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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

TheWrongOne41 A nice swimmer from Somewhere, Mexico Since: May, 2022 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
A nice swimmer
#18326: Jun 26th 2023 at 3:13:09 PM

The story of the song is told to us by Tails, Knuckles and Eggman, who i think gives us a clear enough picture.

You can check the lyrics if you want.

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Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#18327: Jun 26th 2023 at 3:16:56 PM

Yeah...if a song is just a villain recounting evil deeds, I don't think the narrative is there for the rules. Giving the Ridley song a listen, for instance, there's...no real plot or story to it, it's just Ridley bragging about evil stuff he's done and wants to do. I don't think it and songs of its ilk really satisfy the "need narrative thrust" argument.

Edited by Ravok on Jun 26th 2023 at 3:17:21 AM

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#18328: Jun 26th 2023 at 3:21:11 PM

Makes sense tbh. Part of it was likely due to the song being directly tied to the game, but it lacks the story elements.

Like I said, I don't imagine a song needing to have a three-story act, but will give a no for this Ridley since it is mostly consisting of his gloating.

Edited by AustinDR on Jun 26th 2023 at 3:33:02 AM

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#18329: Jun 26th 2023 at 3:22:52 PM

In this instance, the Offscreen Villainy rule seems to be more in effect. If a villain just talks about what they did and want to do, but we don't see them actually do any of those deeds, then that wouldn't fly in any other media regardless.

Edited by LoreDeluxe on Jun 26th 2023 at 3:23:10 AM

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Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#18330: Jun 26th 2023 at 3:23:15 PM

Here's an embedded version

For plot, eh, not sure now, it's just seems to be Ridley fighting the heroes and boasting about how he's gonna kill everything, switching to abstain

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ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#18331: Jun 26th 2023 at 3:24:21 PM

Well I think I have someone from a song that walks the walk in addition to talking the talk! Technically it's over two songs, so I hope you guys don't mind! Also unlike others, this one does have plot elements and pretty explicitly shows what the candidate is doing to achieve his goals...

What is the work?

Man on the Internet is a popular theme song remix series on YouTube, specializing in adding lyrics to preexisting video game soundtracks, such as these two lovely pieces!

Who is Dimentio and what has he done?

You all remember Dimentio right? I believe he had the distinction of being the very first Complete Monster in Mario Bros. Well this is his theme song in musical form, and boy, he isn't any better here!

Originally starting as one of Count Bleck's minions, Dimentio reveals that he has much bigger ambitions and plans. In the introduction to the first song Dimentio casually reveals that he's known about his alleged boss's true intentions for the Chaos Heart the entire time, and attempts to sucker Mario and Luigi into allying with him to take control of their minds. When the Bros shut him down, he then engages Luigi in a one on one duel to the death, all the whole bragging about how he hopes to see all of reality fall into a chaotic perdition where all hope is destroyed. When Luigi beats him, Dimentio seals the two in a barrier and triggers and explosion, seemingly taking Luigi with him to the grave...

In the second song, it's revealed that Dimentio survived as he attempts to murder Count Bleck from behind before swooping in to steal the Chaos Heart. Here, he reveals the true extent of his plans to use Luigi as a vessel for the Chaos Heart, while taking control of the Younger Mario Brother, just as in canon. The song then goes on to show the exact effects of Dimentio's plans to destroy all worlds and creat perfect new ones, specifically with Dimentio voicing how his idea of a perfect world is one filled with misery and suffering, as seen in the first song. All the while, he sadistically taunts the heroes about how he duped them and how close he is to becoming the almighty master of all reality, while attempting to wipe them from existence.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

Hahahaha NO! Not even slightly! Its Dimentio, he only cares about one person. Himself, and his desire to crush others beneath his feet for no other reason than pure sadism.

Are they bad enough?

