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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
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Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#24203: Aug 25th 2023 at 3:50:23 PM

  • Mobile Suit Gundam: Iron-Blooded Orphans: Iznario Fareed is the worst of the already corrupt Seven Stars, and a major mover-and-pusher of power in the corrupt and oppressive Gjallarhorn. Throughout the first season, Iznario seeks to spread his enormous sphere of influence even wider than it already is, and resorts to rigging elections, calmly ordering the death of disposable child soldiers, and attempting to silence the revolutionary leader Kudelia Aina Bernstein by any means necessary. The second season reveals his supposed illegitimate son McGillis was actually a child prostitute that Iznario "adopted" for the purposes of molding the boy into an heir. Throughout his childhood, McGillis was molested by Iznario and subject to such brutal abuse his entire body is warped with bruises when he's briefly seen nude, sitting on the side of his "father's" bed with a vacant look in his eyes.
  • Use of Weapons: Ethnarch Kerian, the decadent despot of Youricam who serves as the introductory Asshole Victim for mercenary protagonist Cheradenine Zakalwe, has kept himself alive and youthful for decades through "retro-ageing" technology, harvesting the organs of dissidents for himself. Kerian obtained this technology by brokering a deal with Zakalwe, promising to stop his genocidal killings—which he promptly started up again as soon as Zakalwe was off-world, having his undesirables rounded up into "death trains" and gassed, entire villages at a time.

TheGrayFox ...Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
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#24204: Aug 25th 2023 at 3:53:17 PM

[tup] for Kane.

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#24206: Aug 25th 2023 at 3:54:50 PM

[tup] Kane

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#24207: Aug 25th 2023 at 3:55:03 PM

@Scraggle I pretty much said my arguments regarding that, but it doesn't look they're enough for them to keep, especially since I can genuinely understand the counter arguments. I'm honestly not upset about it, it was a fair discussion, even though the candidates in question couldn't keep. If anything, I was worried, I would end up wording my arguments the wrong way that could have come across as me being a sore loser about. Thankfully, it didn't though. On another note, I hope I can get the CM effort posts, as I feel like that they have more a chance to count if I have to be honest, especially Yodo. On that note, I REALLY hope I can find the episode where Dc Super Hero Girls 2019!Joker is in because the show was unfortunately removed from Netflix and I haven't found any traces of the full episode. If anyone has one has way to watch that episode, a PM would be appreciated.

Oh and before I forgot, [tup] Kane.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#24208: Aug 25th 2023 at 3:55:05 PM

Weak yes to Kane. Seems like he does JUST enough besides the rape.

Should Fareed go before or after Nobliss Gordon?

[down]Cool. And seems like they're the Big Bad Duumvirate if the character pages are correct. Seems like Nobliss is there from the beginning, so I'll have him first.

Edited by ACW on Aug 25th 2023 at 7:05:07 AM

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#24209: Aug 25th 2023 at 4:02:20 PM

@ACW: Either or. They're introduced in the same season.

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#24211: Aug 25th 2023 at 4:34:37 PM

[tup] Kane

"No running in the halls!"
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#24212: Aug 25th 2023 at 5:22:35 PM

[tup] Kane.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
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#24214: Aug 25th 2023 at 7:09:19 PM

One other I want to get up tonight while I remember him, another rec from Lighty...this one's freaking weird.

Country singers Toby Keith and Willie Nelson released a music video for their song "Beer For My Horses" which was kind of like a five-minute CSI episode, if all the detectives were country singers. There's a serial killer on the loose and there's only two men who can stop him...the father/son detective duo of Willie Nelson and Toby Keith!

...yeah.

    What has the "Midtown Ripper" done? 
  • A Jack the Ripoff and a serial killer going around butchering female prostitutes for his evil pleasure. The music video opens on him claiming his fifth victim, which prompts Keith to call up Old Man Willie. Together the two get on the case. While they're investigating (and by "investigating," I mean "getting drunk as shit by a campfire while occasionally looking at a String Theory board of suspects"), the Ripper claims a sixth victim, bringing the death count to half-a-dozen.
  • Willie and Toby get the drop on the Ripper in a hilariously silly way; they dress up the funny cop sidekick as a prostitute in order to bait out the Ripper. Falling for the trick, the Ripper nevertheless tries to kill the funny sidekick cop, then tries to kill Toby Keith too before Willie and a whole platoon of cops corner the slimebag.
    Heinous standard? 
  • Serial Killer with six victims, plus an attempt at murdering two other cops. For a five-minute music video that's trying to channel CSI? I think that passes.
    Redeeming qualities? 
  • I'm going to ignore the Unfortunate Implications of the song's lyrics which are basically a wholehearted defense of vigilante lynching ("Take all the rope in Texas, find a tall oak tree / Round up all them bad boys, hang them high in the street!") but I think that's fine because the song itself doesn't have a keeper. It's only the music video itself, which adds a plot (even if an Excuse Plot) to go with the song itself.
  • The serial killer obviously doesn't have a ton of character and only one line ("Drop the gun!") but he's a slasher-smiling sadist who clearly murders for the pleasure of it. Nothing more to it than that.

Edited by Scraggle on Aug 26th 2023 at 4:35:48 AM

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#24215: Aug 25th 2023 at 7:21:03 PM

[tup] The Ripper

"No running in the halls!"
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#24216: Aug 25th 2023 at 7:22:30 PM

[tup] To Totally Not Jack the Ripper.

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#24217: Aug 25th 2023 at 7:22:45 PM

[tup] Jim Minor, Kane, and the Country Music Video Ripper. [lol]

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#24219: Aug 25th 2023 at 7:30:14 PM

"A five-minute CSI episode, if all the detectives were country singers" is the sentence of the year. [tup] for Ripper.

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#24221: Aug 25th 2023 at 11:47:37 PM

Yes to the Ripper [lol]

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#24222: Aug 26th 2023 at 1:20:12 AM

The fuck did I just read? [lol][lol]

Yes to the Ripper.

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#24223: Aug 26th 2023 at 1:26:57 AM

[tup]ripper

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
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