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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#5026: Feb 18th 2023 at 11:21:50 AM

Unfortunately, with the absolute nightmares of the same era...I think I have to lean nay to Kanjar Ro. And I Must Scream and mass murder are unfortunately not unheard of.

Carmine Falcone I'm likewise a no to. Unfortunately, he doesn't go nearly far enough in villainy compared to Riddler. Ultimately, he only has a few murders to his name.

Edited by Lightysnake on Feb 18th 2023 at 11:24:25 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#5027: Feb 18th 2023 at 11:22:13 AM

No to Falcone, he's come up before and while i agree there's ultimately nothing redeeming about him with him just being a Faux Affably Evil liar, the Riddler is just so much worse than him with him flooding Gotham and having his supporters fire into crowds of people as they're evacuating, Falcone just doesn't quite hit the bar

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Classy, Refined, Unstable
#5028: Feb 18th 2023 at 11:26:10 AM

Moving this here so it's not a page bottom...

Any response to my question about the preferred writeup? I'll add the more preferred one to the drafts.

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Awesomekid42 Since: Jul, 2012
#5029: Feb 18th 2023 at 11:26:22 AM

Yeah, Falcone fails the heinous standard by a country mile. He has a body count of at most 5 (assuming he actually was responsible for the deaths of Thomas and Martha). Nowhere close to the heinous standard of Batman villains, especially for someone of his status. I'd also argue that he actually has more resources than Riddler due to the fact that he's a wealthy crime lord, while Riddler is just a guy.

Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#5030: Feb 18th 2023 at 11:27:20 AM

I like your new write-up there, Wet!

Likewise a Nay to Falcone for reasons others have said, Riddler is just way worse and more folks than Falcone were involved in the initial swiping of the Renewal fund so I can't even say sole blame is on him in that regard. If we got more detail and heaviness attributed to him and, say, the orphanage Riddler grew up in, that'd push him over, but as is I don't quite think he's there.

Edited by Ravok on Feb 18th 2023 at 11:28:03 AM

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ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#5031: Feb 18th 2023 at 11:30:25 AM

[tdown] to Falcone. Sorry, he just isn't vile enough.

Also would anyone be willing to give me tips on how to trim Odalia's Writeup? I'm not sure how to do so as I feel it would leave out crucial info. This reason is also why my writeup for Philip in ABOB was much longer than ACW's...

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
MemeMaster245 Collector of Worlds from Skull Ship Since: Apr, 2022 Relationship Status: This is not my beautiful wife!
Collector of Worlds
#5032: Feb 18th 2023 at 11:35:46 AM

Also, I think I have a quote to nominate for the quotes page. Courtesy of Brainiac from Superman: Red Son.

Did you really think you could reprogramme me, little thing? A level 12 intelligence? Did you really think I couldn't outmanuever those clumsy human fingers? The notion is preposterous. I wasn't under your command. You were under mine, Superman: expanding and consuming country by country. Until an entire world ran to my ideals. Such a shame you won't be able to see the work complete: to see the work continue, planet by planet, until an entire universe hums under my battery.
—- Brainiac from Superman: Red Son

I will claim what is rightfully mine, and rebuild the Kryptonian Empire.
Echidna from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
#5033: Feb 18th 2023 at 11:39:34 AM

[tdown] to Carmine Falcone. I don't think he passes especially on how high the standard is.

MemeMaster245 Collector of Worlds from Skull Ship Since: Apr, 2022 Relationship Status: This is not my beautiful wife!
Collector of Worlds
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#5036: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:08:33 PM

Wait, Kanjar Ro's not bad enough even for pre-Crisis?

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Fireball246 Since: Jan, 2023
#5037: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:11:03 PM

[tdown] to Carmine. He simply fails to stand out in terms of heinousness compared to the Riddler.

Edited by Fireball246 on Feb 18th 2023 at 12:13:01 PM

Fireball246 Since: Jan, 2023
#5038: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:11:18 PM

Edited by Fireball246 on Feb 18th 2023 at 12:11:45 PM

Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#5039: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:14:22 PM

[tdown] Falcone. A total Hate Sink, but sadly not heinous enough to count.

MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#5040: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:34:06 PM

Falcone was already brought up and rejected.

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#5041: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:37:13 PM

Eh, I'm gonna give a a [tup] to Carmine personally, The stuff we are told about the aftermath of Renewal, namely in Riddler's orphanage with 'Baby's freezing every winter' and such is unique enough to me. And while others were in on it inititally we are told that Falcone quickly took it over for himself. So most of it for the past several years was him.