Very much so. Dimentio is as bad as MOTI's Galeem and Dharkon. He seeks to destroy all of existence, then remake where misery and suffering (as well as himself) reign supreme. Not to mention the whole "betrays and tries to murder literally everyone he interacts with". Also, he very much lacks the problem of Offstage Villainy, since "The Ultimate Show" explicitly shows what he's doing with the power of the Chaos Heart.

Final verdict?

Very easy keeper.

Edited by ForgoLight on Jun 26th 2023 at 3:30:08 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#18332: Jun 26th 2023 at 3:30:48 PM

Switch abstain on Ridley

Happy [tup] to Dimentio thought.

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#18333: Jun 26th 2023 at 3:32:09 PM

[tup] to Dimentio

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Planeswalker
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....Phenomenal
#18337: Jun 26th 2023 at 4:02:11 PM

Switching to abstain on Ridley. [tup] for Dimentio though.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#18338: Jun 26th 2023 at 4:04:33 PM

Good to see I wasn't making things worse with the Dimentio proposal. Just an FYI, I noticed that I don't have The Coachman credited in my CM per trooper entry... Can I go fix that?

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#18339: Jun 26th 2023 at 4:05:15 PM

Sure thing buddy

[down] Yep

Edited by EmperorGeode on Jun 26th 2023 at 4:09:48 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#18340: Jun 26th 2023 at 4:07:43 PM

[up] And can I add Dimentio to that too since he seems to have pretty unanimous up votes?

Oh, abstain on Ridley BTW till that situation is more firmly ironed out.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
PurpleEyedGuma Since: Apr, 2020
#18341: Jun 26th 2023 at 4:14:04 PM

[up] Wait out the three days. Yes to Dimentio, by the by.

TheWrongOne41 A nice swimmer from Somewhere, Mexico Since: May, 2022 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
A nice swimmer
#18342: Jun 26th 2023 at 4:44:30 PM

Anything on mine?

Edited by TheWrongOne41 on Jun 26th 2023 at 4:45:01 AM

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G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#18343: Jun 26th 2023 at 6:09:10 PM

Switch to Abstain on Ridley [tup] to Dimentio though

SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#18344: Jun 26th 2023 at 6:23:10 PM

[tup] for Dimentio and Abstain (as much as I’d love to give an [tup] given how fucked up Ridley is even with just words) on Ridley

I’m plotting my schemes wherever I go! They’re perfect in every way…
Mr-ex777 Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#18345: Jun 26th 2023 at 6:55:39 PM

[tup] Dimentio

Abstain on Ridley

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#18346: Jun 26th 2023 at 7:19:13 PM

I know I was just asking about XCOM 2 but I have another question. Is anyone here familiar with Star Trek Online? The game already has one Complete Monster in Hakeev, but I believe I have two more who keep...

Edited by ForgoLight on Jun 26th 2023 at 7:19:31 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#18347: Jun 26th 2023 at 7:19:58 PM

Vaguely. Been watching a story playthrough but on and off.

(Actually, I could say the same in regard to XCOM 2).

Edited by nrjxll on Jun 26th 2023 at 9:20:29 AM

nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#18348: Jun 26th 2023 at 7:37:25 PM

Actually, yeah, apologies for the double-post, but after exchanging PMs with ForgoLight: does anybody remember Gaul (the Vaadwaur leader) from Star Trek Online being discussed? Because I could swear I remember him coming up and being approved literally years ago, but he's not on Monster.Star Trek.

Edited by nrjxll on Jun 26th 2023 at 9:37:51 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#18349: Jun 26th 2023 at 7:40:21 PM

For context on [up], Gaul is easily as bad as Hakeev, right down to selling out his own people to the Iconians since he gives his loyal followers Bluegill neurolytic parasites that allow the Iconians to control them. And standard genocide stuff. Definitely merits a CM status.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#18350: Jun 26th 2023 at 7:42:09 PM

The only discussion of this particular Gaul is in 2015, and it wasn't a proposal, it was Overlord talking about the possibility and then moving on. I can't find any other discussion - most of the results from "Complete Monster Gaul" bring up The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes


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