Tyros, with an all-but-stated harem and a predilection for personally executing prisoners, he willingly sells out his planet and race - including his own family - to Galactus in exchange for the Power Cosmic, laughing and grinning as the destruction ensued. In "When Calls Galactus", Terrax grows envious of his master's power, longing to be a king once more, and deceives him into eating the poisonous planet Antos in an assassination attempt, leaving him near-death; he then travels to Earth and holds the entirety of Manhattan hostage, forcing the Fantastic Four to fight and kill Galactus with the threat of suffocating the entire island if they refuse. When this takes too long, he storms Galactus's ship in a final assassination attempt.

Edited by captainmarkle on Dec 12th 2020 at 8:27:48 PM

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SumDumNerd Current mood: sick of your shit from the Ever After Since: May, 2017 Relationship Status: Every rose has its thorn
Current mood: sick of your shit
#239856: Dec 12th 2020 at 11:35:02 AM

I'll abstain on all the cuts for the moment

Also, just wanted to clarify that "Through the Trees" wasn't the Seed Eater's original story; it was this site, and "Through the Trees" was a spinoff of sorts. I don't know if that factors into anyone's decision (including my own), but figured we might as well be thorough and accurate.

Read "Ghost Stories of Remnant" here.
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#239857: Dec 12th 2020 at 11:35:54 AM

ACW: How about something like this for a header:

Whether original, professionally or otherwise, or fan made, Scripts can still have some irredeemably evil characters.

Edited by Bullman on Dec 12th 2020 at 1:38:10 PM

Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup thread
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#239858: Dec 12th 2020 at 11:45:42 AM

Having looked at the story, backing Timber's cut proposal. After dying God just mocks the reverend while basking in the suffering he's inflicting on those he brought to Heaven before destroying the guy's mind.

falcontalons from Earth-2 Since: Apr, 2019
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#239863: Dec 12th 2020 at 12:00:26 PM

Cut God

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#239865: Dec 12th 2020 at 12:37:09 PM

Cut him, I was about to get to that myself.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
nwotyzal Since: Sep, 2019
DrUnknown Since: May, 2020
#239867: Dec 12th 2020 at 1:03:50 PM

[tup] to the Flavius and second Lord Voldemort quote.

Cut God.

Speaking of Creepypastas, I have another cut, specifically Abby's father from "My Father was a Serial Killer". Just like my previous cut, Mrs. Paterson, there's little substantial plot here, where it's missing both unique characterization and a well-structured plot, aside from saying "Abby's father is evil." In the story, everyone except for Abby's father has zero characterization, where they're satellite characters to be bullied by the father and don't do anything besides that. Heck, they have less character than the main protagonist from the the story with Mrs. Paterson. At least the protagonist contributed to the downfall of Mrs. Paterson. Here, the family members are informed of the father's arrest and that's that. Abby's father has some unique characterization in the fact that he is a religious fanatic, but this feels like a situation similar to Hatred, where the main character is characterized and no one else is.

As for plot structure, it's just a description of Abby's house life, where the father is abusive, gets arrested, the police investigate the full extent of his crimes and "The End." There's no climax, no rising action, and barely any conclusion. As a result, the story becomes even less substantial and, combined with the lack of characterization for everyone but the father, I think the plot doesn't have enough content behind it to be considered substantial, so I believe that the father should be cut. What do you guys think?

[down] You're welcome. smile

Edited by DrUnknown on Dec 12th 2020 at 1:06:22 AM

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#239868: Dec 12th 2020 at 1:05:06 PM

Cut away to both, thank you for this, Unknown.

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#239870: Dec 12th 2020 at 1:07:42 PM

Cut Abby’s father and God.

"No running in the halls!"
DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#239871: Dec 12th 2020 at 1:11:34 PM

We're not going on a mass Pasta cutting cleanup right now, are we?

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TiMBer1566 The Dragon from Virginia Since: Nov, 2018 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
The Dragon
#239872: Dec 12th 2020 at 1:13:17 PM

[up] It all depends on whether or not the pastas have substantial plot.

Cut Abby's father.

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#239873: Dec 12th 2020 at 1:14:16 PM

Cut the father.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#239874: Dec 12th 2020 at 1:15:22 PM

Hey, so I've got a question. I was reading the RWBY Fan Fic Relic Of The Future and encountered a possible candidate called Jax Asturias. I thought he was an original character, but I did some reading on the wikis and discovered that he originally came from a novel called RWBY: Before the Dawn, and I believe he counts there too. So, I've got two questions:

1. Does anyone know if he's ever been suggested before?

2. If he hasn't, can I EP both versions of the character at once, or should I do it one at a time?

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP

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