The First man
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#5042: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:40:49 PM

Ok, with big thanks to Lighty for discussing this one with me...

What's the work?

"The First Law" is a great grimdark novel series penned by Joe Abercrombie, set in a a fantasy world where Mages alter world events, Inquisitors torture by the bucketload, politicians scheme for power and the little people caught in-between struggle to survive.

In the book The Heroes, a war between the North and the Union leads to many alliances and betrayals in a mad quest for power over the land. And the North has one particular bastard aiding its efforts...

Who is Stranger-Come-Knocking? What has he done?

The self-proclaimed "Chief of a Hundred Tribes" who proclaims everything east of the river Crinna his land, Stranger-Come-Knocking is a mighty giant with a fascination for the "civilized" Union. He has wiped out entire tribes before, bragging that at one of his latest exploits, he "made a hill of the Dog Tribe's dead, and made their land my land, and their women and children my people."

Coming to the aid of King of the Northmen Black Dow, Stranger-Come-Knocking supplies him many troops for the bloody war, and later lays a trap for the Union with his men. He lures the majority of Governor Meed's soldiers away from his division's headquarters, and then attacks the headquarters. Stranger has everyone inside the place slaughtered—over a hundred people who are, at best, lightly-armed and mostly consist of innocent, harmless servants, musicians and cooks—and has the sole women, Aliz and Finree, captured. When Stranger sees one of his men holding Finree down to detain her, Stranger takes it as such an affront that a man would touch "his women" that he promptly grabs his own man and pummels his head to mulch.

Stranger, y'see, declares women he captures to be "his", and he uses them as breeders. He plans to turn Finree and Aliz into his latest, hoping for them to birth him "civilized children" since they hail from the Union. Luckily, Finree is decreed a valuable enough hostage that—though Stranger is pissed—he ultimately hands her over to Black Dow to use as a bargaining chip with the Union...Aliz? Isn't so lucky, and she is last seen in Stranger's clutches.

Later helping to betray and murder Black Dow then declare the ambitious Calder the new King of the Northmen, Stranger returns to his lands...and is revealed to have, the whole time, been an ally of Bayaz, who has known Stranger since the days Stranger was a boy named Pip. Bayaz orchestrated the entire latest war in the North out of his own petty reasons, Stranger knew all along, and he deliberately helped make the war more chaotic and destructive to suit Bayaz's schemes to devastate the Northmen and Union armies.

Stranger is never seen again, though he is later mentioned to have been killed in battle by new Arc Villain Stour Nightfall.

Mitigating features?

None. Stranger likes to feign being "civilized" because of his fascination with the Union, but he's nothing but a savage beast who even fellow Northmen think is a bastard.

Heinousness?

This is a dark world, and rape isn't rare, but Stranger turns Aliz into a breeding slave for God knows how long, wanted the same for Finree, and he has done it before to women. His massacre of Meed's command center is portrayed as especially nasty as most of the people there weren't even soldiers, and more than anything...Stranger is an active ally of Bayaz's who is subverting his own people's well-being to help Bayaz's war.

Final Verdict?

Yep!

Edited by Ravok on Feb 18th 2023 at 12:56:38 PM

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#5044: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:54:16 PM

YES to Stranger

Snoke, that detail on the orphanage is the definition of offscreen. It has no bearing on the plot with not a single trace of it shown, and there it's a real stretch laying that at Falcone's feet.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#5045: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:56:41 PM

Yes to Pip. Seems a unique enough tier from the other 3 keepers.

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ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#5046: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:58:40 PM

An thoughts on my previous post?

Also [tup] to Pip.

Edited by ForgoLight on Feb 18th 2023 at 12:59:05 PM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
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#5047: Feb 18th 2023 at 12:58:43 PM

[tup]Pip.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#5048: Feb 18th 2023 at 1:00:24 PM

[tup] Stranger

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#5049: Feb 18th 2023 at 1:06:57 PM

[tup]SCK

[tdown]Falcone

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Classy, Refined, Unstable
#5050: Feb 18th 2023 at 1:16:59 PM

[tup] Pip

Also guys Geode put up an EP that seems to have been buried with everyone voting on Carmine. Only me, Rav, Power and Lighty have commented on it.

Forgo I could PM you a possible trimming to work with if you'd like?

Edited by WetFlannels on Feb 18th 2023 at 9:22:17 AM

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